pistonsmcgraw
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 149
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by pistonsmcgraw on Mar 27, 2020 14:53:17 GMT
Chitters, Rift Maker
  Art by Maria Sofronova Colours: Red, Green, White (3)
CMC Level: 3 (3) Multicolor level: 2 (1) Type Masteries: Creature, Instant (2)
Perks:
Jester
Valor: 35 Skill Points: 0 Mana Pool: `10/10 Call for Aid: Core Sets Achievements Unlocked:
Score: 35
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Mar 30, 2020 2:40:22 GMT
A pair of young women travel through the area where Sloh is staying. One, dressed in thick, comfortable black clothes and a cloak, carries a book and pen close to her body. The other wears glasses, a blue dress, and a white jacket. She has a notebook held to her side that she occasionally makes a sketch in. Both women have a smooth metal bracelet on their arm that extends roughly halfway up their forearm.
Eternity Guardian   Creature - Human Wizard  Lifelink, vigilance Whenever Eternity Guardian attacks, another target creature you control gains indestructible until end of turn. 2/3
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pistonsmcgraw
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 149
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by pistonsmcgraw on Apr 1, 2020 0:24:08 GMT
I call for aid on "Murder"
Good card, Could be a bit under costed as indestructible is hard to deal with and that is a lot of life gain (2(from attack)+2(from block)= 4 life per turn cycle) 8/10
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Post by fluffydeathbringer on Apr 1, 2020 11:15:36 GMT
I call for aid on "Murder" Good card, Could be a bit under costed as indestructible is hard to deal with and that is a lot of life gain (2(from attack)+2(from block)= 4 life per turn cycle) 8/10 you're supposed to design a card that works against the card attacking you, and then the attacker rates your card. Call for Aid is meant to supplement your attack or defence, not be the entirety of it. it's not like your attacker should be expected to just rate only Murder, a card you didn't make |
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pistonsmcgraw
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 149
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by pistonsmcgraw on Apr 2, 2020 16:31:50 GMT
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Post by WindyDelcarlo on Apr 3, 2020 19:20:58 GMT
This is a lot of artifacts to sacrifice for this spell. It could probably cost 1 and likely be lower than rare. 6/10
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pistonsmcgraw
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 149
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by pistonsmcgraw on Mar 29, 2021 23:47:06 GMT
Sloh has been nulled.
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Apr 1, 2021 23:32:56 GMT
pistonsmcgrawA lightly armored, but well-armed woman walks into the tavern, spends a few minutes talking with the bartender, before noticing Clant, at which point she walks over and sits down across from him, laying her bow against the wall next to her, though her sword remains at her hip. "You're the Quest Master, are you? Are you the sort of questmaster who offers quests for others, or journeys out themselves?"Curious Competitor Creature - Human Warrior Whenever your team gains life, put a +1/+1 counter on ~. 1/1
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pistonsmcgraw
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 149
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by pistonsmcgraw on Apr 2, 2021 0:21:52 GMT
pistonsmcgraw A lightly armored, but well-armed woman walks into the tavern, spends a few minutes talking with the bartender, before noticing Clant, at which point she walks over and sits down across from him, laying her bow against the wall next to her, though her sword remains at her hip. "You're the Quest Master, are you? Are you the sort of questmaster who offers quests for others, or journeys out themselves?"Curious Competitor Creature - Human Warrior Whenever your team gains life, put a +1/+1 counter on ~. 1/1 "Both, I mainly make quests, but gathering the materials is often a quest in it's own right! Why? If your looking for a challenge here's one."  Interesting card, some basic life game synergy that works in 2-headed giant and horde magic. Seems fun, however in normal magic it is an ajani's pridemate with -1/-1. 7/10 |
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Apr 3, 2021 4:49:23 GMT
"Both, I mainly make quests, but gathering the materials is often a quest in it's own right! Why? If your looking for a challenge here's one." View AttachmentInteresting card, some basic life game synergy that works in 2-headed giant and horde magic. Seems fun, however in normal magic it is an ajani's pridemate with -1/-1. 7/10 , see the spoiler for feedback. {Feedback}1. Bounce isn't a keyword, so "return target creature to its owner's hand" should be written out.
