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Post by korakhos on Mar 2, 2019 19:46:11 GMT
Lady Mapi: Plucky/Unlucky Investigator: I'm not sold on that last ability's buff in white, I'd much rather see this card cost   since both this type of pumping and using the graveyard as a resource to get it aren't really monowhite. 6/10. As Hanska enters the tent, she sees a three meter tall Demon with pale skin clad in armor. He is currently getting rid of Aiden by using the mist to grab him and throw him out of the tent.
As Hanska's body comes into contact with the mist, the demon turns around.
"I must apologize, but we're in the middle of something here" he replies, his face covered in a helmet that only lets his disgusting smile be seen.
As Aylin summons a wall around him to immobilize him, he simply breaks out of it effortlessly and grabs her by the wrist. She immediately begins to thrash violently as tears begin to form in her eyes, then a blinding light fills the tent. For the first time since his arrival, Malextros's smile contorts into an enraged grimace.
"It seems we'll only be interrupted here" he says impassively.
He summons a darke portal at their feet and goes through it, dragging Aylin with him.
A few seconds later the portal closes, creating an explosion that sends the tent flying up.(Feel free to have Hanska or one of her pets come through the portal, your choice.) Curiosity's Bane  Instant  Remove all +1/+1 counters from target creature, that creature gets -4/-4 until end of turn. Those who find out too much usually will go to extremes to have that knowledge taken away
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Post by mocandragon5 on Mar 3, 2019 6:36:37 GMT
"Gladly." Chrysoplei responds, as his form scatters for a moment into a light mist before reforming behind Aylin. Traverse the Mist   Instant  Choose one - - Exile target creature you control, then return that card to the battlefield under its owner’s control. - Target creature gains flying until end of turn.
Impeccable Retaliation - Definitely feels more than . The only black example is Catacomb Dragon[/b], and it's so old, it's not really that much of a precedent. 6/10 |
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Post by korakhos on Mar 4, 2019 14:18:48 GMT
Traverse the Mist: I like this a lot, but I think it should be  . 9,5/10. Aylin barely has any time to react before realizing Chrysoplei has teleported behind her. She turns around in time just to see him and, before he has a chance to strike, does a backflip. When she lands, the eart below Chrysoplei shoots up, as if they were both standing on invisible scales.Missed Timing Instant Destroy target creature that entered the battlefield this turn unless its controller pays life equal to its converted mana cost. He made the tiniest mistake, and that was enough for his demise.Calling for the aid of Torpor Orb for a full-blown response against first mode.
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Post by korakhos on Mar 4, 2019 15:24:22 GMT
In the middle of a barren field somewhere in the Arena, Malextros's portal opens, and he comes out of it dragging Aylin with him. He throws her violently and carelessly to the ground, then speaks.
"Listen, all I need from you is that Gem of Allure. I can give it a better use that you'll ever be able to, and in exchange for you, I will give you anything you desire..."
"What I desire is for you to leave and leave me alone, think you can give me that?" she replies defiantly.
Malextros laughs. It is a horrible, diabolical sound that nobody should ever hear, and it grinds at Aylin's ears.
"I like your attitude, and if our interests weren't mutually exclusive, I would potentially have you as an ally... But, unfortunately for you, I can read you, I know what your true desire is. I know what you want to come to terms with, I know about your mentor, his betrayal, I know what he did to you..."
He leans in and whispers something in her ear. Aylin screams in agony as the memory returns, more vivid than in her entire life.
"Stop it, stop it, stop it!" she screams, her hands pressed against her ears and her nails digging into her skin as is she wanted to get inside her own brain and rip the memory off of it.
"Your desire is the one I cannot grant, unfortunately, you wish for an event to be erased from time, but even I can't do that. Not yet at least... Give me the Gem of Allure, and I just might be able to..."
"Never!" she screams.
I have to give it to her thinks Malextros annoyed Even at her weakest she still has enough willpower to defy me.
"Have it your way, then" he says, punching her and sending her flying backwards "Now you die, and it will all be in vain..."
Aylin feels something warm oozing from her mouth, and she wipes it with her hand, seeing it's blood. Nobody has made her bleed from a wound since she ascended...
It's time for you to give up... speaks the taunting voice in her head You have no chance of winning, you never did. You're weak! Might as well let him finish you off...
But, even as the voice speaks stronger than ever before, she still has the will to fight. Ever since her ascension she's never surrendered, and she's not starting now!
