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Post by gurfafflekins on Jun 21, 2019 0:05:56 GMT
pacifistwestwoman Vague Description: I like the name off the bat, I enjoy how it is an idea personified. I think it's a fair clone, but might be able to be slightly cheaper, looking at Clone or Clever Impersonator, but at it actually fits at 4, and being a situational copy (as 2/2 isn't exactly powerful in stats), it looks pretty great. Solid Quicksilver Gargantuan effect. 10/10. cajun Bell looks at the man and squints with a look of distrust. "Right." he says. He gives a glare. Only spoke in his voice. It had to be that woman. His hand unconsciously drifted to Callie, petting her scaly back. "So, a doppelganger that looks just like you used my voice to threaten you." he repeats. Silence."If you've nothing else about it, get out of my sight."Impatient Dismissal Instant Target creature and all other creatures with the same name as that creature get -4/-4 until end of turn. Never try a demon's patience.>Game is about interactivity and playing characters >Picks character who doesn't like talking to people
Why did I do this to myself?
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Jun 21, 2019 14:42:52 GMT
"I know it sounds stupid..." Xander stares off into the distance for a moment, then his focus returns. "If you're really set on me leaving, then I can. But I'm sure we both have questions we could use help answering."Bell feels a potentially familiar sensation as his thoughts are searched. "I would be more than willing to help you find this woman."Impatient Dismissal: Seems a bit expensive if there are no creatures that share a name, but it would be a beautiful sideboard against token decks. 9/10 >Has an idea for how to keep Bell's attention >Requires being able to read thoughts, I'll have to think of something else. >Oh yeah I'm in blue
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Post by gurfafflekins on Jun 21, 2019 23:05:09 GMT
pacifistwestwoman Persuasive Artist: Well, Gitaxian Probe is pretty good (or was - I've fallen out of the modern scene a little. I think it was modern?), but I don't think it was terribly busted maybe, then again, mostly the phyrexian. Considering Telepathy exists, this is fine. 9/10. Perhaps the man had a point. Being so rash had gotten the best of him before. He opened his mouth to speak, whenA deafening crash of thunder, and Bell's sword was out, pointed at the man's heart. His mind became fortified, and images of flames were all Xander could find. Clear the Mind Sorcery Discard your hand, then draw three cards. Tactical Imperator
Needle Field Enchantment Whenever a nontoken creature enters the battlefield, ~ deals 1 damage to it. , sacrifice ~: It deals 2 damage to target creature. "I suggest you leave right now, if you know what's good for your health." he says, applying a little pressure to the sword.However, before the walls went up, Xander could feel one thing from his mind: burning hatred for mind readers.So, in case you never read how Tactical Imperator works - it's a perk that lets me spend from my main mana pool to attack/defend with a second card. You rate both of them, and then I'll take the average. For instance, if I got a 6/10 and a 8/10, 6+8 = 14, 14/2 = 7, so I would take a total of 7 valor for this defense. Hopefully it's higher though
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Jun 22, 2019 1:15:56 GMT
Xander stares at the flames for a moment, before backing away from Bell. "Point taken."He turns his back and begins walking away. "If you ever change your mind, let me know."So, you are free to let me/Xander leave, but if you choose not to, then this is the card I'm "attacking" with. Clear the Mind: "Discard your hand" is such an interesting thing, imo. Especially in decks where you're likely to run out of cards in your hand... And past that, "pay 4, draw 3" is a pretty good ratio. 10/10 Needle Field: And here's the part of red that I hate playing against... it's good though. The sac ability is a nice touch. 9/10
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Post by gurfafflekins on Jun 22, 2019 18:11:47 GMT
pacifistwestwoman Back to the Eternities: Final Reward says okay. Even with the planeswalker clause(s) tacked on (the life one feels a little weird), it's probably fine. 9/10. "Do not try that trick, and maybe we can try this again some other time." he says, sword pointed in his direction until he's out of sight.Good riddance.Magical Mists Enchantment - Aura Enchant permanent Enchanted permanent has hexproof. Why not both?
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Post by gurfafflekins on Jun 22, 2019 18:39:32 GMT
Bell finds a minute to sit at Aiden's house, as Callie naps on the bed. He sits outside on the porch, gazing at the giant monument nearby. He stands up and quietly approaches, looking at it. The man must've done something incredible to deserve this thing. Or something despicable. Could never tell with these types. Either way, Bell felt a small hope grow in him. From what, he didn't know. But something felt good about today. Walking back towards the small home, he looked in to see Callie still sleeping. As he turned back around, his attention turned to the plant pot beside the door step. He took out a flask from his coat and began to water it. It was making good progress. He bent down to look at the plant, seeing the water falling from leaf to leaf to dirt, cascading downwards.
