Thread For My Set In Progress

Hi,

Let me suggest that you download the beleren fonts so that the font of your card texts looks more like on real cards.

About the cards: They look really busy. The aura seems grokkable although the sentences in the rules text should end with a . and the last one would be "If enchanted creature becomes the target" not "If enchanted creature would...".

The demon, well, is a bit much. The first part of the text is basically the madness keyword. Protection from spell, as far as I know, doesn't exist and should be reworded as "protection from instants and sorceries". And that last ability... Phew, are you sure about this? I'm sure this ability will end games but I'm not sure that it will do so in an interesting way. Likely, both players will fetch their best cards and go down to 3 life or so. Unfortunately, as you just spent six mana on the demon, your opponent will have all he chances in the world to finish you off as you just gave him access to everything he needs.

My suggestion to you is that you find a mechanical identity for your set, something that encapsulates divine vs. demonic and then you start designing cards based on that mechanical core. Otherwise, I could imagine that you come up with all sorts of fancy cards for all the demon artwork you find, but not with something cohesive.