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Post by kefke on Feb 19, 2019 4:37:06 GMT
I've enjoyed a number of the challenges on these boards, so I thought it was time I created my own.
When I create cards, I almost always have music playing. Seems like a pretty obvious thing. Music is inspiring. It sparks the imagination, and can put your mind in another place. There's countless different styles, some with stories, some without even words, each helping to create their own ideas and moods. Best of all, you can leave it going in the background while doing other things. So, this challenge inspired by that is going to be pretty simple. - Each week, the previous week's winner will link a song (link a primary source if possible, and try to keep links SFW/PG).
- In addition to the song, they should pick an additional restriction or requirement.
- After a week, they judge the cards submitted, and pick the one they like bast to be the next winner (you guys know the drill).
Here's the first song, to start things off.
Your Challenge: Make your card at Common rarity.
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Post by Jartis on Feb 19, 2019 9:16:42 GMT
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Post by Tesagk on Feb 19, 2019 11:52:38 GMT
viriss' entry made me realize that using a quote from the lyric would be more bamf, so I will try to add it later, but I think this suits: The fiendish tales, all the myths are true
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Post by viriss on Feb 19, 2019 14:45:07 GMT
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Post by gateways7 on Feb 20, 2019 2:02:51 GMT
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temawimag
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Post by temawimag on Feb 24, 2019 5:37:30 GMT
Too late for a last-minute entry?
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Post by kefke on Feb 25, 2019 14:41:21 GMT
Well...it's technically been a week now, and while there's a few hours to go, I'm up right now. I'm going to weigh the possibility of more entries coming in against the rate at which the current entries came in. Alright, we've got a decision from the judges, and I say I'm going to go ahead and start the music, and the judging. Jartis: An interesting take to make a variant Forest. Temporary exile is normally White, but I think that flavour trumps colour here, and the use as a combat trick definitely feels more Green. The concept of an attacker wandering into the woods and then finding themselves back home with a chunk of time missing and no idea how they got there does a good job of evoking the feeling of something mysterious going on. With it triggering ETB effects, counting as a basic land type, and generating mana, though, it is a strictly better Maze of Ith, which was already a pretty strong card, and a rare (uncommon in its initial printing, but always at least rare since). Tesagk: I sure do get a sense of menace from this card. Which is a little impressive, considering its effects are fairly mild. I think that comes down to the aspect of recursion, though. Recursion can lead to stale gameplay, but the use here, looming in sight and fuelled by death - and more importantly, giving the opponent more opportunity to respond and break the cycle - elevates that a bit. The choice of colour not only makes sense, but also means having access to lots of sacrifice effects to fuel the recursion condition, which helps with what would otherwise be a fairly overcosted card. Though, being an Enchantment with ETB means it also has to do its work on your main phase, regardless of when you retrieve it. Even with it being a bit wordy already, this card is balanced conservatively enough that I actually think it would have been improved by giving it flash. viriss: I had to read this one a few times to get where the flavour was going, but I think I get it. It feels like you were going for a warrior gaining knowledge of what came before and using it to become stronger, which I actually like. It has a pretty simple design, which is good at common. Cost wise, three mana isn't great when you get a 1/1 out of it, but fantastic value as you get more permanents out. It's interesting that it cares about opponents' cards as well. That lessens the hoops you have to jump through to get good value, though it also means that it can punish opponents in an unexpected/unpredictable way. I'm not sure how I feel about it being an ETB effect, since it means there's bound to be a lot of second guessing about the right time to play the card, but at the same time I'd be interested in seeing what other effects could be tied to the Lore Seeker ability word. A last, minor nitpick, though..."Tribal" isn't actually classified as a permanent type. gateways7: Theming here feels pretty strong. It's literally setting up a legendary battle. I worry a little about power level, but CMC 2 for fight with a bonus is within the realm of reasonable. The main issue, I think, comes from not being able to properly evaluate glorifying in a vacuum. I like the concept of a creature that would die being immortalized and its "legacy" carrying on, but how useful it is will depend a lot. In certain matchups, turning a troublesome creature into an enchantment could be a win condition. In others, it might mean very little. Also, the fact that the glorifying is what happens if you lose the fight means that there's essentially two versions of this card - one where you snipe an opponent's creature, and one where you sacrifice a creature to create an enchantment with its abilities. Ultimately, I think it's probably an okay balance, but might be a bit too confusing / advanced a card to be at common. temawimag: Not to worry about getting in your card a bit later! You were still well within the cutoff. Mechanically, I'd say this is a fairly solid card. Essentially Boomerang, trading a narrower focus and need to split your mana base to give a little more tactical setup. The flavour...feels a little disjointed. We've got a good "spooky" name and art, and flavour text lifted from the song (a common trend, though by no means a requirement), but I'm not really able to wrap my head around how it all ties together. Is the creature being bounced the apparition? Is the apparition causing them to go missing? Am I scrying because I'm so confused at what just happened? Am I investigating what happened? Is that why science is providing explanations? I do find this card mysterious, but I don't think it's for the intended reasons. I can tell you have a good grasp of mechanics, and that you got some inspiration from the music, but it feels like it didn't quite jell. After considering all the entries, I pick viriss as the winner. Congratulations!
