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Post by cajun on Sept 2, 2019 4:43:12 GMT
The Atlas Bakery Illus. by oione Boon: Players can design Lands and Planes. The sweet smell of muffins grabs your attention on the Arena. You follow your nose to a small building, proudly signed as The Atlas Bakery. Inside, the walls of the building are covered from floor to ceiling with maps from across the Multiverse. At the center of the room is a large glass case, holding a map of the Arena. Around the room are people at tables with a variety of baked goods, with a dark elf quickly zipping to tables to deliver orders or collect plates.
"Welcome to the Atlas Bakery," shouts the blonde elf woman from the counter. "We cover the whole Multiverse, in food and in directions. What can we do you for?"Open for Business  Enchantment  Whenever Open for Business or another nonland permanent enters the battlefield under your control, you gain 1 life for each other permanent you control that shares a type with it. Rule One: Don't be a jerk. Rule Two: Pay your waitresses.
for a refresher on locations, this is a neutral place that anyone can pop into or out of, to fire attacks into the wind or meet up with specific people. you can respond to pretty much any attack here and give valor accordingly (including the first post attack if you're stuck, though it's a guest attack so I won't pick up valor). Also, as long as you're here, the lands and planes are on the house.
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Sept 2, 2019 4:54:13 GMT
// Haia sets herself up at a table, with a couple pens and what looks to be a top-down map of a building."Hi, I, uh... I hope I'm not being too much of a bother... I wanted a muffin, one of the ones Miss, er, Seiva brought us, but everyone else is so busy... So I came over here myself, but I still need to work, so... I have some ryla, if that's okay..."EPIC OutpostLand   : Add  .  : You get  .  ,  : Add one mana of any color.
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3/3 Beast
 
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Post by blueseclipse on Sept 2, 2019 7:23:24 GMT
The Atlas Bakery Illus. by oione Boon: Players can design Lands and Planes. The sweet smell of muffins grabs your attention on the Arena. You follow your nose to a small building, proudly signed as The Atlas Bakery. Inside, the walls of the building are covered from floor to ceiling with maps from across the Multiverse. At the center of the room is a large glass case, holding a map of the Arena. Around the room are people at tables with a variety of baked goods, with a dark elf quickly zipping to tables to deliver orders or collect plates.
"Welcome to the Atlas Bakery," shouts the blonde elf woman from the counter. "We cover the whole Multiverse, in food and in directions. What can we do you for?"Open for Business  Enchantment  Whenever a nonland permanent enters the battlefield under your control, you gain 1 life for each other permanent you control that shares a type with it. Rule One: Don't be a jerk. Rule Two: Pay your waitresses.
for a refresher on locations, this is a neutral place that anyone can pop into or out of, to fire attacks into the wind or meet up with specific people. you can respond to pretty much any attack here and give valor accordingly (including the first post attack if you're stuck, though it's a guest attack so I won't pick up valor). Also, as long as you're here, the lands and planes are on the house. Open for Business: This actually seems overcosted - I think it would make more sense at  . 8/10// Haia sets herself up at a table, with a couple pens and what looks to be a top-down map of a building."Hi, I, uh... I hope I'm not being too much of a bother... I wanted a muffin, one of the ones Miss, er, Seiva brought us, but everyone else is so busy... So I came over here myself, but I still need to work, so... I have some ryla, if that's okay..."EPIC OutpostLand   : Add  .  : You get  .  ,  : Add one mana of any color. Epic Outpost: This makes perfect sense as a land for EPIC, and is an excellent use of energy counters. I feel like it should be rare, though. 9/10
Khon enters the bakery, nodding at Sevid as he glances around to see if Rehysia is present. Not seeing her there at the moment, he turns to leave, but pauses as he notices a form that he vaguely recognizes. Trying to place the face, he approaches the woman, and says, "You are with the Eternity Project for Interplanar Cooperation, is that correct?"Khon Vasq, Legacy of Phyrexia     Legendary Planeswalker - Khon  Whenever you cast a spell or activate an ability, you may pay two times X life. If you do, reduce the cost of that spell or ability by  .  : Look at the top five cards of your library. You may reveal an artifact card from among them and put it into your hand. Put the rest on the bottom of your library in a random order.  : For each type of counter on target permanent or player, give that permanent or player another counter of that type.  : You get an emblem with "Whenever a creature or artifact an opponent controls dies, you may pay  . If you do, return that permanent to the battlefield under your control with a compleation counter on it. It is an artifact in addition to its other types." and "Whenever a permanent you control with a compleation counter dies, you get a poison counter.". 
