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Post by Jartis on Nov 9, 2018 3:20:07 GMT
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Post by Daij_Djan on Nov 9, 2018 7:53:31 GMT
@ viriss : Big thanks for the win - glad you liked my design 
@ Jartis : Big thanks for the heads-up - I knew I missed something 
So for your next challenge.. Design a planeswalker that references another card by name. Have fun, everyone! |
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Post by Neottolemo on Nov 9, 2018 11:48:13 GMT
@ viriss : Big thanks for the win - glad you liked my design
@ Jartis : Big thanks for the heads-up - I knew I missed something
So for your next challenge.. Design a planeswalker that references another card by name. Have fun, everyone! Hello I have no idea if I mainframed this correctly so any suggestions to make the render look better are welcome Excuse the blatant self insert /jk |
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Post by viriss on Nov 9, 2018 13:47:09 GMT
 Maybe he should be "druids"? |
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Post by Tesagk on Nov 9, 2018 15:56:05 GMT
Jhoira, the Flame Wind     Legendary Creature - Human Artificer  Artifact spells you cast cost less to cast. Whenever an artifact enters the battlefield under your control, Jhoira, the Flame Wind deals 1 damage to each creature, planeswalker, and player. If Jhoira would be destroyed by non-combat damage, exile it instead. Then, at the beginning of the next end step, return Jhoira to the field transformed. 2/3 Jhoira, the Ancient Spark Legendary Planeswalker - Jhoira Partner with a Teferi, Hero of Dominaria (When
this planeswalker permanent enters the battlefield,
target player may put Teferi, Hero of Dominaria into
their hand from their library, then shuffle.)
 : Draw a card, then discard a card. If you control a Teferi Planeswalker, you do not need to discard a card and you gain 2 life.  : Create a 1/1 colorless Servo artifact creature token with, “T, Sacrifice this: Choose one: Draw a card or this deals 2 damage to target creature.  {Render}  |
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Post by Flo00 on Nov 9, 2018 20:56:49 GMT
I did what I usually do with these challenges. I pressed the random button... and got Mogg Raider. Oumgl, Scourge of Rath Planeswalker - Oumgl : Create two 1/1 red Gblin crerature tokens. : Search your library for a card named Mogg Raider and put it onto the battlefield. Then shuffle your library. : Oumgl, Scourge of Rath deals damage to each opponent equal to the number of Goblins you control plus the number of Goblin cards in your graveyard.  |
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Post by mrlozano on Nov 10, 2018 13:05:45 GMT
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Post by gateways7 on Nov 10, 2018 15:26:25 GMT
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Post by augur on Nov 11, 2018 7:47:01 GMT
did random as well and got Miasmic Mummy twice out of several- must have been fate Attachment DeletedAnhur, Twisted Embalmer  Legendary Planeswalker- Anhur : Choose up to one target creature you control. Until end of turn, when that creature dies, return that card from your graveyard to your hand.  : Search your library and/or graveyard for a card named Miasmic Mummy, reveal it, and put it onto the battlefield. If you search your library this way, shuffle it.  : Return any number of target creature cards with total converted mana cost seven or less from your graveyard to the battlefield.  |
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Post by gluestick248 on Nov 11, 2018 17:46:32 GMT
“The hockey puck that costs nothing and does even less!” -Friday Nights Kisha, Darksteel Solderer  Legendary Planeswalker — Kisha : If you control an artifact, draw a card. If that artifact has indestructible, draw two cards instead.  : Search your library for an artifact card with converted mana cost X or mess and put it into your hand. Then shuffle your library.  : You get an emblem with “Artifacts you control named Darksteel Relic are 10/10 Golem artifact creatures with trample that can’t be exiled or sacrificed” |
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Post by Jartis on Nov 12, 2018 5:49:32 GMT
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Post by Fleur on Nov 12, 2018 16:08:39 GMT
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Post by Jartis on Nov 21, 2018 8:25:48 GMT
Daij_Djan Think this one's good to go (inb4 several more entries from the thread being brought up the list)
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Post by Daij_Djan on Nov 26, 2018 1:18:35 GMT
Well, I've been waiting for the final rush to flow in - but as it didn't, I guess I'll close this contest now. Please no further changes of entries!