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Post by viriss on Feb 25, 2019 15:13:31 GMT
Here's the second song, to keep things moving. Your Challenge: Make a legendary card.Edit: Here's a link to the lyrics, and the song title is "Isn't It Wonderful?" by Nobuo Uematsu. (Thanks Tesagk , for the suggestion.)
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Post by kefke on Feb 25, 2019 21:09:42 GMT
I'm not sure why, but the idea that most resonated with me listening to this song was a young Tamiyo, her spark not yet awakened. I'm not happy with the art, but it's the best I could find.
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Post by Tesagk on Feb 26, 2019 0:36:44 GMT
It would be helpful if the name of the song and the artist were posted, would help to find lyrics and such.
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Post by Jartis on Feb 26, 2019 0:49:17 GMT
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temawimag
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Post by temawimag on Feb 26, 2019 7:41:17 GMT
temawimag : Not to worry about getting in your card a bit later! You were still well within the cutoff. Mechanically, I'd say this is a fairly solid card. Essentially Boomerang, trading a narrower focus and need to split your mana base to give a little more tactical setup. The flavour...feels a little disjointed. We've got a good "spooky" name and art, and flavour text lifted from the song (a common trend, though by no means a requirement), but I'm not really able to wrap my head around how it all ties together. Is the creature being bounced the apparition? Is the apparition causing them to go missing? Am I scrying because I'm so confused at what just happened? Am I investigating what happened? Is that why science is providing explanations? I do find this card mysterious, but I don't think it's for the intended reasons. I can tell you have a good grasp of mechanics, and that you got some inspiration from the music, but it feels like it didn't quite jell. After considering all the entries, I pick viriss as the winner. Congratulations! I thought the design was obvious - it was a straight interpretation of the lyrics I used in the flavor text. The "myth" being a creature gets explained away as untrue (return to hand), and the people explaining it try to find an explanation to what it was (scrying). The "myth" needed to be true, though, in order for the spell to resolve, so it can come back later despite what answers the player found by scrying. You're confused because I wanted you to be confused. Sitting this round out unless you guys want a legendary fog effect.
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Post by viriss on Feb 27, 2019 2:31:44 GMT
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Post by gateways7 on Mar 3, 2019 18:55:16 GMT
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Post by kefke on Mar 8, 2019 18:06:04 GMT
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Post by viriss on Mar 9, 2019 16:52:34 GMT
kefke I can see her reading and learning, and then using that knowledge to make old things reappear. Tesagk Definite mythic. Sad, violent strange. Jartis I'm surprised this (or something like it) doesn't exist yet. !temawimag I really wanted to see a legendary fog. =( Totes serious. gateways7 I'm not sure that's the right color combination for this nonsense!?! lol. Do you gain life equal to the number of cards left in exile, or the starting number?
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Post by Jartis on Mar 10, 2019 0:40:39 GMT
Thanks for the win! The next song:
Your Challenge: Design a non-creature card.
