blueseclipse
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Post by blueseclipse on Jun 6, 2019 7:18:31 GMT
blueseclipse // Predictably, as Khon approaches the device that someone is presently working on, he is noticed by the engineer at work, who is holding what looks to be some kind of device to send power from one place to another."Oh, hey," I say as I look up at the metallic-looking person. He's not here to break stuff, is he? Guess he's my job. "Estova Rei, Core Engineer of the Eternity Project for Interplanar Cooperation. Who're you?"Mage-Ring Worker is far too reliant on something that might not happen, since you can't control it beyond intentionally buffing your opponent's creatures, and isn't worth enough to sideboard into +1/+1 counter matchups. 6/10 Resistance Channel Artifact - Conduit When Resistance Channel enters the battlefield, you get . , : Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature. Simple and effective. As a one-use thing, it probably could be at - however, energy interactions could make it rather interesting. 10/10"I have been named as Khon Vasq," I reply to the man. "I am unfamiliar with the Eternity Project for Interplanar Cooperation - however, it does offer a clear explanation of your purpose. I have not seen these structures before," I say, gesturing to the large cylinders, before inclining my head towards the large ring, "nor have I seen something of that design. I find myself curious as to what purpose these devices serve."Inscrutable Obelisk Artifact Whenever you draw a card except the first one you draw each turn, you may sacrifice Inscrutable Obelisk. If you do, draw a card. : Add to your mana pool. Activate this ability only if you have exactly seven cards in your hand.
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Post by mrlozano on Jun 6, 2019 11:01:18 GMT
"Yeah, there's a river about two kilos that way. I'm headin' over there soon myself to get some water for the non-Volarian folk."Ask for Directions is probably fine, since the best part of Mulch was putting the cards in your graveyard this is probably allowed to be an instant. 8/10 Show the Way Instant Copy target instant or sorcery spell. Its controller draws a card. Water for non-Volarians? My face light with excitement. I take out my notepad. "Volarians don't drink water? How do you do that. I've never meowt any race that doesn't need it." I start taking notes.Reresearch Instant Draw a card for each card target player has drawn this turn. "This add a new perspective to my investigations..."Show the Way: it's really nice 9/10
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Jun 6, 2019 20:43:17 GMT
cajun
"So all ya got the same name then, huh? 's there a story about that?"// Aeryl hands the food out to the correct Xirixes, despite the confusing methodology to their order, and sets some blank menus out with pens."Got it, do ma job, get paid. You guys intendin' to take your cakes through the blind eternities?"This is probably just fine as a pseudo-Plow Under, not sure how amazing the first ability is. 8/10 Sorting Thoughts Enchantment If you would draw a card, you may instead draw two cards, then put a card from your hand on top of your library. blueseclipse
"Oh," I point to the oscillator and my core-in-progress. "Those two make energy. This one a lot more than that one. That one," I point to the tunnel, "Takes massive amounts of energy and aether and turns it into a bridge so we can get back to Entela."
"Thing I'm working on is a high-energy elemental-electrical core. It holds enough energy to wipe out a city if you don't have a capable engineer or two watching it, so we don't really hand the mechanical details out to people we meet."I feel like Inscrutable Obelisk could sacrifice on any card draw, not just ones that aren't your draw step. The decks that want rocks like this don't usually want to be at 7 cards so you're not likely to hit the activation most of the time anyways. 7/10 Elemental-Electrical Core Legendary Artifact At the beginning of your upkeep, you get a number of equal to the number of you have. : You get . Pay twenty : You draw ten cards. Elemental-Electrical Core deals 10 damage to any target. mrlozano"Oh, nah, nothin' that exciting. We drink water, but need aether. So I carry water with a tiny bit of aether dissolved in it for the Volarian folk. Turns out, others don't like that much. In fact, it's actually bad for 'em, so I gotta have non-aetheric water too."Reresearch is probably ancestral recall a lot of the time, since it's really easy to link, for example, a Faithless Looting into this, or to catch your opponent with a large card-draw spell. It might want to cost another mana as a result, but then that makes its cantrip mode a lot worse, so I'm not sure. 7.5/10 Aetheric Thirst Sorcery Scry 2, draw two cards, then discard two cards unless you pay 2 life.
