Akai Ryu
1/1 Squirrel
Posts: 63
Favorite Card: Arcbound Ravager
Color Alignment: Colorless
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Post by Akai Ryu on Jun 10, 2018 14:47:07 GMT
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Xenozfan2
3/3 Beast
Posts: 161
Favorite Card: Phage the Untouchable
Favorite Set: Innistrad
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Red
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Post by Xenozfan2 on Jun 12, 2018 8:23:34 GMT
Anna, Imperial Magister     Legendary Creature - Human Advisor  Players can't cast more than one spell each turn. Pay half your life, rounded up: Anna's controller sacrifices her. Any player may activate this ability. : Return Anna from your graveyard to your hand. Gain 2 life. "The law is harsh, but it is the law." 3/4 |
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Post by randyrenegade on Jun 20, 2018 5:06:34 GMT
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Post by Flo00 on Jun 20, 2018 18:10:09 GMT
Embrum the Impatient  Lgendary Creature - Berserker  Embrum the Impatient can't wait for this challenge to be judged by someone. 2/1 Ok, just kidding. Here is my real entry: Randoran the Silent Lengedary Creature - Eldrazi  (Nonexistent mana costs can’t be paid.)Exile two cards from your hand: Put Ranodran, the Silent from your graveyard, exile or the command zone onto the battlefield. Activate this only as a sorcery. Ranodran, the Silent’s power and toughness are equal to the number of cards in exile. */* You can't actavte the ability when there is only one in your hand. |
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Post by Lady Mapi on Jun 22, 2018 1:04:25 GMT
Princess Ime -  Legendary Creature - Dryad Shaman Players can't play nonbasic lands. At the beginning of each upkeep, each player may put a land card from their hand onto the battlefield. Then each player sacrifices a nonbasic land. 3/3
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kinotherapy
6/6 Wurm
stupid kor i just fell out of the floor
Posts: 322
Favorite Card: Ruthless Raider
Favorite Set: Rising Tides
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by kinotherapy on Jun 23, 2018 20:26:59 GMT
Oh this is mine ok judging in 24 hours
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kinotherapy
6/6 Wurm
stupid kor i just fell out of the floor
Posts: 322
Favorite Card: Ruthless Raider
Favorite Set: Rising Tides
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by kinotherapy on Jun 24, 2018 19:25:15 GMT
I'm sick and suffering so no lengthy commentary today I'm afraid, feel free to PM me if you actually want feedback. fluffydeathbringer wins. |
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digiman619
1/1 Squirrel
Posts: 87 
Favorite Card: Extinction
Favorite Set: Dominaria
Color Alignment: Blue, Red
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Post by digiman619 on Jun 25, 2018 16:24:28 GMT
Monored color or monored color identity? Because if it's monored color identity the only mana symbols you can use are  and snow (which isn't coded as a far as I can tell) |
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Post by Daij_Djan on Jun 25, 2018 20:19:14 GMT
Well, considering I didn't get any feedback on it last time, I'll reuse an older entry which actually uses all other colors in its text box 
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Post by Flo00 on Jun 26, 2018 15:14:57 GMT
{render}  Ch’Zita, the Poisoned Rainbow  Legendary Creature - Wolf Horror Infect Whenever Ch’Zita, the Poisoned Rainbow deals combat damage to a creature, add  . Until end of turn, this mana doesn’t empty as steps and phases end. 3/5 |
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Post by Lady Mapi on Jun 26, 2018 15:41:15 GMT
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Post by gateways7 on Jun 29, 2018 1:43:51 GMT
Inspired by Pit Fight from GDS3:  |
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Post by fluffydeathbringer on Jul 20, 2018 17:25:23 GMT
Sorry I vanished. Judging in 24.
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Zuty
3/3 Beast
Return to Ravnica 2 Hype!
Posts: 172
Favorite Card: Serra Angel
Favorite Set: Future Sight
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Red, Green, Colorless
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Post by Zuty on Jul 24, 2018 9:15:48 GMT
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Post by fluffydeathbringer on Jul 24, 2018 16:24:46 GMT
not feeling that well, can't judge long, daij_djan wins followed by amechra
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Post by Daij_Djan on Jul 27, 2018 16:23:54 GMT
Big thanks for the win! (even if I again didn't receive any direct feedback on the specific card  )
OK, now concerning your next challenge.. Currently, it's way to hot here in Germany. So I'd like you to design a Commander who's all about ice, snow, rain, clouds, storm or whatever similar you can think of. Whether you go for pure flavor or a mechanical representation as well is all up to you!
