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Post by Jartis on Jul 15, 2019 0:50:59 GMT
Crosspost with Planeswalker Game
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Evil Coco
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 110
Favorite Set: Shadowmoor
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Post by Evil Coco on Jul 15, 2019 19:45:25 GMT
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Post by gateways7 on Jul 16, 2019 1:06:08 GMT
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Post by viriss on Jul 20, 2019 18:48:21 GMT
Flo00 I'm not sure what to make of this. It feels like a card I would put into a multiplayer deck... just hoping to wreck someone. But that I'd always cycle it. lol. It seems like it would mostly just grab artifact tokens. I almost wish it did that instead. Idea Could two people fit in there? =) Do you use rarity on cards you design? I'm just curious. I like the balance of self activation with energy and lower power/vigilance. I think you captured the powered soldier in the picture. Tesagk I know she's legendary but two 2/4's that she also buffs is too much. The second ability reads funny to me to, she's giving two bonuses to things that, on there own, have no effect. I think just "artifact creatures" has the same effect. Fleur This feels pushed for uncommon, but like right at the edge! I like it. Plus the trade-off you have to make with creatures vs. power. Jartis Oh a planeswalker! I'm not sure I see white or black in here specifically. I guess Tempered Steel is white, so that's in there. But you cast her and use the first ability, and all your artifact creatures have +3/+3. Is really strong. I do like March of the Machines as an emblem. Unless I kill my treasure tokens by doing it. =) Evil Coco Another planeswalker! Seems pretty straight forward with the abilities, except the -3 ability. Discard a creature "card". I'm not sure what the flavor of that is supposed to be. Dovin Baan can do -3/-0 on a plus ability so I think you could push your ability further. Any card? A set minus instead of X? Bonus points for the token creature picture! gateways7 The instant speed ability is mostly just for equipment right? There's like 16 other cards it could effect. lol. Overall an interesting collection of abilities. {Winner} Fleur, I like the feel of your card with the picture.
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Post by Jartis on Jul 20, 2019 22:49:03 GMT
viriss Yeah, I thought about the fact that she doesn't feel very blue or black, but there were actually quite a lot of Esper cards that didn't either. I view Esper less as "this is blue and white and black" and more as "this color combo deals with artifacts"
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Post by Fleur on Jul 23, 2019 17:24:35 GMT
whoa i won here is your next art: art by wacalac
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Post by Tesagk on Jul 23, 2019 17:52:31 GMT
Fiora, Duelist Extraordinaire Legendary Creature - Human Soldier Vigilance, first strike Whenever an opponent's creature enters the battlefield, Fiora gets +1/+0 and gains double strike until end of turn. Prevent all noncombat damage that would be dealt to Fiora. 4/2
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Post by Flo00 on Jul 23, 2019 20:01:12 GMT
Altar of Plunder Legendary Artifact Whenever one or more creatures deal combat damage to a player, put that many plunder counters on Altar of Plunder. A tthe beginning of your upkeep, if there are 20 or more plunder counters on Altar of Plunder, sacrifice it, you gain 7 life, gain control of up to one target artifact and return up to one target Demon or Zombie creature card from a graveyard to the battlefield under your control. Not really sure if this shouldn't cost more. This is mainly legendary to prevent a player from having two at the same time. Note: The sac is optional but you don't have to target an artifact or creature in a graveyard. In particular, if thate is nothing to target, the rest will still happen.
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Fermat
8/8 Octopus
Posts: 430
Favorite Card: Force of Will
Favorite Set: Guildpact (set when I started playing)
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black
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Post by Fermat on Jul 24, 2019 1:25:25 GMT
Rena, Heartpiercer Captain Legendary Creature — Human Soldier Vigilance, haste Other Soldier creatures you control get +1/+1. Creatures you control have "Pay 3 life: This creature gains first strike until end of turn." 3/3
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horizons
0/0 Germ
Posts: 20
Favorite Card: Twilight Shepherd
Color Alignment: Blue, Green
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Post by horizons on Jul 24, 2019 1:58:38 GMT
Marcela, the Dawn Rose 4BW Legendary Creature - Vampire Knight :Mythic: Deathtouch Whenever you lose life, create that many 1/1 White Vampire creature tokens with lifelink. Whenever you gain life, put a +1/+1 counter on ~.
*"I've done it, I've found the fountain of eternal life!"* 1/1
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Post by viriss on Jul 24, 2019 2:26:58 GMT
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Post by Jartis on Jul 24, 2019 6:49:01 GMT
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Post by melono on Jul 26, 2019 3:01:16 GMT
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Xenozfan2
3/3 Beast
Posts: 161
Favorite Card: Phage the Untouchable
Favorite Set: Innistrad
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Red
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Post by Xenozfan2 on Jul 27, 2019 9:08:21 GMT
Catch Unawares Instant Target creature gains haste and trample until end of turn. "I have the eyes of a hawk and the ears of a fox."Positioned so the girl is in the bottom left neck up and the creepy guy is in the top right.
