inferno390
3/3 Beast
Posts: 197
Favorite Card: Kwende, Pride of Femeref
Favorite Set: Dominaria
Color Alignment: White, Red
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Post by inferno390 on Nov 29, 2019 16:52:50 GMT
(Is Brayden attacking me?) (Yep, should I make an attack card? I think we should stay on my battle board so it's easier to track for all people involved) (No that’s fine. I just wanted to make sure before I made a card that responded flavorfully to what you wrote.) The man stared at the Hedron in shock as the rune vanished from its surface. This was unusual, to say the least. More drastic measures would be necessary to take care of this mess.
Then he heard a shout and looked in the direction of the building from which it came. Another figure burst out of the window, followed by swarm of thopters humming angrily. The man frowned, surprised at the sudden aggression. Then, he clapped his hands together, sending a wave of energy through the air.Etherial Warp   Instant  Choose one— •Etherial Warp deals 1 damage to each creature. •Exile target artifact with converted mana cost 3 or less. •Scry 1, then draw a card. |
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Nov 29, 2019 23:49:51 GMT
inferno390As the wave of energy flew towards him, Brayden quickly creates an improptu barrier using the thopters, wincing as he tries to keep the barrier up as the energy presses against it. When the wave of energy dissipates; Brayden rather irritatedly shouts, "Just because you can stroll in during our business, doesn't mean you own the damn place!" he says as he takes the offensive, quickly being carried towards the man by his swarm of thopters. Etherial Warp: Seems... fine? I'm not too familiar to playing with colorless mana cost cards. I think its about where it should be. 9/10 Obstruct  Instant As an additional cost to cast this spell, sacrifice an artifact. Counter target noncreature spell.
Call for aid: Ornithopter (the thing I'm sacrificing)
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inferno390
3/3 Beast
Posts: 197
Favorite Card: Kwende, Pride of Femeref
Favorite Set: Dominaria
Color Alignment: White, Red
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Post by inferno390 on Nov 30, 2019 1:49:25 GMT
Adelyn : The man’s eyes flash with a green light, mysterious and dangerous. He raises his hands palms out, and a barrier of energy ripples out in a bubble around him, shimmering in the light. A avatar of energy formed around him, flowing against his dark outfit in a swirl of neon colors. “Enough!” He shouts, and claps his hands together, and a blast of black magic comes ripping through the air to annihilate the thopters. “How dare you attack me when I only intend help!”Mirage of Strength Creature-Wall Illusion Defender, Reach Soulbond When Mirage is Strength becomes the target of a spell, sacrifice it. Creatures that are soulbonded with Mirage of Strength get +4/+4. 0/6 Call for Aid: Legion’s End Obstruct: Seems like a fine Negate clone. The cost seems right too. 9/10
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Nov 30, 2019 16:44:34 GMT
Adelyn : The man’s eyes flash with a green light, mysterious and dangerous. He raises his hands palms out, and a barrier of energy ripples out in a bubble around him, shimmering in the light. A avatar of energy formed around him, flowing against his dark outfit in a swirl of neon colors. “Enough!” He shouts, and claps his hands together, and a blast of black magic comes ripping through the air to annihilate the thopters. “How dare you attack me when I only intend help!”Mirage of Strength Creature-Wall Illusion Defender, Reach Soulbond When Mirage is Strength becomes the target of a spell, sacrifice it. Creatures that are soulbonded with Mirage of Strength get +4/+4. 0/6 Call for Aid: Legion’s End Obstruct: Seems like a fine Negate clone. The cost seems right too. 9/10 As the Black magic flew towards Brayden, he tried yet again to block it with his thopters, but this time his luck ran out, and was sent flying into ground hard. And then, he slowly stands up from being knocked down, visibly shaking, its seems the fall took a lot out of him. “How dare you attack me when I only intend help!”