As Malextros approaches, she stands up and focuses every single emotion she has into a massive spell: anger, joy, sadness, despair, love... everything she is, everything she has to offer is going into this. If this doesn't work, at least she'll die trying.
Malextros extends his arm to grab her but, as her Gem begins glowing with a green light so blinding even Malextros flinches at its intensity, she unleashes a catastrophic earthquake that shakes the Arena violently. Layer after layer of earth breaks under the two of them, seemingly without the intent of ever stopping until it reaches the plane's core.
From the impact zone, cracks begin to spread outward as the earthquake advances throughout the entire Arena.
I'm sorry, everybody thinks Aylin as she and Malextros are dragged down Sometimes a world has to suffer a destructive catastrophe due to the whims of our kind.
Aylin has spent 100 Valor to unlock Amonkhet and Hour of Devastation.
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Post by mocandragon5 on Mar 4, 2019 16:39:03 GMT
(No clue what to do now because of that... But take your rating.) Missed Timing - Seems fine. A mix between Cradle to Grave and Dash Hopes. 9/10 |
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Post by korakhos on Mar 4, 2019 17:14:17 GMT
mocandragon5: it's cool, that's just something else going on, it isn't simultaneous to our situation, so we can keep this going if you'd like XD.
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Post by cyberchronometer on Mar 4, 2019 20:18:35 GMT
Aiea glides determinedly across the cracked ground, unhindered by the shaking. Too slow, she thinks, already calling in backup. "Looks like Malextros is already here—Aylin's fighting him with an earthquake. You won't be able to get here on foot. I need air support, now, with someone ready to drop if the shaking stops."
"Understood. Kunal is inbound with all the air power we've got here." Rettai replies.
Aiea shouts as she descends into the pit, "Aylin! I'm here to help, and more backup's on the way!"Aiea, Grim Messenger Legendary Planeswalker — Aiea   : Up to one target creature gets +1/+2 and gains hexproof until your next turn. If it's a token, it also gains flying and lifelink until your next turn.  : Until your next turn, Aiea becomes an 0/5 white Spirit creature with indestructible, defender, and "Whenever this creature blocks, draw a card." She's still a planeswalker. (Damage dealt to her still removes loyalty counters.) : Create a 1/1 blue Thopter artifact creature with flying for each card in your hand. 
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Post by cajun on Mar 5, 2019 4:52:01 GMT
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Post by gurfafflekins on Mar 5, 2019 5:18:59 GMT
The soldier is carried by his wave of light, uninterrupted by any cracks or fissures. It is smooth sailing as his eyes blaze, looking for the source of it -- ah ha. He sees a giant crater and a woman begin to descend into the pit. The light he's riding slowly and steadily molds until suddenly, Aiden is riding a stallion of light, shining around him faintly. The horse gallops into the crater and makes it's way down it. He nods at Aiea in greeting.Aggro, Stallion of Light  Legendary Creature - Horse Spirit Trample Whenever ~ attacks, target creature you control gets +3/+3 and has trample until end of turn. "There's no finer steed than him, I tell you that for free lass." - King of Sunspear to the princess
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Post by korakhos on Mar 5, 2019 14:29:15 GMT
Aylin and Malextros have landed so deep into the ground that anybody standing at the edge of the crater would have trouble discerning them in there. They both seem worn out, but after a few seconds, Malextros stands up once more, while Aylin is still lying there, too weak to move.
"You stupid, stupid girl..." he says bitterly "I would really appreciate it if you stopped wasting my time."
He grabs her by the hair and begins slamming her head against the ground, causing a disgusting thudding sound. When her face is covered in blood, he releases her.
"Now give me the gem!"
"Never..." she whispers weakly.
He grabs her by the arm once more and lifts her up like a ragdoll. Grabs the ring and carelessly begins pulling it from her finger. Aylin still tries to fight back by kicking him repeatedly in the chest.
"Why do you still fight, child? Nothing you can do matters anymore... You don't matter."
"If I didn't matter..." she replies, even though it is evident she's having a hard time even speaking "People wouldn't have tried to help me against you..."
Malextros stops his action, then laughs once more.
"You think anybody here cares about you? Your friend Arina betrayed you to me, she let me know your location!"
"She warned me about your coming."
