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Post by Aarhg on Dec 6, 2019 23:34:23 GMT
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Post by kefke on Dec 6, 2019 23:58:29 GMT
If it only affects colourless mana, couldn't it just say "Until end of turn, instants and sorceries you cast cost less." instead?
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Post by Aarhg on Dec 7, 2019 0:04:34 GMT
kefke It only affects colored mana. That's why the second clause is there, because it doesn't reduce generic mana costs.
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Post by Lady Mapi on Dec 7, 2019 0:04:55 GMT
If it only affects colourless mana, couldn't it just say "Until end of turn, instants and sorceries you cast cost less." instead? It says colored mana, though.
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Post by kefke on Dec 7, 2019 1:11:59 GMT
kefke It only affects colored mana. That's why the second clause is there, because it doesn't reduce generic mana costs. My bad. I misread the card.
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Post by Aarhg on Dec 7, 2019 1:19:53 GMT
kefke Yea, I figured. No worries.
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Post by gluestick248 on Dec 8, 2019 2:15:40 GMT
This is my first time trying to post a full render (and participating in the COTW for that matter), and wow is it hard to find good art with good sources. I'll leave this here, and if I find art I'll edit with a render Mundungu's Meddling (G=2) Instant Counter target spell unless its controller pays and 3 life.
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the5lacker
3/3 Beast
Posts: 198
Favorite Card: The Reality Chip
Favorite Set: Kaladesh
Color Alignment: White, Blue
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Post by the5lacker on Dec 8, 2019 14:35:22 GMT
{I cant read} Bio Glider Artifact - Equipment Living Weapon Equipped creature gets +1/+1 and has flying. Sacrifice a non-Germ creature: Create a 0/0 black Germ creature token, then attach this to it. Activate this ability only any time you could cast a sorcery. Equip Grim Genesis Sorcery As an additional cost to cast Grim Genesis, sacrifice a creature. Search your library for a creature card, reveal it, then put it into your hand and shuffle your library. EDIT: Lets try this again, only this time I'll actually read the full challenge. *Adjusts reading glasses*
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Post by Daij_Djan on Dec 8, 2019 16:25:29 GMT
Almost forgot adding an entry for myself
Didn't really have an inspiration for a CMC 2 instant or sorcery at first, so I decided to dive much deeper into the 2-theme So what comes next after Regicide and Deicide (and maybe even Memoricide)? Of course this one:
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Post by kilenc on Dec 8, 2019 22:13:18 GMT
{Pre-render card text}Idealize Instant Choose one -- * Exile target creature. * Return target creature card from your graveyard to the battlefield tapped. The faithful never die. The faithless never return. The target is a little bit combo of Miraculous Recovery and Blessed Light. Basically, a high utility limited card.
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chartate101
0/0 Germ
Posts: 29
Favorite Card: Obliterate
Favorite Set: Dominaria
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black
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Post by chartate101 on Dec 8, 2019 23:25:08 GMT
Attachment DeletedNoble's Charm2W Instant Choose one: •You gain 5 life and draw a card. •Create two 1/1 white Human Soldier creature tokens with vigilance. •Exile each opponent's graveyard. Scry 2.
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the5lacker
3/3 Beast
Posts: 198
Favorite Card: The Reality Chip
Favorite Set: Kaladesh
Color Alignment: White, Blue
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Post by the5lacker on Dec 9, 2019 0:45:05 GMT
Now to apply the lava-soap-esque feedback that is my general contribution to things. May it scour away the rust and reveal the gleam beneath. Or at least give me a laugh. jarribas309 : "Enters the battlefield" my dude, not "Comes into play." It's been, like a decade. Also you've printed a trap where the controlling player can fulfill the condition themselves. A trap that doesn't care what an opponent does is no trap at all. There's a reason Summoning Trap specifies "Countered by a spell or ability an opponent controls." Fix those and you're probably good, though. Eight is a fine cost for this kind of effect and three is a large enough cost where it has to at least be slightly telegraphed. FLAREdirector : The only feedback I have is "Why not instant?" And maybe "Why no reminder text?" kefke : That's really not a red effect. Blue/Black has done similar things in the past, but adding "Opponent chooses" doesn't make it red. @aargh: That's one of the most subtly dangerous cards I've ever seen. Storm resoundingly doesn't need the help. Like... I like it, but it would absolutely make the world a worse place if printed. viriss : I'm not really sure the rules quirks are worth this kind of card. Players will misplay what you can block with this, and I'm gonna be honest, at four colored mana you'd probably just get two 3/3s no strings attached. Tesagk : That is an absurd pile of words for a card that's basically a bad Epiphany at the Drownyard. 