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Post by ameisenmeister on Apr 19, 2019 21:15:46 GMT
This song made me think of drifting through the sky and relax, so here is my card:
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Post by Boogymanjunior on Apr 22, 2019 22:00:18 GMT
Jartis Hehe, that's a cool interpretation right there. I also would like to someday visit a plane that has more advanced technology (although on Kaladesh and Ravnica, there are already approaches in this regard to be seen), and you fused the ethereal smoothness of the song with it's modernity into a mystic who pushes buttons to create the beat while using his other hand to spread it with a magical sound. The card itself however, while balanced, doesn't quite heave this flavour into gameplay. While the theme of different colors fit, +1/+1 counters beefing him up do not as good. Sure, his second ability follows the theme, but it's the first ability that would most often be the key factor, and having just a strong 5/5 body does not really resonate with him being a mystic. The second ability would also cause too much memory issues, even when the number of colors most often align with the number of +1/+1 counters on him. Regarding Sunburst and Converge, I think it would be better to remove Sunburst and link both of his abilities to Converge as it seems that Converge pretty much renders Sunburst obsolete (see Skyrider Elf) and it is very confusing having them both on one card. The reason why Chamber Sentry doesn't have any of those is probably because WotC only spells out abilities in a set if there are enough cards in it which would have this ability, which is not the case in Guilds of Ravnica. temawimag Wow, this is a really nice design for this. The beat of this song perfectly aligned with the vibe of parkouring people, the everpresent background sound with them having kind of a anti-gravitational boost, and the long etheric sounding „pauses“ with a long glide between two distant buildings, feeling nothing but the wind, sun and freedom until they land on the next ground with the beat reappearing. Even more important, the card itself oozes this flavour. To parkour, you have to be very vigilant, and to fly, you have to have, well, whatever magic you have. I also like the group vibe of them giving each other a boost which resonates with the picture. And all this into a balanced and cool effect with fun-looking implications. ameisenmeister This too is a very well-rounded design I dig. I like to imagine that the more crew members the captain gets to have in his life, the more possibilities he sees when he looks at the horizon. While the flavour, especially carried by the nice flavour text, perfectly aligns with the ethereal parts of the song, I can't really find the other part of the song, the beat, in there as strongly. Also, I am not a big fan of „flying matters“, but that's just me. But besides that, the effect itself is sweet and balanced. Regarding my choice of songs, I am probably a little bit too cautious posting tracks with lyrics as I always think that text has the ability to distort the connection with and freedom of interpretation through the melody. But I will see what others will post in the future, and let their choices contribute to my view on what I can post and what not. {And the winner is} temawimag ! Although I generally don't see vigilance in Magic as part of agility, it fits here, so there really is not anything negative to say about this card, but all the more positive: Flavour fused deliciously with picture and an interesting effect.
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Post by temawimag on Apr 23, 2019 3:05:03 GMT
Thanks!
For this round's challenge, since the song's pretty straightforward, I'm going to impose a restriction for this round: Design a card without a text explanation or text design notes.
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Post by ameisenmeister on Apr 23, 2019 8:24:32 GMT
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Post by Jartis on Apr 23, 2019 8:36:19 GMT
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Post by ludvikeverviolet on Apr 23, 2019 16:09:00 GMT
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Post by kefke on Apr 24, 2019 14:24:11 GMT
No design notes? I feel attacked. Good song, though.