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Post by mrlozano on Jun 6, 2019 22:36:40 GMT
"Oh, nah, nothin' that exciting. We drink water, but need aether. So I carry water with a tiny bit of aether dissolved in it for the Volarian folk. Turns out, others don't like that much. In fact, it's actually bad for 'em, so I gotta have non-aetheric water too." Aetheric Thirst Sorcery Scry 2, draw two cards, then discard two cards unless you pay 2 life. "Oh." I write it down nevertheless. Then I remember. "The other woman told meow to search for Estova! If you are not heading for the river just yet I meowght as well go and search for him before going fishing with you!" I head to search for Estova. This machines are amazing.New Research Fields Instant Draw a card. If ~ is in your graveyard, whenever a player casts a black, red, green or white spell you may exile it. If you do, draw a card. "You have to shift your study field form time to time. Trying new things gives you a better perspective of old fields."Aetheric Thirst: Oh, I like this a lot. It probably belongs at uncommon, though. 9/10
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Post by Lady Mapi on Jun 7, 2019 1:57:25 GMT
Lady Mapi "Oh, that's only a year after the Aether Flux. That was... the biggest disaster in Volarian history. You know, when aethertech stopped... working because of some change in the aether. That's a good reference."Masterpiece Engine makes me really happy to see as a voltaic key variant. 10/10 The Aether Flux Sorcery Destroy all artifacts. The Aether Flux deals X damage to each player who controlled an artifact destroyed this way and each creature, where X is the number of artifacts destroyed this way. "I was being a bit rough - I think they actually happened at the same time. They were probably related - can't break a bunch of old-walker souls without it doing a number on the place."
I glanced up at the sun and cursed softly. Damn.
"Anyway, I have to go see a man about a horse. Be careful of time paradoxes, kids." I wiggled my eyebrows suggestively at Estova before I left.The Aether Flux seems pretty fair for a vicious mass shatter. Sure, it screws the person who was running an artifact deck, but I think that's OK. 9/10
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blueseclipse
3/3 Beast
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Color Alignment: Blue, Green
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Post by blueseclipse on Jun 7, 2019 2:58:20 GMT
blueseclipse
"Oh," I point to the oscillator and my core-in-progress. "Those two make energy. This one a lot more than that one. That one," I point to the tunnel, "Takes massive amounts of energy and aether and turns it into a bridge so we can get back to Entela."
"Thing I'm working on is a high-energy elemental-electrical core. It holds enough energy to wipe out a city if you don't have a capable engineer or two watching it, so we don't really hand the mechanical details out to people we meet."I feel like Inscrutable Obelisk could sacrifice on any card draw, not just ones that aren't your draw step. The decks that want rocks like this don't usually want to be at 7 cards so you're not likely to hit the activation most of the time anyways. 7/10 Elemental-Electrical Core Legendary Artifact At the beginning of your upkeep, you get a number of equal to the number of you have. : You get . Pay twenty : You draw ten cards. Elemental-Electrical Core deals 10 damage to any target. That's a lot of energy. I approve of the shorthand for paying , even if I don't know that WotC would use it. I like the concept as well. 10/10"I see - it is wise not to offer dangerous knowledge to those you do not trust to handle it properly," I reply, nodding my head at Estova's explanation. "Entela is another plane, I presume?"Absorption Field Artifact If a source would deal noncombat damage to a creature or planeswalker you control, prevent half of that damage, rounded up, and place a number of charge counters on Absorption Field equal to the amount of damage prevented this way. Remove a charge counter from Absorption Field: Add . Remove three charge counters from Absorption Field: Draw a card.