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Sept 2, 2019 16:39:10 GMT
blueseclipse // Haia startles a bit, but calms down quickly.
"Uh... Yes, that's right... I'm our architect. I'm sorry, I don't think I recognize you..."
This first ability needs to be worded in some way to apply during the spell cast or ability activation. At the moment, it's a triggered ability that happens when you finally cast the spell, after payment. Otherwise, this seems probably too much for a two-mana planeswalker? 6.5/10 Careful Greeting   Sorcery  Draw two cards. If you don't have a counter, discard a card.
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Post by test on Sept 7, 2019 8:45:35 GMT
One morning, a strange woman was selling trinkets and potions on Volaria, and had made a new sign for the occasion: "Local currency first // Bartered goods second". By the very next day, she had closed shop, and pulled up a chair at Atlas Bakery... then promptly moved to another table as soon as she heard someone discussing the Eternity Project nearby. There would be a time to speak to them, but for the sake of sanity, not now. Once Lettie was certain she wouldn't be bombarded with questions as before, she began asking around about the price of property right next to the Bakery... and preferably not in line of sight of the outpost that had just been drawn up.Apothecary's ShopLand  Apothecary's Shop enters the battlefield tapped.  : Add  or  .    , Sacrifice Apothecary's Shop: You draw two cards and lose 2 life. You may play an additional land this turn.
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3/3 Beast
 
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Post by blueseclipse on Sept 8, 2019 0:01:34 GMT
blueseclipse // Haia startles a bit, but calms down quickly.
"Uh... Yes, that's right... I'm our architect. I'm sorry, I don't think I recognize you..."
This first ability needs to be worded in some way to apply during the spell cast or ability activation. At the moment, it's a triggered ability that happens when you finally cast the spell, after payment. Otherwise, this seems probably too much for a two-mana planeswalker? 6.5/10 Careful Greeting   Sorcery  Draw two cards. If you don't have a counter, discard a card. I like this quite a bit - it would actually make sense in a set like New Phyrexia, or in something like Kaladesh. Or, of course, in a Commander set with experience counters in play. I just don't really see where the comes into play at all. 9/10"That is understandable - of your organization, the one I have spoken with the most is Estova Rei. I have been named as Khon Vasq... I would ask now for your name."Spellbinder Prism   Artifact  When Spellbinder Prism enters the battlefield, draw a card.   : Exile target multicolored spell unless its controller pays   . Rather than a rainbow of colors, light refracted through this prism washes the world with an unnatural, uniform paleness.
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Post by cajun on Sept 8, 2019 1:25:32 GMT
One morning, a strange woman was selling trinkets and potions on Volaria, and had made a new sign for the occasion: "Local currency first // Bartered goods second". By the very next day, she had closed shop, and pulled up a chair at Atlas Bakery... then promptly moved to another table as soon as she heard someone discussing the Eternity Project nearby. There would be a time to speak to them, but for the sake of sanity, not now. Once Lettie was certain she wouldn't be bombarded with questions as before, she began asking around about the price of property right next to the Bakery... and preferably not in line of sight of the outpost that had just been drawn up. The elf at the counter laughed a bit at the stranger's question. "The 'price' of property around here is mostly being able to hold it. Things were probably different in the city before it vanished, but here people come and go so much it'd hardly be worth the effort, I expect."
She nods at the dark elf zipping out to a table. "If you need some help with building, Xirix is always looking for odd jobs."(Guest System) Fly-By-Night EstablishmentLand  Fly-By-Night Establishment enters the battlefield tapped. When Fly-By-Night Establishment enters the battlefield, return up to one target land from your graveyard to the battlefield tapped.  : Add  . Apothecary's Shop - good ability, dunno that the explore does much good at six mana tho. 8/10
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Sept 8, 2019 19:19:48 GMT
"I, uh... My... my name is Haia Kenei."// Haia adjusts her glasses and messes with her hair.Repeatable countermagic, even this limited, definitely seems like it needs to be rare, and 1C is a really hard cost to pay for any deck not specifically trying. 6/10 I'll let you take priority from here, Haia's not really the greatest at producing conversations.
