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Post by sdfkjgh on May 18, 2018 18:19:49 GMT
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Robot_Face
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Post by Robot_Face on May 18, 2018 18:33:20 GMT
 She's an Angel   Enchantment — Aura  Enchant Creature Enchanted creature has base power and toughness 4/4, has flying and vigilance, and is an Angel in addition to its other creature types. Based of the They Might Be Giants song of the same name. |
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Post by Aarhg on May 18, 2018 19:27:49 GMT
mrchristianpunk: I do love me some Metallica, but your card is grossly overpowered. One creature steal could well be worth    , but here you get four and way to repeatedly Mindslaver your opponent for four turns, which would just win you the game. I do like the idea you're playing with here, but you need to dial it way back in power.
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mrchristianpunk
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Post by mrchristianpunk on May 18, 2018 19:40:09 GMT
sdfkjgh: Thank you, Thank you. Aarhg: Yea, it does need to be dialed back in power. I think is fine if I add a "until ~ leaves the battlefield" and making it so they take extra turns after you mindslave them and adding to the ability.
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Post by Aarhg on May 18, 2018 19:57:53 GMT
Aarhg : Yea, it does need to be dialed back in power. I think is fine if I add a "until ~ leaves the battlefield" and making it so they take extra turns after you mindslave them and adding to the ability. I'm not sure, man. When you get going with mindslavering your opponent, the only way they would be able to stop you is with instant speed disruption, but you could just empty their hand of that during the time when you control them. You've gotta keep in mind that mindslavering is better than taking an extra turn a lot of the time. It's a very, very powerful effect to be able to chain together four times. Edit: Whoops, didn't see that about giving the opponent an extra turn after mindslavering them. Even then, it's still really strong, but it's definitely less broken. |
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Mahx Michael
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Post by Mahx Michael on May 18, 2018 20:11:15 GMT
Since noone here gets Vocaloid-stuff, I'm instead gonna go for the track Ignite by K391 & Alan Walker (feat. Julie Bergan & Seungri)The song and the card might not be directly connected, but I did my best:
Planeswalker's Ignition
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Choose a legendary creature you control, and put it on the bottom of it’s owners library. Then search your library for a planeswalker with the same colors and converted mana cost equal to or less than the chosen creature’s converted mana cost, and put it onto the battlefield. Then shuffle your library.
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I'm not 100% sure about the color of this card, if it should be white or some other color, or maybe even just be 3 generic, idk. I used Call the Gatewatch as a template on how to cost it, concidering it is the only similar printed card I know of.
Anyone have any feedback for me?
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Post by Aarhg on May 18, 2018 20:37:19 GMT
Since noone here gets Vocaloid-stuff, I'm instead gonna go for the track Ignite by K391 & Alan Walker (feat. Julie Bergan & Seungri)The song and the card might not be directly connected, but I did my best:
Planeswalker's Ignition
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I'm not 100% sure about the color of this card, if it should be white or some other color, or maybe even just be 3 generic, idk. I used Call the Gatewatch as a template on how to cost it, concidering it is the only similar printed card I know of.
Anyone have any feedback for me?
I like what you're trying to do here, but I feel the flavor misses slightly, since the creature and the planeswalker wouldn't typically be the same character. The flip-walkers and original Bolas would be the exceptions. Looking at it mechanically, being able to get a 5/6/7-drop walker in play on turn three can be pretty devastating for the opponent. The safe way to deal with this would be to put the planeswalker into the hand instead of play, but then we basically just have Call the Gatewatch. I think, if it was up to me, I'd up the mana a bit and make it sorcery speed. White is probably a fine color to put this effect in, rather than it being a colorless spell. |
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Mahx Michael
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Post by Mahx Michael on May 18, 2018 22:50:01 GMT
How about if restrict the card to fetch a planeswalker with cmc less or equal to the creatures cmc? Also for the sorcery speed thing: Awakenings arn't usually something a planeswalker plans beforehand. How about i make an ability that sais, "When you draw the card, you may reveal it as you draw it. If you do and have the mana available to cast it, you may cast it as thought it was an instant."?
I am aware of the flavor issue of the planeswalker not nessecerly being the same being as the chosen creature, but this is the only way I kan think of that could represent the awakening of a planeswalker. |
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Post by Aarhg on May 18, 2018 23:16:00 GMT
How about if restrict the card to fetch a planeswalker with cmc less or equal to the creatures cmc? Also for the sorcery speed thing: Awakenings arn't usually something a planeswalker plans beforehand. How about i make an ability that sais, "When you draw the card, you may reveal it as you draw it. If you do and have the mana available to cast it, you may cast it as thought it was an instant."?
