|
|
Post by cajun on Mar 2, 2020 3:12:41 GMT
"Now that's more like it," he says while easing his arm off his hilt of his sword, "Well, I've never really seen anything like you before too, but that could just be not noticing something so small as yourself. And, well, I wouldn't say "a servant to my people", but sure, I was the chieftain of my village. And, it was a peaceful time, if those Gramer bastards didn't come ruin it for everyone...!" he says before letting out a sigh, "My name's Ragnall, yours?" "I'm Briar," she says with a grin, "and, oooh, tell me about these Gramer types, might be just what we need to find out where you belong!"
Briar has spent 100V and unlocked Adventures.
Unlikely Partner   Creature - Faerie  Flying Unlikely Partner has lifelink as long as you control a Giant. 2/1
// Sorcery - Adventure Create a 3/3 white Giant creature token with "This creature gets +1/+1 as long as you control a Faerie." (Then exile this card. You may cast the creature later from exile.)
|
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on Mar 2, 2020 20:01:30 GMT
"I'm Briar," she says with a grin, "and, oooh, tell me about these Gramer types, might be just what we need to find out where you belong!" Briar has spent 100V and unlocked Adventures.
Unlikely Partner Creature - Faerie Flying Unlikely Partner has lifelink as long as you control a Giant. 2/1
// Sorcery - Adventure Create a 3/3 white Giant creature token with "This creature gets +1/+1 as long as you control a Faerie." (Then exile this card. You may cast the creature later from exile.)
Hjalti Bladesman   
Creature - Giant Warrior  First strike, Haste You may exert ~ as it attacks. When you do, it gets +1/+1 and target creature can’t block this turn. 3/2 (Oh yeah, Hjalti is a sort of clans name, its name of the tribe and can be used as form of surname when talking to people that have surnames) |
|
|
|
Post by Neottolemo on Mar 8, 2020 20:09:17 GMT
"Well, that's a big guy," Beik says, spotting Ragnall in the far distance. A carnivourous theropod exactly as tall as Ragnall appears from thin air. Its narrow front-facing eyes examine the giant. The creature bares its teeth menacingly and approaches Ragnall, its steps shaking the landscape. "Well. That's a big guy."
Creature - Dinosaur Trample Prevent all damage other creatures with power 4 or greater would deal to Titanhunter Theropod. 9/4
|
|
|
|
Post by cajun on Mar 9, 2020 2:43:40 GMT
"Well..." he says flashing a slightly concerned face to Briar, "I guess it doesn't hurt to tell..." he says before carefully sitting down, trying to avoid squishing anything. "My people are frost giants. Hardy and resilient folk, we lived in the frosted north, and due to our close trading practices with the dwarves in the mountains to the north, we ran a rather lucrative trade of transporting supplies to the dwarves and then transporting their wares down to the nearby humans and sometimes the elves. The Gramar are a distant relative to our tribe, frost giants like us, they however..." he says before stopping for a moment, before continuing, "They resided in the mountains like the dwarves and constantly fought with them over land, and that fighting caused them to become bitter and jealous. And, I guess you can probably guess what happened next..." "The elves, brave one's aren't you?" She flies around to give him another look. "Though I guess you can afford to be." Briar tries to fly up closer to his face.
"Can't say I've heard of a frost giant or a Gramar before, but you know, my dear friend Rose around here knows about all kinds of stuff, she's a proper traveler and everything. I saw we pay her a visit before we start turning the whole country upside down." She grins and begins to flit backwards. "And she's probably got the firepower we're going to need to fight some jealous frost giants..."
Following the Fae Sorcery Exile target creature and put a glamer counter on it. As long as it's exiled, it has "At the beginning of your upkeep, return this card to the battlefield if you control no creatures. Otherwise, you lose 1 life." When little Mary returned from playing with the fae, there was no one left to welcome her home.
Hjalti Bladesman - 9/10 |
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on Mar 9, 2020 20:07:52 GMT
"The elves, brave one's aren't you?" She flies around to give him another look. "Though I guess you can afford to be." Briar tries to fly up closer to his face.
