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Post by mixedrandomj on Aug 14, 2018 18:44:29 GMT
sanscipher Pretty niche card. You didn't miss the "one or more" so it isn't broken, but I feel like this could easily have "draw a card" tagged onto it, and it probably should so it isn't a useless card most of the time. 9/10. The golem nods, and a voice echos from it. "Ryn". It looks back over to make sure that the crystal's suspension will hold, then back to Amet. "Thank You" echos from it, as it begins to glow blue. For a moment, solutions become clear. After the golem stops glowing, it begins working on reinforcing the crystal's binding.
Gifted Clarity  Instant  Each player may scry 2. Then each player may draw a card.
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Post by sanscipher on Aug 20, 2018 18:48:41 GMT
Sorry for not replying for a long time, had some IRL shit + my b-day fluffydeathbringer I'd say 9/10. Something doesn't feel right. Maybe if it drew a card instead of exiling and allowing ti cast it would be better? mixedrandomj Pretty fair card. Big effect for the low cost, but it is also applied to your opponents. 10/10 Old Tarot Deck  Artifact Whenever you Scry for the first time each turn, draw a card |
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Post by sanscipher on Sept 11, 2018 6:58:51 GMT
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Post by fluffydeathbringer on Sept 11, 2018 13:24:59 GMT
sorry aboot that, kinda forgot about this whole BB thing Suddenly, Amet's voice appearead from every direction around the fox. "If you were surviving in hostile environment, you'd learn to run from danger as well. It is much less... demanding in terms of oh so limited resources." Confusing Ventriloquism Instant  Tap all creatures "That voice. We couldn't track it out despite putting our best efforts into the task. And then we were too tired to defend the castle" - Unnamed soldierConfusing Ventriloquism: imo should be uncommon because you can either use it to tap down blockers or as a fog. 7/10
The trick fails to dissolve As'han's sanctimony: such frights are as a child's daydream in Mious. "Renounce your craft, then, if you fear for your life! Become a farmer, or a scholar, with nary an enemy! You profane a rule abided across the infinite worlds, yet have the audacity to hide from confrontation? Weakling! Prove to me that the mermaid was wrong about you!"
Instant Until end of turn, creatures you control gain "  : Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature you control. Activate this ability only once each turn." (You may only if a creature doesn't have summoning sickness.)"Drills can only prepare you so far. A soldier's true test comes when they know nothing, expect death, yet still press on."
--Kensi, captain of the guard
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Post by sanscipher on Sept 11, 2018 19:38:34 GMT
fluffydeathbringerFeel like this should be at rare. Otherwise very cool card, 9/10 "I am not to renounce the blessing from another world, even if it puts myself in danger. Now go away, before the trap you're in is closed. You see, I was not simply running for my life. I was retreating to a place of power. I have no intent to do more harm than nessesary, yet you give me no choice." - With this words, the boy concentrated dark energy surrounding the place, and channeled it to the fox, putting fear to it's very heart.Aether Vortex   Sorcery Destroy all permanents with a counter on them.
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Post by korakhos on Sept 13, 2018 16:53:10 GMT
"So you need training, huh? You wanna grow tougher? I can help you with that" says Aylin "But if you even so much as attempt to use your magic directly on me I'll turn you into fodder for the next necromancer that comes around!"Training RingLand ~ ETB tapped.  : Add  .  , ::T:, Sacrifice ~: ~ deals 4 damage to target attacking creature.
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Post by mixedrandomj on Sept 16, 2018 0:10:37 GMT
sanscipherSorry, I've had little time up till now. I should be good now. For your card, I like it, as I always wanted a card that turned scry into draw or something similar. As it's worded, you would draw after the scry I beleive, which makes this a little too good maybe? I want to say maybe making it a colorless artifact for and instead have it as "Whenever you scry for the first time each turn, you may pay . If you do, draw a card.", and also adding to it "Sacrifice ~: Scry 2". I like the attempt at trying to make a colored artifact work, but it is pretty lacking in text. Maybe some cool flavor text about a fortune teller predicting the future for someone, as having cards like this with lots of room has a lot of potential for some sweet flavor text. I won't take off for flavor text, however I do give props for it when it does appear. 8/10. Needs a cost on the draw, maybe another small effect to make it a more interesting design. Love the idea, and can easily be changed around until the card perfect. The crystal golem finishes its preparations by raising the earth around it and burying it. The golem gives one final nod to Amet, and leaves. The crystal trapped in time is now burried and sealed away.(If you want to continue doing stuff, or if Amet himself has anything he needs from Ryn, you can always go to my battleboard to rp some stuff. Otherwise, the problem has been solved for now)
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