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3/3 Beast
 
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Post by blueseclipse on Sept 12, 2019 1:17:55 GMT
"I, uh... My... my name is Haia Kenei."// Haia adjusts her glasses and messes with her hair.Repeatable countermagic, even this limited, definitely seems like it needs to be rare, and 1C is a really hard cost to pay for any deck not specifically trying. 6/10 I'll let you take priority from here, Haia's not really the greatest at producing conversations. "It is good to meet you, Haia Kenei," Khon replies after the woman introduces herself. "I find myself with some curiosity regarding your organization. Do you have a presence on other planes, aside from your home plane - and, of course, here on the Arena?"
Peacekeeper's Blade  Artifact - Equipment  Whenever one or more creatures attack you or a planeswalker you control, if Peacekeeper's Blade is attached to a creature, put a charge counter on it. Equipped creature gets +1/+1 for each charge counter on Peacekeeper's Blade. If Peacekeeper's Blade has three or fewer charge counters on it, equipped creature gets defender. Otherwise, it gets vigilance. Equip 
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Sept 15, 2019 3:38:56 GMT
"It is good to meet you, Haia Kenei," Khon replies after the woman introduces herself. "I find myself with some curiosity regarding your organization. Do you have a presence on other planes, aside from your home plane - and, of course, here on the Arena?"
Peacekeeper's Blade  Artifact - Equipment  Whenever one or more creatures attack you or a planeswalker you control, if Peacekeeper's Blade is attached to a creature, put a charge counter on it. Equipped creature gets +1/+1 for each charge counter on Peacekeeper's Blade. If Peacekeeper's Blade has three or fewer charge counters on it, equipped creature gets defender. Otherwise, it gets vigilance. Equip  "We, uh... not... yet. Some analysts in the outpost are, uh... working on it..."Peacekeeper's Blade does need to say that the creature has whatever keywords are on it. I like the idea but it's probably not very good. 7/10 Recharge   Instant  Choose two -- - Put two charge counters on target artifact. - You get   . - Draw a card.
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Post by test on Sept 17, 2019 2:30:16 GMT
The elf at the counter laughed a bit at the stranger's question. "The 'price' of property around here is mostly being able to hold it. Things were probably different in the city before it vanished, but here people come and go so much it'd hardly be worth the effort, I expect."
She nods at the dark elf zipping out to a table. "If you need some help with building, Xirix is always looking for odd jobs."(Guest System) Fly-By-Night EstablishmentLand  Fly-By-Night Establishment enters the battlefield tapped. When Fly-By-Night Establishment enters the battlefield, return up to one target land from your graveyard to the battlefield tapped.  : Add  . Lettie withdraws at the laugh, and stares blankly until the elf is finished. She's unmoving and silent, before snapping to attention. "It's no great matter. Even storage space in a well developed area is worth the effort, and I have inklings for future plans with such an establishment." Lettie steps toward Xirix, stops and turns to thank the elf, then continues her approach. "Excuse me, I was told you could help me with building? I can pay you in various currency or goods you request..."
No job was too big, no fee was too big. With all the new business in the Arena, some anchor, some stability, could no longer be foregone. It was time for a new phase in this new life.
Fly-By-Night Establishment — That's some value. I'd be less apprehensive if this returned to hand. Otherwise pretty clean. 7/10
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Sept 20, 2019 19:40:48 GMT
One morning, when Haia isn't talking to a Phyrexian, she writes a small paper sign that says "Too many cats, please adopt" and then goes about her work.Harmless Kitten  Creature - Cat  When Harmless Kitten enters the battlefield, you gain 4 life. 1/1
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Post by test on Sept 21, 2019 0:09:36 GMT
One morning, when Haia isn't talking to a Phyrexian, she writes a small paper sign that says "Too many cats, please adopt" and then goes about her work.Harmless Kitten  Creature - Cat  When Harmless Kitten enters the battlefield, you gain 4 life. 1/1 Lettie stumbles into the bakery for her umpteenth breakfast in her business day, specifically without coffee. Her eyes wander over the various tiny eyes flickering in the shadows on the floor, the moving cracks in the floor, and the sign. She pinches herself, and looks at the sign again. The woman behind it, she knew her. She was a member of the eternity project. She'd said as much to that knight.