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Post by cajun on Jun 7, 2019 3:58:21 GMT
"So all ya got the same name then, huh? 's there a story about that?"// Aeryl hands the food out to the correct Xirixes, despite the confusing methodology to their order, and sets some blank menus out with pens."Got it, do ma job, get paid. You guys intendin' to take your cakes through the blind eternities?" Xirix gives a small laugh. "Yes, Lady Reyhsia has ensured there is quite the story about it. I was once able to travel through time as easy as we travel planes now, but many decades ago, I lost that power. But the Xirix in the past were still there, and we caught up to the present. In our decades, sometimes centuries, separated, we changed. We started the same, but are not quite anymore."
"And we shall not, no. We are residing on the Arena, for the time being. And thank you, Sir Aeryl, for dealing with us so kindly."// The Xirix translate their menus, eat their food, spite-drink their aether water, and take home nearly two pizzas. When the payment is made, there is more ryla left behind than expected. Sorting Thoughts - hm, fact that this can't get rid of dead cards makes me suspect this can be 2 mana. 8/10
and poking Neottolemo for below
"I'm the one who should be apologizing kid. Regardless of who you are, you aren't her."
I turned towards the angry women around me with a sheepish smile and a shrug.
"Mistakes were made."
And then I left, taking my glass with me. He was gone. The spells where gone. I took a big breath, the fell to my hands and knees.
"It's over." I breathe. "I'm okay. All clear."
I sit down and just focus on breathing for a few moments. "Thank you, miss Nisita," I manage. "Miss Hyle."
"And, you too, Hannah." I close my eyes. "I love you."Karina, the Loved Legendary Creature - Human Partner with Hannah, the Loved Karina, the Loved gets +1/+1 for each other legendary permanent you control. 3/2Hannah, the Loved Legendary Creature - Human Artificer Partner with Karina, the Loved The first spell you cast each turn costs less to cast, where X is the number of other legendary permanents you control. 2/3
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Jun 7, 2019 5:44:24 GMT
mrlozano// Estova is found working on what's essentially just a large ring made of a dimly glowy metal and pipes. He doesn't seem to notice the cat because he's busy.Delayed Divination might be fine as a sorcery, probably too much as something you can just hold up and then prok whenever. 7/10 Unnoticed Observation Sorcery Target opponent reveals their hand. You choose a card from it. That player discards that card and loses 2 life. (It's a black spell that can either prok the recast or put it in the graveyard) blueseclipse"Entela's a city on Volaria. It's where most of us come from. I think Haia's Litaran and the cleric is a Therian?"I figure Absorption Field wants to protect you as well. 7.5/10 Overchannel Instant Damage can't be prevented this turn. Overchannel deals 2 damage to target player or planeswalker. cajun"I... I love you too. Are you alright? Is everything alright? Do you need help?" Arina silently nods and takes a few steps away from Karina before planeswalking.I love that Karina is more aggressive and Hannah is more defensive. Also Hannah casts more and Karina fights more for their loved ones. 10/10 on both of them (so average 10, surprise) Love's Resilience Instant Put a +1/+1 counter on each of two target you or a teammate controls. Those creatures gain indestructible for as long as both of those creatures are on the battlefield.
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Post by cajun on Jun 7, 2019 6:19:52 GMT
"I... I love you too. Are you alright? Is everything alright? Do you need help?" Arina silently nods and takes a few steps away from Karina before planeswalking. Love's Resilience Instant Put a +1/+1 counter on each of two target you or a teammate controls. Those creatures gain indestructible for as long as both of those creatures are on the battlefield. // There's a few scared breaths from Karina
"Everything's alright, now," I whisper. "I'm okay. You helped so much."
"I'll be there in just a minute, okay?" I take a deep breath. "Just need a minute to..." recover from near death "catch my breath."
