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Post by Tesagk on Sept 28, 2019 17:54:00 GMT
Ioun Mystic Creature - Human Monk Bearer (You may attach Equipment with Ioun to this creature. Whenever an Equipment with Ioun enters the battlefield, you may attach it to this.)When ~ enters the battlefield, you may search your library for an Equipment with Ioun, reveal it, and put it into your hand. If you do, shuffle your library. 2/2 Scarlet Ioun Stone Artifact - Equipment Ioun (This equipment may only be attached to a creature with Bearer. If an Equipment with Ioun becomes unattached to a creature, you may attach it to target creature with Bearer instead.)Equipped creature gets +2/+0.
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Post by viriss on Sept 29, 2019 16:26:42 GMT
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Post by Deleted on Oct 2, 2019 20:01:03 GMT
I should probably put up the entry I've been staring at for multiple days, huh? I don't know, man. This seems fine to me. Probably isn't.
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Post by Boogymanjunior on Oct 4, 2019 23:53:19 GMT
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Post by Flo00 on Oct 6, 2019 22:23:06 GMT
Closed for judging. {Tesagk}This is a very tight A + B mechanic. You can't play Iouns without Bearers. Reminds me of Host and augment, but i guess it's more forgiving to playing the correct numbers in your deck. The cards intself look balanced and on color.
{viriss}That's an interesting and new kind of artifact tribal. Playing only noncreature artifacts and as much as you can. I guess Lalya works really good as a voltron commander with a lot of equipments.
{fabuloussunbro}The stats and costs are ok. Looking thogh some cards, 1/4 with upside usually costs 3 mana. It just feels more like a black card than a blue one.
{Boogymanjunior}That's a fun effect. I'm sure this would inspire neat theme decks. Since you can choose the number, it gives you an open vriety of choices on how to build around it.
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Post by Boogymanjunior on Oct 7, 2019 14:35:48 GMT
Thank you very much for the win and appreciation Flo00! Next picture: Artist: Wylie Beckert
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Post by Flo00 on Oct 7, 2019 23:39:02 GMT
Charge Through the Rift Instant Cast this spell only during the declare attackers step on your turn. Put a creature card from your hand onto the battlefield tapped and attacking. At the end of combat, exile that creature with X time counters on it, where X is its converted mana cost. If it doesn’t have suspend, it gains susped.
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Post by Jartis on Oct 11, 2019 1:40:46 GMT
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Post by viriss on Oct 11, 2019 21:50:51 GMT
Hmmm... maybe that should read "each creature you control..." ??
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Post by Boogymanjunior on Oct 16, 2019 0:06:56 GMT
Unfortunately, I won't be able to judge till the weekend (if anyone wants it, just say it and I just announce a winner) Fortunately, this means that you people get further opportunity to get those entries in!
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Post by Tesagk on Oct 16, 2019 0:36:33 GMT
Need to remember to do this tomorrow.
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Post by Boogymanjunior on Oct 19, 2019 16:58:28 GMT
Judging tomorrow to give some time for possible entries.
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Post by Tesagk on Oct 19, 2019 19:33:14 GMT
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Post by Flo00 on Oct 20, 2019 14:34:29 GMT
Tesagk "Went to the graveyard" = "died" ?