"Help? How does firing magic at my academy help anyone?" he shouts while looking very irritated, and forms a ball of magic in his hand. (He's simply holding it, waiting for a response to his question, and depending on the answer, he will do something)
Mirage of Strength: I like the flavor, but I have some gripes with this cards. 1) Blue doesn't get reach, its not in their slice of the color pie (shown in this) and should either be removed completely or could be replaced with flying or flash which are both in blue and 2) That last bit where the creatures are "soulbonded" isn't how wotc phrases that ability and instead simply uses the word 'paired' (For example: this) 6/10 Invoke the Beast   Instant Invoke the Beast deals 3 damage to any target. Target creature gets +3/+3 until end of turn. (The lightning bolt bit targeting mirage of strength) |
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inferno390
3/3 Beast
Posts: 197
Favorite Card: Kwende, Pride of Femeref
Favorite Set: Dominaria
Color Alignment: White, Red
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Post by inferno390 on Nov 30, 2019 17:25:22 GMT
The man sighed in frustration and dropped his defensive wall before approaching the other figure, leaving his aura intact. “I am firing magic at the hedron." He gestured off to the the floating formation that rose in front of the school. “That thing is alien and dangerous, and at the every least it needs to be contained. If you want to help me, you can, but please stop attacking me while I try to deal with this.” Reasoned Diplomacy Instant  Target attacking creature gets -4/-0 until end of turn. Draw a card. Invoke the Beast: I really like this card. It's flavorfully really good for your character, and also very strong. The only thing I would say is that tacking a Lighting Bolt onto a Giant Growth seems almost too good, especially since the closest thing comparable to this in Standard is Colossus, and that's only the power boost. I would maybe add an additional generic to balance? But definitely a 9/10.
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Dec 1, 2019 1:06:53 GMT
The man sighed in frustration and dropped his defensive wall before approaching the other figure, leaving his aura intact. “I am firing magic at the hedron." He gestured off to the the floating formation that rose in front of the school. “That thing is alien and dangerous, and at the every least it needs to be contained. If you want to help me, you can, but please stop attacking me while I try to deal with this.” Reasoned Diplomacy Instant Target attacking creature gets -4/-0 until end of turn. Draw a card. Invoke the Beast: I really like this card. It's flavorfully really good for your character, and also very strong. The only thing I would say is that tacking a Lighting Bolt onto a Giant Growth seems almost too good, especially since the closest thing comparable to this in Standard is Colossus, and that's only the power boost. I would maybe add an additional generic to balance? But definitely a 9/10. As the man explains whats he was planning on doing, Brayden drops the spell, and says to himself, "Nice going, Henry, completely misunderstanding and then immediately jumping the gun." when the man finishes talking, he does a small bow, "My many apologies, its seems I misunderstood what was going on, and lets say I can get emotional quite quickly, especially when something I hold dear to me is in danger. Until that misunderstanding, I was also going to setup some containment procedures. Just follow me, I'll lead you there." he says while gesturing for the man to follow, "Oh yeah! I never caught your name, My name is Henry Brayden, by the way."Reasoned Diplomacy: This is a slightly worse Befuddle effect but for a lower cost. Seems fine. 8/10 (Not really story related but whatever) Flamekin War Shaman  Creature - Elemental Shaman Other Elemental creatures you control get +1/+1. Whenever a Elemental creature enters the battlefield under your control, Flamekin Warshaman deals 1 damage to each opponent. 4/2 (The creature thats attacking) |
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inferno390
3/3 Beast
Posts: 197
Favorite Card: Kwende, Pride of Femeref
Favorite Set: Dominaria
Color Alignment: White, Red
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Post by inferno390 on Dec 1, 2019 2:17:36 GMT
The man's demeanor softens as the other lowers his magic and explains his aggression. “That's more than alright. I can understand where your confusion might come from." He puts out out his hand in a friendly gesture, letting his aura fall away for a moment as he does. “Most call me the Enention. Pleased to make your acquaintance, Brayden. Now that we know what the other is here, for, might I suggest we combine our magic to deal with this threat?"Understanding Teamwork Instant You and target player each Scry 1, then draw a card. (This is actually more of a gift.) Flamekin Warshaman: This is a really fun and strong card. it feels right at some in some sort of red aggro/Elemental strategy. The only thing I would say is that I think the anthem effect would make more sense as +1/+0. But even where it is i really like it. 9/10.