"Can't say I've heard of a frost giant or a Gramar before, but you know, my dear friend Rose around here knows about all kinds of stuff, she's a proper traveler and everything. I saw we pay her a visit before we start turning the whole country upside down." She grins and begins to flit backwards. "And she's probably got the firepower we're going to need to fight some jealous frost giants..."
Following the Fae Sorcery Exile target creature and put a glamer counter on it. As long as it's exiled, it has "At the beginning of your upkeep, return this card to the battlefield if you control no creatures. Otherwise, you lose 1 life." When little Mary returned from playing with the fae, there was no one left to welcome her home. Not sure if its too effiecent or not, even if it is temporary. Maybe ? 7/10 Stalwart Ancestor
Creature - Spirit Soldier
Haste, First strike You may cast ~ from your graveyard or from exile.1/1 Even beyond death, he fights for his people. |
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on Mar 10, 2020 22:03:45 GMT
"Well, that's a big guy," Beik says, spotting Ragnall in the far distance. A carnivourous theropod exactly as tall as Ragnall appears from thin air. Its narrow front-facing eyes examine the giant. The creature bares its teeth menacingly and approaches Ragnall, its steps shaking the landscape. "Well. That's a big guy."
Creature - Dinosaur Trample Prevent all damage other creatures with power 4 or greater would deal to Titanhunter Theropod. 9/4
Titanhunter Theropod: 9/10
Misted Maze Artifact - Fortification Whenever fortified land becomes tapped, remove target attacking or blocking creature from combat. Fortify ( :Attach to target land you control. Fortify only as a sorcery. This card enters the battlefield unattached and stays on the battlefield if the land leaves.) (To remove it from combat) |
|
|
|
Post by cajun on Mar 11, 2020 1:24:10 GMT
As Briar mentions 'turning the whole country upside down', something clicks in his mind, as he realises that Briar might be hiding something more sinister and this might be a simple ploy. But, he simply nods to Briar's suggestion, maybe this Rose might be unaware of Briar's ulterior motives and could turn out to be an ally? Only time will tell... Briar flits around erratically as she leads Ragnal towards a more populated area of the Arena. "So what is your plan for when you get back?" she asks. "My girls and I can pack a punch, but I'd guess your guys can take more than one."
"I know Rose knows some tricks to even those odds, but I don't even know what the odds are. How many frost giants you think you've got to fight? And how many are you fighting with?" Gather Intel  Sorcery Look at the top four cards of your library. You may reveal a creature or land card from among them in put it into your hand. If an opponent controls more creatures than you, you may reveal another creature or land card and put it into your hand. Put the rest into your graveyard.
Stalwart Ancestor - pretty underwhelming for rare and cmc 3 6/10
|
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on Mar 11, 2020 22:41:55 GMT
Briar flits around erratically as she leads Ragnal towards a more populated area of the Arena. "So what is your plan for when you get back?" she asks. "My girls and I can pack a punch, but I'd guess your guys can take more than one."
"I know Rose knows some tricks to even those odds, but I don't even know what the odds are. How many frost giants you think you've got to fight? And how many are you fighting with?" Gather Intel Sorcery Look at the top four cards of your library. You may reveal a creature or land card from among them in put it into your hand. If an opponent controls more creatures than you, you may reveal another creature or land card and put it into your hand. Put the rest into your graveyard. Maybe , not sure 8/10 Valiant Calvary  Creature - Human Knight  First Strike : ~ gets +1/+0 until end of turn. 1/3 |
|
|
|
Post by Neottolemo on Mar 13, 2020 21:24:11 GMT
"Well, that's a big guy," Beik says, spotting Ragnall in the far distance. A carnivourous theropod exactly as tall as Ragnall appears from thin air. Its narrow front-facing eyes examine the giant. The creature bares its teeth menacingly and approaches Ragnall, its steps shaking the landscape. "Well. That's a big guy."