"And where is she right now? Can you see her around? She couldn't even be bothered to come protect you herself, all she did was write a lousy note to ease off her guilt! She only did it for her own peace of mind..."
"Aiden..."
"Aiden was about to betray you and the only reason he backed out of our deal was because the spirit of his loved ones told him to. I've spoken to many people in this place, many didn't want to deal with me, but out of those, how many actually came to help you. Nobody, you are completely alone!"
As Aylin's body slowly goes limp, making the extraction process easier, someone screams from above.
"Aylin! I'm here to help, and more backup's on the way!"
cyberchronometer : Aiea, Grim Messenger: Awwww, yeaaaah that and the token love! i also think this is the first time I've seen someone use the planeswalker-to-creature transformation for defensive purposes, which is an idea I like. The is the one ability I'm on the fence about, it can vary so much (true, if you're playing this in you're probably playing control and having a healthy number of cards in hand) that I think this could afford to cost less loyalty. 8/10. Might of the Meek  Instant Creature tokens you control get +1/+0 and gain first strike until end of turn. "A chain is only as strong as its weakest link, and our weakest link is stronger than you think!"(Taking Aiea as a gift)
As Aiea's message gets to Aylin, both she and Malextros see Aiden, who's coming down while riding a... steed of light?! Aylin's eyes are bursting with vigor once more.
"See?" she says "People do care about me...""No, you fool. None of them is here to help you, they're here to end me. If you were in danger and I wasn't the one causing it, nobody would move a finger. How many times do I have to tell you you're of no importance before you accept it?!"He commands the mist into a fist that shoots violently at the soldier coming their way.gurfafflekins : Aggro, Stallion of Light: Minor nipick, "gets +3/+3 and has trample" should be gains trample. Also I'd rather have this only being able to target other creatures you control and not itself. Other than that, neat card. 7/10. Expose Weakness Instant Destroy target creature unless its power is equal to its base power. "All these extravagant weapons and armor are useless when you face someone who can strike at your very soul!"cajun : Mei, Secret Starved: Super simple design but it still feels legendary, I can see this printed in a core set. 9/10. (Since I don't want to godmod and have no way to write Mei into the story, I'm just gonna answer.) Knowledge Denied Instant Until end of turn, if an opponent would draw a card except the first one they draw in each of their draw steps, look at the top card of that player's library, you may put that card into its owner's graveyard. Draw a card.
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Post by mocandragon5 on Mar 5, 2019 17:06:05 GMT
(We can just say they sparred a bit longer before separating.) Chrysoplei approaches the edge of the crater, having seen from a distance someone leap down, and hearing shouts for Aylin. "If she's down there and in trouble, she may need as much help as she can get." The man mutters to himself, weaving a spell to make his descent easier. As he mounts his newly-summoned steed and begins his descent, he calls down. "Aylin, if you need help, just stand your ground for now. Hel[p is on its way." Cliff Crawler  Creature - Beast Hexproof from lands 4/5 |
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Post by gurfafflekins on Mar 5, 2019 20:47:16 GMT
Aiden looked at the mist, his eyes widening as the mist collides with him and dissipates his steed. "Son of a-" he's cut off before he falls and hits the walls of the crater roughly. Luckily it wasn't too far, and he manages to correct his position while he slides down into the pit, but he's definitely cut in places he should not be. As he slides down, his bright white eyes stare at the two figures. His passion, his hatred at the demon for mentioning his family, his rage that he was allowed to live --Aiden's eyes fade. They fade back to their normal shade of brown, iris and pupil returning. His aura vanishes.
What was he doing?
What mattered was not what this demon did to him - but what it had done to all of them, and what is was doing to Aylin right now. As much as they had their differences, there was someone who needed his help - vengeance could wait. "Aylin!" he said, as he continued to slide down the crater awkwardly. "Remember: the sun may set. But we never will!" and he raised his spear to shoot a beam of light - this time it shot straight for Aylin instead of Malextros, as fast as the demon's fog itself. Aiden, Amicable Envoy  Legendary Creature - Human Soldier Flash First strike When ~ enters the battlefield, creatures you control gain indestructible until end of turn. Whenever ~ attacks, other creatures you control get +1/+1 and gain first strike until end of turn. "We've got this - the sun never sets on those who keep fighting."
4/4 The beam would surround Aylin in a blinding light for a moment, before rejuvenating her and closing minor wounds. Major wounds would remain open, but Aylin would feel strength returning to her. Aiden smiled as he reached the bottom of the pit, landing on both his feet, spear raised.