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Post by viriss on Jul 27, 2018 17:51:07 GMT
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Post by Tesagk on Jul 28, 2018 6:34:12 GMT
 This challenge happened to fit nicely into a mechanic I'm hoping to put into my set (negative abilities as keywords), so I figured I'd roll with it. |
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Post by Lady Mapi on Jul 28, 2018 7:40:55 GMT
Adesh, The Gathering Storm Creature - Elemental Haste, Flying, Trample Whenever Adesh, The Gathering Storm attacks, you gain  . Adesh has +1/+0 for each you have. As long as you have or more, Adesh has first strike. 1/1
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Post by Flo00 on Jul 28, 2018 23:03:02 GMT
I I already posted this somewhere in the old forums, but it's a perfect fit:  Grywin, Storm Spirit  Legendary Creature - Spirit Flying : Grywin, Storm Spirit loses flying until end of turn. : Grywin deals 1 damage to each creature with flying. 7/2 |
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Post by mrlozano on Jul 29, 2018 22:18:52 GMT
 An old elf wizard with the gift of inmortality who lives in a plane covered with ice. He is the last living being in it. |
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digiman619
1/1 Squirrel
Posts: 87
Favorite Card: Extinction
Favorite Set: Dominaria
Color Alignment: Blue, Red
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Post by digiman619 on Jul 31, 2018 3:07:46 GMT
mrlozano You can just say "Nonland permanents don't untap during their contrller's untap step." Unless they were supposed to not untap for any reason which a) isn't a thing on any card anywhere as far as I can tell, and b) means that his final ability does nothing as no untaps ever happen. |
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Post by augur on Jul 31, 2018 5:15:09 GMT
Attachment DeletedThe Rainbringer Legendary Creature- Human Shaman When ~ enters the battlefield, create two 0/1 white Citizen creature tokens.  , Sacrifice another creature: Put a harvest counter on target land. For as long as that land has a harvest counter on it, it has “T: Add two mana of any type this land could produce.” 2/2 Appeasing a god carries a terrible price.
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Post by mrlozano on Jul 31, 2018 12:39:27 GMT
mrlozano You can just say "Nonland permanents don't untap during their contrller's untap step." Unless they were supposed to not untap for any reason which a) isn't a thing on any card anywhere as far as I can tell, and b) means that his final ability does nothing as no untaps ever happen. True, fixed. Thank you! |
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Xenozfan2
3/3 Beast
Posts: 161
Favorite Card: Phage the Untouchable
Favorite Set: Innistrad
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Red
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Post by Xenozfan2 on Aug 5, 2018 16:59:53 GMT
Kolah the Repeater  Legendary Creature - Human Wizard Flash When Kolah enters the battlefield, the next instant or sorcery you cast gains storm. : Return Kolah to its owner's hand. 5/5 |
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Post by Daij_Djan on Aug 17, 2018 12:41:41 GMT
This challlenge will be judged once I've finished with the Poor Man's Edition - so get your final entries and edits in!  EDIT: This challenge is now closed, please no further changes of entries!
