solir
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Post by solir on Apr 6, 2018 19:56:05 GMT
Astrid Yvonnia    Creature, Enchantment Multicolor Level 1 CMC  Perks: Rarity Upgrader Call Aid From: M10, M11, M12, M13, M14, M15 Valor: 62 Score: 62 Average Rating: 7.75 Mana 15/15 "You're in Loriala and you're speaking to the former queen. This is my land, and you're welcome only so long as you respect our rules and people."{Cards Designed} Bonds of Community   Enchantment  Whenever a creature enters the battlefield under your control, put a charge counter on Bonds of Community. Remove X charge counters from Bonds of Community and sacrifice it: Put X +1/+1 counters on target creature. Activate this ability only as a sorcery. 7/10 Convict Hunter Creature - Human Soldier  When Convict Hunter enters the battlefield, create a 2/2 green Hound creature token. 1/1 "You're a wanted man. I'm hungry for the reward, but the dog's just hungry. Your choose who to satiate."Rated 6.5/10 Corrupt Taxman Creature - Human Whenever an opponent draws a card, you may pay 1 life. If you do, create a colorless Treasure artifact token with "  , Sacrifice this artifact: Add one mana of any color." 2/2 Discrepancies in the budget are a Lorialan tradition. Rated 8.5/10 Lordsguard Elite  Creature - Shade Soldier  : Lordsguard Elite gains double strike until end of turn. : Lordsguard Elite gets +1/+1 until end of turn. 2/2 Rated 8.5/10 Stern Diplomat  Creature - Human Advisor , pay 1 life: Tap target creature. 1/2 He speaks in only the imperative mood.Rated 8/10 Thorough Constable Creature - Human Soldier Players can't discard cards. (If a spell or ability would cause a player to discard a card, it doesn't. Activated abilities and additional costs that require the discarding of cards can't be activated or paid.)2/2 "Everybody, just stop. Nobody touches any of the evidence until I'm done with it."Rated 7/10 Understaffed Jail Enchantment Tap two untapped creatures you control: Target creature can't attack or block this turn. Activate this ability only once per turn. Fuiville's guard consists of the town cobbler, three schoolteachers, a fletcher, and his pet goat.
Rated 9/10 Unethical Alchemist Creature - Human Wizard Lifelink When Unethical Alchemist enters the battlefield, it deals two damage to target creature. 1/1 "Well, the potion works. And I only had to kill a bear this time!"
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Post by aquaumisa on Apr 6, 2018 21:41:13 GMT
"Greetins yer Highness. Pardon my questioning, but former queen? What happened there?"Worldly Knowledge Sorcery Whenever you cast a creature spell this turn, draw a card. Draw a card.
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Post by korakhos on Apr 7, 2018 2:18:49 GMT
"Former queen, huh?" says a young woman as she approaches "What happened? Did you have to resign in scandal? Did someone take the throne away from you? Do you need help taking it back?"Incite Revolution  Instant Until end of turn, target creature gets +3/+0, gains haste, and can't attack you or a planeswalker you control. Every revolution begins with a spark, and some people are walking bonfires.
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solir
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Post by solir on Apr 7, 2018 12:49:47 GMT
aquaumisa "I stepped down. I was sick of it all."I mean Glimpse of Nature is rare and banned in modern, so I think this is a bit too good. 6/10. Call aid Wit's End. Corrupt Taxman Creature - Human Whenever an opponent draws a card, you may pay 1 life. If you do, create a colorless Treasure artifact token with " , Sacrifice this artifact: Add one mana of any color." 2/2 Discrepancies in the budget are a Lorialan tradition.@korkhos "Nothing so fanciful. And no."Incite Revolution is a really cool design. 10/10 Judging by your text, I'll take it as a gift. Lordsguard Elite Creature - Shade Soldier : Lordsguard Elite gains double strike until end of turn. : Lordsguard Elite gets +1/+1 until end of turn. 2/2
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Post by korakhos on Apr 7, 2018 14:07:35 GMT
solir: Unfortunately the CMC isn't displaying right so I've no idea what the card costs, I'll refrain judgment until you can fix that.
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solir
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Post by solir on Apr 7, 2018 14:15:40 GMT
korakhos Fixed. Don't know how that happened. It's just 3 CMC
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Post by Deleted on Apr 7, 2018 14:18:42 GMT
"Guys, am I really the only one who thinks that's good?" asks Dhotman. "I mean, who needs yet another ruler or some other damn protractor, am I right?"