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Post by viriss on Mar 10, 2019 1:21:38 GMT
The Bard's Song
Now you all know The bards and their songs When hours have gone by I'll close my eyes In a world far away We may meet again But now hear my song About the dawn of the night Let's sing the bards' song
Tomorrow will take us away Far from home No one will ever know our names But the bards' songs will remain Tomorrow will take it away The fear of today It will be gone Due to our magic songs
There's only one song Left in my mind Tales of a brave man Who lived far from here Now the bard songs are over And it's time to leave No one should ask you for the name Of the one Who tells the story
Tomorrow will take us away Far from home No one will ever know our names But the bards' songs will remain Tomorrow all will be known And you're not alone So don't be afraid In the dark and cold 'Cause the bards' songs will remain They all will remain
In my thoughts and in my dreams They're always in my mind These songs of hobbits, dwarves and men And elves Come close your eyes You can see them too
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temawimag
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Post by temawimag on Mar 10, 2019 7:24:21 GMT
If I won the challenge before the last, I was going to submit Voice in the Dark, so a little Blind Guardian is more than welcome. I'd like to think that if this card was printed, the set would have a token for it that just has a punchout for like the Amonkhet tokens, except for the entire rules box so that you could just slip it over legendary card. (As a side note, can anyone tell me where this art is used? I found the art for this card by searching Shannon Associates and noticed a few of their artists worked on MtG cards).
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Post by Jartis on Mar 10, 2019 13:46:00 GMT
That Sorin art is from the Shadows Over Innistrad expansion for Arena of the Planeswalkers
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Post by kefke on Mar 10, 2019 17:31:08 GMT
There was honestly only one thing that song could bring to mind. I just had to pick the right part of the story.
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Post by Tesagk on Mar 14, 2019 11:28:18 GMT
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Post by Fleur on Mar 14, 2019 16:06:03 GMT
Song of the Forgotten Instant Creatures you control get +1/+1 until end of turn, then put a +1/+1 counter on each face-down creature you control.
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Post by Jartis on Mar 17, 2019 1:46:27 GMT
Surprise sort of on time judging! temawimag That would definitely be an interesting "token" for WotC to print I like how it becomes a 1/1, so you're not just getting the creature back for free, and it is in fact just a "story" of that creature. kefke Tokens that can be different colors based on devotion is interesting. Problem with the third stage is that (potentially intentionally) it means all your opponents creatures can fight as well, essentially leading to a weird turn-based combat round. Tesagk Saga filtering. Not much to argue against here. It even allows for playing Sagas outside of your mana colors (unless in Commander, of course), which I think makes it stand pretty well without needing more Sagas to be printed for it to be "worth it". Fleur Interesting interaction with face down creatures that I wasn't expecting. A solid card, nothing flashy, hard to argue with. Not a lot of entries this time around, so I'm just going to pick the winner without runners up. And that winner is temawimag! Congratulations.
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Post by temawimag on Mar 17, 2019 4:27:32 GMT
Thanks! Since the song I was going to submit before was from Blind Guardian, let's not not do them again. In fact, let's go the complete opposite direction from folk metal and power metal. (This one might be 9 minutes, but I won't blame you guys for only looking at the first 6 or so. If you're worried about there not being any lyrics to inspire you, take a listen to a certain track from an album Jon helped produce. If you can understand why I'm using the original instrumentation instead of the Coldplay song which sampled this, then you're probably going to do well in this round. ).
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Post by kefke on Mar 17, 2019 8:41:47 GMT
kefke Tokens that can be different colors based on devotion is interesting. Problem with the third stage is that (potentially intentionally) it means all your opponents creatures can fight as well, essentially leading to a weird turn-based combat round. Completely intentional. The card was based off of the climax of the book The Hobbit, the eponymous "Battle of Five Armies". - First the dwarves recover their treasure.
- The armies of various races assemble to fight over the treasure.
- A battle breaks out, taking a heavy toll on all sides.
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Post by viriss on Mar 17, 2019 13:35:55 GMT
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Post by melono on Mar 17, 2019 17:23:47 GMT
Constant Swelling Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature At the beginning of your upkeep, put two +1/+1 counters on enchanted creature, then put a -1/-1 counter on another creature enchanted creature's controller controls. There was no room left for anything else in the barn, yet the toad kept inflating.
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Post by kefke on Mar 17, 2019 18:03:45 GMT
Beautiful song. So, let me go over my thought process here. The melody of the song has this dreamy quality to it. I was put in mind of faraway places and a journey to adventure. The tempo suggested racing along toward one's destination, and the beat reminded me of the clatter of rails from the times I rode trains when I was younger. Combining all of that gave me the idea of a magical train, able to go places that no one has ever been before. I modelled the card after the trains in Kaladesh, especially the Untethered Express, but using Explore, coupled with an inability to block, to capture the idea of visiting new places and deliberate trailblazing, rather than just being a runaway train.
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