2. I'm not sure how I feel about Challenege as a mechanic yet. I think it's super complicated compared to similar mechanics. With Treasure tokens, for example, you really only need to keep track of how many you have, since they all do the same thing. However with Challenge tokens, you'd have to keep track of how many of each type you have, and keep track of which tokens have which effects. A potential fix to this would be "Create a colorless Challenge token named Draw Challenge with "Sacrifice this token: Draw a card" and then the naming of the tokens would help, but they would still all have the Challenge subtype.
3. As much as I have an issue with Challenge in general, it's fascinating here. This is a VERY interesting way of interacting with Challenge tokens, and has an aspect of group-hug to it. I also find the soft-unsummon very interesting.
4. It could cost 1 less. Atlani seems a bit confused, but thoughtful. "I had not realized the material costs of asking the mighty for favors, though I suppose the money I make from bounty hunting must come from somewhere. That said, if there are people or creatures with bounties on their heads, I would be glad to take care of them."Reckless Hunter    Creature - Beast  Raid - When ~ enters the battlefield, if you attacked with a creature this turn, destroy target creature that was dealt damage this turn. 3/2 When prey begins bleeding, it is often difficult for the warbeasts to let them leave.
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pistonsmcgraw
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 149
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by pistonsmcgraw on Apr 3, 2021 23:49:37 GMT
Reckless Hunter Creature - Beast Raid - When ~ enters the battlefield, if you attacked with a creature this turn, destroy target creature that was dealt damage this turn. 3/2 When prey begins bleeding, it is often difficult for the warbeasts to let them leave.
"No creatures, nor humans, but there is an artifact. Red orb, find it and I'll pay you handsomely."  (I don't have enough skill points so I won't actually give you a gift.) Interesting single-target removal would require blocks or direct damage spells. 7/10 |
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Apr 4, 2021 2:42:37 GMT
"No creatures, nor humans, but there is an artifact. Red orb, find it and I'll pay you handsomely." View Attachment(I don't have enough skill points so I won't actually give you a gift.) Interesting single-target removal would require blocks or direct damage spells. 7/10 I don't like that you can tap it every turn to keep making draw challenges, and I don't love that it stays there after the bounty dies. Also since it's "permanent" and not "creature" then you could just put it on a land and then it's much closer to "opponents can't sacrifice challenges ever" instead of the "I strongly suggest you kill this" that this feels like its going for. Atlani seems disappointed for a moment, then begins searching through her bag. "Oh. Searching for lost items is not what I usually do, though I'm happy to make exceptions."
She pulls out a small journal, a hawk feather pen, and an inkwell. "So, this orb. I assume it's magical? And where was it last seen?"Tracker's Map Artifact  ,  : Add one mana of any color. , : Reveal the top card of your library. If it's a creature card, you may put it into your hand. |
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Post by cajun on Apr 6, 2021 0:23:01 GMT
(Guest system) While Clant is going about his business, a woman abruptly planeswalks nearby. In one hand she holds a large blue blade with segments of black tracing around it. She straightens her posture, standing nearly seven feet tall, then turns to Clant, revealing a socket sticking out of her shoulder rather than a second arm.
Her voice is noticeably female but also robotic. "You there, citizen. Is this the place that is called The Arena?" Instant Return target permanent card that was put into your graveyard from the battlefield this turn to the battlefield. It enters the battlefield with three additional +1/+1 counters if it's a creature and three additional loyalty counters if its a planeswalker.
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pistonsmcgraw
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 149
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by pistonsmcgraw on Apr 6, 2021 1:36:03 GMT
(Guest system) While Clant is going about his business, a woman abruptly planeswalks nearby. In one hand she holds a large blue blade with segments of black tracing around it. She straightens her posture, standing nearly seven feet tall, then turns to Clant, revealing a socket sticking out of her shoulder rather than a second arm.
