inferno390
3/3 Beast
Posts: 197
Favorite Card: Kwende, Pride of Femeref
Favorite Set: Dominaria
Color Alignment: White, Red
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Post by inferno390 on Jan 6, 2021 5:16:31 GMT
Will probably be judging Friday, so get those last minute entries in!
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Post by SilentKobold on Jan 6, 2021 7:14:23 GMT
Thought I'd just showcase and enter a card from my current project Soulstorm, a return to a Tarkir fraught in chaos. The general premise follows Sarkhan's return to the plane and confronting Karlotta, a planeswalkering biomancer manipulating the dragonstorms to create the Perfected; a new powerful but subservient brood of dragons. As the power old broods begin to dwindle, will Sarkhan be able to restore his draconic paradise? Will Karlotta carve out a new homeland after the devastation of Ravnica? Or will the old Khans rise again from the ashes of dragon-fire? Anyway, this entry specifically calls-back to Unyielding Krumar, instead deserting the Kolaghan Brood to serve under Karlotta's Perfected. The future-shifted 'mechanic' in the set is off-colour morphs drawn from Whip-Spine Drake. Hope this counts {Text} Relentless Krumar Creature - Orc Warrior First Strike Morph (You may cast this card face down as a 2/2 creature for . Turn it face up any time for its morph cost.)Born in sands, trained under lightning, servant of the greater storm.3/2
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Post by leadfred on Jan 7, 2021 8:01:23 GMT
EDIT: Posted on the wrong challenge whoops!
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Post by ameisenmeister on Jan 7, 2021 8:46:12 GMT
SilentKobold You got a Link to your project so people can follow it?
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Post by SilentKobold on Jan 7, 2021 11:07:46 GMT
SilentKobold You got a Link to your project so people can follow it? Not atm unfortunately. It's just over a month old, so leadfred and I still have only filled under half the skeleton (the easier commons/uncommons). This also keeps a good portion of the project highly subject to change. We're hoping to start a showcase around late April, but we can't make many guarantees once we start work/study again. Still, we'll probably both sprinkle a few designs that we're happy about through the forums in the mean where applicable.
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Post by ameisenmeister on Jan 7, 2021 16:09:03 GMT
SilentKobold You got a Link to your project so people can follow it? Not atm unfortunately. It's just over a month old, so leadfred and I still have only filled under half the skeleton (the easier commons/uncommons). This also keeps a good portion of the project highly subject to change. We're hoping to start a showcase around late April, but we can't make many guarantees once we start work/study again. Still, we'll probably both sprinkle a few designs that we're happy about through the forums in the mean where applicable. Alright. Consider me interested in the project.
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inferno390
3/3 Beast
Posts: 197
Favorite Card: Kwende, Pride of Femeref
Favorite Set: Dominaria
Color Alignment: White, Red
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Post by inferno390 on Jan 9, 2021 6:06:36 GMT
Judging time! viriss : This is a very cute and fun card, and the reference is very strong. I love the use of Grandeur as well. I think my only issue is that as others have mentioned, this card doesn't work the way you want it to ruleswise. Ignoring that though, I really like this one. Flo00 : This card seems very complex and hard to follow. It took a few minutes of having to reread the card multiple times to really understand what the card does and how it works. Also the homage to Festering Newt, while it made sense, felt very vague. melono : So straight away, it was really hard to draw lines between the card you were referencing and the card you made. The only thing that I felt like was similar was that they both gave other creatures poisonous? This felt very disconnected. Furthermore, it felt like poisonous is just tacked onto this creature, and adds unnecessary complexity. All it's doing is halving your opponent's starting life total for a turn, and given how aggressive Gruul decks that might play this would be, it seems like it could be a hinderance rather than a help. ameisenmeister : This was a very fascinating card that I struggled to figure out just how strong it was. The first card that came to mind was Druid of the Cowl, but with only one toughness and the transmute, I can see some very good turn three shenanigans... but I am not totally sure how good. The other issue is that I could not figure out your reference point at all. I've been looking around for what or who the Dunja tribe is, and I can't find anything, so I am having to assume that it's a nod to one of the commons in the Kamigawa block where this tribe naming structure is from. But it also feels like it could reference any number of other mana dorks. SilentKobold : I love this card. The flavor you captured with your off-color morph, the little details like first strike, really bring this card to life in an amazing way, and it seems like a very solid limited card. And the winner is:
