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Post by Daij_Djan on Nov 1, 2021 22:33:24 GMT
Welcome to the Card of the Week Contest! To participate in this Contest you'll have to design a card along the contest guidelines and throw it into the arena with other competitors' entries! At the end of each week, a winner will be determined by forum poll. The winner's card will be rendered and featured on the Welcome page, and the winner decides the challenge for the next week's Contest! Here we go, competitors: our three-hundred and ninety-first challenge! The winner of the "Treasures of the Wastes" poll was Daij_Djan with...And the challenge issued by our winner was... Inspired by my winning design, your new challenge shall be: Design a card with „sacrifice“ in its rules text. Whether your card sacrifices itself, other stuff, cares about things getting sacrificed, stopping sacrifices.. Feel free to come up with whatever you can think of! Reminder text counts. To increase your chances of winning and to also make creating the poll easier on whomever is doing so, please try to use a render. Additionally, please try to keep your entry edits all in one post - if you need to change it you can put your old entry in a spoiler marked "Old entry" and leave the newest rendition to be seen. Just use the edit button in the top/right of your original post.And now, time to begin the challenge! Best of luck, competitors!
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Post by lordpat on Nov 1, 2021 22:56:08 GMT
{Cackling Goblin}
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MonkeyChewToy
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Post by MonkeyChewToy on Nov 1, 2021 23:55:01 GMT
{Cackling Goblin} This is not an entry, I just had to make a riff off of the Lotus Vale flavor text the way lordpat riffed on Dark Confidant's. {Valletous Goblin} P.S. — "Valletous" isn't a word, (although it could roughly mean 'every valley' in French,) it's just an anagram of Lotus Vale.
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Post by viriss on Nov 2, 2021 1:20:09 GMT
{previous idea}
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inverness
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Post by inverness on Nov 2, 2021 1:33:42 GMT
I wish we could've had another D&D set, so I made this take on Pelor. It emphasizes his themes of the redeemer.
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Post by bastardneko on Nov 2, 2021 3:12:04 GMT
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Vunik
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Maybe trying to kill an immortal mage wasn't the best plan . . .
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Post by Vunik on Nov 2, 2021 4:12:09 GMT
This started as an enchantment, then I couldn't find any art I liked, so now it's an Angel.
Devoir, Unyielding Sanctity Legendary Enchantment Creature - Angel Flying, lifelink Creatures can't be sacrificed. If an effect would cause you to sacrifice a creature, create a 1/1 white Human creature token instead. "The life of one is as important as the many - and I will protect them all." [4/4]
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Post by zybourne on Nov 2, 2021 6:24:39 GMT
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Post by sade612 on Nov 2, 2021 7:22:52 GMT
{Text} Kitsune Perimeter Guard Creature - Fox Samurai , Sacrifice Kitsune Perimeter Guard: Destroy target attacking creature. 2/2
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Post by BinaryBolas on Nov 2, 2021 9:02:01 GMT
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Post by hydraheadhunter on Nov 2, 2021 17:05:12 GMT
| Nerru, Custodian of the Betrayed A green, a white, a blue, and a black Legendary creature - elf mystic
You cannot sacrifice creature tokens.
Whenever a player sacrifices another non-token creature, create a token copy of that creature except it is a 1/1 white spirit in additon to its other types and colors.
A generic, a black or white, a blue or green, and sacrifice another creature: Gain 2 life and draw a card. |
A little foil to It That Betrays, I imagine Nerru as one scant survivors of the Joraga or more likely the Mul Daya, working to mend nature by appeasing the dead created in the destruction wrought by the eldrazi. And as a nice little bonus, the commander deck basically builds itself.
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Nov 2, 2021 23:34:08 GMT
In honor of both Crimson Vow spoiler season and a Vampire the Masquerade campaign I'm planning.
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Post by sdfkjgh on Nov 2, 2021 23:45:19 GMT
zybourne : Well, there is the old Hatching Plans/Perilous Research combo from Guildpact Standard (Whaddyawant from me? I'm old!), so...