Creature - Dinosaur Trample Prevent all damage other creatures with power 4 or greater would deal to Titanhunter Theropod. 9/4
Titanhunter Theropod: 9/10
Misted Maze Artifact - Fortification Whenever fortified land becomes tapped, remove target attacking or blocking creature from combat. Fortify ( :Attach to target land you control. Fortify only as a sorcery. This card enters the battlefield unattached and stays on the battlefield if the land leaves.) (To remove it from combat) Misted Maze: This seems like a good idea but looks likely a bit too efficient for what it does. 7/10
The creature gnashes its teeth, sniffs the air... ...And proceeds to walk towards an entirely different direction, ignoring Ragnall. His spell had worked.
Full response coming later.
EDIT - Ok so we clarified in discord and apparently the effect of the maze was entirely unrelated to what was going on? So,
Heedless of the sword and all the glowing, the creature's jaws lunge at Ragnall...
Creature - Dinosaur Trample Double all damage that CARDNAME would deal to blocking creatures with power 4 or greater. 9/8
|
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on Mar 15, 2020 19:01:12 GMT
As the large creature suddenly appears from thin air, "What in Frigga's na-?" he says surprised by its sudden appearance, and as it bares its teeth at him, he says, "I haven't got a clue what you are, or how you suddenly appeared, but if you want to fight, I'll give you a fight!" he says before unsheathing his sword and closing his eyes and starts chanting something in a strange tongue in a sort of rhythmic way, and then a strange light blue glow envelopes his hand before slowly creeping over his blade. And then his eyes open to reveal that they are also glowing a teal color, and in the same strange tongue, he says, "Berjist við mig!" his sword held in front of him ready for combat. Heedless of the sword and all the glowing, the creature's jaws lunge at Ragnall...
Creature - Dinosaur Trample Double all damage that CARDNAME would deal to blocking creatures with power 4 or greater. 9/8
Second ability feels slightly redundant, but I like the flavour of it 9/10 Behemoth Cage Artifact When ~ enters the battlefield, exile target creature an opponent controls with converted mana cost 4 or more until ~ leaves the battlefield. |
|
|
|
Post by cajun on Mar 15, 2020 21:38:54 GMT
"Help the survivors and regroup. Rebuild. Re-establish trading routes." he says while watching off to the distance, "The Gramar? In the hundreds most likely. My people though... It'd be luckly for more than twenty to have survived... I could form a defensive alliance with the dwarves; we have a long history of supporting eachothers people. I think you might cut your loses here, a race such as yourself would be lucky to take down one of them... So, who is this 'Rose' person you keep going on about?" "And a race as slow as yourself would be lucky to take one of us down," she teases.
"Ooh, Rose is all sorts of things, you'll just have to see her for yourself... look, there's her house juuuust over there..."
onward, to lettie's boardValiant Calvary - first strke + firebreathing on a common is a limited oof from me 7/10
|
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on Mar 23, 2020 17:31:17 GMT
Extract from Ragnall's Private Diary:
Its all gone... The village was burned to the ground and I can't find any signs of survivors no matter how far I looked into the tundra,
and I fear they might find me if I took residence nearby the ruins, so I have decided to live in exile in this world of 'The Arena'.
Its just a simple cabin, but It will do me fine for now
My sweet Baluma, if you are out there, please stay safe.
Ragnall has unlocked Lands!