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Dec 2, 2019 22:05:26 GMT
The man's demeanor softens as the other lowers his magic and explains his aggression. “That's more than alright. I can understand where your confusion might come from." He puts out out his hand in a friendly gesture, letting his aura fall away for a moment as he does. “Most call me the Enention. Pleased to make your acquaintance, Brayden. Now that we know what the other is here, for, might I suggest we combine our magic to deal with this threat?"Understanding Teamwork Instant You and target player each Scry 1, then draw a card. (This is actually more of a gift.) Flamekin Warshaman: This is a really fun and strong card. it feels right at some in some sort of red aggro/Elemental strategy. The only thing I would say is that I think the anthem effect would make more sense as +1/+0. But even where it is i really like it. 9/10.
He says as he starts briskly jogging back towards the Academy. Understanding Teamwork: Bit of a odd wording, but its seems fine. But I think it could be 8/10 Pool of Enlightenment Artifact Whenever a creature enters the battlefield under you control, you may pay . If you do, put a +1/+1 counter on that creature.Whenever you draw a card, you may pay . If you do, scry 1.
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Post by cajun on Jan 9, 2020 19:00:56 GMT
A one-armed woman very evenly walks towards to the professor, stopping outside of what she has calculated to be his minimum safe distance. If her appearance hadn't unsettled Henry enough, her metallic voice would likely do the job.
"Rift density at zero point zero zero zero zero zero percent. Elsewhere [ERROR: Unassigned variable] at fourteen point two eight five seven one percent." Her stance suddenly changes to be more defensive, but she remains unarmed in both senses of the word. "Elsewhere [ERROR: Unassigned variable], identify yourself!" she barks.
Instant Return target creature to its owner's hand. Unassign deals 2 damage to that player. Investigate. (Create a colorless Clue artifact token with “, Sacrifice this artifact: Draw a card.”)
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Jan 10, 2020 19:58:06 GMT
A one-armed woman very evenly walks towards to the professor, stopping outside of what she has calculated to be his minimum safe distance. If her appearance hadn't unsettled Henry enough, her metallic voice would likely do the job.
"Rift density at zero point zero zero zero zero zero percent. Elsewhere [ERROR: Unassigned variable] at fourteen point two eight five seven one percent." Her stance suddenly changes to be more defensive, but she remains unarmed in both senses of the word. "Elsewhere [ERROR: Unassigned variable], identify yourself!" she barks. Instant Return target creature to its owner's hand. Unassign deals 2 damage to that player. Investigate. (Create a colorless Clue artifact token with “, Sacrifice this artifact: Draw a card.”)
"Solving a problem is just a matter of resolving the proper variables."
"Elsewhere [ERROR: Unassigned variable], identify yourself!"
As she enters a defensive stance, he says, "Please, there is no need to be defensive, My name is Henry Brayden. You seem to be in quite a state of... disrepair." he says like gesturing to the side of the body with no arm, "And, I believe I have the abilities that could help you."
Unassign: I like it, maybe could be 8/10 Bionic Control Instant Counter target spell unless its controller pays  , where X is the number of artifacts you control. "Sometimes the precision of the machine is required." |
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Post by cajun on Jan 11, 2020 0:30:26 GMT
As he hears her metallic voice, a thought crosses his mind, some sort of construct? maybe a golem? And it looks badly damaged too...
"Elsewhere [ERROR: Unassigned variable], identify yourself!"