The table with the sign shakes, and Haia sees that a young woman, looking exceptionally pale save for the marks under her eyes, has aggressively leaned on it. She looks like she's startled herself as well. Then, like nothing happened, she starts slurring and drawling, "This... this sign... what's it supposed to mean? I was just at the eternity project's outpost toda... yester... earlier. There wasn't a single cat. What happened?" Teetering Toxin Artifact    ,  : Target player loses 3 life. When a creature enters the battlefield, sacrifice Teetering Toxin and put a -1/-1 counter on that creature. Harmless Kitten — That thing can kill a soldier. Otherwise, I'd expect the life gain to be 3 rather than 4, but for what little utility it offers, that's just nitpicking. A neutral 7/10
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Post by Parasign on Sept 21, 2019 5:40:04 GMT
A blonde woman saunters into the bakery, wearing what looks like a military jumpsuit and a feathered ten-gallon hat. She turns toward the elf at the counter. "Hey. You got booze, right? I'm not picky, just make it strong. 's been a long day."Potion DistilleryLand   : Add  .   ,  : Tap an untapped creature you control and put a +1/+1 counter on it. Activate this ability only during your turn.
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Post by mrlozano on Sept 21, 2019 9:41:44 GMT
A blonde woman saunters into the bakery, wearing what looks like a military jumpsuit and a feathered ten-gallon hat. She turns toward the elf at the counter. "Hey. You got booze, right? I'm not picky, just make it strong. 's been a long day."Potion DistilleryLand   : Add  .   ,  : Tap an untapped creature you control and put a +1/+1 counter on it. Activate this ability only during your turn. A small cat with a big hat approaches the woman. "Hello, meowstress! Do you meownd if I take a sit? Meowst of the other tables are full." The cat gestures with his paw.Combine LabLand  ~ enters the batlefield tapped. Whenever one or more +1/+1 counters ar put on a creature you control, untap ~.  : Add  . Potion Distillery: I think this needs the "Tap an untapped creature you control" as part of the cost, but I'm really not sure. 8/10
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Gear NO.7
1/1 Squirrel
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Post by Gear NO.7 on Sept 21, 2019 14:16:53 GMT
A man walks in and sat by a table with enough light for him to work on something that assembles the shape of a toy car. "Glass of tea please! Iced with sugar, in one of those beer glasses to the brim if possible." Remote-Control Car Artifact Vehicle  Haste, vigilance Crew 1 1/1
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Post by Parasign on Sept 21, 2019 20:50:52 GMT
mrlozano Combine Lab: This is a cool ability, but it looks horrendously breakable given the low opportunity cost of putting it on a land in the first place. Lands that can generate more than one mana per turn are almost always dangerous, and it doesn’t seem too hard to make this go infinite. I’m also a bit disappointed that it’s a Simic-themed card with no connection to  or  . 8/10.The woman takes one look at the cat and immediately downs the rest of her drink. She sets the bottle on the table and peers again at the feline, a stunned expression on her face. "Sure. Why not. Ain’t the weirdest thing I’ve seen today." She glances at the morning light streaming through the windows. "Yesterday. Whatever. So’s there a whole species a’ talking cats around here or what?"Not Ready   Instant  The next time target permanent would become untapped this turn, destroy it instead. (Players can’t cast spells during the untap step.)Draw a card.
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Sept 22, 2019 0:17:49 GMT
Lettie stumbles into the bakery for her umpteenth breakfast in her business day, specifically without coffee. Her eyes wander over the various tiny eyes flickering in the shadows on the floor, the moving cracks in the floor, and the sign. She pinches herself, and looks at the sign again. The woman behind it, she knew her. She was a member of the eternity project. She'd said as much to that knight.