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Post by Boogymanjunior on Oct 20, 2019 15:34:44 GMT
{ Flo00 } Flo00 This is a very good design. It is fun and novel. I like that it's freshness even helps the balancing by the fact that the more costly (aka in general mightier) the creature you „cheat“ into play is, the more time you need to get this creature out of suspend, which leads to additional cool ways you can and should take into consideration. But I also think that this effect is inherently, may I say, impossible to really balance. It started with me thinking that it should probably cost 5 mana when considering that four mana is a little bit too low for me to push out a bord-bombing CMC 7+ creature, backed up by it's nearest real-life card, Through the Breach. And then I realized that at five mana, but even at possibly four mana, a creature you would strongly tend to choose with would cost 6 or 7 mana, and then you would have to wait to turn 10 or 11 to get to the second part which makes the design's novelty. That being said, the idea is too cool as to not being made, not least because the flavour is also on point, perfectly combining the art's mixture of surrealistic touch and activity with a mixture of flash-ness and reality-altering suspension. { Jartis } Jartis Nice, wasn't aware beforehand that the persons really look like vampires. A simple design, pretty weak, a little bit strange from a flavour perspective (why do they only get their vampireness when in the desert? Imo would be better to have them have lifelink all the time and gain evasion with a desert), but all in all okay. It does miss a flavor text. { viriss } viriss Comparing with similar cards like Hideous Visage, your wording looks correctly. I don't get the flavour which looks very forced, but I do like the general combination of the art's sponginess with a white-red evasion effect. It misses a flavour text. { Tesagk } Tesagk I kinda like the mixture of Abzan flavour reminiscence and Abzan perversion (using -1/-1 counters instead of +1/+1 counters which would be a no-go for the „current“ Abzan). The thing is that I can't properly judge this card because of the wording's ambiguity: Do you mean „went [put] to the graveyard from battlefield“ aka „die“ or „went [put] to the graveyard from anywhere“ which then would need „creature card“? I just now assume the latter, apologies if wrong: it's cool, funneling green-black death of all sorts into more death, although monoblack would be more self-evident. It misses a flavour text. {And the winner WOULD be} Flo00 ! But since he won't be available till November as stated in Challenge Slots, I will allow myself to delegate the win to Jartis if the mentioned unavailability is still valid.
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Post by Boogymanjunior on Oct 20, 2019 15:39:13 GMT
Tesagk "Went to the graveyard" = "died" ? Ah okay, at least you are not completely unavailable. Please state whether you take the mantle or have to pass it.
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Post by Flo00 on Oct 21, 2019 11:20:08 GMT
Next challenge: I'm going to Spiel in Essen, so I won't judge this before tuesday. (And this is probably the last time I check the forums before that.) I guess that sounds like a reasonable duration for a challenge.
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Post by Tesagk on Oct 21, 2019 14:16:32 GMT
Tesagk "Went to the graveyard" = "died" ? Yes. That. This is what happens when you rush an entry.
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Post by viriss on Oct 21, 2019 15:19:33 GMT
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Post by viriss on Oct 21, 2019 15:31:39 GMT
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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2019 19:23:39 GMT
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Post by Tesagk on Oct 25, 2019 16:18:11 GMT
Spark Fire Sorcery Spark Fire deals 2 damage to target creature. If you control a red Planeswalker, it deals 4 damage instead. Then, target creature you control fights target creature you don’t control. The plants blossomed out of fire, defying the very essence of one’s understanding of nature.
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Post by ameisenmeister on Oct 29, 2019 8:30:20 GMT
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Post by Flo00 on Oct 29, 2019 16:14:35 GMT
I'm in a bit of an unhealthy condition. Makes it hard to think about other player's cards. @fabuloussunbro wins. If you want comments on your card, pm me.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 29, 2019 17:48:28 GMT
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Favorite Set: Innistrad
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Post by Xenozfan2 on Oct 31, 2019 0:13:46 GMT
Knight of the Wilds Creature - Human Knight Adamant - If at least three green mana was spent to cast this spell, Knight of the Wilds enters the battlefield with a +1/+1 counter on it. As long as Knight of the Wilds has a +1/+1 counter on it, prevent all damage that would be dealt to Knight of the Wilds. 2/2 Gawain and the Green Knight.
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Post by nazsmith on Oct 31, 2019 6:40:03 GMT
Might change this one a little bit more but I like what it is!
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Post by viriss on Oct 31, 2019 7:07:27 GMT
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1/1 Squirrel
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Post by xylophone on Nov 1, 2019 1:42:08 GMT
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Post by Boogymanjunior on Nov 2, 2019 16:13:42 GMT
{Version with "Welcome" instead of "Embrace"} Okay, the consensual flavour doesn't really match with how this card gets used most often, but like all of these, what you as planeswalker want to do with such a spell is up to your corrupting mind.
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