Pixi-Rex
1/1 Squirrel
Why am I a 0/0 Germ
Posts: 62
Color Alignment: White, Green
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Post by Pixi-Rex on Sept 8, 2018 13:14:39 GMT
SO I used all day to design a card. I think i spent about 6 hours in completeing this design. (Is that too long?) I went for it to be and white artifact, but after searching the internet for 4 hours I found an art that made it an black enchantment instead. It works too, so im fine with it. Here is my entry. (should I put flash on it or let it be an instant) {Old version}  {New version}  |
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Post by sdfkjgh on Sept 8, 2018 16:00:53 GMT
SO I used all day to design a card. I think i spent about 6 hours in completeing this design. (Is that too long?) I went for it to be and white artifact, but after searching the internet for 4 hours I found an art that made it an black enchantment instead. It works too, so im fine with it. Here is my entry. (should I put flash on it or let it be an instant) Flash would be fine on this, but there's a number of mistakes with the wording. I'll fix:
Flash
If one or more sources an opponent controls would reduce your life total to less than 5, those sources reduce it to 5 instead. Then exchange life totals with that source's controller, and sacrifice Blood Ritual. (If multiple sources' controllers would be affected this way, you choose with which controller to exchange life totals.)
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Post by itemcrafting on Sept 9, 2018 1:44:45 GMT
Thought I'd try my hand at one of these contests. And I came up with so many ideas that I made a split card with Fuse instead of one Design!
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kazerima
0/0 Germ
Posts: 36 
Favorite Set: Future Sight
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by kazerima on Sept 9, 2018 4:46:14 GMT
I figured I'd have a little fun with this. (fun fact: 4 and 9 in japanese represent Death and Suffering respectively, and add up to 13 an unlucky number in western countries.)  |
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jrey15
0/0 Germ
Player of mostly Standard and EDH. Lover of all things Tribal.
Posts: 15
Favorite Card: Surrak, Dragonclaw
Favorite Set: Theros
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Post by jrey15 on Sept 9, 2018 7:48:23 GMT
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Pixi-Rex
1/1 Squirrel
Why am I a 0/0 Germ
Posts: 62
Color Alignment: White, Green
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Post by Pixi-Rex on Sept 9, 2018 9:07:00 GMT
sdfkjgh: Thanks for feedback. I spendt too long time on the wording i got blind that I did not notes its was missing it should have ben "sources" and not just "source". Thanks for pointing that out I will fix that. 
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Post by sdfkjgh on Sept 9, 2018 13:09:44 GMT
Thought I'd try my hand at one of these contests. And I came up with so many ideas that I made a split card with Fuse instead of one Design!
First off, welcome to the forum. Secondly, aside from the minor templating mistakes, your entry is a little too strong for  ; I'd suggest  . As for those templating mistakes, here's an artless fix:
Born   Instant If an opponent controls more permanents than you, create X 1/1 green Saproling creature tokens, where X is the difference.
Fuse (You may cast one or both halves of this card from your hand.)
Bred   Instant Choose a creature type. All creatures of the chosen type get +X/+X and gain haste until end of turn, where X is the number of creatures you control of the chosen type.
I also increased the mana cost on Bred, as cmc2 is just a little too cheap for what can be a MASSIVE pseudo-Overrun.
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Post by itemcrafting on Sept 9, 2018 17:59:01 GMT
Thank you! First off, welcome to the forum. Secondly, aside from the minor templating mistakes, your entry is a little too strong for ; I'd suggest . As for those templating mistakes, here's an artless fix:
Born Instant If an opponent controls more permanents than you, create X 1/1 green Saproling creature tokens, where X is the difference.
Fuse (You may cast one or both halves of this card from your hand.)
Bred Instant Choose a creature type. All creatures of the chosen type get +X/+X and gain haste until end of turn, where X is the number of creatures you control of the chosen type.
I also increased the mana cost on Bred, as cmc2 is just a little too cheap for what can be a MASSIVE pseudo-Overrun.
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aviijp
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Decks: Mono-Red (STD) Infect (MDN) Eldrazi Stompy (LGY) Izzet Delver (PPR) Discovered MTG: Oct 2017
Posts: 13
Favorite Card: Snow-Covered Island
Favorite Set: Mirage
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black, Red, Green
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Post by aviijp on Sept 10, 2018 8:28:44 GMT
My entry, sorry the art is pretty poor. Wanted to make a fairly simplistic card that hit the flavour of the criteria. Vicious Poisoner // Virtuous Healer 1   Vicious Poisoner B
Creature - Human Cleric Deathtouch 3/2 : Target creature gains deathtouch until end of turn. At the beginning of each upkeep, if your life is lower than an opponent's, transform Vicious Poisoner. Virtuous Healer W
Creature - Human Cleric Lifelink 2/5: Target creature gains lifelink until end of turn. At the beginning of each upkeep, if you have more life than each opponent, transform Virtuous Healer.  |
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Post by Daij_Djan on Sept 10, 2018 16:27:56 GMT
This thread is now closed, the poll can be found here. And here's the next challenge! |
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