The table with the sign shakes, and Haia sees that a young woman, looking exceptionally pale save for the marks under her eyes, has aggressively leaned on it. She looks like she's startled herself as well. Then, like nothing happened, she starts slurring and drawling, "This... this sign... what's it supposed to mean? I was just at the eternity project's outpost toda... yester... earlier. There wasn't a single cat. What happened?" Teetering Toxin Artifact    ,  : Target player loses 3 life. When a creature enters the battlefield, sacrifice Teetering Toxin and put a -1/-1 counter on that creature. Harmless Kitten — That thing can kill a soldier. Otherwise, I'd expect the life gain to be 3 rather than 4, but for what little utility it offers, that's just nitpicking. A neutral 7/10 "I, uh... I don't really know... I woke up and then we had a lot of cats..."
// Haia looks up at the woman. She seems to be having a bad time.
"Uh... but cats and aether don't... really get along? So no one can do... anything, really, until they go away. If... if you want to take them...?"
(Again, seems like a conversation for Lettie to continue or not. If you don't want it to continue, can just do a flavor response and leave) Teetering Toxin is interesting? Probably not very good though; it's a very uncontrollable -1/-1 counter. Flavorful, though. 8/10
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Post by test on Sept 22, 2019 1:19:03 GMT
"I, uh... I don't really know... I woke up and then we had a lot of cats..."
// Haia looks up at the woman. She seems to be having a bad time.
"Uh... but cats and aether don't... really get along? So no one can do... anything, really, until they go away. If... if you want to take them...?"
(Again, seems like a conversation for Lettie to continue or not. If you don't want it to continue, can just do a flavor response and leave) Teetering Toxin is interesting? Probably not very good though; it's a very uncontrollable -1/-1 counter. Flavorful, though. 8/10 "So... they're not there naturally, or intentionally." Lettie thinks for a moment. With luck, this wouldn't involve any interactions with Zeni, and helping the project would do her some good, since she did want the other years of Bioaetherics. "I have a lot of properties that can act as shelters. I don't know how many there are, but I can take some. But..." Lettie briefly imagines a cat knocking a vial of pale morningstar powder onto itself, or trying to drink some wolfsbane, and cringes. "I'd have to clear all of my wares from any locations they're going to. Too dangerous. You'd also have to move them yourself with planar portals. They're too large and sur- to- and complex to survive a walk with me." Lettie curses herself for stumbling, and realizes what had distracted her. Planar portals. Just like some of those wizards back home. "You can start dropping them off at any of these locations, which don't have aether..." Lettie produces a ledger filled with directions to her shops from major city centers on planes, some of which are noted as requiring an additional alarm, or needing a new door. "And I can feed them and clean up after them until they have new owners. I'll need compensation for all this, of course. I can think of some ways planar portals could make this an easy arrangement." Lettie wipes an eye, and tries to smile as she waits for Haia to look over the ledger. "I've even got alarms that can help me protect them. So how many did you say there were, again?" Unwitting Inquiry Sorcery  Target player reveals his or her hand. You choose a nonland card from it. That player discards that card. You lose 1 life for each land card revealed this way.