"I think I need to spend less time out here," I laugh so I won't cry. Love's Resilience - noice. 10/10
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Post by mrlozano on Jun 7, 2019 14:03:26 GMT
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blueseclipse
3/3 Beast
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Color Alignment: Blue, Green
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Post by blueseclipse on Jun 8, 2019 2:48:54 GMT
blueseclipse "Entela's a city on Volaria. It's where most of us come from. I think Haia's Litaran and the cleric is a Therian?"I figure Absorption Field wants to protect you as well. 7.5/10 Overchannel Instant Damage can't be prevented this turn. Overchannel deals 2 damage to target player or planeswalker. Even as a Shock variant, I think this needs to cost a bit more - simply because it shuts off all damage prevention for the turn, rather than just damage that it deals. would be appropriate. 8/10I nod, and answer, "I see. While I have traveled to many planes, I have not visited Volaria. I must ask, are planeswalkers common there? Most planes I have visited are unfamiliar with, if not completely unaware of, the wider multiverse - and none that I have visited have had any organization devoted to interplanar relations."Wall of Mirrors Artifact Creature - Wall Defender Sacrifice Wall of Mirrors: Change the targets of target spell or ability an opponent controls which targets you or a single permanent you control. The new target must be the spell's controller or a permanent that player controls. 0/4
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Post by cajun on Jun 8, 2019 20:51:57 GMT
Focus. Focus on. Who? Needed out. Don't die on her. Focus. "Alert, Hannah," I choke out. I scream as the planeswalk rips me from the Arena. // Karina planeswalks into Hannah's room. Her hands are covered in blood and clutching at the still bleeding wound on the left side of her stomach. There's a blood stain on her left pant leg, and a shallow, but no longer bleeding, cut down the left side of her face. Tears are streaming down and she's gasping in pain.Karina of the Arena Legendary Creature - Human Other legendary permanents you control get +1/+1 and have lifelink. Spells you cast that are legendary or target a legendary permanent you control cost less to cast. 3/2Call for Fear: Stab Wound aimed at Karina
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Jun 9, 2019 5:01:54 GMT
cajun "K-karina!" I dive off my bed and crawl to her side. That's what the alert was for. "Alert healer! Alert healer! ... Alert anyone, help!!"// Hannah tries to start talking to Karina, but breaks into tears before she can get words out. As she chokes on her tears, a young girl's voice whispers to Karina from... somewhere."I can't let you die on her yet. This isn't much, but it should let your body recover itself." (Karina's injuries lightly glow yellow with a combination of green and white mana, unlocking green permanently.)Light's Presence Enchantment Whenever you gain life, you may put a +1/+1 counter on target creature and that creature gains hexproof until your next turn., Sacrifice Light's Presence: Destroy target artifact or enchantment. You gain life equal to its converted mana cost.// Karina's bleeding stops. Any internal punctures or severances are corrected, bodily fluids are returned to where they're supposed to be. The wound remains open,but no longer bleeding somehow. The pain doesn't disappear, but it seems to push itself into the back of Karina's mind, where her focus can be diverted to something else.No, bad stab wound, go away. I do like this cost reduction a lot. 9/10
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Jun 9, 2019 5:31:43 GMT
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Post by Parasign on Jun 9, 2019 6:10:42 GMT
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Post by cajun on Jun 9, 2019 20:05:53 GMT
cajun "K-karina!" I dive off my bed and crawl to her side. That's what the alert was for. "Alert healer! Alert healer! ... Alert anyone, help!!"// Hannah tries to start talking to Karina, but breaks into tears before she can get words out. As she chokes on her tears, a young girl's voice whispers to Karina from... somewhere."I can't let you die on her yet. This isn't much, but it should let your body recover itself." (Karina's injuries lightly glow yellow with a combination of green and white mana, unlocking green permanently.)// Karina's bleeding stops. Any internal punctures or severances are corrected, bodily fluids are returned to where they're supposed to be. The wound remains open,but no longer bleeding somehow. The pain doesn't disappear, but it seems to push itself into the back of Karina's mind, where her focus can be diverted to something else. "Who?" I ask the voice. And then I can feel the spell inside me. I panic for a moment before I feel it fixing things. "What?" I question. Hannah didn't know that one, did she?