Sorry for the wait – but I'm never the quickest judge, especially for this specific contest But still, here we go: | @Neottolemo: | To be honest I did not expect anyone to work with a custom card to reference to, but I definitely apprechiate the creativity – also this sure is an interesting card to work with. Her is really interesting (aside from obviously working well with the Mage) even though I'm not really sure if it fits into red considering the only colored comparison clearly is rather blue instead. Also I have to admit I'm not the biggest fan of her  as it's either completely useless or (given the right deck) borderline broken – even though I know some players like this kind of abilities. I do however really, really like her  . | | @viriss: | OK, that's quite powerful. His alone offers some (even though admittedly rather weak) protection or some quite solid ramp and his  offering a permanent, unremovable anthem for elves really pushes it over the top. Limiting it to druids seems to be the safer call obviously, but some fiddeling with his mana and loyalty costs would work as well. | | @Tesagk: | So here's the first of two transforming planeswalkers to look at. First of all: Using the „Partner with..“ mechanic to fulfill the given challenge was a clever choice – even though it's a bit odd for Teferi not have Partner himself and for the two cards not to really interact and/or work well with one another at all (with the second thing bugging me more than the first). Looking at the individual card I have to point out how incredibly wordy it is (nine lines in creature form plus eleven as planeswalker) and how there are some wording issues. The creature half is missing the „you“ in her first ability on the render, why does her second ability refer to „another“ artifact, and it should be „battlefield“ in her third. Her planeswalker half's should say „Draw a card, then discard a card: If you control a Teferi planeswalker, draw a card and you gain 2 life instead.“ (sadly you can't use the „unless“ wording because of the life gain) and I'm not sure modular abilities like the tokens created by her possess works without bulletin points? Finally, it feels like her planeswalker self actually looks a bit too weak considering we're talking about a three-colored CMC4 card you still need to get to transform. So as much as I like the general concept of the card (I really do, even though I guess I'm talking it down so much), it feels like it needs some serious reworking and streamlining. | | @Flo00: | First of all: I like using the random button on challenges like this as well And I think you ended up with an interesting card indeed – but I'm afraid your card ended up being way too strong. Tutoring up the Raider as a for a CMC3 planeswalker alone would be very powerful already, but creating two 1/1 tokens with his other really is too much. And the ultimate being ready the turn after you played him has the potential of doing massive amounts of damage – I do like how it checks the battlefield and your graveyard to nicely work with your given Mogg Raider, though. So as much as I like the concept, the numbers on your card need some serious pondering imho. | | @mrlozano: | That's a very interesting way to fulfill the given challenge and a very nice card in total. The abilities seems to be reasonably balanced and work nicely in a Tarkir setting. Personally I'm not sure whether her backside really needs to be all colors (especially considering her abilities still are monowhite), but that might be me. Also, even though I know this didn't work given the challenge, it might be a simpler approach (while also offering room to add more god weapons in future sets) to as for a legendary enchantment artifact instead of writing out all five names. | | @gateways7: | I guess I have to compare your card to Neottolemo's Ara for obvious reasons. Your Rat King's obviously is quite strong compared to her (considering it will hardly miss) but cannot be broken either as it has a „fixed“ power level – which is a good thing. I really like how nice your card plays in a rat tribal deck (kudos for making him a potential commander) even if that deck is not purely focussed on the „Your deck may contain any number..“ shenanigans. | | @augur: | Another entry inspired by the random button – I like it Also this is now the third (non-transforming) CMC planeswalker and definitely the most balanced of the trio. His looks solid and fittingly in color, while his basically is Liliana of the Veil's – except you also get a 2/2 body out of it, which (as I realize as I'm writing this) probably is a bit much and might be better as ? Not sure, I might be overestimating it as well. The ultimate is also very solid, even though it kind of frustrates my inner Melvin: Why does the reanimiate creatures with total CMC of seven? Personal peeves aside, I do wonder how the ultimate could be broken somehow – as I'm sure it can be (not as this is bad for an ultimate). | | @gluestick248: | Holy crap, what an ultimate! Seriously, it's at the same time awesome as it looks like pure trolling – which makes it a bit hard to evaluate the rest of the card somehow But yeah, the aside, this looks like a very solid (even if maybe a bit bland – but then again, what wouldn't be