As she enters a defensive stance, he says, "Please, there is no need to be defensive, My name is Henry Brayden. You seem to be in quite a state of... disrepair." he says like gesturing to the side of the body with no arm, "And, I believe I have the abilities that could help you." "I do not know what you are talking of, Henry Brayden," she says, unmoving. "This system has been operating for nineteen point two five days and is not scheduled to receive maintenance for another twenty-five point seven five days, and a creature of Elsewhere would not be allowed to perform such a task."
Elsewhere [ERROR: Unassigned variable] reduced to ten point zero zero percent. Possible consumed citizen, remain on high alert.
High Alert  Instant Untap target creature. If it would deal damage to a player or permanent this turn, it deals double that damage instead. If damage would be dealt to it this turn, prevent half that damage, rounded up.
Bionic Control - seems solid 9/10
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Jan 11, 2020 16:03:55 GMT
"I do not know what you are talking of, Henry Brayden," she says, unmoving. "This system has been operating for nineteen point two five days and is not scheduled to receive maintenance for another twenty-five point seven five days, and a creature of Elsewhere would not be allowed to perform such a task."
Elsewhere [ERROR: Unassigned variable] reduced to ten point zero zero percent. Possible consumed citizen, remain on high alert.
High Alert Instant Untap target creature. If it would deal damage to a player or permanent this turn, it deals double that damage instead. If damage would be dealt to it this turn, prevent half that damage, rounded up.
Bionic Control - seems solid 9/10
Figured much... Constructs can be quite stubborn, especially when going against their instructions, he thinks to himself. "I'm referring to the fact you seem to be missing an arm. I am a trained Artificier, so I could make you a new arm. And, lets just say having an appearance that stands out tends to attract unscrupulous folk around here."High Alert: I like the idea, not sure if its the right cmc though. 7/10 Disarming Voice InstantReturn target creature and target equipment attached to that creature. (Targeting the creature that high alert is targeting) |
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Post by cajun on Jan 11, 2020 19:45:11 GMT
"I do not know what you are talking of, Henry Brayden," she says, unmoving. "This system has been operating for nineteen point two five days and is not scheduled to receive maintenance for another twenty-five point seven five days, and a creature of Elsewhere would not be allowed to perform such a task."
Figured much... Constructs can be quite stubborn, especially when going against their instructions, he thinks to himself. "I'm referring to the fact you seem to be missing an arm. I am a trained Artificier, so I could make you a new arm. And, lets just say having an appearance that stands out tends to attract unscrupulous folk around here." Her head shifted slightly to look at her arms, lingering slightly on the bare socket. Diagnostic initiating.... [Neural system.....COMPLETE: 17 warnings] [Arm1 system....COMPLETE] [Arm2 system....ERROR: Arm2 system not installed]
"How did this happen?" she demands, fear in her voice, but not on her face. "This system has not yet engaged with creatures of Elsewhere! Henry Brayden, are you the source of this compromise?" Her voice raises into a yell. Combat protocols initiating.... What a hack job.
A glowing rift opens at Zero's side and her hand goes in for a moment, then pulling back out with a large sword with a blue blade. She holds it uneasily, having trouble supporting the clearly two-handed blade.
"It is in the interest of all citizens of wethreenowifsixnoeweirnoneoneone[ERROR: Corrupted data] that this system is fully operational, so return this stolen part!" Jump to Conclusions Instant Until end of turn, target creature gains flying and haste and gets +2/+0 for each card you've discarded this turn. Jump-start (You may cast this card from your graveyard by discarding a card in addition to paying its other costs. Then exile this card.)
Disarming Voice - Wants to be 'all Equipment' or 'up to one target Equipment' or this can't hit creatures without Equipment. If that's the intent this can be one mana, if not this can still be two. 7/10
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Jan 12, 2020 0:54:43 GMT
Her head shifted slightly to look at her arms, lingering slightly on the bare socket. Diagnostic initiating.... [Neural system.....COMPLETE: 17 warnings] [Arm1 system....COMPLETE] [Arm2 system....ERROR: Arm2 system not installed]
"How did this happen?" she demands, fear in her voice, but not on her face. "This system has not yet engaged with creatures of Elsewhere! Henry Brayden, are you the source of this compromise?" Her voice raises into a yell. Combat protocols initiating.... What a hack job.