My pain... fades? THERE IT IS. I scream again. Try to breathe. Where was she? Crying? No. Please. I reach up to her, but my hand is covered with blood PAIN EVERYWHERE WHY.
Don't think about IT. Don't. Just. Her. "Hannah?"// Karina's breaths are heavy as she tries to focus on Hannah through the bursts of painKarina, Made Whole Legendary Creature - Human Lifelink : Target creature gains persist until end of turn. (When it dies, if it had no -1/-1 counters on it, return it to the battlefield under its owner's control with a -1/-1 counter on it.)2/2Previous Karina wouldn't actually survive the sacrifice to kill Stab Wound here, so have a lifelink Karina to distribute some +1 counters :^) Light's Presence - hexproof until your next turn feels bit odd, and may have this at 3 mana (two colors might cover that tho). 9/10
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Jun 9, 2019 21:21:02 GMT
Parasign // A middle-aged human man reads something off his transceiver as the two approach."Seiva, coming from AKHATAR?"// The man pokes his transceiver and types something. A note, or a message maybe?"Yeah, sure, follow me." I wave them to follow me and lead them to Seiva. "Hey, Seiva, an... entity of AKHATAR wishes to speak to you."// Seiva looks up from her own transceiver and looks at VIA.
"Oh, hey." I wave at the... android? Was that was Leira called it? "You wouldn't happen to be the VIA that I spoke to previously, would you? What brings you here?"
Hurried Introduction seems like a fine ritual. 8/10
Uncertainty Instant Put target creature or planeswalker spell on top of its owner's library. Scry 1.
cajun
"K-Karina?" I take a deep breath in. I need to stop crying. I need to talk to her. I try, but the tears keep coming when I try to talk. "Wh-what happened? Why?"
// Almost immediately after Karina replies, a woman and a man rush into Hannah's room and begin looking over the signs of injury. The woman barks commands to the man and carefully removes the fabrics from the wounds., muttering something about "how lucky" followed by "definitely magical". It's only a few minutes before Karina's stomach and leg injuries are wrapped in bandages.
"Hey, hey," the woman says as she waves a hand in front of Karina. "Can you hear me?"
Medical Observation Enchantment Whenever a creature enters the battlefield under your control, you gain 2 life and scry 1.
"That's some pretty powerful Light magic that happened there, and I'm not interested in messing with it. Whenever you or your friend are able to do so, you should change into less damaged and bloodied clothes, alright? And every morning you need to replace the bandages. I can show you how to do that if you need help. Your body should figure itself out from there, but we want to make sure nothing bad happens while it's doing that."
// The woman continues on for a bit; avoid work, get rest, keep hydrated. If you feel any pain after the first day, have something with Shaidostan mint, no explanation why.
I love the flavor of persist here, like "No, you have to try a bit harder to kill me." Which I suppose is the flavor in general, but it shows here. It's a bit awkward that it's hybrid green when Karina otherwise is mono-white, though. You're clearly already playing white. 8/10
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Post by Parasign on Jun 9, 2019 22:10:46 GMT
WindyDelcarlo Uncertainty: This seems really pushed for blue removal (the closest equivalents I can find are Expel from Orazca and Vanishment), but this type of effect is rarely constructed playable anyway so it's probably fine. 8/10. (Edit: Missed the 'spell' part, changing to 9/10.) "Yes, I am. I appear to have become... lost, and was curious if you received any messages from AKHATAR in my absence. I don't seem to recall whether we established a means of transportation between our respective planes, so I would also like that clarified if possible. Lastly, does the name Azoria mean anything to you?"Clarify Instant Reveal any number of cards from your hand, then target opponent reveals that many cards from their hand. If you revealed more cards than them, scry 1. Draw a card.