Her voice is noticeably female but also robotic. "You there, citizen. Is this the place that is called The Arena?" Instant Return target permanent card that was put into your graveyard from the battlefield this turn to the battlefield. It enters the battlefield with three additional +1/+1 counters if it's a creature and three additional loyalty counters if its a planeswalker.
"Yes. By the way might I steal you for a minute to check out my plane? It would a great place to begin your adventure, unless you are returning? In which case I insist you come anyway."  interesting recursion, seems like simic would love it, might be broken with some planeswalkers. 9/10 |
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Post by cajun on Apr 6, 2021 21:43:10 GMT
"Yes. By the way might I steal you for a minute to check out my plane? It would a great place to begin your adventure, unless you are returning? In which case I insist you come anyway." Her blade raises to a more defensive position. "Attempting to steal this unit would be highly inadvisable, citizen. I am here for your protection." Syntax Error  Instant Change the text of target instant or sorcery spell, activated ability, or triggered ability by replacing all instances of numbers with 1.
Private Request - minor bit, you can't target in a cost like that. the information cost of the reveal is pretty minor making this super undercosted. 6/10
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pistonsmcgraw
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 149
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by pistonsmcgraw on Jul 1, 2022 1:15:41 GMT
Clant has been nulled.
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Jul 2, 2022 18:57:14 GMT
pistonsmcgraw(Guest System, this is the character I'll be playing once Atlani reincarnates) Chitters finds a young woman walking through his part of the forest. She carries a basket of food and wears a wooden mask that has been painted with patterns of red, blue, and green. A few more masks with different shapes, patterns, and colors are worn on a rope tied around her green tunic. Woodland Frolicking  Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature Enchanted creature gets +0/+1 and has " : Add " Bind (You may cast this card with no target for its Bind cost. If you do, create a 0/0 colorless Binding artifact creature token and attach this to it.)
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pistonsmcgraw
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 149
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by pistonsmcgraw on Jul 2, 2022 20:51:20 GMT
Chitters finds a young woman walking through his part of the forest. She carries a basket of food and wears a wooden mask that has been painted with patterns of red, blue, and green. A few more masks with different shapes, patterns, and colors are worn on a rope tied around her green tunic. Woodland Frolicking Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature Enchanted creature gets +0/+1 and has " : Add " Bind (You may cast this card with no target for its Bind cost. If you do, create a 0/0 colorless Binding artifact creature token and attach this to it.)Chitters scurries towards the young woman, warmly greeting her, while subtly using a rift to slowly drain away her food into his winter store. Acorn Thief 2GCreature - Squirrel Uncommon When Acorn Thief enter the battlefield, you may destroy target artifact, if you do, create a food token. 2/2 9/10 Hard to judge without knowing the support options. It seems on-par with similar cards like Greenweaver Druid and Find the Path. Overall, Cool Card. Can't wait to see what else you do with this mechanic. |
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Jul 2, 2022 22:26:01 GMT
