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Post by burntsquirrelman on Apr 17, 2018 4:42:03 GMT
A while ago, during Eldrtich Moon, someone on the internet had come up with a theory about the Eldrazi. The basic idea was that they, as a force of nature and part of the multiverse itself, go to dying Planes, eat them, recycle the parts, and make a new one in its place, ensuring the continued existence of...well, the multiverse. If you want to read more into the theory, here is a link. Based on MTG timelines, I think there's been evidence of Planes that have long since died but been unable to move on, due to the Eldrazi's entrapment on Zendikar (and now the death of Ulamog and Kozilek). One such Plane is the recent block, Amonkhet. Here, we have a Plane that has been dying for a period of time now and unable to let go through the Curse of Wandering. Nissa could even feel that the Plane itself was filled with death and had been for a while, even before Nicol Bolas had started interfering. Where am I going with this? I want to work on an idea for a Plane that, like Amonkhet, has continued long past its expiration date. But moreso, I want to explore the different ways that a Plane could be affected by this continued existence. Where Amonkhet is trying to hold on so desperately to its children, to the point that they may never rest, how else could a plane be twisted? For this project, I was going to base the Plane on the realm of Sheol, a place of waiting like purgatory. Here, everyone, regardless of virtue or deed, waits to be judged at the end of time. The Plane of Shelon (Not Sheol, as from what I am aware, WotC tries to not use direct naming and such) is a world that has long since ended, but the new beginning has yet to arrive. For Shelon, instead of the aspect of death that shrouds Amonkhet, I wanted to do something with the long, drawn out waiting of time. Everything stretches on forever, without purpose or meaning. The sun has been setting for the past millennium, always about to be night yet never quite resting. The trees continue to shed their leaves, forever falling and changing, but never running out. As this is just a rough idea, and not nearly enough to build a set out of, I am posting this here for ideas, feedback, and constructive criticism. For example, I was planning on making use of the mechanic Suspend (perhaps putting a twist on it), and Time Counters in general, although for what else I am not sure.
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Post by HonchkrowDavid on Apr 17, 2018 18:45:14 GMT
That's a very interesting idea and unique perspective. What would the story be?
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Post by burntsquirrelman on Apr 17, 2018 18:57:50 GMT
That is part of where I am drawing a blank, and further reinforces to me that I am not ready to build the set yet.
There are, I'm sure, multiple ways to take the story. Talking with friends, it has been suggested to do a sort of Groundhogs Day scenario to represent the eternal drag of time on Shelon, instead of the sureal sort of elongated waiting.
Further building off of that, if left to its own devices, every day would be a repeat of the previous. But if a traveller from another world were to interfere, what would change from cycle to cycle? Would the inhabitants of Shelon start to notice that things are going awry? How would they take to the sudden change in pace?
EDIT - An Addition to Flavor
As to the Groundhogs Day Scenario, why would this be occurring? I think the best explanation for it is that the Plane of Shelon, unwilling to pass away and clinging on to existence, reverts to a previous state of being as it nears the Void, avoiding its return to the Blind Eternities. As Shelon trudges towards its final moments, it struggles and continues to revert to that previous instance in time at its last opportunity. Every cycle, the same waiting for its inevitable end, reaching a point of fading entirely, only to continue to hold on and finally return.
From a mortal point of view, they know only that their time has come and the world is ending. No one recalls the previous iterations, no one changes routines or events. As they reach the final hours of reckoning with sorrow in their hearts and fear in their eyes, when Shelon resets they know only that their time has come and the world is ending.
Also, it's probably going to be a period longer than a few hours or a day that each cycle lasts. For now, we'll say each cycle lasts a week.
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Post by burntsquirrelman on Apr 20, 2018 5:33:14 GMT
Story Elements Have Occurred!? {Story!?}It had been six cycles since Laviett had arrived on Shelon and it was everything he could have hoped for and more.