A glowing rift opens at Zero's side and her hand goes in for a moment, then pulling back out with a large sword with a blue blade. She holds it uneasily, having trouble supporting the clearly two-handed blade.
"It is in the interest of all citizens of wethreenowifsixnoeweirnoneoneone[ERROR: Corrupted data] that this system is fully operational, so return this stolen part!" Jump to Conclusions Instant Until end of turn, target creature gains flying and haste and gets +2/+0 for each card you've discarded this turn. Jump-start (You may cast this card from your graveyard by discarding a card in addition to paying its other costs. Then exile this card.)
Disarming Voice - Wants to be 'all Equipment' or 'up to one target Equipment' or this can't hit creatures without Equipment. If that's the intent this can be one mana, if not this can still be two. 7/10
As she raises her sword, he lets out sigh and then discards his blue cloak, revealing a simple white shirt and leather trousers, clearly showing there is nowhere to hide an entire arm on his body. Zero could also notice his entire right arm is bandaged, despite that his arm is quite obviously not human, ending with three pointed fingers. "Please, lower your blade! I mean no harm, never have and nether will! Please, believe me when I say I have nothing to do with the disappearence of your arm. Just, please, let me help you!" Jump to Conclusions: I like the idea of synergising with other jump start cards but It could be easily exploited to increase creatures to ridiculous numbers, e.g Dangerous Wager 6/10
Wall of Force Creature - Illusion Wall Flash Defender, Flying : This creature gets +1/+0 until end of turn. 0/4 (something to block and possibly kill the creature targeted by jump to conclusions) |
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Post by cajun on Jan 12, 2020 3:22:09 GMT
As she raises her sword, he lets out sigh and then discards his blue cloak, revealing a simple white shirt and leather trousers, clearly showing there is nowhere to hide an entire arm on his body. Zero could also notice his entire right arm is bandaged, despite that his arm is quite obviously not human, ending with three pointed fingers. "Please, lower your blade! I mean no harm, never have and nether will! Please, believe me when I say I have nothing to do with the disappearence of your arm. Just, please, let me help you!" Zero hesitated at his offer.
[Rift density negligible. Elsewhere [ERROR: Unassigned variable] at ten point zero zero percent. [Wing1 system....ERROR: Wing1 system not installed] High probability of either planeswalker or consumed citizen. Unknown probability of offering assistance....] A man of science, it seems. I'd trust him.
"Get out of my head!" she finally shouted. Wait, did it hear me? "Whatever you're doing stop!" A second rift opened for long enough for her to drop the sword in, then both sealed shut and she turned to run.
[Henry Brayden capable of major interference. Designation changed to technomancer.]
catch me if you canWall of Force - Seems dece, possibly 0/3 9/10
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Jan 12, 2020 15:43:48 GMT
Zero hesitated at his offer.
[Rift density negligible. Elsewhere [ERROR: Unassigned variable] at ten point zero zero percent. [Wing1 system....ERROR: Wing1 system not installed] High probability of either planeswalker or consumed citizen. Unknown probability of offering assistance....] A man of science, it seems. I'd trust him.
"Get out of my head!" she finally shouted. Wait, did it hear me? "Whatever you're doing stop!" A second rift opened for long enough for her to drop the sword in, then both sealed shut and she turned to run.
[Henry Brayden capable of major interference. Designation changed to technomancer.]
catch me if you canWall of Force - Seems dece, possibly 0/3 9/10 As she runs away, he says to himself, "I should really follow them, shouldn't I?" before grabbing his cloak and breaking into a quick jog after her. (I'm coming for you...) |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2020 21:28:03 GMT
Remember that hedron? No? Well, it's still there, biding it's time.Suddenly the strange hedron that had appeared not so long ago pulses with power -- WHITE power. As the locals scream and duck for cover, there is just a moment before it discharges and releases a shockwave, buildings caving in on themselves as their owners rush out.Hammer Force Sorcery Destroy target land. Hammer Force deals 1 damage to up to two target creatures.