|
|
Bouncearama
3/3 Beast
Posts: 174
Formerly Known As: pistonsmcgraw
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Bouncearama on Mar 27, 2020 18:32:58 GMT
|
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on May 3, 2020 11:10:34 GMT
Just gonna bump this just so people know I am active
|
|
|
|
Post by gurfafflekins on May 10, 2020 6:44:46 GMT
Adelyn A woman with one arm and a spear on her back walks up to the giant log cabin, looking up at it. "...Huh. Big house. Made of wood at least, maybe someone made of less metal." she says, approaching it further, trying to find an entrance.Mercenary Scout Creature - Human Scout When ~ enters the battlefield, if an opponent controls more lands than you, they lose 2 life and you gain 2 life. 2/2
|
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on May 10, 2020 21:48:38 GMT
A woman with one arm and a spear on her back walks up to the giant log cabin, looking up at it. "...Huh. Big house. Made of wood at least, maybe someone made of less metal." she says, approaching it further, trying to find an entrance.  : Add  . , : Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature you control. (Either causing the etb trigger to happen, or buff the creature) |
|
|
|
Post by gurfafflekins on May 14, 2020 2:50:20 GMT
Adelyn Homely Cottage: Pretty good cost for the ability. Probably more likely in green as well. Overall alright though. 8/10. She does in fact come along to look at the giant cutting up wood. She watches for a little bit, looking up and down his giant stature, speaking to get his attention. "Hello there!" she says, standing far back to make herself less of a threat. If anyone takes her by surprise there might be an accident, so she respects the distance. "You friendly?"Grab Attention Instant Change the target of target spell with a single target. If you control a Warrior, you may discard a card. If you do, draw a card.
|
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on May 14, 2020 14:56:38 GMT
She does in fact come along to look at the giant cutting up wood. She watches for a little bit, looking up and down his giant stature, speaking to get his attention. "Hello there!" she says, standing far back to make herself less of a threat. If anyone takes her by surprise there might be an accident, so she respects the distance. "You friendly?"Grab Attention Instant Change the target of target spell with a single target. If you control a Warrior, you may discard a card. If you do, draw a card. I like the idea, its a tribal payoff and useful way of protecting your warriors by redirecting kill spells while rummaging at the same time. 9/10
Stronghold Protector Creature - Human Warrior
Vigilance Whenever a creature you control is dealt damage, ~ deals 1 damage to target opponent and you gain 1 life. 2/3 |
|
|
|
Post by gurfafflekins on May 15, 2020 23:59:35 GMT
Adelyn Stronghold Protector: I like this as a response, where this is the warrior being controlled, because you could also in theory shunt a burn spell and then trigger it (if you really wanted to). As a card, being able to ping the opponent just for blocking seems pretty good, but at the same time Hellrider exists which pings for attacking, so I can see it. 9/10. Hilda nods, taking a few steps towards him. "Something like that. I try not to do that sort of work anymore, but yep, you otherwise nailed it." she says, eyes running up and down his sword that was stabbed into the ground. "I'm a wanderer now. Easier life." she says, smiling. "As a wanderer, that's why I'm here - I wander. You're also one of the few I've met here that isn't moving metal. My name's Hilda." she introduces herself.Dutiful Wanderer Creature - Human Warrior Haste Whenever another creature enters the battlefield under your team's control, ~ gets +1/+0 until end of turn. "I go where I please, and take great joy in meeting people along the way."1/3
|
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on May 17, 2020 17:13:01 GMT
Dutiful Wanderer Creature - Human Warrior Haste Whenever another creature enters the battlefield under your team's control, ~ gets +1/+0 until end of turn. "I go where I please, and take great joy in meeting people along the way."1/3 (No response or story because I'm nulling) |
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on May 17, 2020 17:28:54 GMT
I'm Nulling Ragnall {Spoiler}  By callmevargoRagnall Hjalti (ff5500)Colors: (2 Points) CMC: 3 (3 Points) Multicolor Level: 1 (1 Points) Type Masteries: Creature, Artifact, Land (3 Points) Perks: Rarity Upgrader (Unlocks and  ) Artificer (Unlocks Equipment, Fortification, Vehicle, Contraption and their corresponding keywords (Equip, Fortify, Crew, Assemble)) (2 Points) Keywords: Exert (1 Points) Valor/Score: 47/147 Mana Pool: 10/10 Call for aid: Core Set 2010-2015, Magic Origins, Core set 2019-2020 Background: Ragnall was a chieftain of a tribe of giants. Ragnall wasn't the most quick-witted of his people or the most adept in combat, however he made up by knowing how to rule justly and fairly, and so his tribe experienced a time of prosperity and peace. However, this peace wasn't to last. He was woken up in the middle of the night by the sound of screaming, he then rushed outside to find his village ablaze and his people being slaughtered. He recognised who it was; A nearby neighboring tribe who had grown bitter due to his tribe's prosperity. And, in that moment, his spark ignited and flung him across the multiverse On the Arena, stands a large log cabin in a clearing in the middle of a woods which towers above any normal sized people, where Ragnall currently resides. 23/03/2020: Gained type mastery of Land |
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on Sept 20, 2020 22:11:00 GMT
(Continuing from backstory) And next thing he knows, he is on the Arena. And after feeling a breeze blow against him, he starts exploring the world.
