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Post by Flo00 on Jun 29, 2023 18:59:34 GMT
 I'm not certain about the templating, or if indeed the effect could be worded at all, but silver border gives some leeway. Bad (or actually good?) news: All the augment cards have mana value 0. If you really want to restrict it, maybe something like "total converted augment mana cost x or less" ? |
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Post by Idea on Jun 29, 2023 19:11:25 GMT
I'm not certain about the templating, or if indeed the effect could be worded at all, but silver border gives some leeway. Bad (or actually good?) news: All the augment cards have mana value 0. If you really want to restrict it, maybe something like "total converted augment mana cost x or less" ? This is what I get for making cards at 4am. Thank you for the suggestion, it's been incorporated! |
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Post by Flo00 on Jul 5, 2023 17:47:45 GMT
Judging. {vizionarius}Simple and stright forward. Works.
{Idea}Fun an crazy way to use augment cards. Fits right into unstable.
vizionarius wins for suitable simplicity. |
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Post by vizionarius on Jul 10, 2023 17:21:58 GMT
Thanks for the win! Next: Create a color cycle around Dub. |
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thaneofglamis
8/8 Octopus
Thane's activated abilities can't be activated
Posts: 444
Favorite Card: Slimefoot, the Stowaway; Phyrexian Rager; Swarm Shambler
Favorite Set: Midnight Hunt
Color Alignment: Green
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Post by thaneofglamis on Jul 10, 2023 18:27:51 GMT
Doctorate  
Enchantment - Aura  Enchant creature Enchanted creature gets +2/+2 and is a Wizard in addition to its other types.
Whenever enchanted creature attacks, draw a card. "Congratulations, for you are the newest alumnus of the Tolarian Academy."
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Post by Idea on Jul 12, 2023 2:40:45 GMT
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pernicious
8/8 Octopus
Posts: 440
Favorite Card: Mistmeadow Skulk
Favorite Set: Shadowmoor block
Color Alignment: Red
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Post by pernicious on Jul 13, 2023 23:26:22 GMT
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Post by Idea on Jul 14, 2023 0:16:46 GMT
Crap, thanks for the heads up pernicious ! Fixed now. |
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Post by vizionarius on Jul 17, 2023 19:42:06 GMT
Any takers for a  one? |
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Post by viriss on Jul 18, 2023 1:09:43 GMT
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Post by vizionarius on Jul 18, 2023 2:53:53 GMT
Feedbackthaneofglamis : Liking that you kept the 1-word verb name along with flavor text referencing a place, and someone becoming someone. The fact that the card doesn't just give a keyword is less than ideal (would be cool if that effect was keyworded to " curious" or something, and worked when damage was dealt instead of simply on attack), but is a fitting effect for Wizards (good choice) from the Tolarian Academy (that, or bounce). The +  cost is warranted, I think. Idea : Also a 1-word verb for a name, I like it. I wish the flavor text had a reference to a place, but it's a good one regardless. Good choice on Warlock. The one-time effect on death feels a little too different to me, though. The + cost is warranted, I think. pernicious : Would have preferred it if it was just Blood for the name, but not too off. Warrior is a good choice. Rampage!! Although a fun throwback, it's a little weak nowadays. The flavor text is nice, but a little off from the original. Unfortunately there are no straightforward red-aligned keywords other than haste (which I agree wouldn't be best here) and first strike (which is what Dub already gives). Maybe a newly-keyworded " inverse-skulk" or something to go with the Warrior/Coward theme? The + cost might be a bit too much, I think. viriss : Would have liked it more as just Call. The only submission keeping it at 3 MV. The switch of one +1 from P to T feels nice for this, especially with Vigilance and Druids (good choice). I like the addition of the duh on the card. If the flavor text referenced some sort of transformation tied to a place, this would be perfect in my mind.
Result
All very solid submissions. This one goes to viriss for what I think is the closest in effect and flavor to the original Dub. Close second is thaneofglamis.
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Post by viriss on Jul 19, 2023 22:52:06 GMT
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Post by Idea on Jul 20, 2023 8:41:03 GMT
 Thank you vizionarius for your advice {Previous Versions}   |
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Post by vizionarius on Aug 1, 2023 2:10:25 GMT
Forbidden Collaboration Sorcery  You and target opponent each create a token that's a copy of a creature the other controls. Collaboration between the colleges is strictly forbidden, but some experiments cannot be foregone.Idea : I think you can remove the word "respective" and just have: "...from your graveyards to the battlefield." Keen Duelist gives us a template of how WotC does this, namely by using the plural "you" to refer to multiple players when you (singular) are one of them. Edit after judgment, based on feedback from viriss (thanks!): Forbidden Collaboration Sorcery You and target opponent each choose a creature the other controls, then you each create a token that's a copy of the creature you each chose. Collaboration between the colleges is strictly forbidden, but some experiments cannot be foregone.