He looks at you.
"Huh. Your rules? Well sorry ma'am but rules is what I care the least about. You have 'em, I don't."Venal Judge Creature - Human Advisor At the beginning of each opponent's end step, if he or she violated the game rules this turn, he or she loses 2 life. "I accept no bribes! Donations are welcome, though."1/2
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Post by korakhos on Apr 7, 2018 14:44:37 GMT
"Ughhh, boooooooooring. If you need to topple the government call me, ok? And if I find out you went for it and didn't call me you'll pay for it!"Lordsguard Elite: Seems fine, I was a little concerned about the combined abilities but most 1CC cards nowadays seem to have double strike built in and other even have bonus effects. Even so, I'd rather have the double strike be or the shade pump be , but I usually play it super-safe. 8,5/10.
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solir
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Post by solir on Apr 7, 2018 15:23:43 GMT
@gorgonzola - Not sure how to rate un-cards but it seems kinda weak as a 1/2. Cool effect, but I'm not sure when it would trigger. 7.5/10 "Neither do you have the right to entrance then."Unethical Alchemist Creature - Human Wizard Lifelink When Unethical Alchemist enters the battlefield, it deals two damage to target creature. 1/1 "Well, the potion works. And I only had to kill a bear this time!"Kill your thing and recoup 2 life. I know the ETB seems red but I'm thinking more Dark Nourishment style. |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 7, 2018 15:45:08 GMT
Unethical Alchemist: Might be a bit too strong because of it's ability, but on the second thought, it's just a 1/1. I'll give it 7.5/10 "You really don't understand. I have the right to do anything I want and no goddamn harlot will stop me from doing it !"Maniacal Grin Sorcery Target creature you control gets +1/+0 and gains menace until end of turn. Draw a card. Also please rate my previous card. |
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solir
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Post by solir on Apr 7, 2018 15:58:46 GMT
Pretty good - Closest thing I can think of is Renegade Tactics in that it also subtracts an effective blocker from their pool. Maybe a bit too good but definitely workable 9.5 Convict Hunter Creature - Human Soldier When Convict Hunter enters the battlefield, create a 2/2 green Hound creature token. 1/1 "You're a wanted man. I'm hungry for the reward, but the dog's just hungry. Your choose who to satiate." Just to block the menacer. |
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Post by aquaumisa on Apr 7, 2018 17:32:39 GMT
Corrupt Taxman: 8.5/10. Black rarely does punisher ish cards but I feel this is cool enough.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 7, 2018 18:09:15 GMT
solir: Umm... black and green doesn't make such things I think. Now, if this card was white and green, then I would have near to no problem, but now... Stronk 6.5/10
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Post by Neottolemo on Apr 8, 2018 13:34:43 GMT
"Hello there. I'm Rekal Aari, a sellsword. I've heard a bunch about you here and there. Seems like you're still going around, ensuring rules get respected and all that. Isn't that all a bit draining? I reckon if I stepped down from a role that stressed me I'd get into something more laid back than policing."Mindless Self-Indulgence Enchantment Whenever you discard a card, you may pay . If you do, you gain 1 life and may put a +1/+1 counter on a creature you control. , Discard a card: Target creature you control gets +1/+1 and gains menace until end of turn. , Discard a card: Exile the top card of your library. You may play that card this turn.
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solir
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Post by solir on Apr 8, 2018 14:40:16 GMT
"I'm not police. I'm the guardian of the people, and leaving the throne wasn't retirement."Mindless Self Indulgence is super cool. It's like a spellshaper enchantment. This is a definite 10/10. Thorough Constable Creature - Human Soldier Players can't discard cards. (If a spell or ability would cause a player to discard a card, it doesn't. Activated abilities and additional costs that require the discarding of cards can't be activated or paid.)2/2 "Everybody, just stop. Nobody touches any of the evidence until I'm done with it."IDK what the flavor is, I was thinking like no one can dispose of the evidence by discarding it.
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Post by Neottolemo on Apr 8, 2018 19:51:36 GMT
"Alright, don't get all worked up, it's just semantics! I think. You know, now that it came up, I'm not exactly sure what that word means..."Thorough Constable: I'm really not sure about this being a rare that's a Grey Ogre against most decks but really strong against a narrow subset. I feel like it should have a better base effect/cost ratio. 7/10
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