Expose Weakness: Feels like a weird card but I guess makes sense. Cheaper Murder for a more specific target. I think you want "Destroy target creature with power not equal to it's base power" as the wording instead? Feels almost common because it's so specific, but the cheapness... take a 9/10.
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Post by korakhos on Mar 6, 2019 0:54:02 GMT
"Aylin, if you need help, just stand your ground for now. Help is on its way" screams Chrysoplei into the crater. Malextros snaps his fingers and points in the man's general direction. The mist shoots at him with uncanny speed, causing the spot he's standing on to collapse into the crater.
"Stupid mortals, thinking they have a chance... thinking you have a chance" he says, continuing to extract the ring.mocandragon5 : Cliff Crawler: Endagered Armodon with no drawback and with upside?!?! Of course, this is 2019  9/10. Crumbling Standpoint Sorcery As an additional cost to cast this spell, sacrifice an artifact or land. ~ deals 5 damage to any target. "Watch your step..."Call for the aid of Sunscorched Desert to sacrifice it (you didn't want a land to hurt it? Well it did! Muahahahaha) After that, it all happens in a flash. Malextros finally takes the ring off of Aylin's finger, releasing her, and she falls gracelessly to the ground, where she curls up meekly.Alonealonealonealonealonealone you are alone, nobody cares about you, you're better off dying and freeing the rest from your burden alonealonealonealone... speaks the voice in her head.But just as she lands, she hears Aiden screaming some words of encouragement she can barely discern. She turns around weakly to see him shoot a beam of white light in her direction.So he chose to kill me after all she thinks bitterly resigning herself to her fate.The beam hits her squarely, surrounding her in a pale white light."You missed!" says Malextros with a taunting smile "Not like I care, I already got my prize!"As he laughs with his disgusting, mindwrenching laughter, he places the ring on his right hand's ring finger and is immediately surrounded by a green aura.Victory is his at last: this is the Gem of Allure, one of the three Rammanethi Gems, it is drawn to power and power is drawn to it. But nobody is more powerful than him, so he never planned on using it for its intended purpose... No, this Gem connects to the leylines of every plane and, with his ancestral knowledge and his power, it will allow him to track what he seeks in the next plane he'll go to."Thank you all, people of the Arena!" he screams, hoping as many of them will hear this message and know they failed "It's been a pleasure to meet you all!"He prepares to leave the plane with his treasure, but he's still here the next second! Of course, Rettai's Planar Interdiction Field! A part of him is still anchored to this world... It will not stop him from leaving, but it will substantially delay the process.
Whatever... I might as well kill some of these mortals in my spare time he thinks.
He can now sense every single creature in the Arena, living or undead, so there's no surprises awaiting him. He spreads both arms and the mist begins spreading with shocking speed. He can now pinpoint his enemies in this world and send a personalized attack to each of them!
Something does catch him off guard, though, his feet are suddenly anchored to the ground as the earth he was standing on expanded to cover them. Aylin has recovered, at least partially, and apparently Aiden's light hid her essence from sight. He's more upset about her defiance than her attack, since he can easily unmake it...
"You're still willing to fight?!" he asks with contempt."I'm not going doing any other way!" she screams, getting into combat position.It will only take a few more minutes before Malextros escapes. It's now or never!gurfafflekins : Aiden, Amicable Envoy: I'm seeing some parallelisms between this Aiden and Avacyn 3.0 XD. I like this a lot, and it think it's better balanced than the previous one I judged! 10/10! All-Mighty Offensive Instant Attacking creatures gain deathtouch and lifelink until end of turn. "If I die today, at least I'm bringing you down with me!"
-Aylin, to Malextros(Taking Aiden as a gift and using the lifelink with the P/T boost and the deathtouch with the first strike)
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Post by cyberchronometer on Mar 6, 2019 5:41:08 GMT
Might of the Meek: Given Weapon Surge, I don't think this needs to be a two-drop. 7/10Malextros' certainty that no surprises await him proves to be unfounded. While entirely ready for the monk who descends rapidly towards him from high altitude, hitting the ground next to Aylin with an impossibly soft landing given the distance he just fell without a parachute, he's neglected to consider he's only aware of dangers currently on the Arena.