I am aware of the flavor issue of the planeswalker not nessecerly being the same being as the chosen creature, but this is the only way I kan think of that could represent the awakening of a planeswalker. The CMC thing might be a good idea. Maybe consider giving the card miracle? That could fit the flavor pretty well. |
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Akai Ryu
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Post by Akai Ryu on May 19, 2018 11:50:13 GMT
A bit overpowered, don't you think? I'd change the manacost and make it higher. |
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mrchristianpunk
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Post by mrchristianpunk on May 19, 2018 17:32:28 GMT
Akai Ryu: I'm going to, but I have d&d today and I'm writing down all my characters, traits, features, and spells so i don't have to flip through the book each time my cleric casts a spell.
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Mahx Michael
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Post by Mahx Michael on May 19, 2018 23:07:22 GMT
Updated my entry. What do you think of the wording? Is it fine, or is it too messy? |
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inverness
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Post by inverness on May 20, 2018 15:07:15 GMT
@mahx Michael The "Event" keyword is almost the same as Miracle. I think if you just put the text in there without having it be an ability it'd work better. The restrictions on the search clause, while good, are also very wordy. Here's how I would word it:
You may reveal this card as you draw it. If you do, you may cast it by paying instead of its mana cost. Choose a legendary creature you control. Search your library for a planeswalker card that shares a color with the chosen creature and has converted mana cost equal to or less than the chosen creature, then put that planeswalker onto the battlefield. Shuffle the chosen creature into your library.
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inverness
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Post by inverness on May 20, 2018 15:10:20 GMT
Also, finally got an entry together. I came up with this mechanic a long time ago, but have tweaked it a bit since then. This entry doesn't represent any specific song(s), but is part of a cycle of cards I made around the idea of a chorus that echoes on itself. Or something.
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Mahx Michael
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Post by Mahx Michael on May 20, 2018 16:17:52 GMT
@mahx Michael The "Event" keyword is almost the same as Miracle. I think if you just put the text in there without having it be an ability it'd work better. The restrictions on the search clause, while good, are also very wordy. Here's how I would word it:
You may reveal this card as you draw it. If you do, you may cast it by paying instead of its mana cost. Choose a legendary creature you control. Search your library for a planeswalker card that shares a color with the chosen creature and has converted mana cost equal to or less than the chosen creature, then put that planeswalker onto the battlefield. Shuffle the chosen creature into your library.
So the "put it on the bottom of it's owners library" part is there in case you control a creature you don't own. Shouldn't the card design make sure noone shuffles another player's card into his library? As for the event ability, I want the card to give you the options to either cast the card right away, instant speed, as you draw it, or not to be able to cast it as an instant at all (since it's a sorcery). Should I instead make it an instant with higher cost and have the event cost make it cheaper if you cast it right away. Or is it redundant to "cast it as thought it was an instant", if I require it to be cast immediately, even if it is a sorcery? Could the word immediately also make something instant speed?
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Mahx Michael
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Post by Mahx Michael on May 20, 2018 23:33:53 GMT
I've updated my entry and made a render. Here it is, concider all my other entries as old: |
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wapulatus
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Post by wapulatus on May 21, 2018 4:30:02 GMT
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inverness
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Post by inverness on May 21, 2018 13:34:07 GMT
Mahx MichaelGood point about the ownership issue. I hadn't thought of that. The final edition you submitted looks pretty good!
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Post by nhoj2307 on May 21, 2018 14:08:36 GMT
Ill Descrescendo ::Rare:: Enchantment - Aura Curse Enchant Player At the beginning of enchanted player's upkeep, that player puts a -1/-1 counter on each creature they control. At the beginning of enchanted player's end step, if that player controls no creatures, Exile ~, then return it to the battlefield transformed. "As one army declines..."_______________ Rousing Crescendo  Enchantment At the beginning of your upkeep, put 2 +1/+1 counters on each creature you control Creatures you control with +1/+1 counters gain Trample. "...another thrives" |
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Post by Daij_Djan on May 21, 2018 16:50:10 GMT
This thread is now closed, the poll can be found here. And here's the next challenge! |
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"When in doubt, do a common."