Chitters scurries towards the young woman, warmly greeting her, while subtly using a rift to slowly drain away her food into his winter store. Acorn Thief 2GCreature - Squirrel Uncommon When Acorn Thief enter the battlefield, you may destroy target artifact, if you do, create a food token. 2/2 9/10 Hard to judge without knowing the support options. It seems on-par with similar cards like Greenweaver Druid and Find the Path. Overall, Cool Card. Can't wait to see what else you do with this mechanic. I like it but if there's no artifact for it to destroy it's a bit underwhelming. It could be "if you don't, create a Food token." The woman sets down her basket and squats down as Chitters approaches, and is surprised when he talks: "You don't see a talking squirrel every day. Er- I guess you might, since you're a squirrel. Anyway, what's your name?"She seems unaware that the food in her basket is falling through the rift. Blissful Ignorance Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature Whenever enchanted creature attacks and isn't blocked, exile the top card of your library. You may play cards exiled with ~. Conjuring Uninvited Ghiest for the skulk, and because she wasn't invited |
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pistonsmcgraw
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 149
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by pistonsmcgraw on Jul 3, 2022 2:55:30 GMT
Chitters scurries towards the young woman, warmly greeting her, while subtly using a rift to slowly drain away her food into his winter store. Acorn Thief 2GCreature - Squirrel Uncommon When Acorn Thief enter the battlefield, you may destroy target artifact, if you do, create a food token. 2/2 9/10 Hard to judge without knowing the support options. It seems on-par with similar cards like Greenweaver Druid and Find the Path. Overall, Cool Card. Can't wait to see what else you do with this mechanic. I like it but if there's no artifact for it to destroy it's a bit underwhelming. It could be "if you don't, create a Food token." The woman sets down her basket and squats down as Chitters approaches, and is surprised when he talks: "You don't see a talking squirrel every day. Er- I guess you might, since you're a squirrel. Anyway, what's your name?"She seems unaware that the food in her basket is falling through the rift. Blissful Ignorance Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature Whenever enchanted creature attacks and isn't blocked, exile the top card of your library. You may play cards exiled with ~. Conjuring Uninvited Ghiest for the skulk, and because she wasn't invited "Chitters." answers Chitters absentmindedly, opening a rift in front of himself and peering through it: "No Battle Board? Oh well, I guess we'll have to do things the boring way, what's your name?"
Silver-Bordered
Through the Rift 2RInstant Common Gain control of target attacking creature, then move it to target battle board. 8/10 I like it, but it feels blue. It could be "You may play cards exiled with ~ this turn." |
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Jul 3, 2022 4:20:34 GMT
"Chitters." answers Chitters absentmindedly, opening a rift in front of himself and peering through it: "No Battle Board? Oh well, I guess we'll have to do things the boring way, what's your name?"
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Through the Rift 2RInstant Common Gain control of target attacking creature, then move it to target battle board. 8/10 I like it, but it feels blue. It could be "You may play cards exiled with ~ this turn." I know you don't have sorceries, but this should be a sorcery. The woman is visibly confused, showcasing her inability to see beyond the fourth wall. "Um, hm. You're a confusing little squirrel. Anyway, my name is Tokata."As she stands back up, one of the masks on her belt begins to shake, as though blown by a strong, non-existent wind. "Oh, what is it?" She looks to the mask, then past it to the now-empty basket. Upon noticing it, Tokata turns back to the squirrel. "Now, I know I aught not make such assumptions, but it is awfully suspicious: You didn't make one of those portals to take the food from my basket, did you?"Vengeful Force
Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature Enchanted creature gets +3/+2, gains haste, and attacks each combat if able. Bind |
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pistonsmcgraw
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 149
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by pistonsmcgraw on Jul 3, 2022 5:01:14 GMT
"Chitters." answers Chitters absentmindedly, opening a rift in front of himself and peering through it: "No Battle Board? Oh well, I guess we'll have to do things the boring way, what's your name?"