As such, his attention is on the monk and not the man who appears behind him, snatching the ring from his finger with a shout of "GREATEST THIEF IN THE MULTIVERSE!" It's only at this point that Dack looks around him, sees just how much of a mess he's in and how hard it will be for him to focus long enough to planeswalk, then mutters under his breath, "Rettai, you old bastard, this is why I ditched you back on Fiora the first time."Calling for aid for Dack Fayden and using his  to steal the Gem of Allure! Kunal, Master of Winds Legendary Planeswalker — Kunal  : Destroy up to one target creature with flying. : Kunal, Aerial Adept becomes a 2/1 Monk creature with flying and hexproof until end of turn. He's still a planeswalker. : You get an emblem with "Creatures with flying get +1/+1."  |
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Post by cajun on Mar 6, 2019 17:27:16 GMT
Mei wasn't sure what exactly the ring had done for Malextros, but she could feel the power. She needed that power. What? No. Stay focused.
Close quarters to steal the gem or his memories of it was a perfectly sound idea and she should do it immediately. Mei took a step before she caught herself again.The whispering in her head that drove her to secrets was driving her to the gem. She had tried to cure those whispers with the Arcananomicon, but the book was more concerned with talking to magic than curing demon curses. Hrm... talking to mana. She summoned the spellbook to her side and began a spell. Maybe she could still make the demon's life harder.The Arcananomicon  Legendary Artifact Whenever an opponent casts a spell, that player gets an arcana counter. Spells your opponents cast cost more to cast for each arcana counter they have.
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Post by mocandragon5 on Mar 6, 2019 23:25:08 GMT
As Chrysoplei sees the mist approach, he realises he has a very short time to respond before he would be hit. Ready for Action Instant Cast this spell only during an opponent's turn. Untap all creatures you control. Creatures you control get +5/+5 until end of turn.
Crumbling Standpoint - I think this could cost , seeing Shrapnel Blast and Fiery Conclusion. Being able to sac a land I don't feel is too much of an upside to bump up the cost. Still good though. 9/10 |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 7, 2019 11:03:47 GMT
Rian starts walking into the scene. Rian look out Malextros is there. Oh no Rian has Airpods on, he can't hear us.
Creature - Human Knight
Haste, vigilance
Reckless Paladin must attack if able. When Reckless Paladin enters the battlefield, target opponent creates two 1/1 red Dragon creature tokens with flying. 4/2
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Post by gurfafflekins on Mar 7, 2019 17:56:35 GMT
OOPS forgot to rate the card my bad(If anyone's interested the in-world part is carried over on my board)All-Mighty Offensive: I like the juxtaposition of lifelink and deathtouch on the black buff thing. Black gets this effect, and it's pretty good, I could even see it being . 10/10. |
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Post by korakhos on Mar 7, 2019 18:42:44 GMT
mocandragon5 : Ready for Action: even if you can only use it defensively, the +5/+5 feels like too much, I feel the pump should be of 3-4. 7/10. Chrysoplei has endured the attack, but Malextros has lost the ring so he doesn't have the time to waste on him, instead the mist reforms at his feet, trying to surround and crush him!
Ignore the Threat Sorcery Creatures you control can't be blocked by creatures with greater power this turn. While the giants kept watch over the gate looking for threats in front of them, the kithkin slipped right by their toes with ease.
@cyanogynist : Reckless Paladin: first of all, minor nitpick "attacks each combat if able". This card has vigilance even though it is monored. Also, at the second drawback is too much, 4/2 haste for that cost that is forced to attack each combat is already fine as is, you literally can't play this against a single opponent since you play it, they block it with the tokens they get, and you just burned three mana to do nothing, and even in multiplayer if you're looking to play politics this card doesn't do enough. 4/10. Rian might not be able to hear, but he can see, and the shape the mist takes in front of him is none other than Allen.
Harmful Visit Sorcery Until end of turn, whenever a creature enters the battlefield under your control, it deals 1 damage to any target. "I came to watch you suffer..."
cyberchronometer : Kunal, Master of Winds: Half of him loves fliers, half of him doesn't XD. I'd prefer the ultimate to cost more and only affect you but cool card overall. 8,5/10. Raging VendettaSorcery ~ deals 2 damage to each creature target player controls. cajun : The Arcananomicon: I've been toying with a similar idea. Since this affects all sorts of spells, I'm afraid it can screw over opponents too quickly if they don't find an answer soon. 7,5/10. Shattering Crater
Land  , Pay 1 life: Add . , , Sacrifice ~: Destroy target artifact. As Aiden attacks Malextros, he dissipates, the beam going through mere air and hitting Dack square in the chest and forcing him to drop the ring. When Malextros reforms, he attacks Aiden, puncturing his abdomen as he stretches his other hand to grab the ring, which is now falling to the ground.
