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Post by Idea on Oct 16, 2022 22:10:44 GMT
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pernicious
8/8 Octopus
Posts: 440
Favorite Card: Mistmeadow Skulk
Favorite Set: Shadowmoor block
Color Alignment: Red
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Post by pernicious on Oct 17, 2022 11:09:20 GMT
Idea Nice card but, watch out, it's not multicolored.
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Post by Idea on Oct 17, 2022 11:26:10 GMT
Idea Nice card but, watch out, it's not multicolored. Ah crap. Don't know what's been going on with me lately, keep missing some detail in the prompt. Anyways, it's fixed, thanks for the warning!
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sorsal
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 102
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Red, Colorless
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Post by sorsal on Oct 17, 2022 11:54:30 GMT
Sunglade Farmer Creature - Troll Citizen , : Create two Food tokens. "Most folks who see me think I'm up to no good, and that's fine. I know I'm not, and that's enough for me."0 / 5
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Post by melono on Oct 17, 2022 12:14:54 GMT
Scarflag Troll Creature - Troll Flagbearer Indestructible While an opponent is choosing targets as part of casting a spell they control or activating an ability they control, that player must choose at least one Flagbearer on the battlefield if able. Whenever ~ is the target of a spell or ability, put a -1/-1 counter on ~. 3/3
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Post by twintania on Oct 17, 2022 12:22:49 GMT
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Post by Flo00 on Oct 17, 2022 17:15:18 GMT
Tinkertroll Creature - Troll Atificer , Sacrifice an artifact: Target artifact or creature you control becomes indestructible until end of turn. Tap it. 2/3
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Post by vizionarius on Oct 18, 2022 21:36:09 GMT
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pernicious
8/8 Octopus
Posts: 440
Favorite Card: Mistmeadow Skulk
Favorite Set: Shadowmoor block
Color Alignment: Red
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Post by pernicious on Oct 22, 2022 18:21:59 GMT
Idea - Undermoss Scavenger: An overall solid entry.
sorsal - Sunglade Farmer: A bit too overpowered in my opinion. I would debuff its ability down to "4,T: Create a Food token.". Good flavor.
melono - Scarflag Troll: That would be a nice addition to the Flagbearer class, it's a good entry.
twintania - Troll Insurance Fraudster: I love the flavor on this one, it wouldn't look out of place in a Shadowrun set. I'd only raise the indestructible ability cost up to 1 B/G B/G and maybe I would make it a rare.
Flo00 - Tinkertroll: A well balanced entry. I think it could have used some flavor text.
vizionarius - Mentallica, Troll Banger: This one is simply amazing. Very well done.
The winner is vizionarius! With twintania and idea as runnerups.
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Post by Flo00 on Oct 22, 2022 19:57:57 GMT
You're right. Although I sometimes have my bright moments, I'm mostly not really good with flavor text.
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Post by vizionarius on Oct 24, 2022 20:42:49 GMT
Thanks for the win and the praise, pernicious! I had fun making this one! ------- Next, let's make some Bats with some class! Rogues, Clerics, Bards, Nobles, Artificers, Knights....
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Post by Idea on Oct 24, 2022 21:01:49 GMT
Thanks for the win and the praise, pernicious! I had fun making this one! ------- Next, let's make some Bats with some class! Rogues, Clerics, Bards, Nobles, Artificers, Knights.... So you want at least one of us to make... *puts on overly deep voice* the bat knight?
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Post by vizionarius on Oct 24, 2022 22:19:38 GMT
Thanks for the win and the praise, pernicious ! I had fun making this one! ------- Next, let's make some Bats with some class! Rogues, Clerics, Bards, Nobles, Artificers, Knights.... So you want at least one of us to make... *puts on overly deep voice* the bat knight? Hahaha, honestly, I didn't think of that at all.... was more thinking some fancy bat society where they have all sorts of cool professions. But by all means don't let that limit what you design!
