These are from the universe of the Book I'm writing

I give you some random thoughts on your cards:

- Vorek: The power level here is that of a common, not of a bicolor legendary uncommon. I would buff P/T or give more relevant ability than haste
- Master of death: vigilance and first strike are color-pie breaks on a G/B cards. Haste is unusual but can stay

In general I would use existing magic creature type for your card: for example, Im not sure wha a Vamperein exactly is, but maybe Vampire could be fine?

- Maerik: the untap ability doesnt really feel BG to me, the -3 either. 
- Yoren: the second ability is kinda cool, altough you don't need to involve Y and Z. X and Y are fine, since the first ability doesn't conflicts. Now that I think about it, the first ability is useless when you have the second one: much more efficient.
- Tested patience: put a temporary effect on an aura is very weird. If you need to do it for flavor reason, you can use some kind of "two counters" text, where the aura is automatically sacrificed after. Anyway the cost is too high: maybe U or 1U would be fine.
- Library cycle: These I like! (typo in the green one)

In general almost all of your cards seems unprofessional because 
1. you are not using the official mana symbols
2. the art are not really what one expects (but the choice here is yours)
3. The wording is messy. I suggest you to google existing cards as reference to get the correct wording. After a while you should get used to it and get the wording right at the first time.

I found this "tutorials" on youtube that can be really usefull: very short explanations, but really well done www.youtube.com/watch?v=b3WaieT-nhQ&ab_channel=StrataGames 
You should check them out

I you have a lot of cards, I suggest posting the ones that feels more "unique" to you, doesn't really matter if they are commons or mythics. Show cards which includes new mechanics, or new design, and that is more interesting that lot of cards that are similar to other existing card in the game. Maybe it would be interesting to see the factions of your world, and to characterize them with a unique playstyle or mechanic.

For the wording aspect, it's not really that hard. Just google for cards with similar effects and you get the idea of how to proceed. Suddenly your cards will feel a lot more readable and easy to grasp.

Try to post some other stuff if you wish, I'll keep an eye on this post!

You don't need to have a card, to look for wording   Just search online, it's faster and you have all the reference you want. By the way, I just want to clarify: I like your digital art (how are you doing it, btw?) but just feels a little bit odd on mtg cards. 

Even if your card creation skills aren't perfect, you can learn a lot so don't give up!

his one is kind of unique but its a mess.

It's effectively a universal Chromatic Lantern with a body. I'd say it's costed appropriately, as the Lantern is very strong, but the downside of perfectly fixing your opponents' mana as well is significant.

Nevermind on the first question, my mom convinced me to keep the special type. Please answer the second question.

Thank you so much. Your post is in the top ten most helpful post I've received on here. I will definetly share what I need help with.

I need help with the second lore thingy and to know a good cost for this card.

What color should a land tutor be?

Generally, if any color is going to get a land tutor, it would be green, but there are reasons for other colors to get land tutors/ramp

I think it would make sense for RW to search for specifically a legendary land, since that color pair, at least in my head, is associated with artifacts and auras, and historic stuff (from Dominaria), so it wouldn't be too out of place.