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Post by temawimag on Apr 26, 2019 8:55:40 GMT
Judging a bit early, and I'm not going to leave it into any suspension and just say that kefke was the winner, largely because my problems with the other entries are mostly the same and kefke fills my personal criteria the most. Whenever I said that I wanted to put a restriction on the entries to not have an accompanying text for design notes, the challenge was to more closely honor the song that was given in terms of mood, instrumentation, vocals, everything. While this does vary from person to person, certain factors did make sense to consider when judging (things like submitting a mono green fog effect for a power metal song wouldn't have gotten you very far, for example). To alleviate this, I gave a song that was a straightforward, aggressive power metal entry. What it seems like a lot of the entries did, though, was take an interpretation of the chorus and try to adapt that into a card, but for the effects that resulted from it, the entries lost a lot of that speed for more deliberate and slow approach, via a slow effect that punishes libraries and hands. Even if they're mechanically sound, there's not much there to tie it to the fast and powerful instrumentation. There's more to music than the lyrics - some of the best songs in the world don't need them. For kefke's entry, the only real fault I can see with it is that he chose to make a "you lose the game" effect at uncommon, which is a huge no-no because of how complicated "You lose the game" is. I know that sounds straightforward, the the presence of playing around it requires a do-or-die execution that asks the player to end the game on a single turn. I think that do-or-die feeling is present and apparent in the other stages of the saga, though, and the clear intensity of that final turn by bringing back everything for one final bout compliments the instrumentation almost perfectly while providing the same type of dissonance to the lyrics that makes the song good. If you weren't so foolish before, you probably wouldn't need to risk your game. Maybe you regret throwing your hand away. Maybe your hand is full of regretful cards that you don't want to keep? You don't have much time to decide which, you need to act.
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Post by kefke on Apr 26, 2019 23:14:48 GMT
You know what? Metal feels good. Let's keep things going with some power metal.
Your challenge this time around is to make a creature with a keyword that hasn't been used in the last two blocks.
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Post by Jartis on Apr 27, 2019 7:30:23 GMT
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Post by melono on Apr 28, 2019 16:50:54 GMT
{Wrong old card} Scream of War Sorcery Red creatures you control get +2/+0 and gain haste until end of turn. Sound your drums, chime your bells. None shall reach, for our screams pierce all.EDIT: And only now I read the additional challenge. Welp. Coming back later with something else. EDIT2: Here's my legal entry to the challenge. Warscreecher Goblin Creature - Goblin Haste Battle Cry ( Whenever this creature attacks, each other attacking creature gets +1/+0 until end of turn.) When ~ enters the battlefield, destroy target Equipment. 3/2
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Post by ludvikeverviolet on May 2, 2019 16:29:45 GMT
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Post by Boogymanjunior on May 3, 2019 15:29:45 GMT
This song let me imagine a small group of brave soldiers led by some heroes defending their village against a much bigger force of a much bigger kingdom. The first verse and stanza represents the first paragraph of effects: led by the heroes, every soldier get imbued with hardening bravery, and the already battle-hardened heroes (those with a +1/+1 counter on them) only get even stronger, as heroes do. The second verse indicates that they won this fight. But although they did not win the whole war against the bigger kingdom, the fighting morale is at it's height. But not only that of the soldiers: The call at the enemy "Your fate has been sealed" now is the slogan that let every man and woman in the village become hardened by determination to fight for their land, represented by each of your creatures, whether attacking/blocking or not, getting a +1/+1 counter after the battle. As the kingdom suffered this defeat, it's will to extinguish this village did not get weaker. So, the all-dominant, final battle happens not long after. But however big the enemy's army is, in spirit, the second stanza is now shared with every villager, side by side with the soldiers: every one of them is now a soldier, every one of them a hero. So this time around, everyone gets +2/+2 and indestructible, and in this fight (the long song part without vocals) the whole village wins. After this glorious victory, everyone, hopefully including you who got a huge advantage by this combat trick, call their hymn together (the deep voice included at "heavier than hell, stronger than steel" in the background). ------ Cost-wise, I first took Make a stand. +1/+1 vs. +1/+0 is almost identical when combined with indestructibility, but this here can only prevent your combating creatures (in uncommon situations where you would want to cast a combat trick giving indestructibility onto non-combating creatures). Compensated and surpassed by giving creatures with +1/+1 counters +2/+2, I would let it cost . Then I took Pledge of Unity, cut the life gain part for , and then the whole combat-trickyness for , leaving . Mashed together and including Flashback which additionally synergizes with itself being cast the second time, pushed the up to . Although I would rate almost the same as , having a combat trick this cost-intensive and the second time around not as surprising, I left it at . The only thing I was unsure about was whether making it rare or uncommon. As an enemy of pure-power-disparities in rarities, I focused only on the level of complexity and impact. And I was torn so I got better safe than sorry and made it rare.
