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Post by Jartis on Dec 18, 2023 4:13:55 GMT
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Post by Daij_Djan on Jan 2, 2024 19:07:42 GMT
This shall be the next one - please no further changes of entries! (Sorry in advance though since I'll probably not be able to finish writing up all comments until after Christmas eve)
Well, yeah – I indeed wasn't able to finish before Christmas eve.. { melono}Yeah, your Commander game entry really was an nice coincidence – totally get why you're reusing that one My minor rarity concerns already mentioned last time aside, I do think Jern looks like a nice build-around Madness commander. Turning discard costs into hasty beaters? Sure, sign me up! { viriss}Clever combination of two different of my example suggestions like the concept. My only minor nitpick would be how due to timing restrictions the third ability cannot use the tokens created by the other two ones – so it could fizzle out on an otherwise empty board.. This could be fixed with a delayed trigger or something – though I'm not really sure whether this even is worth fixing in the first place. { elchetibo}Welcome to the forum! Like the card, clean and simple. Can create a lot of evasive tokens, but you having to pay for the spells in the first place should nicely balance it out. Minor wording nitpick: „Whenever you cast a spell that’s both white and black, ..“ { vizionarius}Simple growing creature with a nice additional treshold upgrade. Small nitpick about this allowing Vigilance in mono-red when combined with other hybrid spells. { Flo00}Very clever concept, really like that idea. Since this is a two-colored twodrop that requires you to cast additional spells for its abilities to matter, I do think given our modern creature power levels the base stats would be fine with some sort of small upgrade from the base 1/1 (considering those don't get increased by the abilities).. { Jartis}Nice flavor – and a definitely interesting addition for storm.dec It feels like it could get broken at some point (not sure whether the dualcolor restriction would be worth it today), but I'm sure the CMC3 initial price tag is enough to keep it from getting completely out of hand. {And the winner is..}Have to say, I really like all six designs – nice work, everyone! Still, I have to announce a winner – so after some pondering I decided to give the win to melono with Flo00 as really, really close runner-up (honestly, I wnet back in forth with your entries, in the end it was almost a coinflip..)!
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Post by melono on Jan 2, 2024 22:06:44 GMT
Tyftw! Next challenge: Create a card that has an ability with multiple different-colored mana symbols, but is colorless itself.
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Post by elchetibo on Jan 3, 2024 19:20:22 GMT
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Post by Jartis on Jan 3, 2024 21:23:58 GMT
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Post by melono on Jan 19, 2024 17:13:28 GMT
Judging this one 1-2-3~! {Spoiler} elchetibo - Keroberos feels a bit too slow with all its tapping and high mana costing abilities. With those tap abilities, it might actually be more fun if it had vigilance. Also, I feel like green black would fit the first ability more seeing as it's about sacrifice in order to get +1/+1 counters, and black white the second ability as it's about returning creatures, specifically legendary creatures (white is the legendary-helping color mostly). Still look like fun abilities, especially with putting extra +1/+1 counters on the doggy externally. Jartis - Lunar Envoy needs some rewording on its activated ability. If I remember correctly, an ability cannot be the cause of a death in this manner, how weird that might sound. It can check on death of creatures affected by it, but "cause" isn't proper. Rewording it into a check for creatures affected by it would make it stronger though. But honestly, it would probably still be within reasonable powerlevels. And it's a nice ability. Both are with imo flaws, but both also have some nice alternative tech going, so the winner isn't the easiest to decide, but I'll go with Jartis
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Post by Jartis on Jan 29, 2024 20:39:27 GMT
Thanks for the win!
For the next challenge, design an multicolored Background!
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Post by Daij_Djan on Jan 29, 2024 22:12:14 GMT
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Post by vizionarius on Feb 15, 2024 2:17:30 GMT
Found in a Cave Legendary Enchantment - Background Commander creatures you own have " Landfall — Whenever a land enters the battlefield under your control, surveil 1. If this is the second time this ability has resolved this turn, draw a card."
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