As to the Challenge, good thing I designed this just last night:
Shiki, Gorger of Souls Legendary Creature--Zombie Changeling (This card is every creature type at all times.) Deathtouch, vigilance Exploit, exploit, exploit Whenever you exploit another creature, for each opponent, you may pay . If you do, choose a permanent that player controls. That player sacrifices that permanent and you draw a card. You may cast Shiki, Gorger of Souls from your graveyard by sacrificing three creatures in addition to paying its mana cost. 3/6
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MonkeyChewToy
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Post by MonkeyChewToy on Nov 3, 2021 3:06:42 GMT
Inspired by my winning design, your new challenge shall be: Design a card with „sacrifice“ in its rules text. Whether your card sacrifices itself, other stuff, cares about things getting sacrificed, stopping sacrifices.. Feel free to come up with whatever you can think of! Reminder text counts. What an exciting opportunity to revisit one of my favorite designs from... *checks watch* ten years ago. My, how Magic design has evolved since 2011. We had only just started entering the battlefield instead of coming into play, we were still putting tokens onto the battlefield instead of creating them, and we Jace, the Mindsculptor still died when Jace Beleren entered the battlefield. Since Khans of Tarkir changed the order of mana symbols on enemy-wedge cards, there's now a clearer sequence for what order to list her abilities in, and new shorthand templating lets me fit in a third ability. I've changed her abilities from searching to milling to reduce shuffling and repetitive gameplay (in line with the pivot from Farhaven Elf to Elvish Rejuvenator.) It also serves to distance her mechanically from Razaketh, the Foulblooded, (who didn't exist at the time, naturally,) and because filling the graveyard helps to offset the power level since 'cascading' is so much less powerful than tutoring. I also adjusted her stats to be more in line with modern Commanders. All in all, this is the best she's looked in years!
EDIT: Reworded her abilities to dodge auto-loss from Rest in Peace and had to reorder them on the card as a result. Reverted her mana cost to the pre-Khans order so that the mana symbols on her abilities read in the same order as her mana cost. Changed power/toughness from 4/5 to 3/5. Now this is the best she's looked in years!
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Post by quazerflame on Nov 3, 2021 3:45:18 GMT
I made this card a while ago for the slots thread. Reminder text counts? How about preventing death entirely? Two versions, one with reminder text, one with flavor text. (They couldn't fit on the same card, unfortunately.)
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Vunik
2/2 Zombie
Maybe trying to kill an immortal mage wasn't the best plan . . .
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Post by Vunik on Nov 3, 2021 4:57:15 GMT
Can planeswalkers "die"? I thought that terminology was only extended to creatures, in which case this should just say "Other creatures you control can't die." Won't affect planewalkers, but maintains the striking line of text. But I am completely open to being dead (heh) wrong.
Otherwise, very cool ability.
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Post by quazerflame on Nov 3, 2021 5:08:25 GMT
Can planeswalkers "die"? I thought that terminology was only extended to creatures, in which case this should just say "Other creatures you control can't die." Won't affect planewalkers, but maintains the striking line of text. But I am completely open to being dead (heh) wrong.
Otherwise, very cool ability. Technically, any permanent can die. It's shorthand for "is put into the graveyard from the battlefield" and used to be written out that way.
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Post by The Harlequin on Nov 3, 2021 11:28:50 GMT
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Post by Daij_Djan on Nov 3, 2021 11:46:45 GMT
Technically, any permanent can die. It's shorthand for "is put into the graveyard from the battlefield" and used to be written out that way. Technically, but that wording is used exclusively for creatures (except maybe planeswalkers? not sure about them either). Other permanents don't use the shortened wording.
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the5lacker
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Post by the5lacker on Nov 3, 2021 13:46:45 GMT
Inspired by my winning design, your new challenge shall be: Design a card with „sacrifice“ in its rules text. Whether your card sacrifices itself, other stuff, cares about things getting sacrificed, stopping sacrifices.. Feel free to come up with whatever you can think of! Reminder text counts. What an exciting opportunity to revisit one of my favorite designs from... *checks watch* ten years ago. My, how Magic design has evolved since 2011. We had only just started entering the battlefield instead of coming into play, we were still putting tokens onto the battlefield instead of creating them, and we Jace, the Mindsculptor still died when Jace Beleren entered the battlefield. Since Khans of Tarkir changed the order of mana symbols on enemy-wedge cards, there's now a clearer sequence for what order to list her abilities in, and new shorthand templating lets me fit in a third ability. I've changed her abilities from searching to milling to reduce shuffling and repetitive gameplay (in line with the pivot from Farhaven Elf to Elvish Rejuvenator.) It also serves to distance her mechanically from Razaketh, the Foulblooded, (who didn't exist at the time, naturally,) and because filling the graveyard helps to offset the power level since 'cascading' is so much less powerful than tutoring. I also adjusted her stats to be more in line with modern Commanders. All in all, this is the best she's looked in years! You may want to slightly reformat that ability as this interacts very poorly with the likes of Rest in Peace. Like, "oops I exiled my entire deck" badly. Formatting for these effects is typically "Reveal until you reveal X, put X into hand and rest into graveyard/bottom of library/etc." so that replacement effects don't prevent the effects from being able to track what goes where.