Bell has unlocked Dragons of Tarkir as a free Call to Aid set! Bell has unlocked Dragon's Maze as a free Call to Aid set! Bell has unlocked Shadowmoor as a free Call to Aid set! Bell has unlocked Aiden's Signature Spellbook as a free Call to Aid set! Bell has spent 1 skill point to unlock Cascade as a keyword!
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Jun 22, 2019 22:02:41 GMT
Card rating time! gurfafflekins: This card seems like either it should be cheaper or it should be a common. Maybe both. Or maybe I underestimate hexproof. 8/10 cajun: (thank you for the reminder) Your card seems good, but it really depends on what cards you’re copying. Not that that’s necessarily bad. 8.5–> 9/10
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Post by Neottolemo on Jun 23, 2019 20:05:02 GMT
Bell's life momentarily gets a little less quiet as he and Callie find out that the sky has been crowded by vampire sirens all of a sudden. One of them comes for their lives, singing a war cry at the top of her lungs.
Dreadsong Aggressor Creature - Vampire Siren Flying, menace Dreadsong Aggressor can't block.
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Post by cajun on Jun 23, 2019 21:57:35 GMT
Bell's life momentarily gets a little less quiet as he and Callie find out that the sky has been crowded by vampire sirens all of a sudden. One of them comes for their lives, singing a war cry at the top of her lungs. A freezing wind flies by the siren as she descends, aiming to slow, not freeze. The annoying cryomancer lands on the ground for just a moment to look to Bell. "Don't say I never did anything for you," she says before disappearing again on the wind.The Winds Are Always WatchingSchemeWhen you set this scheme in motion, pay any amount of . Create a snow 1/1 white Elemental creature token with flying for each spent this way. Paying to assist Bell against the siren with a blocker!
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Post by gurfafflekins on Jun 24, 2019 1:01:00 GMT
Neottolemo Dreadsong Aggressor: Flying + Menace is a big oof for a common 2/3. Can't block is a fair drawback but usually this isn't gonna be blocked easy either. Then again, Tormented Soul (and friends) are kinda like this. 9/10. cajun Bell watches the siren approach, as Callie gets behind his back. "I wanted no part in this. But here we go anyway." he mutters. He draws his sword and waits, before looking to the cryomancer. As she vanishes, he growls. "I never asked for your help." he says, pointing his sword at the aggressor, and running his free hand over it. The sword crackles, before shooting out a lightning bolt at the attacking creature.Lightning Blade Artifact - Equipment Equipped creature gets +3/+0 has " , Unattach ~: This creature deals 3 damage to target creature." Equip Whether the attack hits or misses, Bell and Callie vanish into a bolt of lightning, and...(Check your board)
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Post by Neottolemo on Jun 24, 2019 21:41:43 GMT
Neottolemo Dreadsong Aggressor: Flying + Menace is a big oof for a common 2/3. Can't block is a fair drawback but usually this isn't gonna be blocked easy either. Then again, Tormented Soul (and friends) are kinda like this. 9/10. cajun Bell watches the siren approach, as Callie gets behind his back. "I wanted no part in this. But here we go anyway." he mutters. He draws his sword and waits, before looking to the cryomancer. As she vanishes, he growls. "I never asked for your help." he says, pointing his sword at the aggressor, and running his free hand over it. The sword crackles, before shooting out a lightning bolt at the attacking creature.Lightning Blade Artifact - Equipment Equipped creature gets +3/+0 has " , Unattach ~: This creature deals 3 damage to target creature." Equip Whether the attack hits or misses, Bell and Callie vanish into a bolt of lightning, and...(Check your board) Lightning Blade: Repeatable removal is always worrying but even though I'm not 100% sure I think that at the current cost it could be fine, yes. 8.5/10 cajun The Winds Are: This is fine for a scheme, 9/10
The siren gets taken by surprise by the lighting...
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Post by Fleur on Jun 24, 2019 22:27:01 GMT
Fleur Mysterious Sentinel Dispatch: Very weird enchantment. I kinda like it though. 9/10. Bell drops the book and stands back, sword at the ready in a flash as the sentinels appear, standing in the doorway. He glances around and takes the time to look at the book - never use disenchantment spells - before keeping his eyes on the sentinels. "I understand the pain of imprisonment. But whatever you're doing is not helping your case." he says sternly, and at this point Callie is starting to get curious from inside. "Stay. Back." he says to everyone on either side of him.Spellblade Artifact - Equipment : Equipped creature gains trample until end of turn. : Whenever equipped creature deals combat damage to a player this turn, destroy target artifact or enchantment that player controls. Equipped creature gets +1/+1. Equip I figure I'm always gonna get a 7 at most from you so it's where I do my weird designs now The book closes. This wasn't going to work. CARD: This I like. You're getting a 9/10 for this one.