compared to that ultimate?) planeswalker. Just a funny wording nitpick: I'm pretty sure the is supposed to say „X or less“ instead.. | | @Jartis: | It's interesting to see how your Guardian's  doesn't really interact with the Dryad Arbors you might have tutored up with his but rather it kind of turns all of your other lands into lands creatures as well instead. To be honest I'm not completely sure this combination would play as nice together, but still. I do wonder about the emblem created by his ultimate, though: What kind of shared tye are you referring to? As the dryads would also support creature types I'm not completely sure, but I guess the most likely candidate would be land types instead? | | @Fleur: | I guess I'll start with my final summary: This looks like a really solid planeswalker. The is a nice way to give red card advantage, the reminds me of Braid of Fire (which I always loved and is one of the cards which made me a bit sad to see mana burn go away – I know, I'm a bit weird sometimes ) for obvious reasons – and the ultimate, while basically just being “deal 3 damage to three targets” offers some nice flavor and potential minor interaction potential. Costs and stats seem to be fine as well, even if I'd personally reduse the starting loyalty to , I guess. |
And the winner is.. Fleur! Runner-ups (in no particular order) go to mrlozano and gateways7. |
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Post by Fleur on Nov 26, 2018 20:18:18 GMT
Thanks for the win! Your next challenge:
Pick one of the following words and make a planeswalker that is related to that word flavorfully, mechanically or in some other way. Bonus points will be awarded if the reference to the word is integrated in an elegant way, rather than slapped on:
Your words are:
Gloves
Glasses
Books
Tea
Whisky
Flowers
Ceramic
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Post by Flo00 on Nov 27, 2018 9:20:00 GMT
Ashton the Thief Planeswalker - Ashton : Target permanent gains hexproof and can’t be blocked until your next turn. : Search your library for a card named Rogue’s Gloves and put it onto the battlefield. You may attach it to a creature you control. : Target opponent exiles the top seven cards of their library. As long as those cards remain exiled, you may play them without paying their mana cost. |
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Post by Tesagk on Nov 27, 2018 16:27:23 GMT
Thanks for the win! Your next challenge: Pick one of the following words and make a planeswalker that is related to that word flavorfully, mechanically or in some other way. Bonus points will be awarded if the reference to the word is integrated in an elegant way, rather than slapped on: Your words are: Gloves Glasses Books Tea Whisky Flowers Ceramic  Legendary Planeswalker - Barandain  : Put a whiskey counter on a creature you control. Then put a whiskey counter on a creature an opponent controls. They get +1/+1 until the beginning of your next turn. : Sacrifice a creature with a whiskey counter on it. Barandain, Whiskey Brewmaster deals damage equal to that creature's power to target player. You gain life equal to that creature's toughness.  : You get an emblem with, "Whenever a creature you control deals combat damage to an opponent, that creature also deals that much damage to target opponent and you gain that much life." |
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Post by gluestick248 on Nov 27, 2018 21:41:33 GMT
Chen, Master of Teas  Legendary Planeswalker — Chen : Target creature gets +2/+2 and gains vigilance until end of turn : Draw a card. You gain 2 life. : You get an emblem with “Whenever a creature or land enters the battlefield under your control, choose one: * Scry 2 * Untap target creature or land * Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature” |
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xylophone
1/1 Squirrel
Posts: 51
Favorite Card: Hymn to Tourach
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Black
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Post by xylophone on Nov 29, 2018 0:58:28 GMT
 The word is "books" and this guy is a librarian except for your library. Like at a library, you request "books" and he goes about gathering them. |
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Post by viriss on Nov 29, 2018 3:35:51 GMT
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Post by augur on Nov 30, 2018 1:16:47 GMT
choosing glass e: tfw the word is glasses {oof} Attachment DeletedSaporé, Deft Glassworker Legendary Planeswalker- Saporé : Look at the top card of each opponent’s library. Scry 2. : Create a token that’s a copy of target creature except it has “Whenever this token is dealt damage, sacrifice it.” : You get an emblem with “Whenever a nontoken creature enters the battlefield under your control, create a token that’s a copy of it except it has “‘Whenever this token is dealt damage, sacrifice it.’” the + and some other numbers are subject to change. |
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Post by gateways7 on Nov 30, 2018 1:57:49 GMT
glass  |
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Post by Jartis on Nov 30, 2018 2:27:12 GMT
augur and I were apparently in similar headspaces, but I went with porcelain. 