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Post by spazlaz on Nov 3, 2021 16:06:07 GMT
For those of you who don't know, the donner party was a famous group of people who were travelling to California, got stuck in horrible snow weather and had to eat each other. This is a bit of play on that implying that they wanted to eat each other.
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MonkeyChewToy
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Post by MonkeyChewToy on Nov 3, 2021 16:17:54 GMT
You may want to slightly reformat that ability as this interacts very poorly with the likes of Rest in Peace. Like, "oops I exiled my entire deck" badly. Formatting for these effects is typically "Reveal until you reveal X, put X into hand and rest into graveyard/bottom of library/etc." so that replacement effects don't prevent the effects from being able to track what goes where. Oof, you're right. I thought about that interaction briefly, but I overlooked that it creates an auto-lose situation, and was avoiding "reveal, then put" because it made the text too long. I reasoned that there was no Rest in Peace with flash, so you could just... not activate her when one is on the board, but I realize now that there's too many ways to sneak stuff in, especially in commander. I'm gonna think on this and make some changes. Hopefully I can fit the 'reveal and put' formatting in. At the very least I'll put "you may" in front so you can just opt not to mill if someone flashes in [card]Leyline of the Void[/card]. Thanks for the assist!
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Post by the5lacker on Nov 3, 2021 16:45:44 GMT
You may want to slightly reformat that ability as this interacts very poorly with the likes of Rest in Peace. Like, "oops I exiled my entire deck" badly. Formatting for these effects is typically "Reveal until you reveal X, put X into hand and rest into graveyard/bottom of library/etc." so that replacement effects don't prevent the effects from being able to track what goes where. Oof, you're right. I thought about that interaction briefly, but I overlooked that it creates an auto-lose situation, and was avoiding "reveal, then put" because it made the text too long. I reasoned that there was no Rest in Peace with flash, so you could just... not activate her when one is on the board, but I realize now that there's too many ways to sneak stuff in, especially in commander. I'm gonna think on this and make some changes. Hopefully I can fit the 'reveal and put' formatting in. At the very least I'll put "you may" in front so you can just opt not to mill if someone flashes in Leyline of the Void. Thanks for the assist! I'll tinker with some formatting ideas I have that might help with that. It's definitely the kind of ability that's easy to grok but has a lot of necessary vocab. You could reveal a set number and pick one? Saves on a bit of room. EDIT: I'll be honest, throwing together a quick test render, "Reveal cards from the top of your library until you reveal an X card. Put it into your hand and the rest into your graveyard." works for formatting for this. Even the three times, it's normal text size and doesn't intersect the P/T box or watermark.
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Post by Pixi-Rex on Nov 3, 2021 17:51:24 GMT
My entry is also a bit of a prediction. I think Karn will destroy Mirrodin/New Phyrexia to stop the Phyrexias once and for all.