Aylin is also intent on recovering the Gem of Allure, so they're both racing for it! Malextros is obviously closer and faster, but Mei's magic is causing enough interference to actually level the field. It's anybody's game right now, and Malextros is completely focused on the Gem and on recovering it before Aylin...
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Post by cajun on Mar 7, 2019 20:05:08 GMT
The gem was falling. She might just be able to no. The demon was distracted.
Mei jumped at the demon, sword in hand. One way or another, it was going to forget all about the gem.Vathos, the Mindripper Legendary Artifact - Equipment Whenever equipped creature deals combat damage to a player, you may pay  . If you do, search that player's library for a card with converted mana cost X or less and cast it without paying its mana cost. Then that player shuffles their library. Equip
Shattering Crater - 8/10
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Post by gurfafflekins on Mar 7, 2019 20:23:33 GMT
(You may want to read the latest post of mine on my board first) No.Not yet.Not today.As Aiden remains on the blade of darkness, while Malextros looks the other way... his eyes shine pure white. His body begins to glow. The sword in his chest dissipates and the blood continues to pour, but Aiden touches the ground gently. He remains still and silent. He lifts his spear from the ground, and stabs it's head into the ground. Noiselessly, a white light pours from it. It fills the entirety of the crater in a rapid, harsh light. His helmet falls off of him and burns up. Everyone who is not strictly made of black mana will suffer, but not perish - even Mei. He fills the crater with, seemingly, the light of the sun.Aiden, Sun's Disciple  Legendary Creature - Human Soldier When ~ enters the battlefield, if you cast it from your hand, exile all other nonland permanents. 9/9 |
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Post by mocandragon5 on Mar 7, 2019 23:17:40 GMT
Chrysoplei's eyes narrow when he realises what's about to happen. He utters a spell quickly, causing him and his mount to vanish and reappear on the ground, a short distance from each other. Scatter Instant Exile up to X target nonland permanents you control. Return those cards to the battlefield under their owner's control.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2019 12:08:13 GMT
Reckless Paladin: first of all, minor nitpick "attacks each combat if able". This card has vigilance even though it is monored. Also, at the second drawback is too much, 4/2 haste for that cost that is forced to attack each combat is already fine as is, you literally can't play this against a single opponent since you play it, they block it with the tokens they get, and you just burned three mana to do nothing, and even in multiplayer if you're looking to play politics this card doesn't do enough. 4/10. Rian might not be able to hear, but he can see, and the shape the mist takes in front of him is none other than Allen.
Harmful Visit Sorcery Until end of turn, whenever a creature enters the battlefield under your control, it deals 1 damage to any target. "I came to watch you suffer..." Rian trembled, and slowly walked toward Allen. "Hello? Can you hear me? It's me, your friend Adri."
*chuckles* He's in danger.
Assertive Force Enchantment Creatures you control get +0/+1.
Creatures your opponents control enter the battlefield tapped.
Harmful Visit: A temporary Impact Tremors. 10/10
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Post by korakhos on Mar 8, 2019 17:12:33 GMT
Whether it was a joint effort or one individual strike, the walkers may never find out.As Mei's sword pierces his back, protruding from the front. As dark mist starts pouring out from the wound and the demon howls in pain, Aylin grabs the Gem, throwing herself at it and landing on the floor next to Dack and Malextros. She points both fists at the Demon and spikes shoot from the walls of the crater, hitting the helmet until it cracks, then piercing in and the Demon's head with it.