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kinotherapy
6/6 Wurm
stupid kor i just fell out of the floor
Posts: 322
Favorite Card: Ruthless Raider
Favorite Set: Rising Tides
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by kinotherapy on Dec 4, 2018 14:17:08 GMT
Flowers for Lily Khorli, Mourning Glory Legendary Planeswalker — Khorli Each player distributes two +1/+1 counters among one or two creatures they control. All creatures get -2/-2 until end of turn.  For each creature with a +1/+1 counter on it, double the number of +1/+1 counters on that creature or destroy it. 🥀 |
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Post by mrlozano on Dec 4, 2018 15:23:08 GMT
Zarvos, Alcohol Distiller Legendary Planeswalker - Zarvos : Put a whiskey counter on a creature chosen at random. For as long as that creature has a whiskey counter on it, it has "At the beginning of your upkeep tap this creature. It deals damage equal to its power to any target chosen at random." : Destroy a creature with a whiskey counter on it chosen at random, then put a whiskey on another creature. : You get an emblem with "At the beginning of your first precombat main phase, gain control of all creatures with whiskey counters on them until end of turn. Untap them." Notes: His abilities don't target on purpouse, dont let Hexproof mess with your party of randomness! |
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Xenozfan2
3/3 Beast
Posts: 161
Favorite Card: Phage the Untouchable
Favorite Set: Innistrad
Color Alignment: White, Blue, Red
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Post by Xenozfan2 on Dec 14, 2018 23:40:35 GMT
Tamiyo, Bibleomancer : Until the beginning of your next turn, the next time target creature would deal damage, draw that many cards instead. : Target player skips their next untap step. : You get an emblem with "If you would draw a card, you may instead search your library for a legendary card, reveal that card, and put it into your hand. Then shuffle your library" and "Whenever a creature you control deals damage, draw a card." Legendary things have the best stories. The ultimate's kind of weak in exchange for a much more powerful and . I left it "deals damage" not "combat damage" to include fighting. So ultimate, then , then fight and kill your opponent's creature and draw a bunch of cards. Her relationship to books is a bit tenuous, as she uses scrolls, but I couldn't find the term for a story mage. |
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Post by Tesagk on Dec 15, 2018 8:37:58 GMT
Fleur: Poor guy, won too many challenges in one week, but.... -poke-
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Post by Fleur on Dec 15, 2018 14:00:21 GMT
Judging this one tomorrow! Y'all gonna get your last entries and edits in
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Post by Fleur on Dec 22, 2018 18:55:03 GMT
Okay. I've deleted my review twice in a row now. DM me for detailed feedback. Flo00 with Ashton wins, with Xenozfan2 and kinotherapy as runners-up. Sorry for the late judging, guys. |
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Post by Flo00 on Dec 22, 2018 20:28:48 GMT
Nice. Thanks for the win FleurAnd here is your next challenge: A build-araound planeswalker! That is, a planeswalker that needs the right deck around it to work propperly and/or that makes you to do certain deckbuilding decisions you normally wouldn't. |
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"When in doubt, do a common." 
: Destroy target player.