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Post by mrlozano on Jun 9, 2019 23:28:14 GMT
"Ooooh!" I take some more notes. "So, then you distribute the energy? Basically this is going to make the whole thing work right?" I approach to the core and touch it with my paw. "Do you have small versions of this? Like, for smaller planar bridges or that kind of stuff."
Reescalate Instant You draw three cards and you gain 3 life. If was spent to cast this spell, you draw four cards and you gain 8 life instead.
Aether Catalysis: I feel like the payoff for spending C should be greater, but if it was greater it would probably be broken and that's weird. In the end, I think it's nice. 8/10
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blueseclipse
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Post by blueseclipse on Jun 10, 2019 0:48:45 GMT
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Jun 10, 2019 4:46:37 GMT
Parasign// Seiva seems uneasy. She taps her transceiver idly while she speaks."We did. A drone of yours arrived earlier today with a message from AKHATAR, mentioning a rogue entity, probably an android, that was a high priority target. Leira went to investigate its source, since it seemed to come from you, and communicated with... some version of you that asked that we prevent you from returning to the gate.""Instead, we have a designated meeting place for you, that image of you, and our Master Sara to meet for... reasons I'm not quite sure of."I don't think this compares favorably to either Opt or Peek. If you really want information, you probably want Peek, and if you want to scry, often times you're not on a deck that really wants more cards in hand than an average opponent. 7/10 Open Information
Instant If you would reveal or discard this card from your hand, you may instead exile it. When you do, cast it from exile without paying its mana cost. Draw a card. "This one's about as small as it gets. It'll be about four meters taller, surrounded by aetherglass and then we can start making energy, and it's still smaller than the one we've got in Entela. If we need smaller stuff... you know, like a project beyond the aether, we use the oscillator over there." I motion over to our oscillator, which is brightly glowing the gold of its energy. "We're using it until I get this one done. It's simple enough a kid could do it with only vague instructions and an understanding of core engineering. Which one did, this time."Reescalate seems really cheap for an X=3 Sphinx's Revelation, especially since instant drawing 3 usually costs 5 (Jace's Ingenuity). I like the use of the random aether I had left over, though. 7/10 Reduction Instant Players can't gain life this turn. Whenever a player draws a card this turn, Reduction deals 1 damage to that player. "Curiosity, wanting to be part of a community beyond planes, some other reasons that you'd need to ask Seiva and Leira about. They're the ones that're directing the whole thing, I'm just here helping it move in that direction."
Darksteel Essence definitely seems fine. I like the C design for "you probably have this in an artifact deck anyhow". 9/10 Offer to the Spirits Legendary Enchantment - Development When Offer to the Spirits has four or more development counters on it, sacrifice it. When you do, each player who developed Offer to the Spirits discards their hand and draws seven cards. Then destroy all artifacts with offering counters on them. Develop 4--Put an offering counter on an artifact you control without an offering counter on it.
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Post by cajun on Jun 10, 2019 4:57:29 GMT
"K-Karina?" I take a deep breath in. I need to stop crying. I need to talk to her. I try, but the tears keep coming when I try to talk. "Wh-what happened? Why?"
// Almost immediately after Karina replies, a woman and a man rush into Hannah's room and begin looking over the signs of injury. The woman barks commands to the man and carefully removes the fabrics from the wounds., muttering something about "how lucky" followed by "definitely magical". It's only a few minutes before Karina's stomach and leg injuries are wrapped in bandages.
"Hey, hey," the woman says as she waves a hand in front of Karina. "Can you hear me?"
"That's some pretty powerful Light magic that happened there, and I'm not interested in messing with it. Whenever you or your friend are able to do so, you should change into less damaged and bloodied clothes, alright? And every morning you need to replace the bandages. I can show you how to do that if you need help. Your body should figure itself out from there, but we want to make sure nothing bad happens while it's doing that."