Mei grabs Malextros by the shoulder to retreat her blade and, while she's at it, to steal some information. She is interrupted by Aiden's intervention, but before it happens she does manage to get the image of a woman and the thought he associates with her: "You need to kill her at the right time, and then the Multiverse will be yours...". She also gets to see six different, yet eerily similar worlds as his memory of them sparks another thought: "Mellyner. Use the Gem to restore Mellyner... The six pillars await!"cajun : Vathos, the Mindripper: Really sweet card, given Sphinx Ambassador I was gonna say this should be but I think it's fine at rare. 10/10. Information Overload Instant Until end of turn, if a player would search a library, that player discards a card instead. Draw a card. "You want the truth? You can't handle the truth!"Malextros falls to his knees, dark mist spilling from every wound in his body. He even seems to be shrinking slowly. Then Aiden's light strikes.A horrific sound is heard, the unholy howl of a demonic creature in agony, the mist dissolves into the blinding light and, when the light disperses, there are no traces of Malextros leftgurfafflekins : Aiden, Sun's Disciple: At that color saturation and cost I believe he could have even bigger P/T or afford one or two evergreens. 8/10. Agonizing Wail Instant Until end of turn, creatures you control gain "When this creature leaves the battlefield, it deals 1 damage to any target." Malextros has been defeated.
mocandragon5 : Scatter: solid design, I think it should say "then return" but that's minor. 9/10. As Malextros fades, so does the mist facing Chrysoplei, he is no longer threatened by it.Vestiges of Defeat Instant Until end of turn, whenever a creature enters the battlefield, its controller sacrifices it unless they pay X life, where X is that creature's power. @cyanogynist : Assertive Force: I think this should be . Other than that, I like it (love the name btw). 9/10. The only thing holding the ghastly replica of Allen together is Malextros's willpower. But now that he's been defeated, the fake Allen falls into Rian's arms, slowly dissolving into the dark mist that brought him into existence in the first place.Gone in an Instant :B:: Instant Destroy target tapped creature. (taking the enchantment as a gift)
In a secluded corner of the Arena, a dark mist forms into a tiny orb.
"I made the mistake of underestimating how much people would want to aid her... Next time I have to make sure she's alone..." says Malextros as he begins the process to regenerate his body to its former glory.
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Post by mocandragon5 on Mar 8, 2019 17:33:45 GMT
Taking a deep breath, Chrysoplei glances around. "Is everyone alright? It seems I may have shown up a bit too late to be of much help, so my apologies with that." He turns to Aylin. "It may be good in future to remember you do have some friends." He gives a smirk. Chrysoplei's Support Instant You gain 5 life. For each other player, you may have that player gain 5 life. If you do, you gain 5 life.
Vestiges of Defeat - Yeah, I like it enough. Not entirely sure if there are any changes, other than potentially even lowering the cost? Not sure. 8/10 |
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Post by gurfafflekins on Mar 8, 2019 17:41:18 GMT
Agonizing Wail: Seems neat. Kinda stronk but not too stronk. 9/10.
The white light remains for moments, before fading. He looks at the spot where Malextros once was, and his aura and eyes fade. He stands there, tall and proud. His breath is ragged and tired.
“...I am a planeswalker.”
Then he collapses, bleeding from just about everywhere.
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Post by cajun on Mar 8, 2019 17:49:04 GMT
The demon's mind was a twisted maze of lies, but she could still pick something out. "Mellyner. Use the Gem to restore Mellyner... The six pillars await!" Okay then, Mellyner, who are you? She reached for another memory as the sting of sunlight began to cover her entire body. Her scream filled the heads of everyone on the battlefield as the sunlight seared her.
"Sofi" is probably not going to be best buds with Aiden after this :^) Information Overload - bit narrow, but cantrip helps. 8/10
(Guest System) A few days after the defeat of Malextros, as Aylin returns to her tent, she finds a strange rock formation that wasn't there before, a statue in honor of her fight. The round stone base seems to have been raised from the ground, seamlessly connecting to the ground. As she reaches the front, looking down on Aylin and her tent is the unmistakable figure of Malextros.Mysterious MonumentLand : Add  . , : Put an infection counter on target artifact. It gains “When this artifact is put into a graveyard from the battlefield, create an X/X black Horror creature token, where X is this artifact’s converted mana cost.”
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Post by cyberchronometer on Mar 9, 2019 1:59:38 GMT
Raging Vendetta: This effect is five mana as an instant, so four as a sorcery feels reasonable. 9/10
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Post by Deleted on Mar 9, 2019 2:29:33 GMT
Assertive Force: I think this should be . Other than that, I like it (love the name btw). 9/10. The only thing holding the ghastly replica of Allen together is Malextros's willpower. But now that he's been defeated, the fake Allen falls into Rian's arms, slowly dissolving into the dark mist that brought him into existence in the first place.Gone in an Instant :B:: Instant Destroy target tapped creature. (taking the enchantment as a gift) Rian catches the slowly-dissipating Allen in his arms. "Allie? Allie? Please, don't leave me!"