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Post by Popcornia on Jul 2, 2019 16:10:23 GMT
gurfafflekins An axe struck the wood of a table, cutting through gristle and scale before it was lifted again, brought once more on the offending meat. Wielding the axe was a shirtless man, tattooed, one of several at their campsite dedicated to one purpose. Gutting, cutting, and harvesting the remains of a dead dragon. Around the camp, several more men were busy putting a blade or saw to various parts of their latest catch. One man had already cut off one of the majestic horns of their quarry, and was digging into the second. A third of their party, a woman, was digging into the guts of the beast, likely poking for a supposedly powerful organ that would sell for some exorbitant amount of money, or for choice meat. Yet another scale scaling the beast, each hefty piece of the former dragon's hide thick and pliable, useful for armor or shields. Of course, they were focused on the task at hand, and not anyone who might be watching or approaching their operation. {Attack Card - Krenkeep Hunters}
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Post by gurfafflekins on Jul 5, 2019 20:16:38 GMT
Popcornia Krenkeep Hunters: I feel like this might be on the path to Ravenous Chupacabra, which isn't necessarily bad but iffy. 8/10. A man and a young woman enter the camp grounds, and the gruff man clears his throat to get their attention. He looks at the dragon being cut up and handled. "...Tough catch?" he asks, giving a smirk, as the woman stays near him, looking around nervously.Join the Hunt Sorcery Target creature gets -1/-1 until end of turn. Untap up to one target land.
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Post by mrlozano on Jul 6, 2019 18:54:24 GMT
After the fight with Lindri.The cats approach Bell. "Meowster Bell..." "YOU CAN TRANSFORM INTO A DRAGON! TEACH MEOW!!!" "Brother! We were going to be polite!" "Right... PLEASE!!!"p Draconic Apprentice Creature - Cat Wizard Haste : Until end of turn ~ gets +3/+3, gains flying and becomes a Dragon. 2/2
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Post by Neottolemo on Jul 6, 2019 19:06:54 GMT
The horn that's already cut off just sort of takes a turn 45 degrees turn towards the sky and starts leisurely floating its way in that direction. Vern is also there in the camp, though who knows when they actually first showed up there. The teen watches the horn fly with ever so slightly furrowed brow. "That's weird. Dude. Why is it even doing that?"
Course of the Past (‽)(‽) Sorcery Put the top two cards of your library into your graveyard, then target permanent you control becomes a creature with flying and power and toughness each equal to the number of cards in your graveyard until end of turn.
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Post by gurfafflekins on Jul 6, 2019 19:32:46 GMT
mrlozano Draconic Apprentice: This is a really solid card. 10/10. The cats approach Bell, with a young woman tending to him. He grunts as they approach, and it's evident that on his arms are heavy burns and seared flesh, before he rapidly rolls up his sleeves to cover this. "...Trust me. You don't want to know how. Not that I could teach you anyway." he says, the woman giving him a concerned look. Much of his visible skin shows evidence of burns and injury. He seems to barely move, and if he does, the movement is stiff and pained.Twisted Refusal Sorcery Target creature gets -6/-6 until end of turn. "I will never teach you. You are not worth my time as a student. Instead, you will serve. And be obedient." - The Tormentor--- @neo - will wait for popcornia
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Jul 8, 2019 2:36:24 GMT
gurfafflekins mrlozanoXander runs up to the area, then switches to a calm walk upon seeing Bell and the cats. "Are you guys all okay... I guess not." He says after noticing Bell's bandages. "Anything I can do to help?"Attack?:
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Post by mrlozano on Jul 8, 2019 10:48:03 GMT
The cats approach Bell, with a young woman tending to him. He grunts as they approach, and it's evident that on his arms are heavy burns and seared flesh, before he rapidly rolls up his sleeves to cover this. "...Trust me. You don't want to know how. Not that I could teach you anyway." he says, the woman giving him a concerned look. Much of his visible skin shows evidence of burns and injury. He seems to barely move, and if he does, the movement is stiff and pained.Twisted Refusal Sorcery Target creature gets -6/-6 until end of turn. "I will never teach you. You are not worth my time as a student. Instead, you will serve. And be obedient." - The Tormentor also pacifistwestwoman Doer doesn't even give a look to Xander. "Why not? Trust me, I really want to." Michi touches one of Bell's burns. His paw glows in a light blue tone. "This should make it hurt less, meowster." Then he turns to Xander. "I think we haven't been formally presented. I'm Michi, what's your name?"