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Post by MonkeyChewToy on Nov 3, 2021 18:25:44 GMT
Oof, you're right. I thought about that interaction briefly, but I overlooked that it creates an auto-lose situation, and was avoiding "reveal, then put" because it made the text too long. I reasoned that there was no Rest in Peace with flash, so you could just... not activate her when one is on the board, but I realize now that there's too many ways to sneak stuff in, especially in commander. I'm gonna think on this and make some changes. Hopefully I can fit the 'reveal and put' formatting in. At the very least I'll put "you may" in front so you can just opt not to mill if someone flashes in Leyline of the Void. Thanks for the assist! I'll tinker with some formatting ideas I have that might help with that. It's definitely the kind of ability that's easy to grok but has a lot of necessary vocab. You could reveal a set number and pick one? Saves on a bit of room. EDIT: I'll be honest, throwing together a quick test render, "Reveal cards from the top of your library until you reveal an X card. Put it into your hand and the rest into your graveyard." works for formatting for this. Even the three times, it's normal text size and doesn't intersect the P/T box or watermark. I hit upon pretty much the same wording. "Reveal cards from the top of your library until you reveal an X card, put it into your hand, then put the rest into your graveyard." Previously it took up too much space because I was following the template of Hermit Druid, but mimicking the Evolutionary Leap wording is more concise. I'm noticing that cards that put revealed cards back into the library tend to say "the rest" but cards that put them into the graveyard say "put all other cards revealed this way," which is much wordier for seemingly no reason. I was avoiding the Militia Bugler route because it seems so much weaker, but maybe that's offset by the graveyard filling, I'm not sure. I do worry that there's potential for graveyard abuse as written, but I don't think it causes any new problems that Hermit Druid doesn't already cause. Gonna have to think on that some more, see if I can find out why this difference seems to exist.
I'm still debating the "you may" wording. With Rest in Peace out, "you may" prevents you from exiling any cards, but doesn't get you the card you wanted. "Reveal until" gets you the card you wanted, but exiles everything else. Which is worse? With "reveal until" I can at least dig for Reclamation Sage or Seal of Cleansing to try to get out from the RiP, so I'm leaning towards that unless I find out that the reason for the different templates is significant. I'll keep you posted and update my entry when I get there.
Also I realized she's supposed to be 3/5. I have several copies in my mse-file so I can try out different templates, and I only fixed the P/T on some of them. Oops.
EDIT: Comparing Spoils of the Vault to Sword-Point Diplomacy, (among others,) it looks like "the rest" is used when there's a set number of cards being looked at, while "all other cards revealed this way" is used for cards that reveal a variable number, and whether they're going to the library or the graveyard is less relevant than I thought. My guess is that this is to make it clearer what to do if, for example, the card you're Spoils-ing for is right on top. If that's the case, I'm not going to worry about shortcutting to "the rest" because I don't think there's that much difference in terms of clarity.
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Post by hydraheadhunter on Nov 3, 2021 19:05:00 GMT
My entry is also a bit of a prediction. I think Karn will destroy Mirrodin/New Phyrexia to stop the Phyrexias once and for all. There's just one problem with that storyline... he's a bit too late (yes, that is vorinclex on kaldheim. yes, I had a small freak out when that was spoiled). We don't quite know how, yet, but a Phyrexian have gotten out of New Phyrexia, and those fuckers are like ants: where there's one, there's thousands. That means the Phyrexian storyline's not gonna be resolvable with just one big boom, not to mention the theory crafting that went around during war of the gods, that Elspeth's spear is dripping with psuedo-phyrexian oil. Which is just the state of the multiverse. It's not even considering that wizards is telling a story in perpetuity, meaning that now that they've put both bolas and the eldrazi in bottom storage; the phyrexians are the only big multiplanar threat left in play right now (that we know of), so to keep a throughline through the various sets, they've gotta have to keep 'em around for a while at least until some new big bad can pop up to menace the multiverse and gatewatch. That said, it's a reasonable prediction that Karn's going to try to do that thing, considering they set it up so that he could at least attempt it.
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Post by sdfkjgh on Nov 3, 2021 19:12:38 GMT
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MonkeyChewToy
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Post by MonkeyChewToy on Nov 3, 2021 19:43:30 GMT
For those of you who don't know, the donner party was a famous group of people who were travelling to California, got stuck in horrible snow weather and had to eat each other. This is a bit of play on that implying that they wanted to eat each other.
Fun fact! There's evidence to suggest that, yeah, they chose to each other. According to accounts [source] from the Washoe tribe that lived in the area, their scouts left meat and potatoes just outside the camp for Donner and his party, and the Donner party chose to shoot at the scouts and eat each other rather than accept their aid. So yeah, they didn't have to eat people, but they did. Yuck.
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Post by quazerflame on Nov 3, 2021 20:59:26 GMT
I think you actually meant me, as that's my entry. I don't envision Eterna as actually being a horse or pegasus, they simply look like one, but they're actually a life elemental.
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Post by damagicgeek on Nov 4, 2021 2:48:52 GMT
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