HonchkrowDavid
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Post by HonchkrowDavid on Apr 16, 2018 5:57:36 GMT
Welcome to Langor: The plane of nothing and nowhere. Langor is a desert and most of its denizens have taken up a nomadic lifestyle; they set out when the sun rises and settle in when it sets. Harsh sun and howling winds scald the barren landscape between sandstone settlements, and everything shifts with the sands.{Denizens} The Gurug: Mages, liars, murderers, and mystics, the Gurug are a race of crocodilian humanoids that make their homes in the murky riverbeds that flow from the Nettle. They are fierce in combat and use deceptive magics to gain the upper hand. The Elves: Elvish tribes make the Nettle their home, tending to the rivers and sparse flora that grow and wind within the swamp. They are druidic and passive in nature, but some elves have found power in the promise of death. The Great City Osrius: A large river, known as the Istra, runs through Osrius giving the city a profitable advantage over the rest of Langor. Built up around the Istra's source, Osrius grew into a bastion of sanctity and power. The city is populated by wealthy traders and aristocrats, and it serves as a cultural hub for all of Langor.
The Sun-City: The citizens of the Sun-City are the nomadic pilgrims of Langor. They test their resolve against the desert's daily, wandering from town to town.
The Sunless: Exiles from the Sun-City, the sunless wander Langor's deserts after sundown. There are rumors that the Sunless are cursed murderers, but many are simply lost pilgrims trying to find their way in the harsh world.
The House of Agrysta: A mysterious city of nobles sits on the southern rim of the Nettle. House Agrysta is adorned in gold and other unnecessary glamour, and avoided by many. They regularly send convoys into the southern reaches of Langor to reportedly dig gold from a secret mine. The Lorani: For generations, the Lorani were a mysterious cult of wizards and clerics that used the sands to bury enemies alive. Today, after a recent reformation within their hierarchy, they preach the Sun's warmth and forgiveness instead.
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Post by voltaic-qui on Apr 16, 2018 16:14:03 GMT
These are some purty basics. Some questions raised by the spoilers here: 1. How do the dry basics work in draft? Do you get an infinite supply of them or do you have to draft them? 2. Can we expect a mechanical representation of those shifting sands via Crop Rotation type effects? 3. Is that Myriada hiding in the mechanics spoiler???
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HonchkrowDavid
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Post by HonchkrowDavid on Apr 17, 2018 0:34:41 GMT
There is a nonzero amount of crop rotation effects, yes. Dry basics replace normal basics in the last slot, and will sometimes be another Desert instead. Normal basics exist in the set file and you can pull them to draft but you won't open them in packs. Did I say Avenging Stroke? No no no I said Myriada's Defiance. It's a regional dialect. {Attunement}
The first thing Volta noticed was the heat. It bared down from above as it wafted up from the sandstone ground wrapping the Festenian inventor in a tight embrace. He was already out of breath from planeswalking and the heat made him instantly uncomfortable. Volta tugged at his collar as beads of sweat formed on his forehead.
"Why did we come here, again?" He stammered, looking up at his traveling companion. Myriada gazed absentmindedly across the sandstone cityscape calm and relaxed against the backdrop of the ferocious heat. She somewhat lazily uncrossed her arms, took the cigarette holder out of her mouth, and exhaled a wispy puff of smoke into the air. It was an internal battle for comfort against the sun, and for a moment Volta thought the sun was about to lose. She gave one last longing glance at the glittering buildings before breaking under the pressure.
"On Angels' Wings, I did not expect it to be this hot," she looked to Volta and proclaimed. "Well, we've arrived."
"Noted," Volta grumbled. "It was hard enough to follow you, why did we need to go here?"
"Well, you said you needed more energy." Myriada pointed at the sun. It sat alarmingly closer to the horizon than any sun Volta had ever seen before. "You never finished your story, but perhaps you can make use of that?"
"You cut me off," Volta chastised, tugging uncomfortably at his sleeves. "It feels like I'm melting."
"First order of business then, little one, is to find more comfortable clothing." Myriada fanned herself with an open palm as she left the alleyway they had arrived in. Volta struggled to keep up with her brisk pace and ran into her when she stopped abruptly. Myriada's attention had been captured by a pastel green top on display inside a nearby shop. Myriada disappeared inside the store while Volta contemplated how the garment would be long enough to cover any significant part of a woman.
Sometime later, Myriada came back out dressed in the more traditional, vibrant colored, garments. They were a matching light, flowing skirt and top, partially concealed beneath a white cloak meant to keep the sun from her skin. Volta was alarmed at how much more revealing they were than traditional Festenian clothing.
"Myriada..." He stuttered "your midsection is bare."
"Yes, I have a stomach." She retorted, "Amazing, isn't it? Will wonders never cease?"
Volta grimaced as Myriada pushed him inside the shop. "You need to dress better or the heat will surely kill you," she chuckled.