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Post by mrlozano on Sept 22, 2019 17:38:09 GMT
The woman takes one look at the cat and immediately downs the rest of her drink. She sets the bottle on the table and peers again at the feline, a stunned expression on her face. "Sure. Why not. Ain’t the weirdest thing I’ve seen today." She glances at the morning light streaming through the windows. "Yesterday. Whatever. So’s there a whole species a’ talking cats around here or what?"Not Ready   Instant  The next time target permanent would become untapped this turn, destroy it instead. (Players can’t cast spells during the untap step.)Draw a card. "I wouldn't really call us a 'species'. It's just two of us." The cat takes a glass of hot milk and starts sipping it. He looks really delighted. "So, are you new around here, meowstres...? What's your name? Mine is Michi, a pleasure to meet you." Michi looks at the woman, with a war, welcoming smile.Relaxing Drink    Instant  As an additional cost to cast this spell, pay  or choose a tapped creature you control. That creature doesn't untap during your next untap step. Scry 2, then draw two cards. You gain 2 life. Not Ready: I think players can cast spells during the untap step, but after all the permanents have been untapped. I'm not sure, though. 8/10
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Sept 22, 2019 18:06:09 GMT
"So... they're not there naturally, or intentionally." Lettie thinks for a moment. With luck, this wouldn't involve any interactions with Zeni, and helping the project would do her some good, since she did want the other years of Bioaetherics. "I have a lot of properties that can act as shelters. I don't know how many there are, but I can take some. But..." Lettie briefly imagines a cat knocking a vial of pale morningstar powder onto itself, or trying to drink some wolfsbane, and cringes. "I'd have to clear all of my wares from any locations they're going to. Too dangerous. You'd also have to move them yourself with planar portals. They're too large and sur- to- and complex to survive a walk with me." Lettie curses herself for stumbling, and realizes what had distracted her. Planar portals. Just like some of those wizards back home. "You can start dropping them off at any of these locations, which don't have aether..." Lettie produces a ledger filled with directions to her shops from major city centers on planes, some of which are noted as requiring an additional alarm, or needing a new door. "And I can feed them and clean up after them until they have new owners. I'll need compensation for all this, of course. I can think of some ways planar portals could make this an easy arrangement." Lettie wipes an eye, and tries to smile as she waits for Haia to look over the ledger. "I've even got alarms that can help me protect them. So how many did you say there were, again?" Unwitting Inquiry Sorcery  Target player reveals his or her hand. You choose a nonland card from it. That player discards that card. You lose 1 life for each land card revealed this way. "Uh, so... There's... a hundred, maybe? And I have to ask a few things... Um..." Haia taps her transceiver to pull up a list of some kind. "Uh, are these places off-plane? If so... are they in the same time we are? Miss Seiva says that... uh, apparently we're not from the same time as a lot of others here... So we have to be careful when tunneling away. And... um... If it works, Miss Seiva will need to spend a few days there to make sure we can get back afterwards."I don't know that I like how opponent-dependent the downside on this is? Against some decks, this turn 2 might just be no downside thoughtseize, and against others you might take 4 or something. 7/10 Wavering Timelines  Instant  Exile target spell. At the beginning of its controller's next upkeep, that player may cast that spell without paying its mana cost. (Buy myself some time to get cards out of my hand that I want to keep)
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Post by test on Sept 22, 2019 19:08:07 GMT
"Uh, so... There's... a hundred, maybe? And I have to ask a few things... Um..." Haia taps her transceiver to pull up a list of some kind. "Uh, are these places off-plane? If so... are they in the same time we are? Miss Seiva says that... uh, apparently we're not from the same time as a lot of others here... So we have to be careful when tunneling away. And... um... If it works, Miss Seiva will need to spend a few days there to make sure we can get back afterwards."I don't know that I like how opponent-dependent the downside on this is? Against some decks, this turn 2 might just be no downside thoughtseize, and against others you might take 4 or something. 7/10 Wavering Timelines  Instant  Exile target spell. At the beginning of its controller's next upkeep, that player may cast that spell without paying its mana cost. (Buy myself some time to get cards out of my hand that I want to keep) "A hundred?" Lettie says blankly, trying to keep smiling. Lettie, even if someone says something you don't like, you can't just show it off. Try and be flexible for once. "I think I can house a hundred, on a temporary basis. I'll just probably need to clear out all of my shops for a good while, because we'll need all of them." A hundred. What did they do? And that prying bitch Zeni- keep it together, they're actually taking you up on the planar portal request. Lettie thinks for a moment. She didn't know how time even worked in this place, but she had interacted with the project before. "I've been to the eternity project's before. At the time, Ani was or is still or will be a student, and I think I'm visiting the place concurrently with Pidge's delivery service. I think I'm on the same time as her, too. I hope that's the information you were looking for, because I'm not too clear on how this works. Also, I would be delighted to have Miss Seiva as my guest while she's ensuring the success of this... mission." Lettie hands over some additional location information, such as storage space and climate for each of her shops, and signs it as 'Lettie Wormwood'. "You can hand that information over to Miss Seiva, and if there are no problems, please contact me with a count of the cats and their locations so that I can start buying food and other supplies. In the meanwhile, I'll start clearing out any dangerous objects, and moving them to my storage property next to this bakery." Lettie yawns. "Which will be where I'd like to link these shops. I assume moving the cats will be more difficult, so by the time you get there, I might be asleep." Lettie hands over a key. "This is the spare, just make sure I'm awake before you start bringing in any live cats. Is there anything else you'd like to add before I get to work?"