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boxlaunch
0/0 Germ
Posts: 28
Favorite Card: Uninvited Geist
Favorite Set: Shadows Over Innistrad
Color Alignment: Black, Green
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Post by boxlaunch on Aug 1, 2023 2:56:22 GMT
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Post by viriss on Aug 3, 2023 0:46:16 GMT
Idea Having played against *many* Exhume's I really like this card. Better cost and doesn't benefit the entire table in multiplayer. vizionarius I love the "we both have one!" feel and that it doesn't target, though I'm not sure who chooses based on how it's written. boxlaunch This is card I don't think I would ever have come up with on my own. It fits the cycle really well. I kinda wish you could only play the "other" cards but the "lets mingle our bits" part is... nice. Winner: boxlaunch
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Post by viriss on Aug 3, 2023 1:24:32 GMT
Forbidden Collaboration Sorcery You and target opponent each create a token that's a copy of a creature the other controls. Collaboration between the colleges is strictly forbidden, but some experiments cannot be foregone.Idea : I think you can remove the word "respective" and just have: "...from your graveyards to the battlefield." Keen Duelist gives us a template of how WotC does this, namely by using the plural "you" to refer to multiple players when you (singular) are one of them. Edit after judgment, based on feedback from viriss (thanks!): Forbidden Collaboration Sorcery You and target opponent each choose a creature the other controls, then you each create a token that's a copy of the creature you each chose. Collaboration between the colleges is strictly forbidden, but some experiments cannot be foregone. Yes! You can have my Blazing Archon and I'll take your Elesh Norn, Grand Cenobite!! |
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boxlaunch
0/0 Germ
Posts: 28
Favorite Card: Uninvited Geist
Favorite Set: Shadows Over Innistrad
Color Alignment: Black, Green
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Post by boxlaunch on Aug 3, 2023 3:53:45 GMT
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Post by Idea on Aug 3, 2023 9:00:04 GMT
Not sure which one of these two will be my final entry... {No longer my entry, but I wanted to keep it here anyway}  |
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Post by vizionarius on Aug 11, 2023 19:24:59 GMT
Approach of the Final Eclipse   Sorcery  Choose target opponent. If this spell was cast from your hand and you've cast another spell named Approach of the Final Eclipse this game, that opponent loses the game. Otherwise, put Approach of the Final Eclipse into its owner’s library seventh from the top and that opponent loses 7 life.
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Post by ZephyrPhantom on Aug 11, 2023 19:44:09 GMT
Not sure about the balance but I wanted to get the idea out there: Ignition of the Red Comet  Sorcery If this spell was cast from your hand and you’ve cast another spell named ~ this game, ~ deals damage equal to the number of cards in exile to each opponent. Otherwise, exile the top twenty cards of your library and put Ignition of the Red Comet into its owner’s library seventh from the top. Until end of turn, you may play cards exiled this way. "Once burned, twice immolated." |
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boxlaunch
0/0 Germ
Posts: 28
Favorite Card: Uninvited Geist
Favorite Set: Shadows Over Innistrad
Color Alignment: Black, Green
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Post by boxlaunch on Aug 21, 2023 2:27:14 GMT
At this point I waited long enough that the Third Sun has approached and the Fourth is on the Horizon, but let's get judging! Idea - Judging as I read it. First, I like the "win con" not being just being I win the game. There is room for opponents to pontentially get around losing to this but it is very difficult. The first mode of this card is a great defensive tool, way better than 7 life IMO. Especially the tap down at end step, (which I appreciate the timing on so it isn't used aggressively to swing in for lethal) seems extra brutal for the opponent. vizionarius - I like this card as AotSS's polar opposite. While dealing damage is pretty much always better than gaining life, the draw back of it being a single target in multiplayer or harder to get back to since you aren't since it isn't a defensive tool. Though there is a world where you could kill two different players with each cast of the card which I also like. Definently think it is overall stronger than the OG but I appreciate it a lot. ZephyrPhantom - been thinking a lot about cEDH recently and this feels like it could be Red's Ad Naus or Peer into the abyss. While in that format it's second cast doesn't guarantee a win (though it doesn't in 1v1 either) the ability to peel 20 off the top is sweet. However needing to cast them that turn might be kind of tough in most games to still have any amount of mana to cast said cards. Definently taking a big risk to cast this, very impulsive, very red. {Winner}These cards are all super sweet and as I read each one, I kept thinking of fun possibilties and scenario's to play them. That being said, for the game to continue I must crown someone a winner. So I will give it to ZephyrPhantom , but bravo all on some really cool cards! |
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Post by ZephyrPhantom on Aug 21, 2023 3:13:17 GMT
Thanks for the win. I'm glad it was appreciated. Your next challenge is to make new cycle members for the Muse cycle - you might have noticed only the Black member checks for a tribe (Zombies), while the others do not, which has made me feel the current cycle is a little odd. You can go about this in a few ways and I encourage everyone to experiment: - Make a Black muse that is not tribal dependent. - Make a non-Black muse that is tribal dependent. - Make a colorless/multicolor/other kind of Muse that fits the cycle. - Surprise me and do something I wouldn't see coming. Be creative! Good luck! |
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Post by viriss on Aug 21, 2023 18:16:33 GMT
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Post by ameisenmeister on Aug 22, 2023 21:08:49 GMT
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Post by serraphim on Aug 24, 2023 21:24:16 GMT
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Post by Idea on Aug 26, 2023 12:28:27 GMT
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Post by ZephyrPhantom on Aug 27, 2023 14:53:47 GMT
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Post by Idea on Aug 27, 2023 15:14:44 GMT
Oh, thanks for the heads up! |
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Post by vizionarius on Aug 30, 2023 22:04:38 GMT
Painborn Muse Creature - Spirit At the beginning of each end step, each opponent loses life equal to the life that player lost this turn. (Damage causes loss of life.)“Her voice is damnation, unyielding and certain.”
—Phage the Untouchable3/3
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