95% of the time it's cast, X will be 0 and they'll just target an opponent with it so they can draw a card. If you want to stick with "Bribe" concept, well, Bribery is already a card, so that might cause problems, but instead of doing this double triple backflip rules text with an extra cost reduction clause for good measure, lets go with a simple "Look at the top X cards of target opponent's library. Put them back on the top or bottom of their library in any order." Basically Fateseal X. inferno390 : Your overly complicated attempt at shoving a Fireball into a Mind Spring has resulted in a card that's bonkers powerful even ignoring all but a single sentence in it. XU, Draw X is, by itself, incredibly powerful, and as a whole the card is basically "What if Explosion but way more?" Tone it down, like, seven notches. Control decks don't need THAT much help. spazlaz : My eye twitches when I consider what happens if you pitch it into a Hive Mind. lizstar : You should turn it face-down on the stack. We're in silver-border land, anything goes! ZephyrPhantom : As I said to Aargh, Storm really doesn't need the help, but that's a really cool way of going about making a ten mana card that's actually playable so props. melono : There's a reason most "Better if you're playing with X" effects are an on-off type system, making large scaling effects can be difficult, especially if it's related to permanents on the battlefield that can be difficult to maintain and/or actively self destruct. Also the terminology is "Any target" nowadays. ameisenmeister : I can't tell if that's the most or least rude discard spell ever but it's certainly powerful. Also I don't know why the target can choose a land card while you can't. Seems inconsistent. gurfafflekins : Just to clarify, you are aware your spell can't target the token it creates, right? Because targets have to be declared before resolution? @fabuloussunbro : Ignoring how difficult pulling that off would be, four mana for a limited counterspell feels not fantastic. I feel like this is a case of "CAN, but probably SHOULDN'T." gluestick248 : Mana Leak has proven itself exceptionally powerful in the past, and mixing Undermine into the mix can't possibly help things. I'd probably drop it to and 2 if you're aiming at a standard power level. @daij_Djan: I think I might know which folder of yours you got that image from. I'm not judging. Much. kilenc : Seems really strong in Commander, mostly because White needs every scrap of card quality it can. Surprised you didn't mention Settle Beyond Reality which is what immediately sprung to mind for me. @chartate: I love me my charms. Feels a little bit weak but that's what charms are supposed to be I suppose. Not sure how I feel about both "draw a card" and "scry" being on the same white card, though. Even if they're on different options that's a dangerous mix. I feel like the final mode would be better suited to be a flicker effect. Maybe until end of turn, so you can use it to get rid of a troublesome blocker for a turn or something. Long Road Home springs to mind as a really interesting effect on this kind of modal card.
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Post by Daij_Djan on Dec 9, 2019 0:48:37 GMT
@daij_Djan: I think I might know which folder of yours you got that image from. I'm not judging. Much. It's literally one of the very first images that came up when I typed in "dead bear" on DeviantArt, but sure
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the5lacker
3/3 Beast
Posts: 198
Favorite Card: The Reality Chip
Favorite Set: Kaladesh
Color Alignment: White, Blue
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Post by the5lacker on Dec 9, 2019 1:00:53 GMT
@daij_Djan: I think I might know which folder of yours you got that image from. I'm not judging. Much. It's literally one of the very first images that came up when I typed in "dead bear" on DeviantArt, but sure Oh don't you worry, I believe you.
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Post by viriss on Dec 9, 2019 1:32:37 GMT
the5lacker It's free to block literally anything, just like Flash Foliage can, even if it couldn't legally be declared. But yeah balancing the cost/effect was an issue.
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the5lacker
3/3 Beast
Posts: 198
Favorite Card: The Reality Chip
Favorite Set: Kaladesh
Color Alignment: White, Blue
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Post by the5lacker on Dec 9, 2019 1:35:22 GMT
the5lacker It's free to block literally anything, just like Flash Foliage can, even if it couldn't legally be declared. But yeah balancing the cost/effect was an issue. Oh I know how it works, but Flash Foliage was notorious for misplays in ravnica limited. There's a reason it hasn't been touched in a decade.
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Post by gluestick248 on Dec 9, 2019 2:33:05 GMT
gluestick248 : Mana Leak has proven itself exceptionally powerful in the past, and mixing Undermine into the mix can't possibly help things. I'd probably drop it to if you're aiming at a standard power level. I was thinking that the multicoloredness would offset the life, and then it's just Mana Leak. You might still be right though.
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Post by FLAREdirector on Dec 9, 2019 3:03:34 GMT
the5lacker: Both fair points. It's not an instant because it's modeled after Courage in Crisis and I didn't want it to be significantly better. I think "CinC but faster" and "CinC but " are both worth roughly . Also, I didn't include reminder text because in my estimation--and y'all are free to disagree with me on this--it doesn't need any. On an official card, if this were printed, it would definitely have reminder text for proliferate, because there's always going to be new players seeing that mechanic for the first time on this card. So I get that. But here? I really don't feel like that's something that comes up. You don't start out playing Magic and then immediately go look up custom stuff. You familiarize yourself with some number of the real deal first. I mean, proliferate was just reprinted in WAR. So I believe it's totally reasonable for me to assume that anyone who sees this card on this forum already knows what proliferate does, at least abstractly. Maybe I have this all the wrong way 'round, and honestly I'm not interested in getting into a discussion of it; this is just how I feel.
Also, there's more room for flavor text that way. I like writing flavor text.
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Post by marshmellow on Dec 9, 2019 4:24:21 GMT
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Post by kefke on Dec 9, 2019 12:25:44 GMT
the5lacker- Punisher and creature stealing are both primary in Red.
- I've never gotten more than 2 votes on a single CotW, so I honestly don't care any more. I'm making these for me, not anyone else, and not with any expectations of getting even remotely close to winning.
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Post by Daij_Djan on Dec 9, 2019 14:10:10 GMT
This thread is now closed, the poll can be found here. And here's the next challenge!
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