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Post by sdfkjgh on Jun 13, 2019 21:29:57 GMT
Not sure why this wouldn't just be an enchantment with flash. |
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Post by Daij_Djan on Jun 13, 2019 22:18:23 GMT
@ Lady Mapi: As much as I love Scrap tokens, artifact tokens are (like creature ones) not allowed for this challenge. |
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Post by Lady Mapi on Jun 13, 2019 22:24:35 GMT
@ Lady Mapi : As much as I love Scrap tokens, artifact tokens are (like creature ones) not allowed for this challenge. I missed that. I'll think of something that actually qualifies. |
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Post by Flo00 on Jun 14, 2019 4:37:20 GMT
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jrey15
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Player of mostly Standard and EDH. Lover of all things Tribal.
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Favorite Card: Surrak, Dragonclaw
Favorite Set: Theros
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Post by jrey15 on Jun 14, 2019 21:58:14 GMT
Attachment DeletedAttachment DeletedThought this would be a cool way to represent stealing/losing chunks of your mind. Ashiok's Thoughtpurge - U/B U/B When Ashiok's Thoughtpurge enters the battlefield, draw a card. At the beginning of each end step, if an opponent drew two or more cards this turn, that player creates a blue and black enchantment token with shroud named Mind Fragment that has “Your maximum hand size is reduced by one.”. When Ashiok’s Thoughtpurge leaves the battlefield, you draw cards equal to the number of tokens named Mind Fragment on the battlefield, then exile those tokens.
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Post by sdfkjgh on Jun 15, 2019 0:36:40 GMT
Thought this would be a cool way to represent stealing/losing chunks of your mind. Ashiok's Thoughtpurge - U/B U/B When Ashiok's Thoughtpurge enters the battlefield, draw a card. At the beginning of each end step, if an opponent drew two or more cards this turn, that player creates a blue and black enchantment token with shroud named Mind Fragment that has “Your maximum hand size is reduced by one.”. When Ashiok’s Thoughtpurge leaves the battlefield, you draw cards equal to the number of tokens named Mind Fragment on the battlefield, then exile them. In order to avoid ambiguity, you might want to change
then exile them.
to
then exile those tokens.
As it is now, there's the potential for confusion regarding what gets exiled: the tokens, or the cards you drew.
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Post by Aarhg on Jun 15, 2019 1:05:31 GMT
I've decided to scrap my original entry because it was complicating the rules for no particularly good reason. To replace it, I've come up with something nice and simple. A pseudo mana rock.
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jarribas309
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TIL my regular lifestyle is called quarantine
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Favorite Card: The Locust God
Favorite Set: Rise of the Eldrazi
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Post by jarribas309 on Jun 15, 2019 9:52:15 GMT
Away from home and can't render.
Elusive Elemental 2UG
Creature-Elemental
4/3
Sacrifice ~: Create a land token with "T:Add UG" and "T, sacrifice this land: Return ~ from your graveyard to the battlefield tapped"
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Post by Tesagk on Jun 16, 2019 11:02:29 GMT
I made some changes from Reddit feedback. But, unfortunately, I'm still not sure how to get rid of the "all of the tokens poofing at once" issue.
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Post by Daij_Djan on Jun 16, 2019 15:42:45 GMT
@ Tesagk : I didn't really take a look at your entry before, but it seems like Reddit is weird..  Forests have the ability to add mana by default and you can create tapped tokens, so the first sentence can be streamlined to "Create two tapped colorless Forest land tokens." easily. You could add a (They have " : Add  .") reminder text if you want, but at rare I don't think you have to. The sacrifice ability is indeed a difficult one however.. My suggestion for the full card text would be:
Create two tapped colorless Forest land tokens with "Whenever a nontoken land enters the battlefield under your control, sacrifice this unless you sacrificed another token land this turn."
And then add the (: Add ) reminder text purely onto the tokens themselves (if you want to provide a render for them as well). |
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fnorfensuld
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Post by fnorfensuld on Jun 16, 2019 23:35:13 GMT
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Post by Tesagk on Jun 17, 2019 11:02:03 GMT
@ Tesagk : I didn't really take a look at your entry before, but it seems like Reddit is weird.. Forests have the ability to add mana by default and you can create tapped tokens, so the first sentence can be streamlined to "Create two tapped colorless Forest land tokens." easily. You could add a (They have ": Add .") reminder text if you want, but at rare I don't think you have to. The sacrifice ability is indeed a difficult one however.. My suggestion for the full card text would be:
Create two tapped colorless Forest land tokens with "Whenever a nontoken land enters the battlefield under your control, sacrifice this unless you sacrificed another token land this turn."
And then add the (: Add ) reminder text purely onto the tokens themselves (if you want to provide a render for them as well). Updated, thanks. |
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Post by Daij_Djan on Jun 17, 2019 18:03:53 GMT
This thread is now closed, the poll can be found here. And here's the next challenge! |
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"When in doubt, do a common." 
Forests have the ability to add mana by default and you can create 