Boosting Glow Instant Target creature gets +6/+6 until end of turn. "I'm worthy." -Neheb
Twisted Refusal: With Ob Nixilis's Cruelty and Murder at common I think this could be also common, but it's very powerful removal. 8/10
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Post by gurfafflekins on Jul 8, 2019 20:31:30 GMT
pacifistwestwoman Ensure Safety: I feel like this would mostly be used as a white cantrip. 2 life and maybe 4 just doesn't feel that great? Then again, as a commander player, probably undervaluing 4 life at instant speed for cheap. 8/10. mrlozano Boosting Glow: Neat upscaled Titanic Growth. 9/10. Bell rips his arm away from Michi's touch, standing, and in obvious pain. His eyes glow red. "Dad!" the girl exclaims at his sudden movement, attempting to hold his arm to restrain him, but he pushes her away roughly and turns to Doer. "You want to, do you? Then you want to be enslaved?" he snarled, draconic horns growing from his head.
"You want to be treated like a pet? To have your own thoughts twisted against you? To be captured, and forced to transform like a fucking party trick?" he says, making a vicious and angry snarl. The girl shrinks back, and her cheeks redden, tears slowly falling down them.
Bell takes steps towards Doer, his hands transforming into scaled claws. "You want to turn into a dragon to be 'cool'? Is that it? So you can fight better? You're better off as the cat you are, Doer. This is a curse, not a blessing." he says, and dark storm clouds began to brew overhead, as thunder rumbles.
The Enslaved Dragon Enchantment - Saga (As this Saga enters and after your draw step, add a lore counter. Sacrifice after III.) I - The Enslaved Dragon deals 4 damage to target creature or planeswalker. II - Destroy target creature. III - Create Belnaar Inciac, a legendary 6/6 red and black Dragon creature token with flying, first strike and haste.Resurfacing Memories Sorcery Target player loses 3 life. Proliferate. "Sometimes I look at you, and all I see are what those heartless bastards did to me. I'm sorry." - Bell to Callie
(not even acknowledging Xander in the RP part is intentional - Bell's fucking L I V I D.) I deals with the life gain, II destroys your creature with proliferate yeah it's sorcery shuddup.
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Jul 8, 2019 21:40:39 GMT
BELL.Xander is not speaking, but his voice can be heard by everyone around him. His eyes glow blue. CALM YOURSELF, BEFORE YOU DO SOMETHING YOU REGRET.The thunder stops, but the dark clouds remain. A subtle white aura begins at Xander's shoulder, wraps around his arm, and flows into a thin cloud that surrounds Bell. (assuming he lets it get that far.) Xander's eyes stop glowing, turning back to their regular shade of brown. "You're still injured. Why don't you sit back down so we can treat you?"Forced Calm
Instant Prevent all combat damage that would be dealt this turn. Until your next upkeep, creatures can't attack. "Do not mistake inaction for weakness."The Enslaved Dragon: It makes me really sad that no Sagas have been printed since Dominaria because I really like them. This one in particular is wonderful. 10/10 Resurfacing Memories: As much as I can enjoy proliferate, it's a dangerous mechanic to have in general, and I don't think it fits with black. 7/10 Xander understands that he's being ignored but would prefer if Bell doesn't murder the cats and/or his daughter.
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Post by mrlozano on Jul 8, 2019 22:26:34 GMT
Bell rips his arm away from Michi's touch, standing, and in obvious pain. His eyes glow red. "Dad!" the girl exclaims at his sudden movement, attempting to hold his arm to restrain him, but he pushes her away roughly and turns to Doer. "You want to, do you? Then you want to be enslaved?" he snarled, draconic horns growing from his head.
"You want to be treated like a pet? To have your own thoughts twisted against you? To be captured, and forced to transform like a fucking party trick?" he says, making a vicious and angry snarl. The girl shrinks back, and her cheeks redden, tears slowly falling down them.
Bell takes steps towards Doer, his hands transforming into scaled claws. "You want to turn into a dragon to be 'cool'? Is that it? So you can fight better? You're better off as the cat you are, Doer. This is a curse, not a blessing." he says, and dark storm clouds began to brew overhead, as thunder rumbles.