Tabby Cat   Creature — Cat  When Tabby Cat dies, target opponent discards a card at random. When they do, return up to one target land card from that player's graveyard to the battlefield tapped under your control. 1/2 Wavering Timelines — Always been fond of spell flicker, and this is a creative response to hand attack. 9/10
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Post by blueseclipse on Sept 22, 2019 20:15:27 GMT
"We, uh... not... yet. Some analysts in the outpost are, uh... working on it..."Peacekeeper's Blade does need to say that the creature has whatever keywords are on it. I like the idea but it's probably not very good. 7/10 Recharge   Instant  Choose two -- - Put two charge counters on target artifact. - You get   . - Draw a card. I like this quite a bit, to be honest. However, I think that as a 'choose two', it should cost  , or at least  . It would be perfect as a choose one, though. 8/10"I see," Khon replies. "I was curious... but no matter. I will not disturb you further - however, should your organization have need for any additional combat support, feel free to seek me out."
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Post by cajun on Sept 23, 2019 1:00:27 GMT
A man walks in and sat by a table with enough light for him to work on something that assembles the shape of a toy car. "Glass of tea please! Iced with sugar, in one of those beer glasses to the brim if possible." Remote-Control Car Artifact Vehicle  Haste, vigilance Crew 1 1/1 The elf at the counter makes the drink, and after an ice spell from the darting dark elf, delivers it to the artificer. "One zino or equivalent," she says.
"So, what are you working on here?"Gleaming Fuel Artifact   : Target creature gains haste until end of turn.  , Sacrifice Gleaming Fuel: Target creature gets +2/+0 and gains haste until end of turn. If that creature already has haste, it gains double strike instead. Remote-Control Car - hm, maybe a bit teeny for a vehicle. 7/10
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Post by Parasign on Sept 23, 2019 3:42:53 GMT
mrlozano Relaxing Drink: Interesting additional cost. Might be a bit awkward that it doesn’t tap the creature itself, but I like how it encourages aggression on a card that would otherwise be purely for control. 9/10."New as I’ll ever be." The woman shrugs. "The name’s Jane Sullivan. Mage, outlaw, hero a' Galvan – or what’s left of it – and currently in need of another drink." She gets up to talk with the elf at the counter and comes back with three more bottles, holding one out to Michi. "Want one? No idea what alcohol does to a cat, but hey, you only die once."Nothing to Lose   Enchantment  Spells you cast cost  less to cast. At the beginning of each end step, discard your hand.
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Gear NO.7
1/1 Squirrel
Posts: 51
Formerly Known As: gearno7
Favorite Card: Narset Transcendent
Favorite Set: Dragons of Tarkir
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Red
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Post by Gear NO.7 on Sept 23, 2019 20:30:39 GMT
"So, what are you working on here?"Gleaming Fuel - Not bad, but given that Wizards had Crashing drawbridge out already, I'll say that you could push it further. 7/10 "Just something for one of the local delivery shops. I asked them to bring some stuff for me, and I'm testing the prototypes for what I'm giving in return." Great Ambitions   " style="max-width:100%;"] Instant choose a permanent on the battlefield with converted mana cost less than 3 and create a copy of it.