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Through the Rift 2RInstant Common Gain control of target attacking creature, then move it to target battle board. 8/10 I like it, but it feels blue. It could be "You may play cards exiled with ~ this turn." I know you don't have sorceries, but this should be a sorcery. The woman is visibly confused, showcasing her inability to see beyond the fourth wall. "Um, hm. You're a confusing little squirrel. Anyway, my name is Tokata."As she stands back up, one of the masks on her belt begins to shake, as though blown by a strong, non-existent wind. "Oh, what is it?" She looks to the mask, then past it to the now-empty basket. Upon noticing it, Tokata turns back to the squirrel. "Now, I know I aught not make such assumptions, but it is awfully suspicious: You didn't make one of those portals to take the food from my basket, did you?"Vengeful Force
Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature Enchanted creature gets +3/+2, gains haste, and attacks each combat if able. Bind Chitters reverses the flow of food until the basket is partially full: "No, no. Rift fluctuations that's all, tearing holes in reality tends to do that. It should have sorted itself out by now, have a look." lies Chitters. Peace Offering WInstant Common As an additional cost to cast this spell sacrifice an artifact. Tap target creature an opponent controls. That creature doesn’t untap during its controller’s next untap step. (I sacrifice the food token from "Acorn Thief") 10/10 Great card. Not much else to say. |
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Jul 3, 2022 16:22:49 GMT
Chitters reverses the flow of food until the basket is partially full: "No, no. Rift fluctuations that's all, tearing holes in reality tends to do that. It should have sorted itself out by now, have a look." lies Chitters. Peace Offering WInstant Common As an additional cost to cast this spell sacrifice an artifact. Tap target creature an opponent controls. That creature doesn’t untap during its controller’s next untap step. (I sacrifice the food token from "Acorn Thief") 10/10 Great card. Not much else to say. This is really a blue effect, and it definitely doesn't need to sacrifice an artifact, example: Rush of Ice
She watches as the basket fills back up, and quickly estimates how much food is currently in the basket vs. how much was in it when she arrived. She seems unamused, but willing to give him the benefit of the doubt. "Well, if it is these "rift fluctuations," where did the rest of my food go?"Excessive Curiosity  Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature Whenever enchanted creature becomes the target of a spell or ability, untap it. |
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pistonsmcgraw
2/2 Zombie
Posts: 149
Favorite Card: Davriel, Soul Broker
Favorite Set: Unstable
Color Alignment: Blue, Black, Red
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Post by pistonsmcgraw on Jul 3, 2022 17:34:43 GMT
Chitters reverses the flow of food until the basket is partially full: "No, no. Rift fluctuations that's all, tearing holes in reality tends to do that. It should have sorted itself out by now, have a look." lies Chitters. Peace Offering WInstant Common As an additional cost to cast this spell sacrifice an artifact. Tap target creature an opponent controls. That creature doesn’t untap during its controller’s next untap step. (I sacrifice the food token from "Acorn Thief") 10/10 Great card. Not much else to say. This is really a blue effect, and it definitely doesn't need to sacrifice an artifact, example: Rush of Ice
She watches as the basket fills back up, and quickly estimates how much food is currently in the basket vs. how much was in it when she arrived. She seems unamused, but willing to give him the benefit of the doubt. "Well, if it is these "rift fluctuations," where did the rest of my food go?"Excessive Curiosity Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature Whenever enchanted creature becomes the target of a spell or ability, untap it. Cool card. Interesting interactions with cards like "Pathmaker Initiative" and "Jhessian Balmgiver". Sounds like a fun card to build a deck around and would work great in enchanter and Tim decks. "Um... uh... well you see... I stole it." sighs Chitters. "Please don't hurt me," he whimpers, scurrying up a tree and grabbing a shield from a nearby rift. Defensive Stance GInstant Common Until end of turn, target creature gets +0/+6. (I target Acorn Thief and use it to block the Binding) |
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Post by pacifistwestwoman on Jul 7, 2022 17:05:39 GMT
Excessive Curiosity: 10/10. Cool card. Interesting interactions with cards like "Pathmaker Initiative" and "Jhessian Balmgiver". Sounds like a fun card to build a deck around and would work great in enchanter and Tim decks. "Um... uh... well you see... I stole it." sighs Chitters. "Please don't hurt me," he whimpers, scurrying up a tree and grabbing a shield from a nearby rift. Defensive Stance GInstant Common Until end of turn, target creature gets +0/+6. (I target Acorn Thief and use it to block the Binding) Feels more W than G, but I like the idea. Tokata sighs as Chitters climbs away, picking a mask from her belt, which begins emitting a green smoke. "The Honest Thief steals not of deception, but of need. Give help unto the Honest Thief, and they shall, in turn, give help unto you." Done reciting her verses, she looks up to the squirrel, "If you give me back my food, I'm sure I can help you find more."Timberhand's Devotion Enchantment - Aura Enchant creature Enchanted creature gets +3/+3 and gains trample. Bind |
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