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Post by Idea on Jul 12, 2023 2:41:13 GMT
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Post by emberfire17 on Jul 12, 2023 21:19:58 GMT
 I've been having trouble finding good art for some of my stuff lately :/ I hope this is still good though! I'm a huge fan of izzet "chance" cards like this. |
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Post by vizionarius on Jul 18, 2023 1:25:54 GMT
Addition and Subtraction    Sorcery - Lesson  Each opponent chooses addition or subtraction. For each opponent who chose addition, create a 3/3 green Elk creature token, then you gain 3 life. Each opponent who chose subtraction discards a card and loses 3 life. The best way to learn is by example.
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Post by Flo00 on Jul 22, 2023 13:07:01 GMT
{viriss}Amazing that there isn't already a rals card out there with that title.
It's simple, flavorful and at a good power level.
{Idea}That's an interesting mixture between Fact or Fiction and Gifts Ungiven with a bit of Bob in it. I really like what it does. I think it's missing the Gifts Ungiven clause to only find different cards. This way you could just find the same card four times and you are sure to get it (at least twice if you want). What's also a bit strange is that you can just find four lands. It makes the life-paying seem a bit strange. Of course, the way it is worded now, you can't fail to find on purpose, which is also an advantage in some way (see release notes on Gifts Ungiven). I also think the alternative card draw is a bit strange. I mean, you searched for the cards to get them into your hand, right? And just one little wording hint: You could say " Shuffle the rest into your library." {emberfire17}I also like random cards. I kjust think this is too much "hop or drop". It's a one time effect that ends either good or bad, which tends to be frustrating. What makes chance effects fun is if they have two options that are both good but very different ( Mutalith Vortex Beast) or if they are repeatable ( Karplusan Minotaur), so if it doesn't work one time, you have the hope that it will work the next time. {vizionarius}Looks like a fun card in multiplayer games. It's not too powerful, which is a good power level for a lesson. I like the flavor, although the name would suggest a Quandrix card. |
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Post by vizionarius on Jul 22, 2023 15:45:45 GMT
Thanks for the win! And ah yes, you're right the name is better for them.
Next:
Battle of ___ [any mana]
Battle - Siege [any rarity]
Whenever ~ enters the battlefield, ___.
[Any starting defense counters]
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Sorcery
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Post by viriss on Jul 23, 2023 0:04:01 GMT
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Post by Idea on Jul 23, 2023 0:21:14 GMT
Where did you get the battle template? |
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Post by viriss on Jul 23, 2023 0:38:57 GMT
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pistonsmcgraw
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 129
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by pistonsmcgraw on Jul 28, 2023 0:18:38 GMT
Let's recycle one of my previous winners: Battle of Bablovia   Battle - Siege Whenever Invasion of Bablovia enters the battlefield, roll 2d6. When you do, ~ deals damage divided as you choose among any number of creatures you don't control equal to the result.  -------- Press the Big Red Button! Sorcery Crank each contraption you control. |
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Post by vizionarius on Aug 10, 2023 17:57:07 GMT
FeedbackOops, I did have a templating issue where I used "whenever" instead of "when." But you both got the idea. viriss: I like this a lot. Neat use of keyword counters with +1/+1s, and the flip side caring about them. Has a nice little story in the card mechanics. Really makes the Sorcery side feel like the aftermath of a Siege. Also, the card name and flavor text got a chuckle out of me! pistonsmcgraw: I liked your card when it was first posted, and I like it now! Nice use of the reflexive "when."
ResultWinner is viriss with a clean and flavorful design (bonus also for a new design and for those renders).
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Post by viriss on Aug 10, 2023 22:14:55 GMT
Next challenge:? ____ That ____ ? <any cost> ? Artifact ? - ? Rabbit ? <any rarity> (Rules text contains "card", "your", and "graveyard" somewhere in the text.) "____ ____!"
(? are optional, whatever you need to make it fit/work.)
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Post by Idea on Aug 11, 2023 12:23:29 GMT
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Post by vizionarius on Aug 29, 2023 19:21:03 GMT
It That Breeds Death  Artifact Creature - Blood Rabbit  When a creature dies, exile ~ from your graveyard, then create a token that's a copy of it. ,  , Discard a card, Sacrifice this artifact: Draw a card. "It's back!" 3/2
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