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Dack's Last Heist
Legendary Sorcery
You may cast ~ as if it had flash if you have 5 or less life.
Gain control of X target artifacts until end of turn. Then, if you control twenty or more artifacts, you win the game.
Before meeting his fate on Ravnica, Dack had been hired for one last job.

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____ of ____ 
____ Creature        ::Uncommon::
When CARDNAME attacks, _____.


(the creature line ___ is optional)

Yes. It just has to have that text somewhere, even if it's reminder or quoted. But not in flavor

Disciple of Annoyance
Creature - Goblin Child
Whenever ~ attacks, taunt target creature defending player controls. (Until your next turn, that creature attacks each combat if able and attacks you if able.)
"You can't catch me! Na nana na na!"
2/1

Idea Solid idea with good versitility. I'm not sure if it should be able to modify itself. A 4/1 is close to a kill spell with extra steps. oh and "until your next end step" could let you attack for 4. Sneaky.

melono I do love a legendary goblin! X draw then X discard "at end of turn"? that's strong! Probably closer to rare with that kind of repeatable drawing.

Flo00 That just fun to say in a deep voice... "Crusher of Progress" "Crusher of Hope and Dreams!!" I like the "starts as a beast" and it's up to them if it gets bigger.

vizionarius A child I'd like to smack. (and I had to look up taunt to see if it was already a keyword, lol. So many now I can't remember them all.)

moweda So many goblins! Makes me wonder who Nogg is. I first thought it was too much but Fathom Fleet Swordjack isn't that far removed.


Winner Flo00

Thanks for the win viriss!

[name] [maybe cost]
[type] - [definitely a subtype]
____ you draft ____
____ artist ____
[maybe p/t or loyalty]

The two phrases can be in the same paragraph or in different ones in any order.

Claude, Snobby Art Critic 
Legendary Planeswalker - Claude
As you draft Claude, reveal him and all other cards you've drafted this draft round, then note the artist of each non-Claude card revealed this way.
: Return up to one target nonland permanent you control by an artist you noted for Claude cards to its owner's hand. You gain 2 life.

Thanks for the win, Flo00! You're right... it should have 1 more ability. I missed it because it already had so much text!

Next:
<name> <cost>
Legendary Planeswalker Creature - <planeswalker type> <creature type> mythic
<abilities>
P/T (no loyalty)

Well, as planeswalker creature is the main take, imma ignore the no loyalty, cuz this is the way I'd imagine a type combo like this would go:

Veline, Fighter Until the End
Legendary Planeswalker Creature - Elf Veline
(Planeswalker creatures can attack and block as creatures, but are dealt damage in the form of losing that many loyalty counters and don't have a toughness. It can still be attacked instead of you like a planeswalker.)
: Creatures you control get +1/+0 and gain lifelink until end of turn.
: Destroy all other creatures and all other planeswalkers.
2/


And this would absolutely not be a rules nightmare, at all, in any way possible

Updated. Thank you to emberfire17 and vizionarius for the suggestions.

It's edited now, thank you! Fortunately I also realized I didn't need the line about sacrificing it when I removed the last counter (cause it's a 0/0, it'll die without it anyway), which fortunately helped balance a bit with the extra added text...

Feedback

pernicious: Had to do a bit of read-up on Planechase (the last and only time I played it was September 4, 2009). I like your take on this! Planeswalk feels fun! Not sure if it would be common enough for a keyword, but I like that you didn't set the font to a mini size to fit it all in there. If there was a Cthulhu cross-over, I'd expect to see Tindalos. Seems well costed and a neat design.

melono: I have not considered this solution for a planeswalker creature, but I really really really like it! It solves the issue with my design, namely that mine always starts with 0 loyalty. The rules nightmare already exists because Gideon exits, so I'm not too concerned about it (the last three rules notes are clear enough). Rule 208.5 would need to be updated, though, but that's simple enough. I like the abilities you gave it, too. And the power level feels appropriate. Can't think of anything I dislike about this!

emberfire17: This is a fun take as well! I like the silver-border take on it. And the flavor text explaining why she is not the traditional planeswalker type with planeswalker abilities is great! Neat ability, though it might be a little difficult to verify without looking things up, but that's fine probably for a silver-bordered mythic!

Idea: I like that you made the creature behave as a planeswalker through the use of +1/+1 counters! A neat solution! I wish the top half explaining the effect wasn't so wordy, so the font size can increase! It might have been enough to just state "~ enters the battlefield with four +1/+1 counters on it" and "treat +1/+1 counters on ~ as they were loyalty counters." I think those two lines, combined with the last three rulings on Gideon, would make it work! I like the abilities! The +1 might be a little strong, since you will get at least two "2/2"s, and make itself immediately into a "6/6." But the rest feel great.

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Result

This is tough because I absolutely love what melono did here. But I also don't want to penalize the others due to my addition of "(no loyalty)" in my prompt (and I didn't want to update the prompt since there already was a submission with keeping to it). Since I can't know to what extent the designs were affected by that part of the prompt, I think in order to be fair to all submissions, I can't rightly pick melono as the winner (sorry, melono!). Of the others, the one that really feels like a planeswalker to me is Idea's. I thought it handles the quirkiness of the prompt well, and retains the feel of both a creature and a planeswalker really well.