// The woman continues on for a bit; avoid work, get rest, keep hydrated. If you feel any pain after the first day, have something with Shaidostan mint, no explanation why.
"What happened?"
I almost laugh at the absurdity. "A book. Stabbed me."
There's a flurry of healers after that. I try to answer as best I can. "Yes," I say with a grunt. "Moving hurts." "Light? How?" "Have... something here." Don't remember what all clothes are here, but there's something. "Show how, please." "Why mint?"
After that's all been dealt with I look to Hannah. "I need to tell EPIC to tell 7CI what happened. Need your help with the words."Emergency Dispatch Instant As an additional cost to cast this spell, tap and exert a creature you control or pay . Copy target instant or sorcery spell. You may choose new targets for the copy. Medical Observation - hm, prob fine at WU. 8/10
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Post by Parasign on Jun 10, 2019 5:14:30 GMT
WindyDelcarloOpen Information: That first ability doesn't seem common, and I rather doubt the cheaper "flashback" cost compared to Think Twice is worth the inability to actually cast it twice. That said, it's a cool idea. 8/10."I see." VIA considers. "What was this 'image' like? And why doesn't it want me to return?"Pale Reflection Instant Create a token that's a copy of target creature you control, except it has no colors or creature types. Exile it at the beginning of the next end step.
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Jun 10, 2019 5:22:53 GMT
cajun"Light? How?""Light energy's the thing you use for healing magic. Therian magic, restoration serum, things like that. Someone healed you before we got here." The healer looks up at Hannah, shakes her head, and looks back down. "And it definitely wasn't her or she wouldn't have called us."
// The healer shows both Hannah and Karina how to wrap bandages properly with some extra bandages.
"The mint'll help calm you and null the pain. It won't be as strong as a spell, but I don't want to touch that magic in case anything happens. I'll have someone drop off a clean bandage roll later. You look after yourself. You," the healer looks up at Hannah. "You look after her any time you're not in classes. Got it? If it gets worse, shout for a healer and I'll be over." Hannah wipes her eyes and nods.
// Once the healer leaves, Hannah takes Karina's hand.
"You'll be okay. I'll make sure of it."
"I need to tell EPIC to tell 7CI what happened. Need your help with the words."
"Interplanar Communications, contact Seiva Zeni." I look at Karina. As soon as I hear the line click through, I start speaking. "Karina got really hurt by a book on the Arena, so she's going to be here for a little while and she needs you to tell the 7CI." I whisper back to Karina, "Is there anything else?"
Yep, I like this a lot. 9/10
Problem Solved Instant Gain control of target instant or sorcery spell. You may choose new targets for it. "Don't worry, I can handle this."
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Post by cajun on Jun 10, 2019 5:37:07 GMT
// Once the healer leaves, Hannah takes Karina's hand.
"You'll be okay. I'll make sure of it."
"I need to tell EPIC to tell 7CI what happened. Need your help with the words."
"Interplanar Communications, contact Seiva Zeni." I look at Karina. As soon as I hear the line click through, I start speaking. "Karina got really hurt by a book on the Arena, so she's going to be here for a little while and she needs you to tell the 7CI." I whisper back to Karina, "Is there anything else?"
I let myself relax a smidge as she takes my hand. "Thank you." I close my eyes. "Got to stop dropping in like this."