The Enslaved Dragon Enchantment - Saga (As this Saga enters and after your draw step, add a lore counter. Sacrifice after III.) I - The Enslaved Dragon deals 4 damage to target creature or planeswalker. II - Destroy target creature. III - Create Belnaar Inciac, a legendary 6/6 red and black Dragon creature token with flying, first strike and haste.Resurfacing Memories Sorcery Target player loses 3 life. Proliferate. "Sometimes I look at you, and all I see are what those heartless bastards did to me. I'm sorry." - Bell to Callie
(not even acknowledging Xander in the RP part is intentional - Bell's fucking L I V I D.) I deals with the life gain, II destroys your creature with proliferate yeah it's sorcery shuddup. (Doer, Rejected Apprentice) "Meow." I withdraw the Weapon, almost by instinct. "Sorry, meowster. I meown, that sounds like serious stuff." The weapon becomes a halberd. With it in hand I move swiftly, standing between Bell and Michi. I'm close to the girl. She is scared. And that makes me worry. "Alright. Do you think we can solve this like civilized meown (and cats), or you want to see meow weapon closer to your face?"
Doer Unflinching Legendary Creature - Cat Warrior Hexproof, vigilance, reach Whenever ~ deals combat damage to a player, remove all counters from that player and from all permanents they control. 4/4
The Enslaved Dragon: Great. It conveys the flavor of the story or at least what we currently know) very well, I think. 10/10 Resurfacing Memories: I really see this in a return to New Phyrexia. 8/10
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Jul 9, 2019 2:28:05 GMT
gurfafflekins*Changing my rating on your second card to 9/10. 1. I forgot that Phyrexia used proliferate for -1/-1 and poison counters before War of the Spark used it for +1/+1 counters and superfriends. 2. I forgot that Sagas benefit from proliferate.
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3/3 Beast
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Post by blueseclipse on Jul 11, 2019 4:24:20 GMT
Drawn by the sudden storm, Khon approaches the small gathering. Seeing Bell standing there, clearly angered and seemingly partway through a draconic transformation while Doer holds out his own weapon towards the man, he frowns, hastening his approach as he sees the others there. Reaching the group, he says to Doer, "I will ask you once to lower your weapon, Doer - and explain what is going on here. While your assistance in the battle against Lindri was appreciated, I still have not forgotten our initial meeting, after all, and I hope that you did not simply choose to instigate a fight with Bell for your own amusement." As he speaks, his arm moves towards his own weapon, though he does not yet draw it. Transmuter's Sigil Artifact Whenever one or more counters are removed from another permanent or player, put that many charge counters on Transmuting Obelisk. Remove a charge counter from Transmuter's Sigil: Gain 1 life. Remove three charge counters from Transmuter's Sigil: Add . Remove all charge counters from Transmuter's Sigil and sacrifice it: For each five counters removed this way, exile the top card of your library. Until end of turn, you may play that card. (Assisting Bell in this instance.)
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Post by gurfafflekins on Jul 11, 2019 20:41:20 GMT
pacifistwestwoman Forced Calm: Neat. Probably a bit good for uncommon though, though the fact a white fog exists makes the additional thing cost like which is probably alright. 9/10. mrlozano Doer Unflinching: Talk about unflinching - that's a hefty punishment for letting something with hexproof/vigilance hit, but only against certain decks which makes it different. Maybe cut off the vigilance? 9/10. blueseclipse Bell shoots Xander a harsh glare. The thunder continues to boom on, whether this child seems to like it or not. A spear of lightning forms in his hands, as his sword has been broken. He turns to Doer and Khon. "All of you. Get the Hell away from my daughter. Now." he says, slamming the spear into the ground. Nothing happens, but it makes a point. Bell's hands have returned to human form, but his eyes continue to glow, and his horns remain. Callie looks very downcast and apologetic, especially trying to apologize to Michi with her face.Call to Aid because I can't think of anything else: Detection TowerWeaponized Lightning Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature Enchanted creature gets +3/+0. , Sacrifice ~: ~ deals 4 damage to any target. The dragon man seems infuriated. One wrong move - or even the right one - is probably prone to setting him off again. "C-come on, dad, let's just--" "No, Callie. Stay out of this. Get inside that house."
Callie starts to turn away, before turning back and refusing to move.