Tazorax has entered the Arena.
|
|
|
|
Post by pacifistwestwoman on Sept 21, 2020 2:31:49 GMT
AdelynIt doesn't take Tazorax long to find traces of the oil. Among clear skies and rolling hills is an infected flower, with darkened grass around it. Behind the flower, patches of infection about 4 feet in diameter appear every 50-60 feet, trailing off into the distance. It is clear that Dieu-13 has been here, though this spread does not seem intentional. Lifeblood Flower  Artifact ( can be paid with either or 2 life.)~ enters the battlefield with three petal counters on it. , , Remove a petal counter from ~: Put a -1/-1 counter on target creature with no counters on it. , , Remove a petal counter from ~: Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature with no counters on it.
|
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on Sept 21, 2020 16:44:27 GMT
It doesn't take Tazorax long to find traces of the oil. Among clear skies and rolling hills is an infected flower, with darkened grass around it. Behind the flower, patches of infection about 4 feet in diameter appear every 50-60 feet, trailing off into the distance. It is clear that Dieu-13 has been here, though this spread does not seem intentional. Lifeblood Flower Artifact ( can be paid with either or 2 life.)~ enters the battlefield with three petal counters on it. , , Remove a petal counter from ~: Put a -1/-1 counter on target creature with no counters on it. , , Remove a petal counter from ~: Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature with no counters on it. As he sees the infected flower, he lets out a snarl, and immediately stomps down on the flower, "Dieu-13 is already here, I must stop that parasite for lord Urabrask," and then he grabs the hilt from his hip, and as he clenches the hilt in his hand; a blade of pure fire erupts of it. He then follows the trail of infection, torching all of it with his blade. Lifeblood Flower: The overall card looks good, but the reminder text is the thing bothering me here. While wotc never defined what is, but I feel it would be natural to assume it is or 2 life, as opposed to . 8/10Infectious Dismantler   Artifact creature - Goblin When ~ enters the battlefield, destroy target artifact. 2/1 Even after being made compleat, it still shows habits of it's former self. |
|
|
|
Post by pacifistwestwoman on Sept 21, 2020 22:09:15 GMT
As he sees the infected flower, he lets out a snarl, and immediately stomps down on the flower, "Dieu-13 is already here, I must stop that parasite for lord Urabrask," and then he grabs the hilt from his hip, and as he clenches the hilt in his hand; a blade of pure fire erupts of it. He then follows the trail of infection, torching all of it with his blade. Lifeblood Flower: The overall card looks good, but the reminder text is the thing bothering me here. While wotc never defined what is, but I feel it would be natural to assume it is or 2 life, as opposed to . 8/10Infectious Dismantler Artifact creature - Goblin When ~ enters the battlefield, destroy target artifact. 2/1 Even after being made compleat, it still shows habits of it's former self.See, I thought it would be too, but then cajun suggested , and I liked both of those options. Infectious Dismantler: 8/10 The only thing that bugs me is that it's an artifact that is artifact removal. I do like the flavor text, though. The trail of oil leads to a crag, near which is the arachnoid abomination itself. The machine does not pay attention to Trazorax at first, seemingly preoccupied with self-repairs, but calls to him after a moment. "Who do we have here? I don't believe I've had you try to kill me yet. Olith, be a dear and wake up." As the machine finishes talking, a pile of broken chunks of black granite assemble themselves into a humanoid form, roughly six feet tall.Ichorswell Elemental  Creature - Elemental ~'s power and toughness are each equal to the number of lands you control. , , Sacrifice a land: Put a poison counter on up to one target opponent, and a -1/-1 counter on up to one target creature. X/X |
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on Sept 22, 2020 22:01:47 GMT
