loopsorspool
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Post by loopsorspool on Apr 10, 2018 23:05:01 GMT
(Image to come.) Luné and Lumé of One Mind Why do you always bicker? Surely co-operation would be more beneficial.   Instant, Enchantment Rebound Tempo - (trigger), if you cast a spell last turn, (effect) Rarity+ Valor: 29 Character notes: She is a Dvati, one soul shared between two bodies. Furthermore, she will be focused on music, tempo and timing tricks. I would like it if your character(s)did not initially know of the fact that they are one mind shared between two bodies. It would be fun to roleplay them come to a realization, not know or be told of this fact. It's not mandatory, but I think it could create some interesting plot points and lead to some interesting interactions.
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Casstastrophe
2/2 Zombie

fight the gender binary with fire? you should fight *everything* with fire
Posts: 116
Formerly Known As: Carn13
Favorite Card: Niv-Mizzet, the Firemind
Favorite Set: Khans Block
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Post by Casstastrophe on Apr 11, 2018 3:39:26 GMT
"Didn't see you there. Either of y'all need a lift?"Traveller's Caravan  Artifact - Vehicle  Whenever ~ becomes crewed, add  Crew 1 2/3
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loopsorspool
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Post by loopsorspool on Apr 11, 2018 5:36:30 GMT
Thank you for your generosity. But we are good for now. We must tune our instruments, for the show to come.Full Sails    Instant :uncommon:  : Target creature you control gains +1/+1. Tap that creature or crew a vehicle with that creature. Batten the hatches and get ready, this isn't going to be a smooth ride.Decent vehicle idea, pretty fun to have a Springleaf Drum that can hurt. I'd probably run it in a vehicle deck. 9.5/10 It doesn't wow me that much. It's a good card, but at the same time, no flavor text or flavorful ability so dinging you for that, you had plenty of room. Great card though.
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Casstastrophe
2/2 Zombie

fight the gender binary with fire? you should fight *everything* with fire
Posts: 116
Formerly Known As: Carn13
Favorite Card: Niv-Mizzet, the Firemind
Favorite Set: Khans Block
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Casstastrophe on Apr 11, 2018 6:27:52 GMT
"If you'd ever like a venue, feel free to drop by the Fleet. There's not much to pass the time in the wastes beyond repairs and studying old maps."
Full Sails: Interesting concept, though I think you're missing a few templating bits. Bonus should probably go away at the end of turn, and it should target untapped or unblocking creatures if you want it repeatable at 0 mana, because if you can repeat it as many times as you want you can just chump block then pump your blocker an arbitrary number of times to kill whatever you're blocking, and the same on attacking. Also, I think you need to have an additional tap clause on the crewing part if you want the creature to tap? Not quite sure. Still, I like the flavor a lot, and it's cool to see a green foray into Vehicle interaction outside of just blowing them up. 7/10.
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loopsorspool
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Post by loopsorspool on Apr 11, 2018 7:02:58 GMT
Whoops, that was my fault, I forgot to add the until end of turn clause to it. it was supposed to be there, I guess I missed it. I guess what I should have done it make it once per turn per untapped creature and instead of tapping it, make it unable to attack or block. Then the only thing that it would be useful for it fighting and crewing.
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Casstastrophe
2/2 Zombie

fight the gender binary with fire? you should fight *everything* with fire
Posts: 116
Formerly Known As: Carn13
Favorite Card: Niv-Mizzet, the Firemind
Favorite Set: Khans Block
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by Casstastrophe on Apr 11, 2018 15:43:46 GMT
Yep, that would work! I did the same thing on an Act of Treason on a body I made recently (turns out perma-theft isn't part of red's pie, who knew), so don't worry, it's nbd.
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aquaumisa
1/1 Squirrel
HA HA HA
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Set Hub: The Planear Ocean
Favorite Card: Evil Twin
Favorite Set: Shadows Over Innistrad
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Post by aquaumisa on Apr 11, 2018 19:35:32 GMT
"Hello there. y'all lost?" Bishop says to the girl in front of him.Viridian Misdrection  Instant  Cast ~ only during combat. Choose target creature. Scry 1 then reveal the top card of your library. If its a Forest card, remove that creature from combat.
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loopsorspool
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Post by loopsorspool on Apr 11, 2018 22:33:06 GMT
"Maybe just a little," the further away body says, tending to a violin. "But getting lost is a great way," says the closer while peeling a chunk of rosin to glide against a bow, "To find inspiration."Spring's Overture   Instant ::Uncommon:: Search your library for three basic lands, reveal them then shuffle your library, put the revealed lands on top. The leaves have returned to the trees, spring is not here yet, but it is coming.It took me a while to come up with an appropriate response, it is a decent card that may not work every time, but I can see it in a much more loved place than other remove from combat abilities and spells.Plus the fixing it provides is also fantastic, it is a real humdinger that is one hell of a toolkit. No flavor text, but the card itself is very flavorful and so much fun. 10/10.
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aquaumisa
1/1 Squirrel
HA HA HA
Posts: 54
Set Hub: The Planear Ocean
Favorite Card: Evil Twin
Favorite Set: Shadows Over Innistrad
Color Alignment: Blue, Black
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Post by aquaumisa on Apr 11, 2018 23:54:35 GMT
"...Whatever that was aside, I agree wit ya there."
Spring's Overature: 9/10: For two mana to make my next three draws be lands is cool. Good way to make up for a two land deficit in the beginning for sure.
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Post by Fleur on Apr 12, 2018 2:41:01 GMT
"Who might you two be?" Lumen pulls out his alabaster tablet that he almost always carries with him, and begins to take notes of his surroundings. Sunset Lamplighter  Creature - Human Nomad  When CARDNAME enters the battlefield, investigate. Sacrifice a Clue: Look at the top card of target player's library. You may put it in that player's graveyard. "It's easy to get lost in these dunes - take this." 1/3
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loopsorspool
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Post by loopsorspool on Apr 12, 2018 3:32:31 GMT
"I'm Luné," "And I'm Lumé. . ." "Or maybe I'm Lumé and," "I'm Luné. . ."Revitalize  Instant  Target player cannot sacrifice permanents for the cost of abilities. Not every lamb goes goes to the slaughter.I guess the question is, are you leading me out of the desert or into it? I love this card though, it gives so many options to play with. So much fun. No flaws that I can see, 10/10
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Post by Fleur on Apr 12, 2018 3:48:33 GMT
Lumen is perplexed and jots down notes. This was either a case of two extremely close people, or something like the Maurer and Sxali case... either way, it was rather interesting. "I'm Lumen. Sheriff, broken man, artificer. He extends a mechanical arm but then hesitates, unsure of whose hand to shake."
CARD: Interesting. A few issues: 1) A lack of specified duration (I presume you need end of turn) and 2) Probably not at the right rarity - uncommon+ is usually where narrow hosers would go. Overall, solid idea with a few flaws. 6/10.
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loopsorspool
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Post by loopsorspool on Apr 12, 2018 4:15:41 GMT
"Nice to meet you, Lumen" "I guess I'm interesting given your notepad." Each body shakes your hand in turn, they put both hands into the shake, surrounding the metal hand and warming it gently.
Oops. . . I have been bad at that all day today, it was to be until end of turn. And I'm glad to know about the narrow hoser rarity. I didn't know that.
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