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Post by Boogymanjunior on May 8, 2019 5:11:26 GMT
kefke When will this be judged?
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Post by Boogymanjunior on May 10, 2019 22:15:50 GMT
So, as this challenge approaches the two-week mark and kefke seems to be inactive for almost the same duration, I call on the skies to send Daij_Djan for setting the judging stone rolling.
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Post by Daij_Djan on May 16, 2019 20:26:45 GMT
I won't be able to do it tonight and tomorrow is reserved for CotW stuff - but if it's not done by then, I'll take care of judging by Tuesday EDIT: Alright, this challenge is now closed. Please no further changes of entries! EDIT 2: And (finally) here we go! { Jartis} Simple and clean design, I like that quite much. I was a bit unsure about the rarity as I wanted to compare the concept to the totem armor mechanic at first, but I guess the added Flash really pushes it up to rare indeed. So the general issues the Champion mechanic has aside (like being horrible card to draw post wrath) – nice card! { melono}This card actually made me look up where Battle cry stands on the Storm Scale – apparently it's a four. Nice, I'd really love to see more of it xD That aside, I don't have much to say about your card itself – it seems to be reasonably costed (added haste is a bit tough to judge without some playtesting, tbh) but I'd add a may-clause to the Equipment hate. { ludvikeverviolet} The card feels a bit busy for my tastes, but I have to admit all components work together nicely – so don't take this critism too harshly. However I really like how it generally supports all paired creatures rather than just its own partner. Small wording nitpick: As Flash matters on casting the card, it needs to be put above Soulbond. { Boogymanjunior} First of all: Your card does not fit the given challenge as it's not a creature card. I still want to offer some feedback, but this is kind of a difficult card to judge. Your flavor explanation makes perfect sence, but without it your card looks like a complicated mess. I'm sorry for sounding rather harsh here, but I cannot think of a better way to put it What I mean is: It's kind of obvious you're going with a top-down design, but without the given explanation it's hard to really get it – and that's not ideal for top-down designs in the first place. However I did like the reasonings you gave concerning calculating the costs of your card – and I agree with it being a rare simply due to its complexity alone. {And the winner is..} We only had three entries fitting the given challenge, but arguments could be made for each and every one of them to win this contest – nice work @ all. In the end I decided to give the win to ludvikeverviolet – uncharacteristically (for me) going with the most complex entry, but I just loved how it utilized the design space of supporting „paired creatures“. Please don't expect me to name a runner-up Hope you can all agree with my thoughts and judgings concerning it wasn't my own challenge. I did not comment on how the indvidual cards fit the given music, because imho they all did so just fine.
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Post by Boogymanjunior on May 17, 2019 5:49:24 GMT
I won't be able to do it tonight and tomorrow is reserved for CotW stuff - but if it's not done by then, I'll take care of judging by Tuesday EDIT: Alright, this challenge is now closed. Please no further changes of entries! EDIT 2: And (finally) here we go! { Jartis} Simple and clean design, I like that quite much. I was a bit unsure about the rarity as I wanted to compare the concept to the totem armor mechanic at first, but I guess the added Flash really pushes it up to rare indeed. So the general issues the Champion mechanic has aside (like being horrible card to draw post wrath) – nice card! { melono}This card actually made me look up where Battle cry stands on the Storm Scale – apparently it's a four. Nice, I'd really love to see more of it xD That aside, I don't have much to say about your card itself – it seems to be reasonably costed (added haste is a bit tough to judge without some playtesting, tbh) but I'd add a may-clause to the Equipment hate. { ludvikeverviolet} The card feels a bit busy for my tastes, but I have to admit all components work together nicely – so don't take this critism too harshly. However I really like how it generally supports all paired creatures rather than just its own partner. Small wording nitpick: As Flash matters on casting the card, it needs to be put above Soulbond. { Boogymanjunior} First of all: Your card does not fit the given challenge as it's not a creature card. I still want to offer some feedback, but this is kind of a difficult card to judge. Your flavor explanation makes perfect sence, but without it your card looks like a complicated mess. I'm sorry for sounding rather harsh here, but I cannot think of a better way to put it What I mean is: It's kind of obvious you're going with a top-down design, but without the given explanation it's hard to really get it – and that's not ideal for top-down designs in the first place. However I did like the reasonings you gave concerning calculating the costs of your card – and I agree with it being a rare simply due to its complexity alone. {And the winner is..} We only had three entries fitting the given challenge, but arguments could be made for each and every one of them to win this contest – nice work @ all. In the end I decided to give the win to ludvikeverviolet – uncharacteristically (for me) going with the most complex entry, but I just loved how it utilized the design space of supporting „paired creatures“. Please don't expect me to name a runner-up Hope you can all agree with my thoughts and judgings concerning it wasn't my own challenge. I did not comment on how the indvidual cards fit the given music, because imho they all did so just fine. Ouch, completely glossed over the creature part. But yes, it also looks very forced (although I would say that the card without the top down-link is not complicated at all) You were not harsh at all, thank you very much for the effort!