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Jan 14, 2020 22:32:49 GMT
Remember that hedron? No? Well, it's still there, biding it's time.Suddenly the strange hedron that had appeared not so long ago pulses with power -- WHITE power. As the locals scream and duck for cover, there is just a moment before it discharges and releases a shockwave, buildings caving in on themselves as their owners rush out.Hammer Force Sorcery Destroy target land. Hammer Force deals 1 damage to up to two target creatures. As the shockwave reverberates through Tolaria West, Brayden slams his hand and then shouts, "Naben, get the hell over here!" "Yes I am, give me a second!" Naben says rather in airritable voice, and then Brayden grabs a microphone-like device from above him, and from above, his voice booms out, "Everyone, prepare for PROTOCOL SKY, that thing outside is acting up, as you can tell. Prepare for the worst!" as he finishes, Naben bursts through the door, "Has the forcefield been broken?" He says before looking at the hedron. (OOC: Brayden would have set up some sort of containment but Inferno hasn't really responded for a while, so I didn't really get the chance to say that he would've) Hammer Force: Seems fine. Like a slightly weaker devastate 9/10 Call for aid: Azure Mage (What the second bit will be targetting) Thassa's Blessing
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Post by Deleted on Jan 17, 2020 14:29:54 GMT
I like it. A bit strong but there's nothing wrong with that. 9/10
The forcefield has not been breached, and it managed to absorb the extent of the shock wave, but even still traces of it cause a minor tremble in the ground below. AS the locals hold their breath, the hedron falls still again, now soflty pulsing with white light.
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Jan 17, 2020 22:36:50 GMT
I like it. A bit strong but there's nothing wrong with that. 9/10 The forcefield has not been breached, and it managed to absorb the extent of the shock wave, but even still traces of it cause a minor tremble in the ground below. AS the locals hold their breath, the hedron falls still again, now soflty pulsing with white light.(No need to reply just flavor fluff) As a wave of relief washs over Naben, he says in a stern voice to Brayden, "We need a constant surveillance on that thing!" "I'll place some sensors around the forcefield to measure the flow of mana, but first-" he says before talking back into the microphone,"Good news everyone, that thing seemed to have... stablised. We'll keep it on constant surveillance from now on. However, due to unpredictability of it, everyone must stay vigilant in case of emergency." |
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Feb 22, 2020 15:17:35 GMT
Excerpt from Henry Brayden's Journel:
I have found the cause of the affliction that ails my arm. I recently found in the archives hidden in some sort of secret chamber, clearly someone wanted to keep this a secret, a paper written by Urza himself. It details an early failed version of the Bloodline Project. Under the supervision of Urza, an serum of mostly green mana was created by Lily Brayden, who I assume was a distant ancestor of mine. This serum was said to be able to enchance the physical capabilities and the ability for people to 'evolve', what that means I'm not too sure. However, there wasn't really any willing people at the time who wanted to endure the experiment so she willing chose to do to it on herself. However, It backfired and she was driven mad by it and went on a rampage. And so, Urza sealed it away. However, he didn't get rid of it, and so the 'Curse' passed from each generation until it hit me and 'awakened' when my spark ignited and I was exposed to a lot of green mana. And, with the help of Naben and the team of Clerics, was able to create and perform an procedure to get rid of the 'curse'. However, the procedure has taken a toll on my body.
So, I must recover and get stronger, for myself, my academy and the whole multiverse.
I will grow stronger.
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Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Feb 22, 2020 22:34:40 GMT
"What...?" he says taken aback by the sudden change in the scenary, "Where am I?" he says while looking around the clearing he appeared in, his sword held at his side. Well, I suppose there's one way to find out... and then he starts exploring forwards from where he was; Hoping he would find some answers.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 22, 2020 22:39:28 GMT
A green-cloaked man approaches, waving to the stranger. "Hoy! You're looking a bit lost. Might I be of assistance?"
