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Post by Flo00 on Aug 14, 2023 2:21:59 GMT
 Sleepwalking    Enchantment - Aura  Enchant creature Enchanted creature has defender and its activated abilities can’t be activated. When Sleepwalking leaves the battlefield, put enchanted creature on top of its owner’s library. |
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Post by Flo00 on Aug 14, 2023 2:25:43 GMT
Idea if something becomes a Forest (land), it automatically loses all abilities. See notes in Song of the Dryads.
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Post by Idea on Aug 14, 2023 17:02:14 GMT
Idea if something becomes a Forest (land), it automatically loses all abilities. See notes in Song of the Dryads. Ah pity. Unfortunately I can’t edit the render since I’m on a trip abroad… But thanks for the tip! |
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Post by viriss on Aug 18, 2023 0:43:10 GMT
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thaneofglamis
8/8 Octopus
Thane's activated abilities can't be activated
Posts: 444
Favorite Card: Slimefoot, the Stowaway; Phyrexian Rager; Swarm Shambler
Favorite Set: Midnight Hunt
Color Alignment: Green
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Post by thaneofglamis on Aug 18, 2023 1:21:34 GMT
Sleepless Watch 
Enchantment  Creatures you control get +1/+1 and have vigilance. Stun counters can't be put on creatures you control. Another night without sleep is nothing in the face of eternal rest.
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pernicious
8/8 Octopus
Posts: 440
Favorite Card: Mistmeadow Skulk
Favorite Set: Shadowmoor block
Color Alignment: Red
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Post by pernicious on Aug 19, 2023 11:31:10 GMT
Idea - A flavorful variant of Claustrophobia. Its green-hate mechanics are in-color and well designed.
Flo00 - Very nice overall. Its mechanics are really evocative of how the enchanted creature sleepwalks and then, if it wakes up, it does so in the middle of nowhere wondering "where am I?".
viriss - An unusual and very interesting wingless dragon. You might have made him a Snake Dragon like Dread Linnorm, but it's good nonetheless. I'd only raise its rarity up to rare due to its mechanics' complexity.
thaneofglamis - Perfect, I really like the "super-vigilance" effect. Good flavor text and good expression of flavor through mechanics.
The winner is thaneofglamis! With Flo00 and Idea as runnerups.
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thaneofglamis
8/8 Octopus
Thane's activated abilities can't be activated
Posts: 444
Favorite Card: Slimefoot, the Stowaway; Phyrexian Rager; Swarm Shambler
Favorite Set: Midnight Hunt
Color Alignment: Green
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Post by thaneofglamis on Aug 20, 2023 23:22:18 GMT
Thanks for the win!
Your next card's name must contain the word hammer or nail! (or hammering, nailed, etc...)
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Post by Idea on Aug 26, 2023 11:56:25 GMT
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Post by Idea on Oct 18, 2023 16:14:04 GMT
(giving this one a bump as well)
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Post by Flo00 on Oct 18, 2023 22:03:21 GMT
Neiled Down Enchantment - Aura Enchant artifact or creature Enchanted permanent can not be moved in any way. (This includes being tapped, transformed or moved to another zone.)Whenever a player taps a permanent with “Hammer” in its name or casts an instant or sorcery spell with “Hammer” in its name, they may destroy Neiled Down. |
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Post by viriss on Oct 19, 2023 1:17:13 GMT
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Post by ameisenmeister on Nov 19, 2023 22:06:34 GMT
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Post by Flo00 on Dec 15, 2023 2:29:08 GMT
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Post by vizionarius on Mar 1, 2024 22:48:47 GMT
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Post by Daij_Djan on Mar 12, 2024 14:19:11 GMT
I have one contest of my own to judge first - but if nothing has happened till then, I'll look into this one 
And here we go: { Idea } Nice, clean and simple - like it. Wording doesn't really need the X though, inspired by Fling: As an additional cost to cast this spell, sacrifice an artifact or creature. ~ deals damage equal to the sacrificed permanent’s mana value to any target. { Flo00 } Just to make sure - this is an Un-design, no? If so, hilarious design  Minor nitpick: Should maybe list attacking with Vigilance creatures? { viriss } OK, this one is brutal.. Typically its nonbasics that are on the receiving end of hate - and I'm not sure I like the idea of punishing players for not spending tons of money on their land bases. Still, these "philosophical" concern aside, the card would probably be fine at least in Commander. { ameisenmeister } Interesting combination of abilities. Probably best to be combined with some pump spells to smash in hard then return your spells afterwards. {And the winner is..}Honestly, I really like all four entries (even if I'm kinda scared of one of them^^) - really well done After some pondering, decided to give the win to Idea - basically everyone else is pretty much a runner-up |
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Post by Idea on Mar 13, 2024 22:40:17 GMT
Thank you for the win Daij_Djan ! For the next challenge, make any card containing the word 'girl' in its name. |
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Post by Idea on Mar 22, 2024 3:38:19 GMT
bump!