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Post by Idea on Oct 26, 2022 0:02:52 GMT
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Post by emberfire17 on Oct 26, 2022 4:37:58 GMT
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Post by melono on Oct 26, 2022 15:32:09 GMT
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Post by twintania on Oct 26, 2022 16:27:55 GMT
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Post by ZephyrPhantom on Oct 26, 2022 19:55:09 GMT
Shadow-Wing Disciple Creature - Bat Ninja Ninjutsu (, Return an unblocked attacker you control to hand: Put this card onto the battlefield from your hand tapped and attacking.)Flying When ~ deals combat damage to a player, create a black 1/1 Bat token with flying. 1/1 "I call to my brethen of the night, to strike with divine vengeance."
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pernicious
8/8 Octopus
Posts: 440
Favorite Card: Mistmeadow Skulk
Favorite Set: Shadowmoor block
Color Alignment: Red
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Post by pernicious on Oct 28, 2022 11:31:59 GMT
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Post by ameisenmeister on Oct 31, 2022 8:51:43 GMT
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Post by vizionarius on Nov 9, 2022 0:52:27 GMT
Feedback: Idea : Nice one! Not too powerful, but a neat card nonetheless! A nice, clean design. I like it! You can only bring back the noble dead by using treasures, and then it leaves some treasures behind too. Almost feels like some enemy in an RPG that drops gold when it dies. But maybe I've just been playing too much Diablo lately lol. emberfire17 : Flying and menace feel pretty strong together for a 3-mana 3/2 (uncommon), but it's also flavorful. His ability on damage is a perfect Rogue effect that also feels appropriate for Bats (but also a strong ability). Good one! melono : A nice Bat helper for things Bats do well! Power feels spot on, and it's a nice card for draft. I like it. twintania : Great flavor text!! At a rare, 2/3 flying menace at 4-mana feels a little weak. The ward is a very interesting effect and I like that it's a lord that gives only that ability instead of pumping as well. I'd like to see more such "demi-lords." The ward is a strange one because it doesn't really do much early on, since they gain back the life, but as the life totals go down, it becomes more of an issue where you can no longer deal with the large bats. Also, it feels great with the flavor of the card; the life payment then gain is like an echo; fitting for a bard. Nice, well-thought-out design! ZephyrPhantom : Bat Ninja, yeah!! Feels appropriately powered, and would go nicely in many formats. Feels like a very versatile design; I like it! pernicious : He feels pretty strong! You can really mess with players with how you block. Seems especially mean with some instant-speed removal (or Maze of Ith-like things), where you leave the creature unblocked and then kill it (or remove it from combat), but still syphon the life. I do like the syphon, and the Mayan theme is great (and I learned about Camazotz today from you). I think if it did the life syphon upon creatures dealing damage to you, that would be a bit more power checked (also, the timing on the trigger feels a little convoluted; it seems to trigger when the creature attacks, but checks if it's unblocked, which can't be checked till later). I like the concept a lot, but could use a little bit of cleanup. ameisenmeister : Haha, great art! 3/2 flying menace at 4cmc seems about right. The ability is nice; he is calling for more bandmates, and it pains to hear his call. Neat one! Winner: Some really good designs! Thanks for all the submissions. This one is honestly a tie between about half of the submissions. But since a single winner is needed, I'll pick twintania for an interesting new ward cost that feels quite fitting for a Bat Bard (and that flavor text!). Idea , ZephyrPhantom , and ameisenmeister were all up there too.
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Post by twintania on Nov 9, 2022 13:58:41 GMT
vizionarius I had noticed that the wording would be taken so then I misthought regarding I updated it but actually forgot. {My Assumption} If you rethink the winner, I will wait for some hours.For judge was done according to submitted posts, I rethought that redetermination will not be needed. I gratefully receive the win.