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Post by SilentKobold on Jan 9, 2021 10:07:52 GMT
Thanks for the win. Given it comes from my first full set project, it's good to know we're doing something right And our new limits are... LIMIT #113: You act the part! Your card has an activated ability. (Thanks, Boogymanjunior!)LIMIT #56: It worked so well the first time! Your card uses a keyword that's only been used in ONE block before. (Thanks, marioware2!)LIMIT #160: Watch your fingers! All the numbers on your card sum to 10. (Numbers include mana cost, text box, p/t and loyalty costs. Number words don't count!) (Thanks SilentKobold)
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Post by Flo00 on Jan 9, 2021 18:14:35 GMT
I hope p/t also counts towards that total. And I also hope I can ignore flavor text. Else I'll have to redesign this. Bloodthirsty Nightblade Creature - Ork Assissin Outlast (, : Put a +1/+1 counter on this creature. Outlast only as a sorcery.)You may pay 2 life instead of paying the mana cost of outlast abilities. 2/2 3 + 1 + 2 + 2 + 2 = 10 if I'm correct. Note that you still have to tap to outlast since the 2 life only replaces the mana cost, not any other.
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Post by SilentKobold on Jan 9, 2021 18:33:20 GMT
I hope p/t also counts towards that total. And I also hope I can ignore flavor text. Else I'll have to redesign this. That was the intention, I must have deleted it from the prompt by accident
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inferno390
3/3 Beast
Posts: 197
Favorite Card: Kwende, Pride of Femeref
Favorite Set: Dominaria
Color Alignment: White, Red
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Post by inferno390 on Jan 10, 2021 2:01:49 GMT
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Post by viriss on Jan 10, 2021 4:18:46 GMT
{Spoiler} Korabii, the Wishmaker 2WUU Legendary Creature - Tiefling Wizard Mythic First strike When CARDNAME enters the battlefield, gain control of all tokens. Forecast - 2WU, Reveal CARDNAME from your hand: The controller of target permanent you don't control creates a token that's a copy of that permanent. (Activate this ability only during your upkeep and only once each turn.) 3/3
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Post by ameisenmeister on Jan 10, 2021 9:03:30 GMT
Totem of Consuming Artifact Creature spells you cast have devour 1. , Remove three +1/+1 counters from target creature you control: Add . You gain 3 life. I think that's an activated ability... Watch out, the limit says that number words don‘t count. So you don‘t have a total number of ten but of seven.
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foureyesisafish
7/7 Elemental
Posts: 388
Favorite Set: Ikoria: Lair of the Behemoths
Color Alignment: Blue, Red, Green
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Post by foureyesisafish on Jan 10, 2021 16:03:45 GMT
Totem of Consuming Artifact Creature spells you cast have devour 1. , Remove three +1/+1 counters from target creature you control: Add . You gain 3 life. I think that's an activated ability... Watch out, the limit says that number words don‘t count. So you don‘t have a total number of ten but of seven. I'm pretty sure the last 3 is from adding 3 green mana.
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inferno390
3/3 Beast
Posts: 197
Favorite Card: Kwende, Pride of Femeref
Favorite Set: Dominaria
Color Alignment: White, Red
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Post by inferno390 on Jan 10, 2021 16:59:00 GMT
I will fix that this afternoon. Thx!
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Post by ameisenmeister on Jan 11, 2021 7:33:52 GMT
EDIT: Good catch Flo00. Thanks!
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Post by Flo00 on Jan 11, 2021 13:58:24 GMT
ameisenmeister is this meant to be able to steal creatures or should it only be able to target your creatures?
