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Post by gorroval on May 28, 2023 18:33:17 GMT
Hi all! First post here. I don't know how active this forum is but the Discord server stresses me out so I thought I'd try somewhere more chill.
Anyway, for personal reasons I've decided to make a set based off the famous French novel Les Miserables. This is probably a terrible idea but I am having fun.
So, some cards I have so far:
Had the questionable idea for a cycle of instant-speed sagas to mimic the weird, awkward and/or unnecessary digressions in the book (AFMW is now 2 not 5)
More to come but I need to cook dinner now.
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Post by gorroval on May 29, 2023 10:30:45 GMT
Digressions, now with art!
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Post by gorroval on May 29, 2023 11:27:57 GMT
"What set symbol should I have?" says I.
"Bread," says she.
"How the hell do I draw bread?" says I.
There is nothing on earth that we share, except a cost, activated ability, traumatic childhood and desperate need for human connection.
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Post by gorroval on May 29, 2023 12:00:05 GMT
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Post by gorroval on May 29, 2023 14:09:23 GMT
In which some important people don't get to be legendary, for mechanical reasons.
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Post by gorroval on May 29, 2023 15:31:17 GMT
You might be tempted to think that this entire set is just about Javert and Jean Valjean, and while you would not be right, you would also not be entirely wrong.
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Post by gorroval on May 29, 2023 16:16:06 GMT
MTG, now available in Enjoltaire flavour.
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Post by fluffydeathbringer on May 29, 2023 23:45:14 GMT
so, some thoughts (I'll start this off by admitting I have little experience with the source material)
- there's not much black to Javert, and barely any white (white has dabbled in cantrip creatures at some point, but a flat double-investigate seems a bit beyond the pale still). I'd suggest a "whenever a creature dies, investigate" trigger instead
- enjolras costing as much as he does could just let defenders attack as a static - grantaire's mana cost, life payment requirement, legendary requirement, and strict window of opportunity to trigger the effect for it to be combat-relevant mean that he is pretty much unplayably kneecapped. at the very least, I think he could be to start with, but outside a specific legendary aristocrat theme I don't think you'll be using the buff aggressively very often. maybe have it extend to legendaries both entering and dying? - one thing I'd bear in mind with Digressions is that Sagas are balanced around having to wait for their effects. with Digressions, getting to the juicy final chapter is much faster, since it's possible and in fact optimal to play them on your opponent's end step. something to bear in mind. nothing jumps out as horribly imbalanced in that regard, but Details' land fetch should include a shuffle clause and Waterloo's final chapter really isn't monored. - Galley Whelp's looking sus; black hasn't had direct, unrestricted mana dorks in a good while - Field Cannon should really tap for its shots, given that it can unload them all the turn it enters right now - Benevolent Patron's ability is really not blue, green usually tutors creatures to field - Stirring Speech is very underpowered as well
to end on a positive note, the set symbol's simple and effective and Devoted Servant is a clever idea for a common white creature, giving white cantrip creatures in a fairly white way. I do think there's potential in these ideas, there are just some issues too
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Post by gorroval on May 30, 2023 6:37:28 GMT
Hi, thanks for the comments on the balance issues. I'll fix a few of those later.
I also wasn't sure about Javert's colours but thematically it fits (apart from anything else his big soliloquy is literally called "Noir ou blanc" in the French musical). I do wonder if he should be BU though.
I should add that I am not a very good Magic player (despite my current arena ranking) and am mostly doing this for the flavour.
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Post by gorroval on May 30, 2023 13:19:16 GMT
"This set is not just about Valjean and Javert" she says as she continues to post cards with Valjean and Javert on them.
Didn't necessarily mean for JVJ to be staring fondly at Javert in both pairs but you know what, I stand by it. (Feedback on the good Inspector's updated colour and text welcome.)
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Post by gorroval on May 30, 2023 15:00:02 GMT
Almost positive this wouldn't work but look at how cute this is.
Disgusting. Also they don't fit into any of the 3/4 desks I have planned unless I'm trying to do 4-Colour Post-Seine Magic.
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Post by gorroval on May 30, 2023 17:39:20 GMT
Wouldn't be a Les Mis set without the Bishop (he of the Expenses).
Also, a Crime, and just retribution.
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Post by gorroval on May 31, 2023 10:14:58 GMT
I redid the art for JVJ, Convict-Saint and fellas, I'm in love.
Not to be dramatic but I would throw myself in the Seine for this man.
That's it, that's the entire post.
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Post by gorroval on May 31, 2023 16:05:01 GMT
Is this anything? Anything at all?
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Post by fluffydeathbringer on May 31, 2023 16:41:42 GMT
Is this anything? Anything at all?
cool little pair thematics-wise, but mechanically these aren't really appropriate for common in terms of power level and complexity. conviction's pretty much going to be the same as exiling the permanent permanently outside EDH, and destroying/exiling any permanent without reservations isn't really in any single color's wheelhouse (monowhite gets to do it with recompense with Generous Gift, but the ability's been fairly consistently WB in Modern ( Ashen Rider, Angel of Despair)
I think thematics wouldn't suffer much if you made these target creatures exclusively and reduced the cost accordingly
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Post by gorroval on Jun 1, 2023 12:06:36 GMT
Yeah there was some debate on the Discord about colours, I'll have another look at them later.
Meanwhile, here's a baby Cosette for all your T1 lifegain needs.
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Post by gorroval on Jun 1, 2023 13:43:31 GMT
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Post by gorroval on Jun 7, 2023 17:40:37 GMT
After much work, I am THRILLED to be able to introduce you to nine little guys.
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Post by gorroval on Jun 10, 2023 9:04:55 GMT
Right, I'm done with this. I'm kinda sick of all these boys now but I have 3 decks.
Thanks for letting me shout into the void.
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