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Jul 12, 2019 3:00:24 GMT
Xander's eyes show a deep, emotional thought. An uncertainty. This... has turned into a difficult situation...He backs away from Bell and Callie, moving towards Michi, and makes eye contact with Doer, suggesting that he do the same. "Can everyone put their weapons away?" He asks, addressed to Doer, Bell, and Khon. His eyes meet Bell's. The aura surrounding Bell retreats back to Xander. "None of us want to hurt you, none of us want to hurt Callie. We've all had enough fighting for now. Can we agree on that?" I wasn't trying to threaten you, Bell. I was just trying to help.Plea for Peace Instant Prevent all combat damage that would be dealt to target creature or planeswalker you control this turn. You gain that much life. Weaponized Lightning: 7/10. Really not sure how I feel about this. 4 mana and sac seems like a bit much for 4 damage, but I can't think of a good way to make it cheaper without also lowering the damage. Maybe 3 damage would be better, because it would match the buff... Transmuter's Obelisk and/or Sigil: 7/10 because planeswalkers. If you make it "player or nonplaneswalker permanent" then it's fine.
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Post by mrlozano on Jul 12, 2019 21:28:59 GMT
pacifistwestwoman Forced Calm: Neat. Probably a bit good for uncommon though, though the fact a white fog exists makes the additional thing cost like which is probably alright. 9/10. mrlozano Doer Unflinching: Talk about unflinching - that's a hefty punishment for letting something with hexproof/vigilance hit, but only against certain decks which makes it different. Maybe cut off the vigilance? 9/10. blueseclipse Bell shoots Xander a harsh glare. The thunder continues to boom on, whether this child seems to like it or not. A spear of lightning forms in his hands, as his sword has been broken. He turns to Doer and Khon. "All of you. Get the Hell away from my daughter. Now." he says, slamming the spear into the ground. Nothing happens, but it makes a point. Bell's hands have returned to human form, but his eyes continue to glow, and his horns remain. Callie looks very downcast and apologetic, especially trying to apologize to Michi with her face.Call to Aid because I can't think of anything else: Detection TowerWeaponized Lightning Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature Enchanted creature gets +3/+0. , Sacrifice ~: ~ deals 4 damage to any target. The dragon man seems infuriated. One wrong move - or even the right one - is probably prone to setting him off again. "C-come on, dad, let's just--" "No, Callie. Stay out of this. Get inside that house."
Callie starts to turn away, before turning back and refusing to move.
blueseclipse pacifistwestwoman(Michi, the Cat who always ends in fights against his will) I back, like a lot of distance. A quick look to girl will have to be enough apology for this situation. I make a swift paw movement, enhnancing Doer's senses but reppressing his urges to fight. I hope it's enough.Michi, Pacific Supporter Legendary Planeswalker - Michi At the beginning of your end step, if you control no tapped creatures, you gain 3 life. : Put a +1/+1 on target creature. It can't attack or block until your next upkeep. (Yup, I'm stealing your thing. It looks SO cool.) (Doer, ready to make a 3v1) Alright. Stop the lighting, please. I should say this to you, but you know, I don't like when my fur gets burned. "Alright meowster, machine guy and boy. If we all agree to put down our weapons, we all can leave this situation alive and unharmed. If not..." I wanted to jump to that meowstard's face, but instead I offered him a peace treaty. Michi, meowstard.
Last Warning
Sorcery Return target creature from your graveyard to the battlefield with two +1/+1 counters on it. It gains haste and idnestructible until your next upkeep. Weaponized Lightning: Cool Aura, seems playable. 8/10Transmuter's Sigil: This interacting wit walkers worries me a bit, but the effects are not too strong. 8/10
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3/3 Beast
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Post by blueseclipse on Jul 13, 2019 3:00:50 GMT
pacifistwestwoman Forced Calm: Neat. Probably a bit good for uncommon though, though the fact a white fog exists makes the additional thing cost like which is probably alright. 9/10. mrlozano Doer Unflinching: Talk about unflinching - that's a hefty punishment for letting something with hexproof/vigilance hit, but only against certain decks which makes it different. Maybe cut off the vigilance? 9/10. blueseclipse Bell shoots Xander a harsh glare. The thunder continues to boom on, whether this child seems to like it or not. A spear of lightning forms in his hands, as his sword has been broken. He turns to Doer and Khon. "All of you. Get the Hell away from my daughter. Now." he says, slamming the spear into the ground. Nothing happens, but it makes a point. Bell's hands have returned to human form, but his eyes continue to glow, and his horns remain. Callie looks very downcast and apologetic, especially trying to apologize to Michi with her face.Call to Aid because I can't think of anything else: Detection TowerWeaponized Lightning Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature Enchanted creature gets +3/+0. , Sacrifice ~: ~ deals 4 damage to any target. The dragon man seems infuriated. One wrong move - or even the right one - is probably prone to setting him off again. "C-come on, dad, let's just--" "No, Callie. Stay out of this. Get inside that house."