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Post by vizionarius on Mar 25, 2024 6:54:18 GMT
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Post by Flo00 on Mar 25, 2024 14:08:52 GMT
Lost Girl  Creature - Human When a creature deals combat damage to Lost Girl, that creature’s controller gains control of Lost Girl, then transforms it. “Excuse me sir, can you show me the way out of this forest?”0/3 ---------------- Flesh-Render Witch  Creature - Human Warlock Damage dealt by Flesh-Render Witch causes its owner to gain that much life. At the beginning of your end step, sacrifice another creature, then put a +1/+1 counter on Flesh-Render Witch. 3/3 |
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Post by Idea on Mar 29, 2024 1:21:40 GMT
I will be reviewing this tomorrow! If you have any last minute entries, feel free to bring them!
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Post by elchetibo on Mar 29, 2024 8:09:52 GMT
A Little Girl's Dream  Enchantment - Saga I - Create a 1/1 blue Faerie creature token with flying. It has "Whenever this creature deals combat damage to an opponent, draw a card". II - Create a 2/2 green Unicorn Mount creature token with trample. It has "Saddle 3. Whenever this creature attacks while saddled, it gets +1/+1 and gains lifelink". III - Create a 3/3 white Knight creature token with first strike. It has "Other creatures you control have protection from crimes". IV - Adventure and Enchantment spells you control cost less to cast until end of turn.
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Post by Idea on Mar 30, 2024 2:39:54 GMT
vizionarius{Spoiler}Looking into AOE red damage spell and looking for the closest comparison cases I could like with The Meathook Massacre, I think this is fine. Given this is a sorcery this card will hardly ever come up as a combat trick, instead being mainly used for removal. The different toughness requirement though is steep. Decks often actively strive to have more copies of the same card, and things like token decks in particular would be too tough for this spell. {Spoiler}It's hard to dig for examples of something like this. On one hand, I very much like the idea of giving a Trojan Horse to an opponent. On the other, hand, this card cuts too much of the risk by keeping you from taking damage to your life with it. while consuming too many of your opponent's resources with little real way to interfere. elchetibo{Spoiler}In mana value this card makes sense, colors-wise it's all over the place. It's also not vey internally cohesive. I see where the references are, though. Winner
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Post by vizionarius on Mar 30, 2024 3:53:09 GMT
Thanks for the win! You're right, I should probably have written "Up to X target creatures..."
Next: Acid
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Post by Idea on Mar 30, 2024 15:51:51 GMT
vizionarius not entirely what I meant, but eh.  Edit: Also, credit to the artist for this card's name as well.
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Post by vizionarius on Mar 30, 2024 17:52:41 GMT
Well, if it wasn't for an "up to," then you wouldn't be able to kill a 5/5 if there were less than 5 creatures with different toughnesses on the board. |
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Post by Idea on Mar 30, 2024 17:56:41 GMT
Well, if it wasn't for an "up to," then you wouldn't be able to kill a 5/5 if there were less than 5 creatures with different toughnesses on the board. That is also an issue, it's just not the one I was specifically thinking about in my comment, that's all. My comments were more about taking full advantage of the card when most decks tend to gravitate to, for example, using multiple copies of a given creature over a variety of them, which inherently makes it much more likely creatures will share toughness values. |
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Post by vizionarius on Mar 30, 2024 17:58:52 GMT
Well, if it wasn't for an "up to," then you wouldn't be able to kill a 5/5 if there were less than 5 creatures with different toughnesses on the board. That is also an issue, it's just not the one I was specifically thinking about in my comment, that's all. My comments were more about taking full advantage of the card when most decks tend to gravitate to, for example, using multiple copies of a given creature over a variety of them, which inherently makes it much more likely creatures will share toughness values. Fair. When I designed the card, I had my friend's Massacre Girl commander deck in mind, where he wants to build a board state with a ton of different toughnesses. |
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Post by elchetibo on Mar 30, 2024 19:42:44 GMT
Acid Sprinkler  Creature - Phyrexian Insect Toxic 1.  : Put a -1/-1 counter on target attacking creature. 1/1
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Post by melono on Mar 31, 2024 7:31:04 GMT
Acid Reflux Enchantment - Aura  Enchant creature When ~ enters, surveil 2. Whenever enchanted creature is tapped, put a -1/-1 counter on it.
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Post by viriss on Apr 1, 2024 1:24:34 GMT
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Minor nitpick: Should maybe list attacking with Vigilance creatures?
