styx2319
0/0 Germ
Posts: 7
Favorite Card: Havengul Lich
Favorite Set: Conspiracy: Take the Crown
Color Alignment: Blue, Black
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Post by styx2319 on May 7, 2019 5:43:42 GMT
Faenora, Sage of the Wilds Colors:   CMC:  Types: Creature, Instant, Enchantment Skill Points: 10/10 Valor: 22 Score: 22/30 As you journey through the jungles, whether for your first time or your hundredth, you seem to be lost. However, you press on, until finally you step into a clearing to see a house. This house doesn't seem to belong here, a lone image of civilazation amongst the untamed wilderness. You enter the open door, where the Sage of the Wilds resides.
"What brings you to seek out Faenora?" the young elf asks as she turns to face you.
Faenora's Spells
Guardian of the Lifestream  Creature - Spirit  Defender Whenever ~ blocks a creature, you gain 1 life. 0/4 Score: 8/10 Return Trip ::u:: Instant Return target creature to its owner's hand. Draw a card. Score: 6/10 Price of Business  Instant Counter target spell unless its controller pays  . If that player does, create three colorless Treasure artifact tokens with "  , Sacrifice this artifact: Add one mana of any color." "You want to barter with me? Well, it'll cost you."Score: 8/10 |
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Post by mrlozano on May 7, 2019 17:21:39 GMT
A young guy with a coat approaches the house. He knocks the door, even though it's open. Being polite is always nice, right? "Hello? Is the anyone home? My name is Rixos of House Ker, I'm a merchant."
Jungle Explorer 
Creature - Human Scout
Whenever a player casts a green spell you and that player each gain 1 life.
"There must be something between this leaves..."
3/2
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styx2319
0/0 Germ
Posts: 7
Favorite Card: Havengul Lich
Favorite Set: Conspiracy: Take the Crown
Color Alignment: Blue, Black
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Post by styx2319 on May 7, 2019 17:50:53 GMT
Faenora nods in greeting as you approach. "Welcome to my home. I am Faenora, how may I assist you?"Guardian of the Lifestream Creature - Spirit Defender Whenever ~ blocks a creature, you gain 1 life. 0/4 mrlozano: Jungle ExplorerOverall solid design for common. Not quite there on the vanilla test, and a situational upside. I like the flavor as well, it fits the theme of my board well.
Score: 8/10
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Post by mrlozano on May 7, 2019 18:26:46 GMT
Faenora nods in greeting as you approach. "Welcome to my home. I am Faenora, how may I assist you?"Guardian of the Lifestream Creature - Spirit Defender Whenever ~ blocks a creature, you gain 1 life. 0/4  Legendary Creature - Human Citizen  When ~ enters the battlefield you lose 1 life and you draw a card. If it didn't enter from you hand you lose 1 life and draw two cards instead. When ~ blocks or becomes blocked, exile it. Return it to the battlefield under its owner's control at the beginning of the next end step. 1/1 Guardian of the Lifestream: Nice common defender. Could it cost 1G? I'm not sure. 8/10 |
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styx2319
0/0 Germ
Posts: 7
Favorite Card: Havengul Lich
Favorite Set: Conspiracy: Take the Crown
Color Alignment: Blue, Black
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Post by styx2319 on May 7, 2019 19:02:37 GMT
Faenora smiles and gestures toward the door. "Regretably, I have no coin with which to buy. However, I can show you the way back."Return Trip Instant Return target creature to its owner's hand. Draw a card. mrlozano: Rixos, the Lost
An interesting design. Inspired by Fblthp, obviously. It protects itself in combat and draws you cards, but still easily taken care of with removal. I think it's a decent design, but something feels off about it to me, I just cant pinpoint it.
Score: 7/10
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Post by mrlozano on May 7, 2019 20:52:26 GMT
Faenora smiles and gestures toward the door. "Regretably, I have no coin with which to buy. However, I can show you the way back."Return Trip Instant Return target creature to its owner's hand. Draw a card. Instant Create a token that's a copy of target creature with converted mana cost 2 or less you control. "Let me repeat my offer." -Rixos KerReturn Trip: You nice old blue bounce spell (I seriously mean the old part, it's older than me, it's actaully Repulse, from Invasion.). The card is fine, but it exists in canon magic. I dunno, 5/10? Im giving you 6/10 because it answers pretty well my card. |
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styx2319
0/0 Germ
Posts: 7
Favorite Card: Havengul Lich
Favorite Set: Conspiracy: Take the Crown
Color Alignment: Blue, Black
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Post by styx2319 on May 8, 2019 3:03:13 GMT
"I may have something, but I may not. That depends on what you seek and what you're willing to offer in exchange."Price of Business. Instant Counter target spell unless its controller pays . If that player does, create three colorless Treasure artifact tokens with " , Sacrifice this artifact: Add one mana of any color." "You want to barter with me? Well, it'll cost you."
mrlozano Rixos' Persistance
Blue and red are the colors of cloning, not white. I feel like this is probably a bit too much out of color, although the 2 CMC clause does make sense if white were to copy a creature. That said, if it were to be made in white, I'd say you costed it well.