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Post by melono on Jan 15, 2021 22:27:32 GMT
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thaneofglamis
8/8 Octopus
Thane's activated abilities can't be activated
Posts: 444
Favorite Card: Slimefoot, the Stowaway; Phyrexian Rager; Swarm Shambler
Favorite Set: Midnight Hunt
Color Alignment: Green
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Post by thaneofglamis on Jan 15, 2021 23:07:12 GMT
Opal of the Maelstrom Artifact Surge (You may cast this spell for its surge cost if you or a teammate has cast another spell this turn.): Add one mana of any color. , , Sacrifice ~: The next spell you cast this turn gains cascade. (When you cast the spell, exile cards from the top of your library until you exile a nonland card that costs less. You may cast it without paying its mana cost. Put the exiled cards on the bottom of your library in a random order.)
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thaneofglamis
8/8 Octopus
Thane's activated abilities can't be activated
Posts: 444
Favorite Card: Slimefoot, the Stowaway; Phyrexian Rager; Swarm Shambler
Favorite Set: Midnight Hunt
Color Alignment: Green
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Post by thaneofglamis on Jan 23, 2021 1:49:29 GMT
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Post by gamma3 on Jan 23, 2021 7:12:25 GMT
Last minute-ish entry: Halren, Seeker of Horizons Legendary Creature - Human Scout Whenever a creature you control explores, if it would put a land card into your hand, put it onto the battlefield instead, or if you would put a +1/+1 counter on that creature, put two +1/+1 counters on it instead. , : Halren explores. 1/1
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Post by Boogymanjunior on Jan 24, 2021 21:39:54 GMT
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Post by Boogymanjunior on Jan 31, 2021 18:06:55 GMT
Daij_Djan ZephyrPhantom As SilentKobold is the same apparently absent would-be judge like in Picture Challenge, can you please look into/take over this here as well? Thanks again
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Post by Daij_Djan on Jan 31, 2021 18:24:47 GMT
I won't be able to do so today and tomorrow is obviously reserved for CotW stuff - but I'll judge one of these on Tuesday!
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Post by ZephyrPhantom on Feb 1, 2021 18:59:07 GMT
I won't be able to do so today and tomorrow is obviously reserved for CotW stuff - but I'll judge one of these on Tuesday! Daij_Djan ZephyrPhantom As SilentKobold is the same apparently absent would-be judge like in Picture Challenge, can you please look into/take over this here as well? Thanks again I've got it covered, no worries. Judging: Flo00 - Okay, wow, this is a really neat design! Outlast is usually something that strikes me as a very straightfoward mechanic ( MaRo said a common problem with Outlast cards is them being seen as worse than they actually are), so having an eye-popping design like this to do something fresh with them is a really great way to give them a way to do something unusual. You instantly make every Outlast card a viable consideration for decks running Vilis, Broker of Blood and similar effects just via this card alone and that's a great way to make a player enthusiastic about an effect, be it inside of Commander or outside of it. Heck, imagine Enduring Sliver with this! I would jam this card even in decks where it probably was a bad idea - this card makes you want to experiment with it despite seeming expensive and niche, and puts a fresh spin on cards that are probably sitting at the bottom of someone's storage box right now. Great card. inferno390 - Devour has been historically noted as being very flavorful (despite having a 7 on the Storm scale) and very fun to imagine/play with (I imagine things like Prossh, Skyraider of Kher Keep took at least some inspiration from it), so an artifact that makes everyone hungry/beast-like enough to do it is a pretty cool addition on top of it all. I like that the abilities fuel each other and give this "circle of life" feel, and that you sneakily slip a bit of ritual flavor in via the ramp without making it feel like a color break. This card owns its Black mana symbol far better than Tyvar Kell did with his, basically. viriss - Forecast to create a political commander-esque situation that acts as a sort of reverse Zedruu is very interesting in the sense that you want to keep the heat off your back while your opponents accumulate enough 'gifts' from you until you can play him out of nowhere and flip your group hug strategy on its head. While I think this is basically the only strategy he's good for (he might be an okay sideboard token 'sweeper'?) there's nothing wrong with a legendary being specifically good for a niche strategy (see Zedruu). I think the biggest concern is more how blatantly predictable he is and unlike Zedruu he can