See, I thought it would be too, but then cajun suggested , and I liked both of those options. Infectious Dismantler: 8/10 The only thing that bugs me is that it's an artifact that is artifact removal. I do like the flavor text, though. The trail of oil leads to a crag, near which is the arachnoid abomination itself. The machine does not pay attention to Trazorax at first, seemingly preoccupied with self-repairs, but calls to him after a moment. "Who do we have here? I don't believe I've had you try to kill me yet. Olith, be a dear and wake up." As the machine finishes talking, a pile of broken chunks of black granite assemble themselves into a humanoid form, roughly six feet tall.Ichorswell Elemental Creature - Elemental ~'s power and toughness are each equal to the number of lands you control. , , Sacrifice a land: Put a poison counter on up to one target opponent, and a -1/-1 counter on up to one target creature. X/X As the machine finishes talking and the elemental assembles itself, he lets out an almost smug laugh to himself, "I only just found you and you're already in a state of disrepair, and now you're defending yourself with a pile of rocks?" he says while letting out another laugh before turning serious and starts holding his sword of fire in preparation to strike, "I imagine the inhabitants of this plane don't take so nicely to a parasite, and neither do I! I will cleanse your existence with the flames of lord Urabrask!" he shouts before charging directly at Dieu-13 with his sword held up to strike down on them. //If the elemental tries to block his path, he will swing downwards on the elemental. Ichorswell Elemental: I think it should cost more,  or  but I am not sure there. Besides that I see no other problems with it. (Well besides that the power and toughness should be */* but thats nitpicking). 8/10Combustion Blade Artifact - Equipment Equipped creature gets +1/+1. Whenever equipped creature attacks, you may remove a -1/-1 counter from it. If you do, deal 1 damage to any target. Equip (Equipping it to the goblin to prevent it dying from a -1/-1 counter, and then attacking) |
|
|
|
Post by pacifistwestwoman on Sept 23, 2020 14:04:12 GMT
As the machine finishes talking and the elemental assembles itself, he lets out an almost smug laugh to himself, "I only just found you and you're already in a state of disrepair, and now you're defending yourself with a pile of rocks?" he says while letting out another laugh before turning serious and starts holding his sword of fire in preparation to strike, "I imagine the inhabitants of this plane don't take so nicely to a parasite, and neither do I! I will cleanse your existence with the flames of lord Urabrask!" he shouts before charging directly at Dieu-13 with his sword held up to strike down on them. //If the elemental tries to block his path, he will swing downwards on the elemental. Ichorswell Elemental: I think it should cost more, or but I am not sure there. Besides that I see no other problems with it. (Well besides that the power and toughness should be */* but thats nitpicking). 8/10Combustion Blade Artifact - Equipment Equipped creature gets +1/+1. Whenever equipped creature attacks, you may remove a -1/-1 counter from it. If you do, deal 1 damage to any target. Equip (Equipping it to the goblin to prevent it dying from a -1/-1 counter, and then attacking) I get that with the context, it's supposed to be burning the oil, but removing -1/-1 counters doesn't feel very red to me. Tazorax's blade falls onto the arm of the elemental who stands between the two Phyrexians, its flames whipping at the stone. "I don't believe I recognize you. That said, if you pledge to Urabrask, then I can recognize a traitor."
The elemental winds its other arm back, and throws a slow, heavy punch. Crushing Blow 
Sorcery
Destroy target artifact. If a noncreature artifact was destroyed this way, its controller loses 1 life. |
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on Sept 24, 2020 20:45:50 GMT
Combustion Blade: 7/10. I get that with the context, it's supposed to be burning the oil, but removing -1/-1 counters doesn't feel very red to me. Tazorax's blade falls onto the arm of the elemental who stands between the two Phyrexians, its flames whipping at the stone. "I don't believe I recognize you. That said, if you pledge to Urabrask, then I can recognize a traitor."