Score: 5/10
Also, I didn't catch that about Repulse, but a functional reprint isn't always a bad thing, right? Lol
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Post by mrlozano on May 8, 2019 11:36:18 GMT
"I may have something, but I may not. That depends on what you seek and what you're willing to offer in exchange."Price of Business. Instant Counter target spell unless its controller pays . If that player does, create three colorless Treasure artifact tokens with " , Sacrifice this artifact: Add one mana of any color." "You want to barter with me? Well, it'll cost you." Legendary Planeswalker - Rixos Whenever a card is put into a graveyard, if it didn't enter from the battlefield, create a colorless Treasure arftiact token with " , Sacrifice this artifact: Add one mana of any color."  : You gain 1 life for each artifact you control.  : Return target nonland card with converted mana cost X from your graveyard to your hand.  I also want that sweet money.Price of Business: I'm not sure if being able to cast a second copy with the mana obtained from the Treasures is a big deal. Anyways, this is pretty neat, because it presents kind of a win-win situation for you. I think it should be uncommon? Not really sure about that. 8/10 |
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Post by cajun on May 9, 2019 1:07:47 GMT
"Oooh, I didn't even know we had a jungle," a young girl says as she comes near. She stops for a moment to consider, then realizes if she gets lost, she can always planeswalk home. She wanders in to see what there is to find.
Karina, the Explorer  Legendary Creature - Human Scout Whenever another permanent enters the battlefield, if it doesn't have the same name as another permanent on the battlefield, you may pay  . If you do, draw a card and put a +1/+1 counter on Karina, the Explorer. "Oooh, neat!"2/2
(can have her get lost or stumble onto the cabin or run into some wildlife or w/e)
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styx2319
0/0 Germ
Posts: 7
Favorite Card: Havengul Lich
Favorite Set: Conspiracy: Take the Crown
Color Alignment: Blue, Black
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Post by styx2319 on May 9, 2019 2:56:37 GMT
"I live here. I'm doing res-" Faenora held a finger to signify the need for silence. "Someone else is coming, the bartering will have to wait for another time."Watcher of the Woods Creature - Beast  Haste When ~ enters the battlefield, you may have ot fight tarfet creature. 4/4 (This card should be able to respond to both Rixos and Karina) mrlozano Rixos, Wandering Merchant
Ugh. Rare PW using new static tech from WAR. Making me think here on analysis lol. Ok so, I think the wording on the static would be "...if it wasn't put there from the battlefield..." Either way, its an interesting ability to have on a Walker. Overall, I think it's fine as far as power and balance.
Score: 9/10
cajun Karina, the Explorer
So, I'm thinking the ability triggering off a permanent could be ok in those colors, but the effect feels more Simic than Izzet to me overall. However, in the right environment, I think this is an acceptable bend and could see print.
Score: 8/10
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Post by cajun on May 9, 2019 9:27:50 GMT
"Oh, hello!" she says as she spots an elf. She stands her spear up to show she means no harm. "I'm Karina. Have you been here long? I thought I had seen everywhere here but I keep being surprised."
Shifting Landscapes Enchantment Whenever a nontoken land enters the battlefield under your control, you may create a token that's a copy of it. If you do, sacrifice that land and that token at the beginning of the next end step.
not sure if the watcher is showing up to fight me or faenora's showing up like the text suggests. will redo ifmeant to be the former. Watcher of the Woods - extra density on Somberwald Stag for +0/+1 and haste? maybe workable, quite the battering ram for limited tho. 7/10
(btw incase you didn't know you don't need to tag team attacks like this, is perfectly fine to have them happening separately)
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on May 9, 2019 16:52:43 GMT
// A human male with a slender elf-like figure and dark hair wanders through the endless jungle, carrying a light-looking backpack with him.
Where'd I even go? If I keep going this way I'll get out eventually right? I'm definitely lost. Ugh, I'm gonna have to ask Seiva to get me out of here, aren't I? It's been, like, a day.
// The human pulls a bottle of water out of his bag and checks the presence of the canister of aether. Access to spells? Check.
Oh, hey, there's a house there. Weird. Wonder who lives all the way out there.
// The human lightly taps the door while peering inside, checking to see if everything is alright. He is visibly surprised to see someone inside, and his caution seems to fall away as he leans against the door frame.
"Huh, you're cute," I offer with a smile to the elf lady. "I'm Estova, talking to people for the Entelan Eternity Project for Interplanar... Development and Cooperation, that's it. What're you doing out here so far from everyone else?"
Romantic Encounter Instant Gain control of target creature until end of turn. Untap it. It gains haste until end of turn. You lose life equal to that target's converted mana cost. (In fact, this might make more sense to accept and/or fight off separately, but if you'd like them to be grouped up feel free to cut him off wherever; he'll say the same things if he finds Faenora somewhere that's not a house.)
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Post by mrlozano on May 11, 2019 12:27:14 GMT
"I live here. I'm doing res-" Faenora held a finger to signify the need for silence. "Someone else is coming, the bartering will have to wait for another time."Watcher of the Woods Creature - Beast Haste When ~ enters the battlefield, you may have ot fight tarfet creature. 4/4 Enchantment Noncreature spells your opponents cast cost more to cast. "Not a single word."Watcher of the Woods: Cajun already rated this card so... |
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