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Post by twintania on Nov 9, 2022 14:48:33 GMT
Thx for the win. The next challenge is one of magic mysteries: Human Undead. In cannon, only nonhuman races can be zombie, spirit, skeleton keeping race on their during time. Post Human Zombie, Human Spirit or Human Skeleton, any classes can be added on it. Bonus for the reason why it has human creature type unlike other undeads. Deprecated or your original races such as ghost, undead, walking-dead or banshee can be chosen if you wish.
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Post by Idea on Nov 9, 2022 15:10:13 GMT
Thx for the win. The next challenge is one of magic mysteries: Human Undead. In cannon, only nonhuman races can be zombie, spirit, skeleton keeping race on their during time. Post Human Zombie, Human Spirit or Human Skeleton, any classes can be added on it. Bonus for the reason why it has human creature type unlike other undeads. Deprecated or your original races such as ghost, undead, walking-dead or banshee can be chosen if you wish. I mean, in fairness, humans are assumed to be the default race. So saying "spirit" is usually assumed to either be human or not have an associated race. You usually see spirits being for example human ghosts. So it's not really "cannon" as it's not lore related, just a convention of card design.
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Post by twintania on Nov 9, 2022 17:04:53 GMT
I mean, in fairness, humans are assumed to be the default race. So saying "spirit" is usually assumed to either be human or not have an associated race. You usually see spirits being for example human ghosts. So it's not really "cannon" as it's not lore related, just a convention of card design. Sorry for my lacking of explanation. You see, in mtg, pure zombie is human zombie. This is our common view. But for this abbreviation, you can't buff human zombie with your human lord in the same way as you do elf zombie with your elf lord. I want you to interpret this human treatment creatively and post human undead cards with convincing flavor why common undeads lose human type and your one doesn't lose it by death. But if this idea is unpopular, I will rethink another theme. How do you everyone think about it?
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Post by vizionarius on Nov 9, 2022 17:16:11 GMT
But if this idea is unpopular, I will rethink another theme. How do you everyone think about it? No need to change it. I think it makes for an interesting challenge.
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Post by Idea on Nov 10, 2022 0:52:16 GMT
I mean, in fairness, humans are assumed to be the default race. So saying "spirit" is usually assumed to either be human or not have an associated race. You usually see spirits being for example human ghosts. So it's not really "cannon" as it's not lore related, just a convention of card design. Sorry for my lacking of explanation. You see, in mtg, pure zombie is human zombie. This is our common view. But for this abbreviation, you can't buff human zombie with your human lord in the same way as you do elf zombie with your elf lord. I want you to interpret this human treatment creatively and post human undead cards with convincing flavor why common undeads lose human type and your one doesn't lose it by death. But if this idea is unpopular, I will rethink another theme. How do you everyone think about it? Yeah no worries it's definitely not a bad idea, it's a neat challenge. I just said what I did because of the lore aspect.
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Post by Idea on Nov 10, 2022 3:09:04 GMT
Alright, so I considered a few possible ideas, such as half-undead beings (dhampirs for instance), experiments gone wrong, resurrecting immortals, costumes... It was hard to pick one. Art ultimately ended up being the deciding factor on why I went for the possessed. The possessed have the unique characteristic of being two beings in one body. In other words, the explanation of the addition of human here would be that there is a human AND a spirit, coexisting in one body.
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Post by vizionarius on Nov 28, 2022 18:14:12 GMT
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Post by melono on Nov 28, 2022 20:22:40 GMT
Crazed Skeleton Hunter Creature - Human Warrior When ~ enters the battlefield, exile all graveyards. Disturb ( You may cast this card from your graveyard transformed for its disturb cost.) "You. You! And you! YOU ALL HAVE SKELETONS INSIDE YOU!"5/3 // 3/1 // Skinless Skeleton Creature - Human Skeleton ~ can't block. If ~ would be put into a graveyard from anywhere, exile it instead. But he forgot... He had one inside of him as well!3/1
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