While passing through Russard, the backwaters of backwater planes, he happened to overhear talk of Shelon, as discussed between two obnoxiously loud dullards in a mostly empty tavern. Between the obvious fact that the two of them didn't know anything of what they were talking about, and that neither appeared to have any sort of potential about them, Spark or otherwise, it was quite apparent that this must be a trap of some sort. More specifically, a trap for himself, as who in their right mind and capable of going anywhere in the Multiverse would care about a world 'stuck in decay' as the blubbering buffoons had put it.
Further thought into the matter lead Laviett to the conclusion that, should there indeed be a trap, it should be mostly safe. If someone competent was behind this, it wouldn't be so obvious. That they may be so fore-thinking to lay a poor trap and lure someone into a false sense of security inevitably goes down a spiral of 'I knew you would know I knew', which would be wasted effort on precious decision making. There was also the possibility that this was not a trap, but instead a parley of sorts, a peace offering for a place to meet. Surely if it was a gift, Laviett would not decline.
And Laviett was glad he didn't. From what he had witnessed from under his shroud during his time spent on Shelon, the entire plane seemed to be repeating a period of a week. He had settled himself by a small town, a bit away from the ruins of what may have been a larger trading city. He took note of the stale air and the crunch of the dry ground. He watched how, rather than panic, most of the residents shuffled through melancholic lives, dread in their faces as though they knew what was to come. And when it did come, even as some cried and others laughed in madness, the only one who was surprised was Laviett.
The air grew heavy and dry, while the sky seemed to crack and crumble to dust. Light and shadow had begun to fade from view leaving only the emptiness of the void. Laviett had felt his body begin to be torn away, like he was being forced through the Blind Eternities unwillingly, but as everything was falling apart, he felt it pull itself together again. The Plane of Shelon came back into focus and the sky mended its holes. And as Laviett stood in the town square, he saw the people flow like bizarre liquids to different locations and states.
The sun now hung at a new location in the sky and people had reformed into their normal solid selves. They walked about the town, doing menial chores, toiling away in their sorrow and depression, yet still very much not torn asunder by whatever had just happened. Even after the second and third time Laviett experienced it, he still did not know what to call the event.
After some delving into decrepit libraries and scouring through tomes of history and stories, Laviett found that Shelon had a history, long and full, far beyond the week that had been replaying. While tracking the steps of the townsfolk, obscuring his person from their perception, he saw that they never deviated from their tasks. Each cycle appeared to have the same events occur, the same yelling match between the two men drinking themselves to oblivion, the same child crying on a doorstep as the adults continue to walk by and avert their eyes.
Had he not been accustomed to despair, he may have felt something for these people, but now armed with the knowledge that even if he were to try to do something, they would still revert to this state of being, he was assured in himself to research this phenomena from a strictly unbiased perspective. Whoever had lead him here had also shown no sign of themselves, and although the curiosity tugged at him, he was so enthralled with the plane and its weekly loop that he set it aside to investigate later. [EDIT!] This story beginning thing is going to be reworked and changed a bit. I have a better idea of Laviett as a character, and that he would be less of a researcher who was intrigued by the situation, and more of a black market dealer, buying and selling "hard to find items", which as a Planeswalker, he would have a much easier time finding such goods. And what could be a more valuable trade than an Entire Plane that Resets? I will leave this old writing thing up though.
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Post by gamma3 on Apr 24, 2018 3:32:32 GMT
Well, this is quite the idea. I admit I am intrigued. I wish I could offer you assistance, but that will have to wait until after school gets out
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Post by burntsquirrelman on Jun 17, 2018 22:33:41 GMT
A Keyword idea for the set In the story, obviously, Laviett is gonna mess up and something is going to change. This keyword will represent when something dies, due to interference, it's eventual return as Shelon tries to re-balance itself, but ultimately losing it forever. Also, sorry, I've been dealing with a lot of life stuff, so I haven't been on lately. EDIT Here's an example of the mechanic on a card!
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Post by burntsquirrelman on Sept 7, 2018 12:10:01 GMT
I have come up with a more solid concept for Laviett and his powers and methods. He is to be a peddler of "hard to find items" and an information broker. I am changing how he learns of Shelon and his reasons for wanting to go there.
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