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Post by ludvikeverviolet on May 18, 2019 20:22:32 GMT
Nice! sorry for the late of the answer. Been busy. Ill post a song of my favorite band. Want to see what do you guys interpret. This band revolutionized the way I see the world. I was a slave from my beliefs.
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Post by Jartis on May 19, 2019 6:48:21 GMT
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Post by Boogymanjunior on May 20, 2019 23:46:54 GMT
As this song doesn't seem to refer to interpersonal truth but rather to belief as a kind of "personal truth", I thought of the hand as the magic version of one's mind, and of each of the cards as one belief. The converted mana cost indicate how "strongly rooted" or "fundamental" the respective belief is, the lower the "more fundamental". The more radical one is willing to abandon their former beliefs (choosing a low number), the more the inflow of new beliefs surges. At first I thought that with this song giving a hopeful vibe, would be too dark. But then again, "personal truth" would be strongly connected to black's individualism, and black doesn't have to equal "bad", especially not for the single individual.
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Post by Boogymanjunior on May 30, 2019 20:04:39 GMT
ludvikeverviolet I don't think there will arrive further designs... when do you want to judge (or make a call for more designs)?
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Post by ludvikeverviolet on May 30, 2019 22:48:30 GMT
Jartis id like the simplicity of your design, but i dont like the stats on the card, like power and thougness. Im not 100% sure but i think nonlegendary creatures dont need to have name. Im giving this contest to Boogymanjunior. I feel your card more accurate to the song, since the song for me present a way of changing your mind thougts. But i wish more people participated. Up to you the new song to create a card. Thanks both for participating
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Post by Boogymanjunior on May 31, 2019 12:20:22 GMT
Jartis id like the simplicity of your design, but i dont like the stats on the card, like power and thougness. Im not 100% sure but i think nonlegendary creatures dont need to have name. Im giving this contest to Boogymanjunior. I feel your card more accurate to the song, since the song for me present a way of changing your mind thougts. But i wish more people participated. Up to you the new song to create a card. Thanks both for participating Thank you for the win! And yes, I also wish that this Challenge is more sought-after, so let's hope that these are only the spluttering beginnings ;-)
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Post by Boogymanjunior on May 31, 2019 12:21:10 GMT
Here's the next one! Have fun!
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Post by Boogymanjunior on Jun 5, 2019 15:02:52 GMT
Still no one? Come on, don't be shy!
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Post by ludvikeverviolet on Jun 5, 2019 17:17:26 GMT
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Post by ameisenmeister on Jun 5, 2019 22:50:55 GMT
Card will be coming tomorrow!
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Post by viriss on Jun 5, 2019 23:55:00 GMT
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Post by melono on Jun 6, 2019 11:43:52 GMT
Sudden Pupper Creature - Hound If a creature has entered the battlefield under an opponent's control this turn, ~ costs less to cast. Flash. Protection from Cats. 2/2
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Post by ameisenmeister on Jun 7, 2019 19:28:40 GMT
The song seemed a bit chaotic, but in a happy kind of way. So here's what it made me think of:
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