Callie starts to turn away, before turning back and refusing to move. Xander's eyes show a deep, emotional thought. An uncertainty. This... has turned into a difficult situation...He backs away from Bell and Callie, moving towards Michi, and makes eye contact with Doer, suggesting that he do the same. "Can everyone put their weapons away?" He asks, addressed to Doer, Bell, and Khon. His eyes meet Bell's. The aura surrounding Bell retreats back to Xander. "None of us want to hurt you, none of us want to hurt Callie. We've all had enough fighting for now. Can we agree on that?" I wasn't trying to threaten you, Bell. I was just trying to help.Plea for Peace Instant Prevent all combat damage that would be dealt to target creature or planeswalker you control this turn. You gain that much life. Weaponized Lightning: 7/10. Really not sure how I feel about this. 4 mana and sac seems like a bit much for 4 damage, but I can't think of a good way to make it cheaper without also lowering the damage. Maybe 3 damage would be better, because it would match the buff... Transmuter's Obelisk and/or Sigil: 7/10 because planeswalkers. If you make it "player or nonplaneswalker permanent" then it's fine. I like it. I kind of wish I could make nice, simple commons like this - I almost want to steal it for a set I'm working on. 10/10.pacifistwestwoman Forced Calm: Neat. Probably a bit good for uncommon though, though the fact a white fog exists makes the additional thing cost like which is probably alright. 9/10. mrlozano Doer Unflinching: Talk about unflinching - that's a hefty punishment for letting something with hexproof/vigilance hit, but only against certain decks which makes it different. Maybe cut off the vigilance? 9/10. blueseclipse Bell shoots Xander a harsh glare. The thunder continues to boom on, whether this child seems to like it or not. A spear of lightning forms in his hands, as his sword has been broken. He turns to Doer and Khon. "All of you. Get the Hell away from my daughter. Now." he says, slamming the spear into the ground. Nothing happens, but it makes a point. Bell's hands have returned to human form, but his eyes continue to glow, and his horns remain. Callie looks very downcast and apologetic, especially trying to apologize to Michi with her face.Call to Aid because I can't think of anything else: Detection TowerWeaponized Lightning Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature Enchanted creature gets +3/+0. , Sacrifice ~: ~ deals 4 damage to any target. The dragon man seems infuriated. One wrong move - or even the right one - is probably prone to setting him off again. "C-come on, dad, let's just--" "No, Callie. Stay out of this. Get inside that house."
Callie starts to turn away, before turning back and refusing to move.
blueseclipse pacifistwestwoman (Michi, the Cat who always ends in fights against his will) I back, like a lot of distance. A quick look to girl will have to be enough apology for this situation. I make a swift paw movement, enhnancing Doer's senses but reppressing his urges to fight. I hope it's enough.Michi, Pacific Supporter Legendary Planeswalker - Michi At the beginning of your end step, if you control no tapped creatures, you gain 3 life. : Put a +1/+1 on target creature. It can't attack or block until your next upkeep. (Yup, I'm stealing your thing. It looks SO cool.) (Doer, ready to make a 3v1) Alright. Stop the lighting, please. I should say this to you, but you know, I don't like when my fur gets burned. "Alright meowster, machine guy and boy. If we all agree to put down our weapons, we all can leave this situation alive and unharmed. If not..." I wanted to jump to that meowstard's face, but instead I offered him a peace treaty. Michi, meowstard.