The elemental winds its other arm back, and throws a slow, heavy punch. Crushing Blow
Sorcery
Destroy target artifact. If a noncreature artifact was destroyed this way, its controller loses 1 life.
//He is temporarily stunned as he stands there with his arms around his stomach (his sword returned back to just the hilt) and hunched over, trying to recover from it. Crushing Blow: Seems about right to me 9/10Flesh Ripper Artifact - Equipment Living weapon (When this Equipment enters the battlefield, create a 0/0 black Germ creature token, then attach this to it.) Equipped creature gets +2/+2 and has "Whenever this creature deals combat damage to a player, exile the top card of your library. You may play that card this turn." Equip (Target for Crushing Blow) |
|
|
|
Post by pacifistwestwoman on Sept 25, 2020 0:31:47 GMT
"Don't you dare talk about lord Urabrask like that!" he shouts at the phyrexian before letting out what sounds like a low pitched guttural growl, his attention fully focused on them, "You are nothing more than a mere stain that I must wipe awa-!" he says before taking the punch hard in his stomach, gasping for air as he recoils backwards from the punch.
//He is temporarily stunned as he stands there with his arms around his stomach (his sword returned back to just the hilt) and hunched over, trying to recover from it. Crushing Blow: Seems about right to me 9/10Flesh Ripper Artifact - Equipment Living weapon (When this Equipment enters the battlefield, create a 0/0 black Germ creature token, then attach this to it.) Equipped creature gets +2/+2 and has "Whenever this creature deals combat damage to a player, exile the top card of your library. You may play that card this turn." Equip (Target for Crushing Blow) Yeah. Personally, I'd rather take living weapon off and made the equip cheaper, but it's an interesting card either way. The arachnid lets out a mechanical laugh as it walks up to the elemental. "Well then. I do suspect one of us will be dead by the end of this, but given that only one of us seems to have their sensors on, I can't see you being the living one." Black water dribbles out of the ground near Dieule and pools at their feet. "One thing I will compliment about your pitiful lord is that I did not know he had the capabilities of making a project like us. It will be nice to be the only one again."Arrogant Stream  Creature - Elemental Spawn When ~ ETB, choose two: - Return target noncreature, nonland permanent to its owner's hand.
- Put a +1/+1 counter on ~
- Scry 2.
1/1 "Given centuries, the stream will cut through the land. No one can stop this." |
|
Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
|
Post by Adelyn on Sept 26, 2020 22:37:52 GMT
Flesh Ripper: 8/10. Yeah. Personally, I'd rather take living weapon off and made the equip cheaper, but it's an interesting card either way. The arachnid lets out a mechanical laugh as it walks up to the elemental. "Well then. I do suspect one of us will be dead by the end of this, but given that only one of us seems to have their sensors on, I can't see you being the living one." Black water dribbles out of the ground near Dieule and pools at their feet. "One thing I will compliment about your pitiful lord is that I did not know he had the capabilities of making a project like us. It will be nice to be the only one again."Arrogant Stream Creature - Elemental Spawn When ~ ETB, choose two: - Return target noncreature, nonland permanent to its owner's hand.
- Put a +1/+1 counter on ~
- Scry 2.
1/1 "Given centuries, the stream will cut through the land. No one can stop this." As Dieule finishes, under heavy breathing the glow in his chest starts to glow brighter, "The only one who is dying..." he says before Dieule feels an unusual heat radiating from Tazorax, "Is you!" he shouts before charging directly at the elemental; opening his mouth to reveal sharp jagged teeth and then clamping them on the elemental's side. Almost immediately the granite of the elemental starting melting and then he tears a chunk off it and spits a ball of superheated magma directly at Dieule. Arrogant Stream: 8/10Blood Frienzied Berserker Creature - Human Berserker Haste When ~ enters the battlefield, it deals 2 damage to any target. 3/2 (Assuming you bounced the equipment (making it max a 2/2), target arrogant stream with the etb trigger) |
|
