Mahx Michael
2/2 Zombie
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Posts: 100
Favorite Card: Divine Visitation
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Green
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Post by Mahx Michael on Jun 15, 2018 9:50:47 GMT
Malsey I just happened to notice: why is your hybrid mana presented before the generic mana on your card render? I'm not sure how to fix that but it happens automatically and I can't change it. Where you using MSE? What template are you using? Is it the same for other templates as well? |
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Post by voltaic-qui on Jun 15, 2018 17:32:45 GMT
Mahx Michael - Wow that's good. This is basically History of Benalia on crack. I do not think the drawback is enough to justify that you are dealing 12 damage off these creatures-- possibly more, if you fetch a good equipment. Daij_Djan - This is going to be a total feel-bad on the 12.5% chance you pick tribal. Zuty - Oh nooooooooooooo. This is a very playable body depending on the strength of auras/Equipment in the format. But I'm more worried about how wildly unfun this card is. It's one thing to grief one opponent; it's another thing entirely to grief all seven other people in your draft pod. Repeatably, because this is a common.
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Post by Fleur on Jun 15, 2018 18:54:13 GMT
Unstable Rebirth    Sorcery  Choose target creature card in a graveyard, then choose one at random: - Return that creature from your graveyard to the battlefield tapped. - Return that creature from your graveyard to the battlefield. It gains haste. Exile it at the beginning of your next end step.
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Post by mixedrandomj on Jun 15, 2018 19:05:24 GMT
sdfkjghLet's just say I like commander and I love building combo's around cards like this. Radiate on this can be a blast.
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Fermat
8/8 Octopus
Posts: 436
Favorite Card: Force of Will
Favorite Set: Guildpact (set when I started playing)
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black
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Post by Fermat on Jun 16, 2018 12:19:38 GMT
Submitting a card based on Ashald, a plane I created for the Booster Pack Game. Finishing Stroke  Instant  Choose target creature, then roll a six-sided die. Destroy that creature if its power is X or less, where X is the number rolled. "The world's about to end. I'll try to spare you from the experience." |
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Post by korakhos on Jun 17, 2018 22:43:20 GMT
Something silly from my dark past: |
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Post by Daij_Djan on Jun 17, 2018 23:29:04 GMT
Daij_Djan - This is going to be a total feel-bad on the 12.5% chance you pick tribal. Yeah, I noticed - and I like how it fits the flavor of the card very well  And considering it's pretty much a Commander (or similar) card only anyway, adding a Nameless Inversion to your deck is possible if you want to counter these feel-bad moments. |
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Post by burntsquirrelman on Jun 17, 2018 23:33:42 GMT
The idea though is that it's a massive wurm that's so big you have to fight either its head or tail, they're two halves of literally the same being. I could just rename the other half "Worldcoil Wurm's Tail", but it kind of sticks better flavor-wise this way. Also, die rolls and coin flips are also traditionally Un-Mechanics, so it still seems fitting. Only dice rolls are limited to Un-Mechanics. Coin Flips have always been and still are mechanics that still see printing in standard sets. Two-Headed Giant is a great example of a card recently printed. Also, there are many ways to still have the names be different and still fit flavor. Example X's Massive Maw X's Thrashing Tail |
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Zuty
3/3 Beast
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Posts: 172
Favorite Card: Serra Angel
Favorite Set: Future Sight
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Red, Green, Colorless
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Post by Zuty on Jun 18, 2018 2:09:18 GMT
Zuty - Oh nooooooooooooo. This is a very playable body depending on the strength of auras/Equipment in the format. But I'm more worried about how wildly unfun this card is. It's one thing to grief one opponent; it's another thing entirely to grief all seven other people in your draft pod. Repeatably, because this is a common. I don't have access to MSE to change it anyway even if I wanted to change it. I've been entering these contests for years now and I think I may have won once, but even that may be pushing it. I wholeheartedly never expect to win any contest on these forums, but you're the first one to give me feedback which is what I've been looking for all along. So thank you.
~Zuty
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Post by randyrenegade on Jun 18, 2018 5:14:42 GMT
*Snip*Here's my Submission
All renders require proper artist credit in the appropriate space. ~Daij_Djan
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Post by sdfkjgh on Jun 18, 2018 16:11:10 GMT
randyrenegade: Your card is very interesting, but it suffers from the " Cursed Scroll problem". No one's gonna cast this when the number of cards in their hand are more than this and whatever they actually want to cast. Mebbe if you added "Cast ~ only if there are four or more card in your hand." or something.
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Post by Daij_Djan on Jun 18, 2018 21:08:03 GMT
This thread is now closed, the poll can be found here. And here's the next challenge! |
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And considering it's pretty much a Commander (or similar) card only anyway, adding a 