Last Warning
Sorcery Return target creature from your graveyard to the battlefield with two +1/+1 counters on it. It gains haste and idnestructible until your next upkeep. Weaponized Lightning: Cool Aura, seems playable. 8/10Transmuter's Sigil: This interacting wit walkers worries me a bit, but the effects are not too strong. 8/10 Michi, Pacific Supporter is great for an uncommon walker, with the two abilities synergizing pretty well together. The name probably should be 'Pacifistic' supporter, though, since I don't think the intent is for him to support an ocean. I don't particularly like his -2 ability removing the target's ability to block (and that ability should also say +1/+1 counter), though, since it is means to use it you have to make it even more vulnerable. 9/10 Last Warning is also a good one here - I'm not sure if I like the idea of it being in 3 colors, though, especially since there isn't anything that particularly makes it feel - both and (moreso ) tend to utilize +1/+1 counters as well. 8/10Khon looks at Bell for a moment. "As you wish, Bell," he says with a nod to the man, before moving - walking past Doer and standing just to the other side, putting Bell between himself and the girl, while ensuring that the man can keep both of them within view. As he moves, however, he keeps his gaze fixed on Doer, though his arm lowers from the handle of his glaive. Should this escalate, it is not as though I am without other weapons. "Perhaps you should show your own willingness to abide by that agreement, Doer? I can understand why he would not seek to release his weapon while you still hold yours, after all."Khon Vasq has unlocked Metalcraft! Peacekeeper Construct Artifact Creature - Construct Whenever another spell or ability causes a player to gain life, each other player gains that much life. Metalcraft - As long as you control three or more artifacts, creatures your opponents control can't attack unless their controller pays , where X is the amount of life the defending player gained this turn. 0/5
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Post by cajun on Jul 13, 2019 10:44:25 GMT
Xander's eyes show a deep, emotional thought. An uncertainty. This... has turned into a difficult situation...He backs away from Bell and Callie, moving towards Michi, and makes eye contact with Doer, suggesting that he do the same. "Can everyone put their weapons away?" He asks, addressed to Doer, Bell, and Khon. His eyes meet Bell's. The aura surrounding Bell retreats back to Xander. "None of us want to hurt you, none of us want to hurt Callie. We've all had enough fighting for now. Can we agree on that?" I wasn't trying to threaten you, Bell. I was just trying to help. While they had been fighting together not long ago, now they were fighting with each other. The metal man. The insane cat. The mind reader that seemed to be followed by a deceitful wind...
That scent wasn't on the air, but there was a similar one, and perhaps a gleam in his eye... Of course, I wouldn't hurt Callie. She'd be so much more valuable unhurt.
Wait, did he hear that?Paranoia Sinks InCovert Scheme(Rather than set this scheme in motion, you may leave it face down. You may look at it and may turn it face up to set it in motion at any time.)When you set this scheme in motion, until end of turn, if a player would gain life this turn, that player loses that much life instead. An """assist""" against Xander specifically (unless Gurf takes Mei's false flag as an attack) and all the lifegain going on in general.
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Post by gurfafflekins on Jul 17, 2019 21:04:57 GMT
pacifistwestwoman Plea for Peace: Weird single target fog. Kinda like it tho. 9/10. mrlozano Michi, Pacific Supporter: You rat bastard Okay. The restriction feels kinda weird likes Blues was saying, probably still wants to block, and encourages turtling with the passive. 8/10. Last Warning: I agree, it doesn't feel particularly green, but I like it and it could be a nice jund flavor card in a set. 9/10. blueseclipse cajun (this list is getting longer lol) Bell's eyes dilate, and turn into very draconic ones. They dart around quickly from person to person, and a lizard like tongue flicks the air. Too many threats. His mind flashes back to brief moments. Maybe that motherfucker was right. He can't seem to handle the outside world like someone normal. His breathing starts to get heavier in the silence. And then that smell, that smell... no, no! His wings erupt from his back, potentially hitting whoever's behind him, and his arms begin to scale up - but it doesn't seem as controlled or smooth as when facing Lindri. All people ever do is hurt us. Hurt me. Yeah, sure, Xander. Callie looks on in horror, knowing exactly what's about to happen. She's seen it before, and while it did save her life, it wasn't exactly... pretty. Well, there go any chances on this plane. And she had found potential friends as well! "D-Dad, stay calm, everyone, stay calm please!" she shouted desperately, knowing it really wasn't going to help. Lightning strikes the ground, suddenly and powerfully, a few yards away. Callie pushes her way past anyone in front of her to try and get to Bell, but she is pushed back by a sudden burst of lightning around him. She gets knocked down, and some of her flesh is now burned. Meanwhile, a dragon is now facing the others. Enraged Dragon Creature - Dragon Flying, trample When ~ enters the battlefield, you may destroy target artifact or planeswalker. "The cornered animal fights twice as hard." - The Tormentor 5/5 (I'm glad you like it! Y'all are free to use it, even against me) Desecrate Souls Sorcery Target creature's controller sacrifices it, then exile that player's graveyard. (But wait, I'm not done! These two are for Doer's attack alone.) Recycle Blood Enchantment Whenever a player loses life, you may pay , where X is less than or equal to the amount of life lost. If you do, create X 1/1 green Saproling creature tokens. "You can have his treasures and baubles. I'm looking for something a little more... red." - The Tormentor((to sum up - kind of ignoring the assists as Bell doesn't seem to care for them.) lozano, you'll rate the tactical and westwoman you'll rate the enchantment (just as a friendly reminder)) Callie stares on from the ground, looking embarrassed and scared, and the dragon roars.
"GET. AWAY!"
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