Merrith's Greeting 2U
Instant -- Uncommon
You and target player both draw a card. Create two Rune tokens.
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Post by cajun on Feb 23, 2020 6:54:31 GMT
The leaves of Briar's tree shake ever so slightly at the giant's distant footsteps, but to the faeries on the tree, each step is a mild earthquake. This simply would not stand. The problem must be dealt with before she got here. Briar points to three of her faeries, then they fly off to face the source of their troubles.
The four faeries circle up the giant to his head. Briar flies to his face while the others hide just out of view. "Hey, what's the big idea?!" she yells in her tiny voice. "What are you stomping all around like you own the place?" Big Talk  Instant Whenever a creature with power 1 deals combat damage to a player this turn, that player discards a card.
A faerie's bluster is inversely proportional to their size.
+ing Briar to make a 1/1 Faerie to poke with
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Feb 23, 2020 13:16:03 GMT
A green-cloaked man approaches, waving to the stranger. "Hoy! You're looking a bit lost. Might I be of assistance?" Merrith's Greeting 2U Instant -- Uncommon You and target player both draw a card. Create two Rune tokens.
Merrith's Greeting: While the first part is technically worded correctly, from a gameplay standpoint and just trying to read it, it reads weirdly and I feel "Each player draw a card" would be better in gameplay or It could be "Draw a card. Target opponent draws a card." If you want to stick with the original effect. And, also please add reminder text explaining what rune tokens are and what they do because as they are a custom token type, so not everyone will know what they do. (Had to go look for what they did.) 7/10
(And here's a link to a guide on how to use the symbols on the board)
Goblin Scrap-Warrior
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Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
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Post by Adelyn on Feb 23, 2020 18:28:09 GMT
The leaves of Briar's tree shake ever so slightly at the giant's distant footsteps, but to the faeries on the tree, each step is a mild earthquake. This simply would not stand. The problem must be dealt with before she got here. Briar points to three of her faeries, then they fly off to face the source of their troubles.
The four faeries circle up the giant to his head. Briar flies to his face while the others hide just out of view. "Hey, what's the big idea?!" she yells in her tiny voice. "What are you stomping all around like you own the place?" Big Talk Instant Whenever a creature with power 1 deals combat damage to a player this turn, that player discards a card.
A faerie's bluster is inversely proportional to their size.
+ing Briar to make a 1/1 Faerie to poke with
Big Talk: Seems ok, if a little narrow. Maybe bump it up power 2 or less 8/10
Defence Squadron 
Creature - Human Archer
Flash
When ~ enters the battlefield, it deals 2 damage to target tapped creature.
2/1
"Their aim is as true as their loyalty to the Boros." —Tajic
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Post by cajun on Feb 23, 2020 22:39:50 GMT
As Briar appears in front of Ragnall's face, and when he hears her remark on him stomping around, in a harsh voice he says, "Stomping around? Well, excuse me!" he says in a overly sarcastic voice, "Never once have I claimed to 'own this place'. If anything, I have only got a vague sense of where the hell I am, and how the hell I got here eludes me! I'm just trying to figure out how to get back to my village, and so standing around like some sort of pillock is not going to help me!"
Briar makes a show of looking up and down the giant. "Well how do you go and lose a village of people as big as you? Or did they chase you out cause you were causing just as much trouble there as here?"
"For as long as I've been here I've never met a you before, so I'd saaaaaay..." Briar looks around, then points in a random direction. "Try going that way, for like, a really long time. You'll be sure to run into something eventually." Sorcery  Exile target nonland permanent. As long as that card remains exiled, its owner may cast it, and can't cast other spells.
and dropping the skill points to unlock Lorwyn block for Call for Aid: Pestermite to untap the token and fizzle the burn. Ain't no faeries dying on Briar's watch :^)
preemptive note for tokens, since that card won't remain exiled, the silence will never occur
Defense Squadron - 8/10
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Feb 24, 2020 18:17:19 GMT
Briar makes a show of looking up and down the giant. "Well how do you go and lose a village of people as big as you? Or did they chase you out cause you were causing just as much trouble there as here?"