sit safely in hand instead of risking being on the board - that, and despite the fact he feels like a blatant Commander design his abilities don't work if he's the Commander. It's a good idea but I think some parts may need to be moved around a bit - either an extra ability to make the whole thing work or dropping Forecast to make it more flexible. ameisenmeister - An unusual Jeskai weenie build-around - I like that this creature still partially functions if you're playing Boros or Azorius, making it very limited friendly and flexible as a pick. This definitely seems like one of those cards where the real advantage lies in having all the options potentially available to you at once and the vigilance to let it attack on its own (while making sure it can't manifest itself) is icing on top. Well put together! melono - Haha, I really like the flavor and mechanics of this design! You capture the Blue/White idea of repeatable tappers very well with the repeated detain while adding a bit of Mana Leak/Tax flavor in to prevent it from being too oppressive. Straightforward but elegant - every part of this card from the flavortext to the full art is well used. thaneofglamis - Nice highlighting of the interaction between Surge and Cascade. This seems like a primarily EDH design where you piggyback off another player's spellcasting on your turn for a mana rock and then sacrifice it later to gain some value. A perfectly good design that's easy to understand and fairly affordable to run in any strategy while benefiting specific ones more. gamma3 - Solid design overall but I think you could've made the +1/+1 counter ability its own thing (instead of being dependent on explore) to let him fit into a wider variety of decks. Not much to say otherwise, I think you costed him fairly and unlike certain recent designs out there I'm glad you didn't go all in on making him an extremely efficient value monster. Boogymanjunior - Renown seems like a really flexible mechanic and I could see renown tribal coming back in the future if it reappears. I think the sacrifice outlet design to show a different way to use renowned creatures is a great way to show what it can do and I like that you let the effect work to some degree on any creature as well, making this a flexible draft pick even if you aren't going for renown tribal. Bonus points for essentially being able to clear the board so that you can get more creatures renowned for future use. Nice design! Winners: 1st: Flo00 - Reinventing Outlast this way is just wild because of the sheer synergies you suddenly give to the mechanic out of nowhere. It's so simple and somehow it's just exciting to look at! I wish this card was real. 2nd: ameisenmeister - There were a lot of cards that tried to fulfill a very specific purpose or idea but I found the more a card went all-in on that idea, the more issues began to creep up with such cards. I think your card works great as a flexible draft pick and a decent weenie include in a hypothetical Standard without feeling awkward or out of place. 3rd: inferno390 / Boogymanjunior / melono - Great designs, just stiff competition. I'd want these cards printed still.
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Post by Daij_Djan on Feb 1, 2021 23:30:37 GMT
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Post by Flo00 on Feb 2, 2021 17:03:49 GMT
Thanks for the win Zephyr and thenks for the praise. I'm happy you like my card so much. LIMIT #83: Conjunction, junction, that's my function! You must use a keyword in conjunction with a non-numerical, non-mana cost modifier! (Reminder text doesn't count. For example, Equip legendary creature or Splice onto instant.) Be creative! (Thanks, Yoshi!)LIMIT #42: My friends, your card is legen—wait for it... —dary! Legendary! (Thanks, Sewn-Eye!)LIMIT #161: Your word is my command(er). Get a random commander and make a card that would fit into it's deck. (Thanks Flo00!)
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inferno390
3/3 Beast
Posts: 197
Favorite Card: Kwende, Pride of Femeref
Favorite Set: Dominaria
Color Alignment: White, Red
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Post by inferno390 on Feb 2, 2021 17:28:02 GMT
Ship of The Spectre Legendary Artifact -- Vehicle Whenever Ship of the Spectre attacks, draw a card, then discard a card. : Ship of the Spectre can't be blocked this turn. Crew by Spirits 1 4/4 I got Ghost of Ramirez DePietro, but what's a captain without his ship and crew?
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Post by Daij_Djan on Feb 2, 2021 21:34:02 GMT
EDIT: Really not a very interesting legend to work with, tbh But here we go:
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Post by ameisenmeister on Feb 4, 2021 12:41:39 GMT
I honestly got Yorion, Sky Nomad, a card that I'm not a particular fan of. But I guess my card goes well with a lot of other commanders too.
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