Allen weakly reaches his arm out to Rian's face. "Ad...ri..." He dissolves further, as Rian's grasp on him tightens. "Adri..." he quietly cries out. "I... I'm sorry..."
Finally, Allen completely fades away, and Rian falls to his knees.
"Allen..." Rian sobbed into his hands. "I... I miss you so much..."
Crestfallen Paladin Creature - Human Knight As long as there are two or more creature cards in your graveyard, Crestfallen Paladin gets +0/+1 and has vigilance. 1/1
Gone in an Instant: A bit weaker Murder. 9/10
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Post by korakhos on Mar 9, 2019 3:11:30 GMT
Aylin stares at the Gem she just recovered, she ponders whether or not she should continue to be its guardian. She's proven she cannot protect it on her own, at least not against someone of Malextros's caliber. She originally chose to keep it to find the most powerful entities in the Multiverse, but has she gone too far?
Then again, Amrhotep entrusted her to keep it safe, and even if she faces someone as dangerous as Malextros once again, it is her responsibility. She places it once more in her finger, where it belongs, hoping she'll be stronger next time...She suddenly realizes Aiden is fatally wounded, she runs towards him and kneels right next to him, but as she's about to offer him her hand to help him up, she realizes she's still uncapable of coming into contact with somebody else."Is anybody here a healer?! Please! He needs help!" she screams desperately to the group surrounding her.She looks at Aiden straight in the eye. She may be incapable of saying her emotions out loud, but her eyes say everything: a solemn, silent thank you and a desire that he'll be alright, that he'll get back on his feet. Unfortunately, this is the best she can give him, despite he sacrificed himself for her. If Malextros hadn't broken her to the point she had no more tears left to cry, she'd probably be crying right now...
mocandragon5 Chrysoplei's Support: Play this in a team duel for maximum profit! Interesting that you chose to put the decision on the caster's shoulders, since generally these effects let your opponents make the choice to take something in exchange of giving you an advantage. 8/10. (The following story moment will take place after Aiden's situation is fix so we're not heartless monsters XD) "It may be good in future to remember you do have some friends" says Chrysoplei with a smirk.But he's not right. All of them are allies, true, but Aylin has only one friend, a friend she can never see again... Malextros was right: she is alone. But at least she can be alone among other people, people who, at least now, are willing to put their lives on the line to aid her...Punish the Peaceful Sorcery ~ deals 3 damage to target player. If that player gained life this turn, ~ deals 5 damage to that player instead. "Pray yourself out of this situation..."
@cyanogynist : Crestfallen Paladin: given how the baseline for one-drops is becoming 1/2, I'd make this a 1/2 from the start and have it gain vigilance, or at least make the bonus a power bonus. 7/10. Aylin notices Rian mourning the memory of his loved one, and silently steps away. He was just caught in the crossfire of her battle. If he's suffering right now, it's her fault, and she has no way of helping him, so she'd better leave him alone...Weight of Sorrow Instant Destroy target creature with converted mana cost 1. "I was never that important to begin with..."
cajun : Mysterious Monument: the idea behind this card is terrible, whoever inspired this design doesn't know anything about card design. This effect on a stick, hmmmm. Probably fine at 4 mana, but a part of me thinks it should be 5. 9/10. Aylin stares at the statue with disgust. Who would build something like this?Then she realizes something: this wasn't built by anyone, it was sculpted from the ground itself in a manner only... a geomancer could do!!!"Impossible..." she whispers shocked "I thought I was the only one! I would've realized if there was someone else like me!"She looks at the statue once more."Whoever you are, if you can hear me, you got it wrong!" she says, shaping a giant replica of Mei's sword that is perfectly proportional to the statue's dimensions. The sword shoots into the back of the statue, piercing it until it protrudes from the front. She then shoots spikes at the head, piercing it numerous times "Much better" she adds, satisfied.She dismantles the tent and takes it with her until she finds another decent spot to settle. Being near that statue is definitely not something she'll willingly doing right now. She'll probably visit it in a few days to see if the person stupid enough to carve it makes any adjustments of their own...Alter the Craft Instant Artifacts lose all abilities until end of turn. Destroy target artifact. "Please, lend it to me, I swear I will be caref- whoops..."
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9/10.