"For as long as I've been here I've never met a you before, so I'd saaaaaay..." Briar looks around, then points in a random direction. "Try going that way, for like, a really long time. You'll be sure to run into something eventually." Sorcery Exile target nonland permanent. As long as that card remains exiled, its owner may cast it, and can't cast other spells.
and dropping the skill points to unlock Lorwyn block for Call for Aid: Pestermite to untap the token and fizzle the burn. Ain't no faeries dying on Briar's watch :^)
preemptive note for tokens, since that card won't remain exiled, the silence will never occur
Defense Squadron - 8/10
Flash Vigilance When ~ enters the battlefield, you may return target creature you control to its owner’s hand. 2/3 (To bounce the defence squadron, which I assume is the thing being targeted.) |
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Post by cajun on Feb 25, 2020 5:56:57 GMT
As he hears Briar's general mocking tone and quite obvious contempt to him, he shouts in a fury of anger, which would be borderline deafening to Briar, "My village was torched to the ground! My people, slaughtered! I could have safed them, if I wasn't suddenly ripped from there and placed here of all places! And, You! You have the audacity to mock me in my time of need! If don't you plan to help me, get out my way!" he says while grabbing the hilt of his sword, but not unsheathing it, simply to show what will happen if Briar continued to harass him. Briar tumbled in the air at the noise and breath. Two of her faeries took aim with their crossbows, but she lightly shook her head as she recovered. She put her hand to her chest. "I did not know. I, too, am a servant to my people, and know the pain of their loss. We shall do what we can to lead you on your way..."
She throws her hands into the air, a light rain of sparkling pixie dust flying from them. As the last of the sparkles fades away, another fairy, almost half Briar's height, flies out from behind her.
"Four wings are better than non, don't you think?"
Pyra, Ever-Vigil Legendary Creature - Faerie Rogue Flying, vigilance Pyra, Ever-Vigil enters the battlefield under the control of an opponent of your choice. At the beginning of your upkeep, Pyra's owner gains 1 life and creates a 1/1 black Faerie creature token with flying. 0/4
a gift, perhaps? :^)Evacuation Squad - 8/10
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Adelyn
3/3 Beast
Posts: 183
Formerly Known As: Sir Martikov
Favorite Card: Adeliz, the Cinder Wind
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Adelyn on Feb 25, 2020 22:09:48 GMT
Briar tumbled in the air at the noise and breath. Two of her faeries took aim with their crossbows, but she lightly shook her head as she recovered. She put her hand to her chest. "I did not know. I, too, am a servant to my people, and know the pain of their loss. We shall do what we can to lead you on your way..." She throws her hands into the air, a light rain of sparkling pixie dust flying from them. As the last of the sparkles fades away, another fairy, almost half Briar's height, flies out from behind her.
"Four wings are better than non, don't you think?"
Pyra, Ever-Vigil Legendary Creature - Faerie Rogue Flying, vigilance Pyra, Ever-Vigil enters the battlefield under the control of an opponent of your choice. At the beginning of your upkeep, Pyra's owner gains 1 life and creates a 1/1 black Faerie creature token with flying. 0/4
a gift, perhaps? :^)Evacuation Squad - 8/10
Reminds me of Xantcha, seems neat, but It reminds too much of bitterblossom and gives you life in exchange for giving 0/4 to your opponent. Might be over estimating, needs testing. 7/10 Familial Idol  Artifact As ~ enters the battlefield, choose a creature type. Creatures you control of the chosen type get +1/+1. Whenever you cast a spell of the chosen type, scry 1. (I choose faerie  ) |
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