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Post by mrlozano on May 7, 2022 21:39:57 GMT
So, the creature evaded, even if just barely. Soumaw began to gather a cloud of smoke for its next spell, but the cat struck into the nearby structure, damaging to the point of falling apart. The broken stone cleaved through Soumaw's boy, dispersing it into a a gust. It was still reforming when the cat snuck away through its portal, which Soumaw only caught a faint glimpse of before it vanishes. It looked around, readying claws for a potential attack from blind spot, but none came. It had previously thought enemies who could teleport short distances and used that to attack and evade, but it appeared as though that wasn't the case. The prey this time was like Soumaw: One able to move between planes. There was a chance it already escaped onto another plane entirely. But then, none who could travel between planes would be in a place like this one unless they had something they sought in it. Would Soumaw's prey abandon their own objective so easily? Gaps opened all over Soumaw's body, from which long spirits poured out. Slamming its hands onto the ground, it commanded them to chase after its prey, to search the nearby area and then share their findings. If they managed to find the prey, Soumaw would come for them. If not, it would not pursue. Were it fated to be hunted by Soumaw, they would cross paths again, one way or another.
(attacking, just to be clear) Doer licks his wounds and bandages his arm, hiddien in a barn in a nearby farming village. Traversing the Eternities is always hard when not following another walker, and more so when he is already wounded. One of the aberrations that live in has left his leg broken, which adds to the multiple wounds caused by the shadowy beast. But the most painful wound of them all is the one to his pride. The cat has been defeated by another predator. He hears faintly the ghosts of the creature nearby, but stays hidden between the hay, hoping not to be discovered. Oh, he will have his revenge, but only a fool fights twice unprepared. Doer finishes bandaging himself, and drifts into a light sleep. There is nothing more he can give. If the creature finds him, he will be the prey.Urabrask's Heretic Creature - Cat Cleric If an opponent would draw a card, except the first card they draw in each of their turns, that player exiles the top card of their library instead. They may play it this turn. 3/3 Soul Search: The correct wording would be "a creature card was put into a graveyard this turn". Other than that I'm not a fan of X plus generic mana costs, but that's a personal preference. 8/10 (I'm not dropping points for the wording btw)
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Post by Idea on May 8, 2022 0:07:05 GMT
Urabrask's Heretic " style="max-width:100%;"] Creature - Cat Cleric " style="max-width:100%;"] If an opponent would draw a card, except the first card they draw in each of their turns, that player exiles the top card of their library instead. They may play it this turn. 3/3 I'd probably up the mana cost a little (there's a reason a card that prevents extra draw is one of the few banned cards in commander after all), but overall a pretty well made card I think. 8/10.
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dragonspit999
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 114
Favorite Card: Mycosynth Lattice
Favorite Set: Conflux
Color Alignment: Blue, Red, Colorless
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Post by dragonspit999 on Jun 8, 2022 20:17:41 GMT
A 7 foot tall dragonborn, a greatsword across his back, approaches. "Listen, it's nothing personal, but someone has put a large bounty out on you and I'm in need of money. And a fun time. I guess you hunted the wrong person." As Argel says this, he draws his weapon and it crackles audibly with electric charge. Roughhouse Merc Creature - Dragon Mercenary Level up [Level 1+] Haste [Level 2+] Menace 3/2
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Post by mrlozano on Jun 8, 2022 22:31:11 GMT
A 7 foot tall dragonborn, a greatsword across his back, approaches. "Listen, it's nothing personal, but someone has put a large bounty out on you and I'm in need of money. And a fun time. I guess you hunted the wrong person." As Argel says this, he draws his weapon and it crackles audibly with electric charge. Roughhouse Merc Creature - Dragon Mercenary Level up [Level 1+] Haste [Level 2+] Menace 3/2 The cat looks at the dragonborn, not at all impressed. "I don't think you know what you are getting into, kid. I've fought stronger dragons than you, and some in this same plane." The cat smiles at the memory of a great battle with another dragon man, even though the true story wasn't as glorious as he remebers it. "If you fight half as good as meowster Bell, I meowgth spare your life." The cat throws his cape away, revealing some recent scars and the Weapon already in his hand. In a flash, he is behind the dragonbron, a greataxe in his paws, going directly for the mercenary's neck. "Entertain meow!"
Doer, Dragonslayer Legendary Creature - Cat Rebel Protection from Dragons Whenever ~ deals combat damage to a player, put a +1/+1 counter and your choice of a reach counter, a vigilance counter or a menace counter on it. "I've always wanted to kill a Dragonlord. Let's start with you." 4/4
Roughhouse Merc: Sure, a fine common. 8/10
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Bouncearama
3/3 Beast
Posts: 174
Formerly Known As: pistonsmcgraw
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Bouncearama on Jul 4, 2022 1:01:51 GMT
Chitters approaches and begins speaking, "Hello, Doer. I'm looking for your brother, Michi, we have a lot to talk about. He appears to be quite the avid fourth-wall breaker, you too I suppose, but he seems much more the scholarly sort." "Not that there is anything wrong with that!" Chitters quickly appends.
Gift Action: Silver-Bordered Friendly Greeting W Instant This card may only be used on the first message to a user. Two target players each gain 5 life.
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Post by mrlozano on Feb 18, 2023 10:55:03 GMT
Chitters approaches and begins speaking, "Hello, Doer. I'm looking for your brother, Michi, we have a lot to talk about. He appears to be quite the avid fourth-wall breaker, you too I suppose, but he seems much more the scholarly sort." "Not that there is anything wrong with that!" Chitters quickly appends. Gift Action: Silver-BorderedFriendly Greeting W
Instant This card may only be used on the first message to a user. Two target players each gain 5 life. "Oh, meow. Didn't see you there? How long have you been waiting, half a year? I'm a terrible host!" The cat sincerely apologizes, as the squirrel's greeting had gone unnoticed by him, swallowed by the deafening silence that had plagued this land. "Meow brother is off world right now. Studying and that smeowrt people stuff, ya know. I've been known to dabble into some wall breaking before, but I'm meowstly reformed now. But anyways, if you need meow help, I could give you a paw."p
First Cat Creature - Cat If this spell is the first spell you’ve cast this game, it costs less to cast. If each opponent has cast a spell this game, this spell costs less to cast. Trample 2/2
Friendly Greeting: Nice meta joke, I dunno if it can be evaluated as an actual card, so I will use this space to apologize again for missing your post. 8/10
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Bouncearama
3/3 Beast
Posts: 174
Formerly Known As: pistonsmcgraw
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Bouncearama on Nov 6, 2024 3:21:03 GMT
"It appears I've left you for quite some time myself. I'm a terrible guest myself! Ironic really seeing as that's the system this is being done on. I'm afraid my author has rather forgotten where he was going with all this and isn't sure what the plan with me was other than a fourth-wall gimmick. If indeed there ever was one, I'm not too sure about that myself. I think I was looking for some food for winter, that's come and gone now by now anyway, so I've been nulled. Not sure what that's going to be like. Endless void of nothingness perhaps. In any case, goodbye, hope you have a wonderful story. Let your brother know I said hi." With that the squirrel scurries off into a portal leading to blackness, never to be seen again unless I want to do some more fourth-wall stuff.
Silver-Bordered Last Goodbye W Instant This card may only be used on the last message to a user. Exile target creature.
First Cat: Seems decently rated, I like that it is still a decent cost even if you happen to go first. 9.5/10
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