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Up: Really balanced gamble. I feel like it should reveal itself to say why you are removing cards, and should specify "Cards removed by cards named ~" since other cards can remove cards from the draft too, but you can understand what it is supposed to do and it is still super fun and risky outside those clarity issues.



Intended as a flexible deterrent if you see cards that could hurt your strategy and draft them preemptively, or if your strategy doesn't mind losing some lands, pick something you see yourself playing a good bit to pump this creature. Could be a bit narrow in use, but anything less narrow would likely be overpowered. Requires foresight when drafting, but land destruction is a steep penalty.

Old: Sacrifices Land
New: Generates Mana

Edits: Minor tweaks and added artist credit.

Up: Major respect to the inspiration; Dark Sun is my favorite D&D setting. I love the flavor of this conceptually, but I worry about how undercosted it is, and also an interesting wording choice. Is there a reason you have it produce color vs type? I feel like a deck using this card in a Dark Sun inspired set would be using mostly wastes to cast its hay-maker spells, given how we know magic works there. My other primary concern is that the only drawback to playing this card is needing colorless mana to abuse it, but Storm already uses Shivan Reef, so that really doesn't feel like a downside. I think it should cost much, much more for this kind of effect, especially considering that if  it's free (You sack the lands you used to cast it and recoup the cost). I think even adding multiple colorless to the cost and making it a sorcery wouldn't hamper its effectiveness one bit (I pull this from Scapeshift's example). 2CC or 3CC that adds any type of mana at sorcery speed is still super strong, but it isn't game breaking and could create really cool gameplay interactions. I hope this wasn't too harsh, as I truly do love where your head is at with this design. 


For this design, you inspired me to try some shenanigans with psionics. For those who don't know, Dark Sun is a really backwards setting in that magic is more rare than psionics (essentially natural psychic ability from the self.) So I wanted to think of how that would work on a magic card. Here's my idea, essentially like creature-walkers:




Old: Cares about creature tokens.
New: It has a Bazaar Trader effect. (It gives your opponent permanents you own/control)

Jartis, How about now? 


Also, that makes sense. I evaluated the card in terms of it being like a Desperate Ritual kind of effect, and it being an instant means you can do this in Storm:

- Cast Desperate Rit with cost reduction on Baral.
- OP Bolts Baral.
- Float all your mana.
- Cast Desperate Drain for C, which is essentially free since you sack 4-5 lands.
-G-g-g-go off.

In a way, it's as good as Seething Song.

Up: Looks somehow like you tried to turn a planeswalker into a creature. It's not a bad thing. It's a slow token producer but in the right deck it can ramp pretty good. I just don't see why it's blue. THe abilities seem monogreen to me. But maybe it's some flavour thing I don't get.

Hunted Borglarr
Creature - Beast
Vigilance
Each token that would be created under your control, it is created under an opponent’s control instead.
Whenever Hunted Borglarr is dealt damage, create two 1/1 black Nightstalker creature tokens.
4/4

Old: It has a Bazaar Trader effect. (It gives your opponent permanents you own/control)
New: No activated abilities

Up: This card is sweet in every way. I love the flavor of how it's helping you spy on the opponent. Top tier design.


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Old: Nonbasic land.
New: Cares about cards in hand.

Eldritch Thoughts
Instant
Discard your hand, then put all cards you own in exile into your hand and exile your graveyard. Shuffle ~ into your library.
He had a strange dream, where all he once knew was replaced with unknowable secrets.

Old: Cares about Exile
New: Cantrip

Up: Very strange. I feel like this could be a combo piece, but it’s not broken in its own.

Prepare to Learn
Sorcery
Draw a card. If Prepare to Learn was cast from exile, draw three cards instead.
Suspend 2 —

Old: card with Suspend
New: No mana cost (like Hypergenesis)

Up: Seems like a good price considering suspending allows your opponent 3 turns to figure out how to avoid it.

Temporal Loop
 Instant - Arcane 
(Nonexistent mana costs can’t be paid.)
Take another turn after this one. At the beginning of the next opponent’s upkeep, if no one lost the game since this card was cast, you lose the game.
Splice onto arcane  (As you cast an arcane spell, you may reveal this card from your hand and pay its splice cost. If you do, add this card’s effects to that spell.)
"The only way out of this is for one of us to die."

Old: Has a "You lose the game" clause
New: Is a multicolored creature

Up: Really wierd, but it works quite well. It kills you eventually regardless of if you take lands every turn, so there’s tension of you take a land or something more useful and risk dying sooner.

Rix Maadi Carver
Creature — Human Warrior
, , sacrifice another creature: Put two +1/+1 counters on target create. That creature gains menace until end of turn. If the sacrificed creature was a Boar, you gain 7 life.
2/3

Old: Food flavored (pun intended)
New: Artifact

Up: Fitting for thanksgiving and an elegant design. Well done! 

Pet Rock  
Artifact
When CARDNAME enters the battlefield, it becomes a 3/3 colorless Hound artifact creature token with haste until end of turn. It's still an artifact.
: Add one mana of any color. 

Old: Enters the battlefield effect.
New: Three-colored.

UP: Simple, effective. My one issue is that it's missing a bit of symmetry: 3 colors, cmc 3, power 3, toughness 3.....but 2 damage on etb. I think it could have been 3 damage without making the card unbalanced. 8/10

Vaevictis's Ultimatum
Legendary Instant
For each nonland permanent target player controls, that player may sacrifice it. If they don't, they may discard a card. If they don't, ~ deals 1 damage to that player.
, Sacrifice two creatures: You may return ~ from your graveyard to your hand.

OLD: Has an activated ability
NEW: Is silver border

UP: An activated ability is one with a colon : in it. You failed to do the old requirement.
For the card itself: In most games I play, that would just prevent 2 damage to each creature. This should be rare and probably also cost a bit more.
To make a more interesting/fun challenge, hwo about preventing 1 damage for each sleeve it is in?

Vedalken Looter
Creature - Vedalken Rogue Advisor
Whenever Vedalken Looter deals combat damage to a player, you may exchange a bill from that player’s wallet with a bill from your wallet. If a player lost value in this process, they may draw to cards, then discard to cards.
1/2

Old: Has something to do with exchanging (can be anything, not just exchanging permanents)
New: Use your hand(s)

Up: They should do more stuff with the bottom of your library. Definitely exchanges things. Looks fun.

Tajuru Restorer
Creature — Elf Druid
, return a land you control to its owner’s hand: Put up to two land cards from your hand onto the battlefield.
3/3

Old: Affects land(s) somehow
New: Mono-Black

Up: Good reference to Cyclopean Tomb. Or Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth, I guess. 4 mana seems about right.

Charm of Death and Decay
Sorcery
Choose one:
* All creatures get -4/-4 until end of turn.
* Return two target creature cards from graveyards to the battlefield under your control.
* Target player draws four cards and loses 4 life.

Old: Charm
New: CMC 6 or greater