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Post by gateways7 on Jul 27, 2019 21:40:06 GMT
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Post by collex on Jul 28, 2019 1:55:56 GMT
Here is my entry. I have a lot of affections for charms and commands, so when I saw that sigil it seemed like a perfect opportunity to make a charm. I decided to make life hard on myself and make it four colors (fun fact, only two cards actually exist in this color combination.) What do you think? I made it uncommon because charms are usually uncommon, but it could easily be rare too, I think.
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Post by ameisenmeister on Jul 28, 2019 10:10:48 GMT
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Post by Boogymanjunior on Jul 29, 2019 17:54:21 GMT
Yeah, I know that four mana with three different colors is off-putting for a creature initially so weak that it dies to a mere shock, but I didn't have the heart to make it cost when it has this terrifying trio of keywords. EDIT: Wait what, ameisenmeister your card also has "Crimson" in it's name (I assume you meant that)? I swear, I did not look at your card!
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Post by Fleur on Jul 31, 2019 2:19:57 GMT
Kay y'all are gonna be judged in one day - get your last entries in! EDIT: Prepare to be judged! Tesagk : You're not getting docked for this, but I'd like to note right now that that isn't Fiora. What I will also note is that you've designed a card that feels really duelist-y; like someone who demands an honorable fight and who's always up for dueling new arrivals. 4/2 vigilant first striker is quite good, especially with the protection ability - but probably fine. Well done. As for wording, there's one thing: That second ability should be worded as: Whenever a creature enters the battlefield under an opponent's control, CARDNAME gets +1/+0 and gains double strike until end of turn.
Flo00 : This is usually going to do nothing. Mostly because by the time you've landed 20 or more unblocked attacks on an opponent, they will probably be dead. Even in EDH, by the time you've done that, this will either be removed or your opponents will (again) be dead. And if you land 20 or more unblocked attacks, you get a set of admittedly cool bonuses, but they aren't worth the hoops you've gotta jump. Not a fan of this. As for wording, second ability should be worded as: At the beginning of your upkeep, if CARDNAME has twenty or more plunder counters on it, sacrifice it, then you gain 7 life, gain control of up to one target artifact and return target Demon or Dragon card from your graveyard to the battlefield.
Fermat : Soldier tribal? Anyways, the design is fitting and I'd love to make an EDH deck around this. I will note that I don't super love the fact that the activated is for all creatures but the anthem is only for Soldiers; it's asymmetrical and kind of disjointed. This is still cool though, so well done. Wording is spotless. horizons : 6-mana 1/1? I'm interested. I honestly don't think the third ability is necessary here; the first and second abilities convey the whole "eternal life" thing well enough. Speaking of which, I love the second ability. It's flavorfully fitting, scales wildly, but actually doesn't feel broken because of how frail the initial body is. Also goes infinite a bit too easily with Soul Warden, so that might be an issue? But that's pretty small. Well done overall. Wording is spotless. viriss : Simple and elegant. I don't have much to say, which might be for the better here, seeing that the design stands really, really well on its own. Not the most flashy, but I like - though I do wish you went a little more out of the box, this is a nice card that comes together. I could see it being printed in some set totally. Wording is spotless. Jartis : The hoop on the ascend feels unnecessary. Like, I don't think it adds that much to the card, and I don't think the card really needs that to balance it. I also think that at rare, this could cost and not break anything. A fine design, just neither exciting or all that elegant, which I think puts it a bit below some of the other entries. Not sure if you can use ascend like that, but other than that the wording is good. melono : I'm not actually sure if fighting is a source. The concept is nice, though it will likely lead to a lot of stuff dying. This is not a bad thing. The card is interesting and overall I think it's a novel and cool design, even if I'm skeptical of how it'll play. A better wording might be: Whenever a creature is dealt damage, if it hasn't fought this turn, its controller has it fight target creature they don't control.