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Post by mrlozano on Sept 23, 2019 20:34:23 GMT
"New as I’ll ever be." The woman shrugs. "The name’s Jane Sullivan. Mage, outlaw, hero a' Galvan – or what’s left of it – and currently in need of another drink." She gets up to talk with the elf at the counter and comes back with three more bottles, holding one out to Michi. "Want one? No idea what alcohol does to a cat, but hey, you only die once."Nothing to Lose   Enchantment  Spells you cast cost  less to cast. At the beginning of each end step, discard your hand. I've accidentally deleted this post TWICE. I'm sad. And so is Michi. "It's not lethal, I think. Meow brother drank once in a party, and he spent the following day vomiting non stop." I take another sip of my glass of milk. The drink loos interesting. Bubbles and stuff. For the science? "I meow try some later. So, tell meow, meowstress Sullivan... Where do you come from? And what, where or who is "a' Galvan"?"Allured by Alcohol   Instant  Target creature attacks this turn if able. Until end of turn, whenever it deals combat damage to a player, draw a card. Nothing to Lose: I think I prefer the "Discard you hand" enchantments that draw you cards, but this seems like a good twist. 8/10
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Post by Parasign on Sept 24, 2019 2:10:26 GMT
mrlozano Allured by Alcohol: Seems very weak. Force attack + cantrip seems barely worth 2 mana on its own, and this is a more conditional, color-restricted version of that. I guess it theoretically draws an extra card if cast on a double striker, but that’s a niche enough bonus I don’t think it’s worth any sort of cost increase on its own. 8/10."More for me, then." Jane sits down and takes a long drink. "I’m from… you know what a plane is, right? Hell, doesn’t matter. A world called Feraguo. Galvan rail line, specifically. Still remember when it was an actual place and not just a long stretch of track. Back before the… Rev… before the Revelation." She downs the rest of the bottle and reaches for another. "Glad to be outta there. Spent half my time hidin' in cramped railcars and the other half runnin' fer my life. Travelin' the Multiverse's got the same thrill and a fraction a' the existential dread."She sets another empty bottle on the table. "How about you, Mish? Wha's yer deal?"End of the Line  Instant  Cast this spell only during combat after blockers are declared. Target unblocked attacking creature becomes blocked. ~ deals 3 damage to that creature.
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Post by cajun on Sept 24, 2019 4:01:58 GMT
"Oh, you're working with Pidge, huh?" She takes a closer look at the prototype. "Oh Suns. I've seen these kinds of things on Kaladesh. Can't imagine what Pidge is going to be capable of behind the wheel of one."
She took a step away, then lingered. "You make sure whatever that thing ends up as is safe for her, alright?"Mail Truck Artifact - Vehicle  Crew 2 Whenever Mail Truck deals combat damage to a creature or player, draw a card. You may discard a card rather than pay Mail Truck's crew cost. 3/3 Great Ambitions - def a blue card. copying lands is also weird. 5/10
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Sept 24, 2019 9:18:00 GMT
"A hundred?" Lettie says blankly, trying to keep smiling. Lettie, even if someone says something you don't like, you can't just show it off. Try and be flexible for once. "I think I can house a hundred, on a temporary basis. I'll just probably need to clear out all of my shops for a good while, because we'll need all of them." A hundred. What did they do? And that prying bitch Zeni- keep it together, they're actually taking you up on the planar portal request. Lettie thinks for a moment. She didn't know how time even worked in this place, but she had interacted with the project before. "I've been to the eternity project's before. At the time, Ani was or is still or will be a student, and I think I'm visiting the place concurrently with Pidge's delivery service. I think I'm on the same time as her, too. I hope that's the information you were looking for, because I'm not too clear on how this works. Also, I would be delighted to have Miss Seiva as my guest while she's ensuring the success of this... mission." Lettie hands over some additional location information, such as storage space and climate for each of her shops, and signs it as 'Lettie Wormwood'. "You can hand that information over to Miss Seiva, and if there are no problems, please contact me with a count of the cats and their locations so that I can start buying food and other supplies. In the meanwhile, I'll start clearing out any dangerous objects, and moving them to my storage property next to this bakery." Lettie yawns. "Which will be where I'd like to link these shops. I assume moving the cats will be more difficult, so by the time you get there, I might be asleep." Lettie hands over a key. "This is the spare, just make sure I'm awake before you start bringing in any live cats. Is there anything else you'd like to add before I get to work?"
Tabby Cat   Creature — Cat  When Tabby Cat dies, target opponent discards a card at random. When they do, return up to one target land card from that player's graveyard to the battlefield tapped under your control. 1/2 Wavering Timelines — Always been fond of spell flicker, and this is a creative response to hand attack. 9/10 "This is, uh... I'll ask Miss Seiva about it... If there's any problems, she'll let you know. It might be, uh... too many locations. Very expensive tunnels. But I'll, uh, ask her..."I wonder what deck might want this. Needing to die and then being really reliant on them doing something you care about seems like maybe it could have higher base stats. 7/10 Another Day   Instant Return target creature to its owner's hand. If you controlled that creature, scry 2.
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