Much to Volta's chagrin, his friend eventually convinced him to buy baggy pants that tied off at the ankles and a vest that was far too small to button from the front. Volta's pale skin shone like a beacon and his face was flushed the same color red as the overcoat he now wore. Volta tugged at some of the gold stones embedded into the coat's cuff. "I look like a fool," he muttered sheepishly.
"Nonsense! You look good, little one," Myriada laughed. "Now, tell me again exactly what's happening."
"It's île lune. I can't find it." "Can't find your own island? Could you be sailing past it?" "Wha... How is that? You can see it from Tholough Dam." "Then why can't you find it?" "Look can I tell this story?"
. . .
It was two summers ago. A few days after that Zevya girl was found dead in Saigura Town. Galvani said he wanted to see me and that it was urgent. So we had lunch at Candy Carnations, that place on the Karloni waterfront-
"Is this part of the story necessary, little one?"
Can you not do that? Anyway, he told me about strange energy readings coming from île lune. He said the test doors we developed weren't cooperating. That there were unpredictable spikes that our failsafes couldn't contain. He said he was moving important documents and furniture from the laboratory, but when we went back that afternoon, it was gone. Well, not completely gone...
"Ah, that's why you moved to Vitora, isn't it?"
The island was nothing but a crater- as if the land itself had been erased from existence! Galvani theorized that because our prototype door was old and barely functioning, it became unstable when we stopped maintaining it. He thinks it created some sort of... Opening? Something that transferred île lune to another plane. But if it happened once, then we can possibly recreate the effect.
Myriada looked at him with bated breath. Volta's story ended abruptly, and she was quietly waiting for him to finish.
"So... You..."
"If I can harness enough energy and focus it through some kind of filter, or maybe a lense, I could potentially pull île lune back through the aether," Volta droned on. Myriada smiled and rolled her eyes. Of all the things the man was, a storyteller he was not.
Being erased from existence was nothing new for Myriada, but the idea of reversing it was. Her eyes lit up as the pair pushed through a gathering of people. She was searching for a way out of the city, but the buildings and roads seemed to fold over on themselves. The crowds were unusually thick too and Myriada became more focused on watching Volta than listening to him. She realized if either of them got lost in this city it could be the death of both of them. Being responsible was hard work, Myriada thought to herself.
Something from behind her made her shudder and she subtly motioned for Volta to stop. There was a sudden change in the atmosphere, an almost hushed murmuring that ran through the crowd. Myriada reached out with her mind and felt a raw swath of mixed emotions greet her.
"Do you feel that?" She whispered, scanning the faces in the crowd. Volta nodded. He was no mage, but Myriada could tell he sensed the change in the atmosphere too. Pressed together in the crowd the sun felt cool. There was an unsettling agression radiating from the crowd, but nobody looked at them, nobody attacked, and nobody spoke.
"We need to get out of this city," Myriada stressed. She grabbed Volta's hand and the two quickened their pace. Gold-tipped spires rose above the buildings around them, but they dropped off further along the horizon. Faces and bodies went by in a blur as they pushed their way towards what Myriada hoped was an exit. At one point she thought she felt someone tug at her free hand. A lifetime of wading through Festenya's undercity never prepared Myriada for this lurching feeling in her gut. She was trying to speed up, but Volta stopped dead in his tracks.
"Did you hear that?" He quavered.
She had hoped it was nothing. She had hoped it was a trick of the wind, or the heat was playing with her mind.
But she heard it too.
Outsiders.
All eyes were turned towards the pair of planeswalkers on foreign sands.
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Post by burntsquirrelman on Apr 19, 2018 21:57:53 GMT
I am excited to see this. I like the use of "Dry [Land]" as a sort of parallel to "Snow-Covered [Land]". I am assuming that, despite the Desert subtype showing up on these Basic Lands, you have not made Desert a Basic Land Type, correct?
And the story is intriguing me very much! That all of a sudden, somehow, seemingly everyone is aware that these two are "Outsiders" but also that this is perceived as a bad thing. Bizarre and exciting!
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HonchkrowDavid
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Post by HonchkrowDavid on Apr 27, 2018 14:40:17 GMT
I'm sorry guys. Recent upheavals outside of MSE have made it pretty tough to find adequate motivation to write. I have pieces, but no complete second story, and I can't find the words to link them yet. But here's the set file, and here's a small section of what I do have written out. {Spoiler}"If they were always going to attack us, why did they wait until now?" Volta asked. He scratched his head. "I really don't want to die today. I told Senator deFleur we'd only be gone a few hours and I don't want to lie to her."
"That's not happening if I can help it, little one. How much time do we have?"
"About 4 and a half hours, memory serves. I'm still trying to wrap my head around what happened." Volta counted out the time on his hands with a perplexed look on his face. Download the set here
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