Xenozfan2 : This is weak. At one mana, giving haste can cantrip or can be global, both of which I think are better than trample. This could probably get some kind of buff. Wording is spotless. gateways7 : Nice mirrored abilities. I don't like that there isn't anything all that red about this, but I suppose it works for what its trying to do. Plus, I think this plays quite well, and that's what really matters here. Well done! Wording is spotless. collex : This does not justify four different colors in the slightest power-wise. I have reservations about making something this hard to cast uncommon as well. Mode 1 would probably cost 2G or 1GU on an instant, mode 2 would probably cost uhhh 1WW, and mode 3 would likely cost 2U? Yeah, you could definitely push this a bit more. Cool concept but lacking execution. Wording seems fine. ameisenmeister : That's a cool ability! And on a body that isn't half-bad? Sign me up! Overall this is very cool, but I wonder if this should cost 2R instead of 1R; it's gonna be such a pain to block. Still, might be fine. Overall cool card. Wording on the ability is technically spotless, though it's worth noting that usually things affecting your team don't usually target. Probably more along the lines of "...you may tap an untapped creature your team control. If you do..." Boogymanjunior : This does in fact, justify its cost. I like that this grows, and that it represents all of its colors really well. I am kind of concerned that vigilance makes this too good of a blocker, and that it can both attack and block on the same turn. Overall there's more good than bad going on here, though so I like this. You don't capitalize keywords other than the first in a line, so it would be "Vigilance, first strike, deathtouch" instead of "Vigilance, First Strike, Deathtouch". Winner is viriss , with gateways7 and Tesagk as runner-ups in that order.
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Post by viriss on Aug 2, 2019 18:34:39 GMT
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Post by Tesagk on Aug 2, 2019 19:56:43 GMT
Tesagk : You're not getting docked for this, but I'd like to note right now that that isn't Fiora. What I will also note is that you've designed a card that feels really duelist-y; like someone who demands an honorable fight and who's always up for dueling new arrivals. 4/2 vigilant first striker is quite good, especially with the protection ability - but probably fine. Well done. As for wording, there's one thing: That second ability should be worded as: Whenever a creature enters the battlefield under an opponent's control, CARDNAME gets +1/+0 and gains double strike until end of turn. Wait, what? I just made up a character named Fiora? How is it "not Fiora"? I wasn't trying to reference a Fiora... I assume you mean League of Legends, and yes, they're both duelists with red hair, but I don't see how my name was trying to imply that it was the same character. So I'm... confused?
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Post by Fleur on Aug 2, 2019 22:50:40 GMT
Tesagk : You're not getting docked for this, but I'd like to note right now that that isn't Fiora. What I will also note is that you've designed a card that feels really duelist-y; like someone who demands an honorable fight and who's always up for dueling new arrivals. 4/2 vigilant first striker is quite good, especially with the protection ability - but probably fine. Well done. As for wording, there's one thing: That second ability should be worded as: Whenever a creature enters the battlefield under an opponent's control, CARDNAME gets +1/+0 and gains double strike until end of turn. Wait, what? I just made up a character named Fiora? How is it "not Fiora"? I wasn't trying to reference a Fiora... I assume you mean League of Legends, and yes, they're both duelists with red hair, but I don't see how my name was trying to imply that it was the same character. So I'm... confused? Oh, I thought you were inserting the league character into this mistakenly - my bad!
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Xenozfan2
3/3 Beast
Posts: 161
Favorite Card: Phage the Untouchable
Favorite Set: Innistrad
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Red
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Post by Xenozfan2 on Aug 3, 2019 23:31:58 GMT
Artur, the Young King Legendary Creature - Human Knight Vigilance When Artur, the Young King enters the battlefield, search your library for an Equipment card, reveal it, put it into your hand, then shuffle your library. When Artur, the Young King attacks, create a 1/1 white Knight creature token for each Equipment attached to Artur, the Young King. 2/2
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Post by Flo00 on Aug 4, 2019 6:33:28 GMT
The Sword in the Stone Enchantment - Saga I: Search your library for an Equipment card and exile it. II: Look at the top five cards of your library. You may reveal a legendary creature from among them and put it into your hand. Put the rest on the bottom of your library in a random order. III: Put the exiled card onto the battlefield. You may attach it to a legendary creature you control.
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Post by Tesagk on Aug 4, 2019 14:44:56 GMT
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Post by gateways7 on Aug 5, 2019 3:12:17 GMT
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Akai Ryu
1/1 Squirrel
Posts: 63
Favorite Card: Arcbound Ravager
Color Alignment: Colorless
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Post by Akai Ryu on Aug 5, 2019 11:29:55 GMT
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Post by collex on Aug 7, 2019 2:47:18 GMT
So others have already done Arthur and Excalibur, so I figured I'd try my hand at Merlin. As usual, not a play designer, so my card costing tends to be super conservative because I'm afraid of breaking things.
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Post by Fleur on Aug 7, 2019 20:51:36 GMT
Zooming in on the spilled basket of apples: Fruitless Endeavor Sorcery Target player discards two cards. For each land card discarded this way, untap up to two lands. Days of traveling and hours of climbing, and still Kiera's efforts were not rewarded.
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Post by Boogymanjunior on Aug 11, 2019 17:56:52 GMT
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