"And, yes, another. I told them about this book earlier, but the knife is new. And it has some mind magic. Knew I was from Festenya. Distracted me before it started stabbing."Paper Cut Instant As an additional cost to cast Paper Cut, you may discard your hand. Paper Cut deals X damage to any target, where X is 3 plus the number of cards discarded to cast it.
hrm, Redirect suggests this should cost more, but Wild Ricochet suggests maybe not much more? hard to say. 7/10
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Jun 10, 2019 6:04:46 GMT
Parasign "I'm not entirely sure myself. Leira did that conversation and I'm currently trying to get the rest of her transcript of that conversation. If you have half an hour, she should be on the way back now that we know where you are. Judging from what she sent me, the other version of you was concerned that your spark had been pulled free from the gate and possibly being killed because of it. Something to do with memories. Important ones she didn't want to lose."I don't like that Pale Reflection says end step and not upkeep, letting you actually get an attack step in with the thing if you feel like. It definitely feels like something that is intended to not do that. 6.5/10 Inverted Memories Instant Until end of turn, if a creature you don't control would enter the battlefield and it wasn't cast, return it to its owner's hand instead. Draw a card. (Hallowed Moonlight, why do you hate so well) cajun "Apparently the 7CI knows about it, but it didn't have a knife before. It has some kind of Thought magic, reading memories and distracting and stuff.""Got it, this seems kinda important for us too. No one but combat casters engage a book with a knife. I'll see if anyone else's seen this book."// If there's nothing else, Hannah gives Karina a quick hug before she gets up to locate Karina's clothes."I wouldn't mind it if you died less often, yeah." Oh, right, she had these pajamas. I'm done crying right? She's okay. I walk back over and sit with her clothes next to Karina. "Are you feeling a bit better? And, like, do you know what healed you? I definitely didn't do that."Paper Cut definitely wants to be rare, and possibly cost another mana, given its ability to randomly 10 something out of nowhere and more likely to deal 4 or 5 at RR instant speed. I like the idea though. 7/10 Stand in the Way Instant Counter target spell with converted mana cost 3 or less. Its controller puts the top three cards of their library into their graveyard. "You can't hurt her. I won't let you hurt her."
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Post by Parasign on Jun 10, 2019 6:59:44 GMT
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Jun 10, 2019 21:29:46 GMT
Parasign "Understood. I'l lead you there myself; Leira "// Seiva lifts her transceiver and contacts Leira as she starts to lead the android VIA to the designated place."Leira, meet myself, Empress VIA, and Master Sara at your meeting place. I've got some aether with me, hopefully it's enough."(And I'll make an attack on you for that) 1UR having a creature pseudo fight itself is probably the best thing this is doing? Which means it's probably costed correctly but not sure about it as a design. 7/10 Aether Displacement Instant Return target creature to its owner's hand. You get .
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blueseclipse
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Post by blueseclipse on Jun 10, 2019 22:02:26 GMT
"Curiosity, wanting to be part of a community beyond planes, some other reasons that you'd need to ask Seiva and Leira about. They're the ones that're directing the whole thing, I'm just here helping it move in that direction."
Darksteel Essence definitely seems fine. I like the C design for "you probably have this in an artifact deck anyhow". 9/10 Offer to the Spirits Legendary Enchantment - Development When Offer to the Spirits has four or more development counters on it, sacrifice it. When you do, each player who developed Offer to the Spirits discards their hand and draws seven cards. Then destroy all artifacts with offering counters on them. Develop 4--Put an offering counter on an artifact you control without an offering counter on it. Took me a moment to figure this one out - it looked ridiculously overpowered before I saw that you can only put offering counters on your own artifacts. As it is... I think it could probably cost less at , or even ? 9/10I nod, and reply, "I see... perhaps I will have the opportunity to speak with them in the future. For now, however, I will leave you to your work here - I was actually seeking out someone else when I saw this place. Farewell, Estova Rei." With that, I depart, leaving the man to his work.
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Post by Parasign on Jun 10, 2019 22:27:14 GMT
WindyDelcarlo cajun Aether Displacement: Not a huge fan of cards that produce energy then do nothing with it, but I get that they're useful and this seems like a perfectly fine example. 8/10.VIA looks back to Karina. "This might be dangerous. But if you'd like to come along, I won't stop you."She turns to follow Seiva to the meeting place.
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