Note to myself: Never stop in the midst of judging  Sorry for the delay everyone – here we go: Ashley, the Winter Storm Legendary Snow Creature – Archer Whenever Ashley, the Winter Storm attacks, tap up to two target creatures defending player controls. Those creatures don't untap during their controllers next untap step.  : Ashley, the Winter Storm deals 1 damage to target tapped creature. Freeze!3/4
Is that last ability breaking the color pie if it requires snow mana to activate? Tough question, to be honest Still, even if it is, I really like the design concept behind your entry. Droshan, King in the North Legendary Creature – Human Wizard Flash Whenever Droshan, King in the North blocks a creature, freeze it (Frozen creatures tap if they're not already tapped. They do not untap during their controller's next untap step.): Target creature you control gets „If this blocks a creature, freeze it.“ until end of turn. 2/6
Freezing creatures sounds like an interesting concept to be used in a set – except the mechanic is pretty much mono-blue and I'm always cautious of set mechanics only being used in a single color. Also two wording suggestions: Use „..freeze that creature.“ (twice) to make sure it's not the blocker getting frozen down. Also The reminder text could be improved imho: (To freeze a creature tap it. It doesn't untap during its controller's next untap step.) Adesh, The Gathering Storm Creature – Elemental Haste, Flying, Trample Whenever Adesh, The Gathering Storm attacks, you gain . Adesh has +1/+0 for each you have. As long as you have or more, Adesh has first strike. 1/1
I have to admit, I'm not the best person to evaluate energy counters.. Getting a hasty flaving 3/1 attacker by turn three sounds powerful, but I guess being three-colored works as balancing tool? That aside, I personally like the idea of using energy as some kind of treshold – even though I'm not sure how popular this would be with other players as the mechanic otherwise is supposed to be spend as a resource (obviously). Minor nitpick: You forgot the legendary supertype Grywin, Storm Spirit Legendary Creature – Spirit Flying : Grywin, Storm Spirit loses flying until end of turn. : Grywin deals 1 damage to each creature with flying. 7/2
Mono-green flyers are always a bit iffy (outside of cycles), but I have to admit the flavor really works here. That aside, the otherwise weird 7/2 stats really work nicely here. Personally, I think it feels a bit lackluster as potential Commander, though – it looks more like a „normal“ rare to me.. Aberlith, Lord of Eternal Ice  Legendary Creature – Elf Wizard Vigilance Nonland permanents don't untap during any player's untap step.  : Untap target permanent. Any player may activate this ability. “I have walked for countless centuries. Ice hasn't melted. I am still waiting.“2/5
I'm a bit torn on this card. That second ability feels like it would just be annoying to play against, even though the political options of being able to untap your opponents' stuff sounds pretty cool. Also I really like how you used the two-brid mana cost. The Rainbringer Legendary Creature – Human Shaman When ~ enters the battlefield, create two 0/1 white Citizen creature tokens. , Sacrifice another creature: Put a harvest counter on target land. For as long as that land has a harvest counter on it, it has “ : Add two mana of any type this land could produce.” Appeasing a god carries a terrible price.2/2
A powerful ability, but requiring tapping your creature to activate it should balance it out – sacrificing a creature really isn't much of an issue within these color even if it didn't bring its own sacrifice fodder (even though: it does ). It actually might be a bit to slow / less explosive for the formats where you'd want to have fun with it, but that might just be me.. Kolah the Repeater Legendary Creature – Human Wizard Flash When Kolah enters the battlefield, the next instant or sorcery you cast gains storm. : Return Kolah to its owner's hand. 5/5
When I gave that challenge, I definitely did not expect a mono-red entry – well done That aside: Holy crap, this looks scary – even though CMC7 really keeps this in check pretty well. Actually, it feels like this card is mostly useless unless you can really abuse it where it almost instantly becomes broken. Which means: It would definitely get some love as potential commander (even if I'm not its target audiance). This really was an interestig and very diverse bunch of cards – well done, everyone! In the end I decided to give the win to mrlozano for designing a commander offering so much potential for political gameplay and using two-brid mana the right way. |
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bagz
1/1 Squirrel
Posts: 91
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Post by bagz on Aug 17, 2018 13:24:21 GMT
Great Job guys! I showed up late and will have to wait for next round but this was fun to watch!
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Post by mrlozano on Aug 17, 2018 19:30:19 GMT
So, thx for the win! I will be quick.
Commander 2018 is out and looks pretty sweet to me. Each planeswalker cares about a permanet type, but creatures got no love this time (I understand why). So, the task: Make a Planeswalker that can be a commander of a t least two colors, that cares about creatures but doesn't include green. I know that there are lots of restrictions but I want to see what can you come up with. Best of luck!
(Also, one doubt, when do I have to judge?)
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bagz
1/1 Squirrel
Posts: 91
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Post by bagz on Aug 17, 2018 22:22:44 GMT
I think you will need to judge around the 24th to give everyone a week to get their work in and perhaps edit a few drafts. Don't take me as an authority. I just got here. Just seems to be the general vibe.  Special thanks to Flo00 for some quick but valuable corrections in game-text. |
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Akai Ryu
1/1 Squirrel
Posts: 63
Favorite Card: Arcbound Ravager
Color Alignment: Colorless
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Post by Akai Ryu on Aug 19, 2018 11:46:11 GMT
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"When in doubt, do a common." 
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Sorry for the delay everyone – here we go:
